九年级上册 牛津沪教版 英语 第六单元《Unit 6 Writing》课件

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九年级上册—牛津沪教版—英语—第六单元1.

Learnsomerelevantwordsandphrasesofrestaurantreviews.

学习关于餐厅评论相关的词汇短语。2.Understandthestructureandmainpointsoftherestaurantreviews.

了解餐馆点评的结构和要点。3.Graspandusethesentencepatternsofrestaurantreviews.

掌握并运用餐评的通用句式。4.Learnhowtoexpressthediningexperienceinwrittenlanguageinanobjectiveway.

学习如何用书面语客观地对餐厅用餐经历进行表达。LearningAims学习目标Leading-inBrainstormingFoodPriceServiceEnvironment...What

canattractyoutohavemealsinthesamerestaurantagain?TheresultisbasedonClass2,Grade9intheHills’School.Whatwillyoudoifyou

don’t

likethefoodandtheservicethere?Writesomereviewsfortherestaurant

Whatwillyoudoifyoulikethefoodandtheserviceintherestaurant?Arestaurantreviewisaboutyourexperienceofeatingatarestaurant.YoucanfindthiskindofreviewontheInterneteasily.Pre-writingHowtowritearestaurantreview?Dorishas

writtenarestaurantreview.Readthereviewbelow.Titletitlen.标题OpeningIntroductionReviewofthe

foodReviewofthe

serviceservicen.服务Recommendationrecommendn.推荐v.推荐recommendationStructureTitleamazing...excellentdeliciouswonderfulfantasticunforgettable+nameoftherestaurantadjectivesTitle:

Title+nameoftherestaurantadjectivesLet’stry在一家广州餐厅的粤式美食DeliciousCantonesefoodat

aGuangzhouRestaurant在一家重庆餐馆非常难忘的火锅大餐AnunforgettablehotpotataChongqingRestaurantOtherpossibletitles...,amust-gorestaurantLovelyfood,lovely...Wonderfulmealat...Agreatdiningplace...OpeningOpening:

______+_______ate/hadmeal/dinner...+_________.

whenwhowhereIntroduction:

foodprice_______serves_____food.

restauranttypeWhopaid/spent_____toeat/eatingthere.

priceamount+currency货币单位

200yuanIntroduction+FoodreviewsTopicsentenceThefoodwas_______.adjectivegoodwonderfuldeliciousexcellentsosonotsogoodbadterrible...Specificdetails____________________.detailsofyourexperienceServicereviewsReviewoftheserviceThewaiters/service/...was_______.adjective

________________.beseatedv.就坐receivefoodv.收到食物specificexperienceRecommendationIwouldcertainlyrecommend_______...restaurantYoushould______________.givesuggestionsarrivaltimewaitingtimeparkinglotavailableotherthingsneedtoknowAnalyze(分析)thelinkingwordsusefullinkingwords并列连词：also

and

inaddition

besides

aswell

notonly,butaslo

...

转折对比连词：but

however,

...

though/although

时间连词：(not)...until/until

when/while

...

因果连词：because/so/asaresult,/therefore,...

Whattense?theSimplePastTensetheSimplePresentTenseAnalyze(分析)thetense时态past

experiencepresentsituation/recommendationAnalyze(分析)thePerson人称thefirstperson第一人称I、me、myWe、us、our

thesecond

person第二人称You、your、you

Whatperson?whathappenedinthepastgiveadviceAnswerthequestionsbelowtohelpyouwriteyourownrestaurantreviews.回答以下问题并结合自己的用餐经历写餐评。Arestaurantreview3.Tense:SimplePresentTenseSimplePastTense4.Person:thefirstpersonthesecondperson假设昨晚你与父母到绿茵阁(TheGreeneryCafe)吃晚饭，请根据表格内容为该餐厅写一则评价。Practice项目评价和意见价格280元，小贵食物牛排(steak)和沙拉很美味，但汤太咸(salty)服务友善，但上菜有点慢环境餐厅干净、安静，轻柔的音乐，让人放松总体建议推荐就餐123456ArestaurantreviewSamplewriting

ExcellentEnglishfoodattheGreeneryCafeLastnight,myparentsandIateattheGreeneryCafe.Thecafeserveswesternfood.Wepaidabout280yuantoeatthere.Itwasalittleexpensive.Thefoodwaswonderful.Thesteakandthesaladtasteddeliciousthoughthesoupwastoosalty.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butalittleslow.Weorderedourfoodat7p.m.,butwedidn’treceiveourfooduntil8p.m.Theenvironmentwasnice.Itwascleanandquiet.Inaddition,thesoftmusicmadeusrelaxed.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittomyfriends.IfeelgreatwiththeGreeneryCafeandIwillgotheretohavemealsagain.Finishtheevaluationchart.自评与他评。√√√√√√Post-writingAssessmentStandard评分标准Opening

TitleIntroductionReviews

WhenWhoWhereContent（内容性）

Accuracy（准确性）

Coherence（连贯性）

TenseGrammaticalmistakesLinkingwordsorphrases

FoodPriceFoodServiceOthers...PresentTensePastTenseRecommendation

spelling，capitalize，punctuation...PersonSummary:writingfor

arestaurantreviewInthislesson,wehavelearnt

whatarestaurantreviewis.somenewwordsandphrasesofthistopic.thestructureofarestaurantreview.howtoorganizeeachpartwiththehelpofsomeusefulpatternsandlinkingwords.howtowrite

areviewofoureatingexperienceinarestaurantinanobjectiveway.howtoevaluateourwritingandimproveitinabetterway.

Ihopeyoucanenjoytheclass!✔✔✔✔✔✔Writeanotherreviewofyourfavouriterestaurantandrecommendittoyourfriends.HomeworkThemoreyoushare,thehappieryouwillfeel.Thankyou!HealthydietUnit6Writing

九年级上册—牛津沪教版—英语—第六单元（答疑）Let’sgivecommentsforoneofmystudents’restaurantreviewsandcorrecthermistakestogether.YummyCantoneseDimsumatTaoTaoJuYesterdaymorning,mymotherandIhavemorningteaaTaoTaoJuinPanyu.TherestaurantserveCantoneselocalfood,wepaidabout200yuantoeatthere.Thedimsumtherewasverydelicious.Thesteamedbeefballs,shrimpdumplingsandsteamedcrabdumplingswasmyfavourit.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butthefoodwassendtoustooslowly.Afterorderourfood,wewaitedaboutfortyminutes.Theenvironmentwasalittlenoise.Andthereweretoomanypeopleandalittleofcrowded.Buttheenvironmentwasprettynice.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittoyou.Thedimsumhereisverydelicious.Youmusthaveatry.IlikethislocalrestaurantsomuchthatIwillgototheretohavemorningteaagain.AssessmentStandard评分标准adj.+thenameoftherestaurant3W:when,who,wherefood+pricetopicsentence+detailedexperiencerecommend+givesuggestionstense/person/grammarpointslogicalconjunctionsYummyCantoneseDimsumatTaoTaoJuYesterdaymorning,mymotherandIhavemorningteaaTaoTaoJuinPanyu.TherestaurantserveCantoneselocalfood,wepaidabout200yuantoeatthere.Thedimsumtherewasverydelicious.Thesteamedbeefballs,shrimpdumplingsandsteamedcrabdumplingswasmyfavourit.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butthefoodwassendtoustooslowly.Afterorderourfood,wewaitedaboutfortyminutes.Theenvironmentwasalittlenoise.Andthereweretoomanypeopleandalittleofcrowded.Buttheenvironmentwasprettynice.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittoyou.Thedimsumhereisverydelicious.Youmusthaveatry.IlikethislocalrestaurantsomuchthatIwillgototheretohavemorningteaagain.adj.nameoftherestaurantwhenwhowherefoodpricetopicsentencedetailedexperiencetopicsentence+detailedsentencesrecommendContent:+suggestion+personalopinionsYummyCantoneseDimsumatTaoTaoJuYesterdaymorning,mymotherandIhavemorningteaaTaoTaoJuinPanyu.TherestaurantserveCantoneselocalfood,wepaidabout200yuantoeatthere.Thedimsumtherewasverydelicious.Thesteamedbeefballs,shrimpdumplingsandsteamedcrabdumplingswasmyfavourit.Thewaiterswerefriendlytous,butthefoodwassendtoustooslowly.Afterorderourfood,wewaitedaboutfortyminutes.Theenvironmentwasalittlenoise.Andthereweretoomanypeopleandalittleofcrowded.Buttheenvironmentwasprettynice.Iwouldcertainlyrecommendittoyou.Thedimsumhereisverydelicious.Youmusthaveatry.IlikethislocalrestaurantsomuchthatIwillgototheretohavemorningteaagai