高考英语复习读后续写练习+帕金森画家父亲：用创作对抗病魔+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习帕金森画家父亲：用创作对抗病魔1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Myfather,Michael,ledmethroughthelittlewoodenhousehe’dfilledwithhispaintings.“WhenIhaveanexhibition...”hebegan,pointingtotheartworkshe’dcreated,beforestopping.“PoorPa,”Ithought.In1994hegotParkinson’sDisease(帕金森氏病),whichhadshockedthewholefamilyashewasonlyinhisforties.Ahusbandandfathertothree,Pahadhadasuccessfulcareerrunninganadvertisingagencyandhadalwaysbeenextremelycreative.Outsideofwork,he’dspent15yearsfrontingthecoverband,MusicalChairs,whichperformedatthepubinSydney’sDoubleBayeachweekand,whenIbecameamother,hedevelopedaveryclosebondwithmydaughter.4续写原文EvenwhenhisParkinson’sadvanced,myfatherdecidedhewantedtopaint.“Whydon’tyoutryclasses?”mymumLouisasuggestedtohim.Heagreed.Inartlessons,theclasspractisedpaintingstilllifeobjects,likepears,butmyfatherhadotherideasforhisinspiration.Hebeganproducingabstractpieces,inspiredbyhisfavouriteartist,JacksonPollock,aleadingabstractexpressionist.“Whyabstract?”Iaskedhim.“Because,”hereplied,“ithelpsustoseetheworldaroundusinadifferentway.Youcanlookatthesepaintingsandask‘whatif?’”5续写原文Soon,Irealizedhewasright.WhenIobservedmyfather’swork,Icouldinterpreteachoftheminmanyways.Oncehegotstarted,heshowednosignsofslowingdown.Thelittlehousewasquicklyfilledwithmoreandmoreworks.Butin2019,Padevelopedcancerandwasgivenjustthreemonthstolive.Thethoughtoflosinghimwastoomuchforanyofmyfamilytoaccept,butwesoonreceivedgreatnewsthatanewformoftreatmentcanhelphimgreatly.Sincehecontinuedspeakingaboutwantingtosharehispaintingswiththeworld,Iknewwhathadtobedone.6段首句Paragraph1:ItoldhimIwouldhelporganizeanexhibition.Paragraph2:Amonthlater,thebigdayfinallycame.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为中心展开，文章讲述了文章讲述了作者的父亲迈克尔，他曾有着成功的广告事业，还在乐队活跃，家庭美满。然而1994年，四十多岁的他不幸患上帕金森氏病。患病后他仍决定投身绘画，在绘画课上他受喜爱的抽象表现主义画家启发创作抽象画，其作品有着多样解读。2019年又患癌症且生命垂危，好在新治疗方法带来希望。因父亲一直想与世界分享画作，作者便决心为其实现愿望，展现出在疾病困境中父亲对绘画的热爱以及家人对他的支持与守护。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：ItoldhimIwouldhelporganizeanexhibition.我告诉他我会帮他筹备一场画展。父亲的眼中闪过一丝惊喜与欣慰交织的光芒。我们立刻行动起来。我着手列出可能的场地清单，联系当地的美术馆和社区中心。尽管被疾病缠身而身体虚弱，父亲仍积极参与挑选要展出的画作，讲述每一幅背后的故事与灵感来源。我们还设计了邀请函，以父亲的抽象画作作为背景。那些日子里，电话、会议和精心的筹备工作填满了生活。随着展览日期逐渐临近，我们心中既满怀期待又有些紧张，期望他的创作能得到大家的喜爱。11续写思路分析Para2：Amonthlater,thebigdayfinallycame.一个月后，那个重要的日子终于来临。画廊里弥漫着柔和温暖的光线，让父亲的画作看起来更加生动鲜艳。人们开始陆续抵达，有朋友、家人以及艺术爱好者。父亲身着他最爱的西装，被推进画廊。看着人们围聚在他的作品周围，讨论着、欣赏着，他的脸上满是自豪。我站在他身旁，将那些渴望见到艺术家本人的人介绍给他。观众们沉浸在抽象之美中时，现场时而寂静无声，时而又爆发出热烈的交谈。这一天，不仅是对父亲艺术的颂扬，更是对他在病痛面前不屈精神的礼赞。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现ItoldhimIwouldhelporganizeanexhibition.Father'seyeslitupwithamixtureofsurpriseanddelight.Weimmediatelysprangintoaction.Istartedbymakingalistofpotentialvenues,contactinglocalartgalleriesandcommunitycenters.Father,thoughweakenedbyhisillnesses,activelyparticipatedinselectingthepaintingstobedisplayed,sharingthestoriesandinspirationsbehindeachpiece.Wealsodesignedinvitations,withfather'sabstractartworksasthebackground.Dayswerefilledwithphonecalls,meetings,andcarefularrangements.Astheexhibitiondatedrewnearer,webothfeltasenseofanticipationandnervousness,hopingthathiscreationswouldbewell-received.14范文呈现Amonthlater,thebigdayfinallycame.Thegallerywasfilledwithasoft,warmlightthatmadefather'spaintingsseemevenmorevibrant.Peoplestartedtoarrive,friends,family,andartenthusiasts.Father,dressedinhisfavoritesuit,waswheeledintothegallery.Hisfacewasfilledwithprideashewatchedpeoplegatheringaroundhisworks,discussingandadmiringthem.Istoodbyhisside,introducinghimtothosewhowereeagertomeettheartist.Thereweremomentsofsilenceasviewersimmersedthemselvesintheabstractbeauty,andthenburstsofexcitedconversation.Itwasadaythatcelebratednotonlyfather'sartbutalsohisunwaveringspiritinthefaceofillness.15升级版范文呈现ItoldhimIwouldhelporganizeanexhibition.Father'seyes,whichwerefilledwithamixtureofsurpriseanddelight,litupinstantly.Weimmediatelysprangintoaction.Icommencedbymakingalistofpotentialvenues,contactinglocalartgalleriesandcommunitycenters.Despitebeingweakenedbyhisillnesses,fatheractivelyparticipatedinchoosingthepaintingstobeexhibited,sharingthestoriesandinspirationsbehindeachpiece.Theinvitationswedesignedhadfather'sabstractartworksasthebackground.Dayswerefilledwithphonecalls,meetingsandmeticulousarrangements.Astheexhibitiondateapproachednearer,asenseofanticipationandnervousnessfilledbothofus,hopingthathiscreationswouldbewell-received.16升级版范文呈现Amonthlater,thebigdayfinallyarrived.Thegallery,bathedinasoft,warmlight,madefather'spaintingsseemevenmorevivid.Peoplebegantoarrive,includingfriends,familyandartenthusiasts.Father,dressedinhisfavoritesuit,waswheeledintothegallery.Itwashisfacethatwasbeamingwithprideashewatchedpeoplegatheringaroundhisworks,discussingandadmiringthem.Standingbyhisside,Iintroducedhimtothoseeagertomeettheartist.Thereweremomentsofsilencewhenviewersimmersedth