读后续写写作指导 课件-高三上学期英语作文复习专项

ContinuationWriting：HowtoCompleteaStoryQiBingjiaLearningObjectives:

Bytheendofthisclass,Iwillbeableto:1.Languageproficiency:improvemyreadingandwritingabilitybyusing5W1H,storymountain,andaskingquestionsaboutthegiven2firstsentences.2.Learningability:improvemyself-learningandcooperativeability.3.ThinkingQuality:improvemylogicalability,developmycreativethinkingability4.Culturalawareness:learntobekind-heartedandhonest,spreadthewarmthinhumanity.Lead-inWho’sthewriterofADreamofRedMansions（《红楼梦》）?CaoXueqinCo-writer:GaoEBeaco-writerPredictionWhat’sthetextmainlyaboutaccordingtothetitle,picturesandmagicwordclouds

?(2024年新高考I&Ⅱ卷)续写原文①ImetGunteron

acold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.I

hadplannedtofly

toViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeen

delayedbyanhourandahalf.I

toucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedeparture

ofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairport

buildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.②ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn’theardof

thebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,

buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephone

andrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,

Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.③Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,there

wasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,

turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”

hesaid.④JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.Iflashedhimanapologeticsmileas

I

pulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdid

notplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasI

sawthebusqueuethinningout.⑤Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,atthe

entrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,and

poppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:

“Outoforder.Sorry.”Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews._____________________Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised._________________解题方法展示1.读情节3.思主题5.拟提纲6.巧润色2.找冲突4.推情节Readforbasicinformation1.What’sthestyleofthepassage?Narration(记叙文)B.Exposition(说明文)C.Argumentation(议论文)

2.Whichoneistrue

accordingtothepassage?Theauthortellsthestoryinthefirstperson(第一人称).Theauthortellsthestoreinthesecondperson(第二人称).Theauthortellsthestoryinthethirdperson(第三人称).

3.Whatbasictenseshouldweuseifwewillcontinuetowrite?Thesimplepasttense一般过去时B.Thesimplefuturetense一般将来时C.Thesimplepresenttense一般现在时

AnarrativeWhatWhenWhereWhyWhoHowReadforkeyelements(要素）

Step1:读情节

理线索(5W+1H)①ImetGunteron

acold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.I

hadplannedtofly

toViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeen

delayedbyanhourandahalf.I

toucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedeparture

ofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairport

buildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.②ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn’theardof

thebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,

buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephone

andrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,

Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.③Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,there

wasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,

turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”

hesaid.④JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.Iflashedhimanapologeticsmileas

I

pulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdid

notplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasI

sawthebusqueuethinningout.⑤Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,atthe

entrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,and

poppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:

“Outoforder.Sorry.”Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews._____________________Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised._________________whenwhowherewhywhathowWhoWhenWhereWhatWhyHowI

,Gunterfromtheairporttothe

busstation,Viennaonacold,wetand

unforgettableeveningin

SeptemberIhadtroublepayingforthetaxi

fare.Ihadzerocash/bankcard

couldn’tbeused/acash

machinedidn’thelp.........A.IjumpedintoataxiandGunter

took

metothebusstationjustintime

despitesomestruggles.B.IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.......C.Ihadnocashtopaythetaxifareaftertrying

everypossiblemeans.D.Iwasinahurrytocatchthe

lastbustoPraguebecauseof

the

delayedflight.E.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised....①Beginning

⑤Ending

③Climax

②Build-up

④Solution

DACBEReadfortheplotsMatchandfindevidentsinthetextStep1:读情节

理线索(StoryMountain)

①ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.lhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference(会议).Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf,ltoucheddown(着陆)inViennajust30minutesbeforethedeparture(离开)ofthelastbustoPrague.Themomentlgotofftheplane,lranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuilding

Step1:读情节

理线索

(StoryMountain)Readfortheplotsandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherank(队列)withoutasecondthought.②ThatwaswhenlmetGunter.ltoldhimwherelwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.lthoughtmypronunciation(发音)wastheproblem,solexplainedagainmoreslowlybuthestilllookedconfused.Whenlwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedout(取出)hislittlephoneandrangup(打电话)afriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Step1:读情节

理线索(StoryMountain)

③Finally,withjusttwominutestospare,werolledinto(到达)thebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus,Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit.”hesaid.

④JustthenI

realizedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.Iflashed(闪现)himanapologeticsmileasI

pulledout(拿出)myPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong(配合).

Step1:读情节

理线索(StoryMountain)Afeelingofhelplessnesswashedover(席卷)measIsawthebusqueuethinningout(变稀疏).

⑤Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.ljumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin(插卡),onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder(出故障).Sorry.”Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Step1:读情节

理线索(StoryMountain)PlotsIGunterranlikecrazy,jumpinto，seemedlikeacentury

roleintothebusstation,thankfully

(withabigsmile)anapologeticsmile,afeelingofhelplessness

....?anxiousrelieved/relaxedgrateful/thankfulReadforemotionalchangesStep1:读情节

理线索(Feelings)confusedpleasedapologetic,helplessStep2:找冲突(Conflicts)OpeningBuild-upClimaxResolutionEndingIwasinahurrytocatchthe

lastbustoPraguebecauseof

the

delayedofflight.IjumpedintoataxiandGuntertookmetothebusstationjustintime

despitesomestruggles.Ihadnocashtopaythetaxifareaftertrying

everypossiblemeans.IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.......Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised....conflict1：howtosolve?conflict2:whydidIcallhim?Step3:思主题

定基调TheThemehelpothersPre-writinghonestywarmthStep4:推情节,设问题Makeaprediction.Whatwillhappennext?

Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Haveadiscussionwithyourgroupmembersandcomeupwithasmanyrelatedquestionsasyoucan.Step4:推情节,设问题Makeaprediction.Whatwillhappennext?

Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Question1:

Question2:Question3:Question4:......

Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Question1:

Question2:Question3:Question4:......WhatwasGunter’sreactiontothenews?WhatdidGunterdo?HowdidIfeel?WhatdidIpromised?WhatdidIsayonthephone?Whathappenedafterwemet?HowdidGunterreacttotheextramoney?HowdidIfeelafterallthis?第二段有开放性，但结局必须正能量第一段要有合理情节,与第二段衔接Step5:拟提纲Answer1:Answer2:Answer3:Answer4：......Para2Fourdayslater,whenlwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Answer1:Answer2:Answer3:Answer4:......Para1

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.While-writingStep5:拟提纲1)

Cashmachinedidn’twork.2）Guntersaid

OK.

3)Ifeltgrateful.4)Iwrotehisnumberdown.

5)Ipromisedtopayhimback.6)Ileftwithoutpaying.Para2Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised7)

GunterknewIwouldcall.

8)Weappointedtomeet.9)Iofferedanextra$10tip10)

Gunterrefusedthetip.

11)Ifeltmoved.

12)

Kindnessmakesabig

difference.Para1

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.While-writingMakeadraft.Group1-3:paragraph1Group4-6:paragraph2

WritingHelp:Startyourcontinuationwithanewplotbasedonwhathashappened;Includedifferenttypesofdetails;Writeinthesametoneandtenseastheoriginalstory;Usedescriptivelanguage.someusefulexpressionsPost-writingPolishthestory.Polishyourwritingtomakethestoryvividanddetailed.Tips:Correctthespellingandgrammarmistakes;Replacethecommonexpressionswithspecificwordsoradvancedsentencestructures;Addsomecohesivewordstomakethestorycoherent.Step6:巧润色Let’sshareourstories!

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Thoughembarrassedandunwilling,Iforcedmyselftoraiseupmyheadandlookedintohisevessincerely,“Iknow,Gunter,we’vejustmet,butIamgoingtobebackinViennain4daystime.CoulditbeOKwithyoutopayyou