安徽省2024八年级英语上册Unit6Birdwatching写作能力提升练课件牛津译林版

Unit6BirdwatchingUnit6写作能力提升练目

录CONTENTS01写作实践02话题写作常见错误呈现03实战演练请根据以下要点，写一篇80词左右的短文。1.吉姆是个鸟类爱好者(birdlover)，他想要加入观鸟俱乐

部；2.许多人不理解保护鸟的重要性，他们想改湿地为农

田，这就意味着越来越多的鸟将会因为失去居住地而处境

危险；3.如果我们不采取行动，世界上的鸟将会越来越

少；4.吉姆想要了解更多有关鸟的情况，并希望更多的人

积极采取行动来保护鸟类。

［审题指导］1.体裁：记叙文

2.人称：以第三人称为主3.时态：以一般现在时为主［思路构建］［精彩范文］Jimisabirdlover.He

wouldliketo

jointheBirdwatching

Club.Alotof

peopledon’tunderstand

theimportance

of

protectingbirds.Theywanttochangewetlandstofarmlands.This

meansmoreandmorebirdswillbeindangerbecauseoflosing

theirlivingareas.Ifwedon’t

takeaction，thenumberofthebirdsinthe

worldwillbesmallerandsmaller.Jimwantstolearnmoreaboutbirds.Healsohopesmore

peoplewilltakeactionactivelytoprotectbirds.下面句子均有1～2处错误，请找出并写出正确的句子。1.Theareaprovidesfoodandcoverwithalotofwildlife.

⁠2.Weneedmorepeoplecountanddescribethebirds.

⁠Theareaprovidesfoodandcoverforalotofwildlife.

Weneedmorepeopletocountanddescribethebirds.

3.Manybirdswillbeindangerbecauselosingtheirlivingareas.

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⁠4.IwillveryhappyifIcanbecomeamemberoftheclub.

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Manybirdswillbeindangerbecauseoflosingtheir

livingareas.

IwillbeveryhappyifIcanbecomeamemberofthe

club.

5.Youcancallmeoremailmeon

amy@.

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假如你是观鸟协会的主席李帆，请你用英语给全体同学写一

封80词以上的信，呼吁大家加入观鸟协会，并简要介绍协会

的相关情况及活动。现状人们砍伐森林，减少湿地，导致鸟类生存的

空间越来越小，许多鸟濒临灭绝协会情况及

活动只有19个成员，需要更多的人帮助；周末经

常去自然保护区；有时去图书馆……成员要求不仅热爱自然，而且知道保护鸟的重要性联系方birdwatching@Dearstudents，I’mLiFanandI’mwritingtoaskyouto

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⁠jointhe

BirdwatchingSociety.Nowadays，peoplecutdownthe

forestsandreducethewetlands，sothelivingareasforbirds

aresmallerandsmaller，andmanyofthemareendangered.

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TheBirdwatchingSocietyhasonly19membersand

needsmorepeopletohelp.MembersoftheBirdwatching

Societyoftengotonaturereservesonweekends.Sometimesit

isnecessarytogotothelibrarytolookupalotofknowledge

aboutbirds.Therefore，membersneednotonlytolove

nature，butalsotoknowtheimportanceofprotectingbirds.

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⁠Yourssincerely，