七年级上册 英语 第二单元《Unit 2 Writing》课件

七年级上册—上海教育出版社—英语—第二单元

DailyLifeUnit2Writing

Samdoesdifferentactivitiesaccordingtotimeorder.ThisisSam'sdailylifeatschool.theconclusion（总结）ofSam'sdayatschoolLeadinginToday,inourwritingclass,wearegoingtohelpagirlcalledFangFangtofinishherdailyschedule.6:30a.m.getup4–4:30p.m.playbasketballwith

friends

7a.m.havebreakfast4:45p.m.gohome7:30a.m.gotoschool6:30p.m.havedinner8:30a.m.–4p.m.haveclasses9:00p.m.gotobedTimeTimeActivitiesActivitiesPre-writing1234ACBDPre-writing

PutthepicturesintocorrectorderFangFangisaGrade

7student.FangFang(1)___________at6:30a.m.At7a.m.,FangFang(2)_____________.hasbreakfastgetsupSubject主语：FangFangTense时态：simplepresenttense一般现在时ShesheTip1personalpronoun代替重复出现的主语WhilewritingCompletethearticleaboutFangFang'sdailylifeTip2counjunctions让句子更有逻辑性FangFanglivesclosetoschool,soshealways(3)_________________onfootat7:30a.m,andshe(4)________________from8:30a.m.to4p.m.goestoschoolhasclasses常见的连词：and并列，but转折，so/because因果，等等WhilewritingCompletethearticleaboutFangFang'sdailylifeAfterschool,she

(5)___________________________________________.

She(6)_________________at4:45p.m.playsbasketballwithfriends/classmatesgoeshomeusuallyalwaysTip3adverbsoffrequency的使用表达动作发生的频率常见的频度副词：always,usually,often,sometimes,seldom,neverWhilewritingCompletethearticleaboutFangFang'sdailylifeFangFangusually(7)__________at6:30p.m.Shealways(8)____________________at9:00p.m.hasdinnergoes

tobed

FangFangusuallyhasdinnerat6:30p.m.Afterdinner,shesometimeswatchesTVordoeshomeworkintheevening.Shealwaysgoestobedat9p.m.detaileddescription（细节描写）Tip4detaileddescription让文章更加饱满WhilewritingCompletethearticleaboutFangFang'sdailylife6:30a.m.getup4–4:30p.m.playbasketballwith

friends/classmates7a.m.havebreakfast4:45p.m.gohome7:30a.m.gotoschool6:30p.m.havedinner8:30a.m.–4p.m.haveclasses9:00p.m.gotobedWhatdoyouthinkaboutFangFang'sdailylife?Herdailylifeisveryhappy.WhilewritingTipsforwriting

Tips

1.personalpronouns的运用,避免主语的重复使用2.adverbsoffrequency

可以使日常生活描写更生动3.conjunctions

增强句子之间的逻辑关系4.detaileddescription可以让文章更饱满PracticetimeTomisamiddleschoolstudent.Readhisdailyschedulemindmap,andpleasewriteanarticleabouthisdailylife.(nolessthan60words)PracticetimeTomisamiddleschoolstudent.He______________________at7:00a.m.Thenhe_____________________at7:30a.m._________________________________________________________Afterthat,___________________________,andhe_____________________from8:30a.m.to4:00p.m.频度副词+动词usuallygetsuphasbreakfast补充细节，早餐吃了什么？Heofteneatsbreadanddrinkssomemilk.补充细节hegoestoschoolhasclassesPracticetimeAfterschool,he________________________________________.Then,he

________________________________________________________________at5:30p.m.______________________________________________________.Andthen,he

__________________________________around9:00p.m.Tom'sdailylifeisvery____________.频度副词+动词alwaysdoessportswithfriends陈述活动+补充细节goeshometohavedinnerHeoftendoeshomeworkfrom7:00p.m.goestobedadj.regular有规律的Timeflies.时光飞逝。Timeandtidewaitfornoman.时光不等人。CherishyourtimeSummaryBeforewewriteanarticleaboutdailylife,weshouldanalyzethepicturesandtimetablecarefullytodecidethesubjectandtense.Whenwewriteaboutdailylife,weshouldpayattentiontothefourwritingtips.Afterwefinishwriting,weshouldcheckourworksandmakesureeachsentenceintheworksiscorrect.Rememberthetwoproverbsandcherishourtimeinthedailylife.HomeworkgetuprideabiketoschoolgotobedplaytabletenniswithfriendspracticeplayingtheguitarbreakfastonelessontoteachhavedinnerinthemorningtwolessonstoteachMaryisateacher.Readherdailyschedule,andpleasewriteanarticleaboutherdailylife.(nolessthan60words)ThankYou！七年级上册—上海教育出版社—英语—第二单元

DailyLifeUnit2Writing（答疑）

答疑Question1在Dailylife的写作中，我们可以不按照时间顺序写吗？Question2在Dailylife的写作中，有些时间在句末出现，例如7:30a.m.，这种情况如果是句号结尾，是否还要在a.m.后面加上句号？Question3初中阶段英语写作的评分标准有哪些？答疑Question1在Dailylife的写作中，我们可以不按照时间顺序写吗？Timeisacluefordailylifewriting,andthewholearticleappearsmorecoherentifwewritethearticleaccordingtothetime.答疑Question2在Dailylife的写作中，有些时间在句末出现，例如7:30a.m.，这种情况如果是句号结尾，是否还要在a.m.后面加上句号？If'7:30a.m.'isintheendofthesentenceandatthesametime,thesentenceisendedwithfullstop,thereisnoneedtousethefullstop.Butifthesentenceisendedwithcomma,thecommacannotbeomitted.e.g.1Tomhasbreakfastat7:30a.m.e.g.2Tomhasbreakfastat