读后续写-超速罚单背后的人生转折Rutledge的蜕变之路讲义-山东省青岛市2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中学业水平诊断英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Twoyearsago,20yearoldRutledgewasdrivingonherwaytoworkwhenshesawthebluelightsflashingbehindher.Fromtherearmirrorofhercar,shenoticedapoliceofficeringuptoher.Asshepulledovertothesideoftheroad,herheartbeatupinherearswithanxiety,becausesheknewshehaddonethewrongthingatthewrongplaceandtime.Brown,apoliceofficer,approachedandintendedtogiveheraspeedingticket.Rutledgeacknowledgedhermistakeandexpressedthatshewasverysorry.Andthen,shetoldBrownthatshewasbroke,anddidn'thavethemoneytopayaspeedingticket.Mostpeoplehaveastoryabouttalkingtheirwayoutofaticket,andBrownhasprobablyhearditallbefore.Butwhatwashisresponse?Hedidn'tchargeherforthespeedingticket.Instead,heaskedRutledgetohaveatalkwithhimabouthersituation.WhatRutledgedidn'tknowwasthatitwouldbeoneofthebestthingsthateverhappenedtoher.Theirtalkwentonforabout10to15minutes,justsittinginthecar.RutledgetoldBrownthatshewasstuckinadeadendjobanddidn'tknowwhattodo.Then,theytalkedaboutdifferentcareerchoices.Tohiscredit,BrownprovidedguidanceandmotivationtoRutledge.HehelpedRutledgefigureoutwhereshewasgoinginthefuture.Afterthetalk,theirconclusionwasthatRutledgewouldmakeagreatnurse.Ifonecanbelieveit,Brownevenconvincedherthatsheshouldapplyforanursingschool.Atlast,Brownletheroffwithjustawarning.“Promisemeyou'llgotoanursingschool.SlowdownandIwon'tgiveyouaticket,”hesaid.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AssoonasBrownleft,Rutledgewaslostinthought.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Twoyearslater,RutledgeinvitedBrowntohergraduationceremony.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：Rutledge驾车超速被警察Brown拦下，她因没钱交罚单向Brown坦白困境，Brown未开罚单，而是与她交谈，了解到她工作无前途，便引导她考虑护理职业并鼓励其申请护理学校，最后仅给予警告便放行。伏笔与回应：伏笔：Rutledge表示没钱交罚单且工作陷入困境。回应：Brown与她深入交谈职业选择，引导她走向护理行业，解决未来困境。伏笔：Brown未开罚单而是要求谈话。回应：这次谈话成为Rutledge人生转折点，使她有机会改变命运，在续写中体现她对Brown感激以及自身的成长蜕变。伏笔：Brown建议Rutledge申请护理学校。回应：后文Rutledge成功入学并毕业，邀请Brown参加毕业典礼，体现对其感激与自身努力成果。伏笔：Brown以“去护理学校且减速就不开罚单”为条件放行。回应：Rutledge遵守承诺，走向新的人生道路，在毕业典礼情节中得以体现她的守信与成功。伏笔：两人在车内深入交谈职业方向。回应：这一交谈奠定了Rutledge后续努力奋斗的基础，毕业典礼上她对Brown的感恩也源于此。续写要点：第一段：写Rutledge思考Brown的建议，内心从犹豫到坚定，决定改变自己，开始努力为进入护理学校做准备，过程中遇到困难但想起Brown的鼓励坚持下来。第二段：描述毕业典礼上Rutledge向Brown表达诚挚感激，强调Brown的善举对自己人生的巨大改变，Brown为她感到骄傲，体现善举引发积极连锁反应，改变他人命运。情感线：从最初被拦下的紧张焦虑，到与Brown交谈后的迷茫与思考，再到决定改变的坚定，最后在毕业典礼上对Brown充满感激与自豪。故事线：Rutledge超速被拦，与Brown交谈获职业引导，努力后毕业，邀请Brown参加典礼。主旨升华句：Asmallactofkindnesscanbethecatalystthattransformsalife'strajectory.（一个小小的善举可能成为改变人生轨迹的催化剂。）Inthejourneyoflife,ahelpinghandcanredirectone'spathtowardsabrighterfuture.（在人生旅途中，一只援助之手能将一个人的道路引向更光明的未来。）Kindness,likeapebbleinapond,createsripplesofchangethatspreadfarandwide.（善良就像池塘里的一颗石子，产生扩散深远的变革涟漪。）Oneperson'smomentofmercycanbeethecornerstoneofanother'ssuccessstory.（一个人的仁慈时刻可能成为另一个人成功故事的基石。）Achanceencounterwithkindnesshasthepowertorewritethescriptofone'sdestiny.（一次与善良的偶然相遇有改写一个人命运剧本的力量。）写作示范一：AssoonasBrownleft,Rutledgewaslostinthought.Sheknewherlifeneededachange,buttheideaofstartinganewwasdaunting.Foramoment,shedoubtedifshecouldreallybeeanurse.However,Brown'swordskeptringinginherears.Shedecidedtotakethefirststepandstartedresearchingnursingschools.Thereweredifficultiesalongtheway,likestrugglingwithstudymaterialswhilestillworking.Butwhenevershefeltlikegivingup,sherememberedBrown'sencouragementandpushedforward.Twoyearslater,RutledgeinvitedBrowntohergraduationceremony.Withabeamingsmileandtearsofgratitudeinhereyes,shesaid,“Youchangedmylife.YourbeliefinmewhenIhadnoneinmyselfmadeallthispossible.”Brownwasdeeplytouched.HesawinRutledgeatransformedandconfidentwoman.Itwasamomentthatprovedhowasimpleactofkindnesscouldhaveaprofoundandlastingimpactonsomeone'slife.写作示范二：AssoonasBrownleft,Rutledgewaslostinthought.SheweighedtheprosandconsoffollowingBrown'sadvice.Theuncertaintyofleavinghercurrentjobandenteringanewfieldmadeherhesitate.Butthenshethoughtofthedeadendshewasinandrealizedshehadnothingtolose.Shebegantomakeaplan,enrollinginpreparatorycoursesfornursingschool.Despitethelonghoursofstudyandthefinancialstrain,shepersevered.Twoyearslater,RutledgeinvitedBrowntohergraduationceremony.Shehandedhimabouquetofflowersandsaid,“Thankyouforbeingmyguidinglight.YourkindnessthatdaysetmeonapathIneverthoughtIcouldtake.”Brownfeltasenseofpride.Thisencountershowedthatalittlekindnessattherightmomentcouldsetoffachainreactionofpositivechange,leadingonetoawholenewandwonderfulchapteroflife.参考答案AssoonasBrownleft,Rutledgewaslostinthought.Shereflectedonhercurrentjob,realizingittrulylednowhere.Brown'swordsechoedinhermind,ignitingasparkofhope.Shestartedresearchingnursingprogramsthatveryevening,determinedtomakeachange.Despiteinitial