读后续写+奔跑路上的忠实伙伴：Brucie+与+Jenny+的马拉松之约+讲义 高二下学期期末教学质量检测英语试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jennyalwaysadmiredpowerfulandattractivemarathonrunnersanddreamedthatonedayshecouldalsorunamarathon.Tomakeit,oneday,shebegantoseriouslyprepare.Atfirst,sheonlysetthesmallgoalofrunningonekilometereachmorning.However,shestillfoundittiringandsoongaveuprunning.Asdayswenton,herweightgraduallyincreased.Upsetaboutherhealth,shefinallydecidedtoloseweightbydoingexercise.Shebeganrunningagain.Asusual,inthefollowingdays,herbigproblemwithexercisingwasalwayshowtostaymotivated.Shetriedtofindguidancefromrunningexpertsandbooks.Andeverythingshereadindicatedthatshe’dbetterpairupwitharunningpartner.Shefollowedtheadvice,buthumanexercisecompanionsalwaysletherdown.Herlastexercisecompanionquitwithexcuseslike,“It’smyturntodothedishes”atsixo’clockinthemorning!Shehatedtoadmitit,butshehadmadesimilarexcusestoothersanddisappointedtheminsimilarways.ThenBrucieappearedinJenny’slife,abirthdaygiftfromherhusband,John.Johncouldn’tworkoutwithJennybecausehehadabadback.SothatjobwaslefttoBrucie,ayellowdog.Bruciewasquiteenergetic,whichmadehimdestined（注定的）tobearunningpartner.Inthebeginning,BrucieandJennyranonlyfiftypacesatatime,eachsetmixedwithonehundredpacesofwalking.“Idon’tlookfoolishstartingthisway,”thoughtJenny,“becauseBrucie’sbonesaretooyoungtomakehimrunmuchharder.”Shewasright,andBrucie’searlylimitationsgavehertimetostartslowlywithoutfeelingawkward.Afteraboutninemonths,though,BruciewasoldenoughtorunseveralmilesadayandJennywasfitenoughtokeepup.Fromspringtoautumn,theyloggedthemilestogethereveryday.However,aswinterapproachedandtheweathergotcolder,maintainingadailyrunningroutinerequiredlotsofdedication（热忱）anddetermination.AndJennystartedtothinkthedogwouldbelikeherprevioushumanpartnersandthatshecouldn’tcountonthelittledogforhelpwithmotivation.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBrucie.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：Jenny一直羡慕马拉松选手，梦想自己也能跑马拉松，起初尝试锻炼却因动力不足而放弃，体重还增加了。后来听从建议找跑步伙伴也不如意。直到丈夫送了她一只叫Brucie的狗，他们从最初只能跑五十步且夹杂大量步行开始训练。九个月后Brucie能跑几英里，Jenny也足够健康能跟上。冬天来临，Jenny担心Brucie也像之前的人类伙伴一样不能给予她动力，但后来Brucie用行动证明了自己，最终还陪伴Jenny完成了她的第一次马拉松，实现了她的梦想。故事山分析：开端：Jenny羡慕马拉松选手，决定开始锻炼，但因觉得跑步累而放弃，体重上升后再次决定减肥锻炼，引出后续找跑步伙伴的情节，展现Jenny最初的决心和遇到的困难，为故事发展奠定基础。发展：Jenny找人类跑步伙伴失败，多次被放鸽子，这使她对寻找合适的伙伴感到失望，同时也为Brucie的出现做铺垫，凸显Brucie作为跑步伙伴的独特性和重要性，推动故事向前发展。高潮：冬天到来，Jenny对Brucie是否能持续给予动力产生怀疑，这是故事的紧张点，而Brucie用实际行动证明了自己，如在寒冷早晨催促Jenny起床跑步，成为故事的高潮部分，展现Brucie的忠诚和对Jenny的积极影响。结局：春天到来，Jenny在Brucie的陪伴下参加并完成了第一次马拉松，实现了自己的梦想，呼应开头的梦想，也体现了Brucie对Jenny的巨大帮助，使故事有一个圆满的结局，给人以鼓舞和温暖的感觉。伏笔及续写中的回应：伏笔：“Shetriedtofindguidancefromrunningexpertsandbooks.Andeverythingshereadindicatedthatshe’dbetterpairupwitharunningpartner.”（她试图从跑步专家和书籍中寻找指导。她读到的所有内容都表明，她最好找一个跑步伙伴。）回应：为Brucie的出现做铺垫，说明Jenny需要一个伙伴来帮助她坚持跑步，后续Brucie成为她的跑步伙伴并发挥重要作用，证明了这个建议的正确性，同时也体现了Brucie出现的合理性，使故事发展更加自然流畅。伏笔：“Herlastexercisecompanionquitwithexcuseslike,‘It’smyturntodothedishes’atsixo’clockinthemorning!”（她最后一个锻炼伙伴在早上六点以“轮到我洗碗了”这样的借口退出了！）回应：突出之前人类伙伴的不靠谱，与Brucie的忠诚形成鲜明对比。续写中，Brucie在寒冷冬天依然坚持督促Jenny跑步，展现出Brucie的坚定和可靠，更加凸显了它作为跑步伙伴的珍贵，也让Jenny深刻体会到两者的不同，从而更加珍惜Brucie的陪伴。伏笔：“Bruciewasquiteenergetic,whichmadehimdestinedtobearunningpartner.”（Brucie精力充沛，这使他注定成为一个跑步伙伴。）回应：暗示Brucie具备成为优秀跑步伙伴的特质，为后续它能陪伴Jenny完成训练和马拉松比赛埋下伏笔。续写中，Brucie在跑步过程中始终保持活力，不仅带动Jenny坚持下去，还在马拉松比赛中与她并肩作战，充分发挥了其精力充沛的优势，实现了前文的伏笔，也展现了Brucie在Jenny实现梦想过程中的关键作用。伏笔：“Jennywasfitenoughtokeepup.”（Jenny足够健康以跟上步伐。）回应：说明Jenny经过与Brucie的训练已经取得了一定的成果，为她参加马拉松比赛提供了身体条件的支撑。续写中，Jenny能够参加马拉松比赛并顺利完成，离不开之前与Brucie一起训练所积累的体能和耐力，体现了前期训练的重要性，也使故事的发展符合逻辑，让读者看到Jenny的成长和进步。伏笔：“AndJennystartedtothinkthedogwouldbelikeherprevioushumanpartnersandthatshecouldn’tcountonthelittledogforhelpwithmotivation.”（Jenny开始认为这只狗会像她以前的人类伙伴一样，她不能指望这只小狗来提供动力。）回应：制造了故事的紧张感和悬念，引发读者对Brucie是否能改变Jenny看法的期待。续写中，Brucie通过在寒冷早晨的积极表现，打破了Jenny的疑虑，使故事更加生动有趣，同时也突出了Brucie的坚持和对Jenny的真心陪伴，进一步深化了两者之间的情感联系。续写要点：第一段：情节：详细描述冬天那个寒冷的早晨，Brucie是如何叫Jenny起床的，比如跳上床舔她的脸、叼着她的鞋子在床边晃悠等。接着写他们出门后，Brucie在雪地里奔跑的欢快样子，以及Jenny看到后内心的触动，意识到自己错怪了Brucie，从而重新燃起坚持跑步的热情，即使天气寒冷也不再退缩。情感：Jenny从最初的怀疑和失望，到被Brucie的举动感动，进而感到愧疚和重新振作，情感上有一个明显的转变和升温，更加坚定了与Brucie一起跑步的决心，也对即将到来的马拉松充满期待。第二段：情节：描绘马拉松比赛当天的场景，如阳光明媚、人群欢呼等。重点描写Jenny和Brucie在比赛中的状态，Jenny可能会遇到体力不支的时刻，但Brucie始终在她身边陪伴、鼓励，比如用叫声为她加油，或者用身体蹭蹭她给予力量。最后他们一起冲过终点线，Jenny激动地抱住Brucie，周围的人也为他们鼓掌欢呼。情感：Jenny充满了紧张、兴奋和坚定，在比赛过程中感受到Brucie的支持和陪伴，情感逐渐升华，最终冲过终点线时，是无比的激动、自豪和幸福，实现了自己长久以来的梦想，也与Brucie建立了深厚的情感纽带，让读者感受到坚持和陪伴的力量。情感线：故事开始，Jenny对跑马拉松充满向往，决定锻炼但因困难而放弃，此时她的心情是沮丧和无奈的。在寻找跑步伙伴的过程中，被人类伙伴多次放鸽子，让她感到失望和愤怒，对找到合适伙伴几乎绝望。Brucie出现后，起初她只是抱着尝试的心态，但随着训练的进行，对Brucie有了一定的依赖和信任，同时也对自己的能力有了一些信心。冬天到来时，她对Brucie产生怀疑，心情再次陷入低谷和担忧。然而，Brucie在寒冷早晨的坚持让她深受感动，内心从怀疑转为愧疚和重新振作，对Brucie充满感激和信任。最后在马拉松比赛中，Jenny经历了紧张、兴奋、疲惫等多种情绪，在Brucie的陪伴下最终冲过终点线，此时她的情感达到顶点，是无比的激动、自豪和幸福，完成了从沮丧到幸福、从自我怀疑到充满自信的情感历程，让读者深刻感受到梦想实现过程中的情感起伏和坚持、陪伴的重要性。故事线：Jenny羡慕马拉松选手，开始锻炼后放弃，因体重增加再次决定减肥跑步。找人类跑步伙伴失败，多次被放鸽子。丈夫送她狗Brucie，开始一起训练，从少量跑步和大量步行开始。九个月后Brucie和Jenny都有进步，能跑几英里。冬天Jenny怀疑Brucie，后被Brucie的行动改变想法。春天Brucie陪Jenny完成第一次马拉松，实现梦想。主旨升华句（英文）：Truecompanionshipisnotmeasuredbywords,butbytheunwaveringpresenceandsupportintimesofdifficulty.（真正的陪伴不是用言语衡量的，而是在困难时刻坚定不移的存在和支持。）Inthejourneyofchasingourdreams,themostunexpectedalliescanbecomethegreatestsourcesofstrengthandinspiration.（在追逐梦想的旅程中，最意想不到的盟友可能成为最大的力量和灵感源泉。）Perseveranceisnotasolitarypursuit;itoftenthrivesinthecompanyofthosewhobelieveinus,eveniftheyhavefourlegs.（坚持不懈不是一种孤独的追求；它常常在那些相信我们的人的陪伴下茁壮成长，即使他们有四条腿。）Sometimes,thegreatestmotivationcomesfromthepurestformofloveandloyalty,asshownbyourfurryfriends.（有时候，最大的动力来自于我们毛茸茸的朋友所展现出的最纯粹的爱和忠诚。）Thepathtoachievingourgoalsmaybefilledwithdoubtsandsetbacks,butwiththerightcompanionbyourside,everystepbecomesatestamenttothepowerofdeterminationandfriendship.（实现目标的道路可能充满疑虑和挫折，但有了合适的同伴在身边，每一步都成为决心和友谊力量的见证。）写作示范：第一篇WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.Onaparticularlyfrigidwintermorning,whenthewindhowledoutsideandthethermometershowedatemperaturewellbelowfreezing,Jennywascurledupunderthewarmblankets,onthevergeofskippingherrun.Butthen,Brucieleapedontothebed,hisbodyradiatingwarmthanddetermination.HenudgedJennywithhisnoseandbarkedsoftly,asiftosay,"Comeon,it'stimetogo!"Jenny,stillhalf-asleep,wasinitiallyannoyedbutthensawtheeagernessinBrucie'seyes.Shegotup,bundledupinlayers,andtogethertheyventuredoutintothecold.Brucieboundedahead,hispawscrunchingonthesnow,andJennyfollowed,herdoubtsmeltingawaywitheachstep.Fromthatdayon,Brucie'sunwaveringcommitmentneverwavered,nomatterhowharshtheweather.Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBrucie.Theairwascrispandfilledwiththescentofbloomingflowers.Thesunpeekedthroughtheclouds,castingagoldensheenontheexcitedcrowdthatlinedthestreets.Jenny'sheartpoundedwithamixtureofnervousnessandanticipation.Astheracebegan,Brucieranbesideher,hisgaitsteadyandhisspirithigh.Alongtheway,thereweremomentswhenJenny'slegsfeltlikelead,andherbreathcameinshortgasps.ButeverytimesheglancedatBrucie,hisunwaveringfocusandloyaltygaveherthestrengthtopushforward.Thecheersofthespectatorsgrewlouderastheynearedthefinishline.WithBruciebyherside,Jennysummonedeveryounceofenergyandsprintedacrossthefinishline.Shecollapsedtotheground,exhaustedbutelated,huggingBrucietightly.Inthatmoment,sheknewthatthisjourneywouldnothavebeenpossiblewithoutherfurryfriend,whohadtaughtherthetruemeaningofperseveranceandcompanionship.第二篇WhathappenedlaterprovedthatJennywaswrong.Asthewinterchillsetindeeper,Jennywasdreadinghermorningruns.Onemorning,shewasabouttocallitquitswhensheheardBruciescratchingatthedoor.Whensheopenedit,hehadhisleashinhismouth,histailwaggingfuriously.Reluctantly,Jennygotdressedandsteppedoutside.Thecoldwindhitherface,butBrucieseemedunfazed.Heledtheway,hissmallbodyplowingthroughthesnow.Jennywatchedinamazementasheranahead,thencircledbacktocheckonher.Hisdeterminationwasinfectious,andsoonJennywasrunningwithrenewedvigor.Bruciehadbecomeheranchor,hersourceofmotivation,provingthathisloyaltywasunshakable.Onespringmorning,Jennystartedherfirstmarathon,accompaniedbyBrucie.Theskywasabrilliantblue,andthecitywasalivewithexcitement.JennyfeltarushofadrenalineasshelinedupatthestartinglinewithBruciebyherside.Thegunwentoff,andtheywereoff.Bruciekeptasteadypace,hiseyesfixedonthepathahead.Jennyfocusedonhisrhythm,matchingherstepstohis.Asthemilespassed,thefatiguesetin,butBrucie'spresencewasaconstantreminderofhowfartheyhadcome.Whentheyfinallycrossedthefinishline,thecrowderuptedincheers.JennykneltdownandhuggedBrucie,tearsofjoystreamingdownherface.Thiswasnotjusthervictory;itwasatestamenttothebondbetwee