读后续写+归还钥匙：于细微处绽放大爱+讲义 高三上学期12月月考英语试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Wethreewererunningdownthepath,shoutingandlaughingwhenourdogRubbysuddenlystoppedinthedistance.Heturnedaroundandeyedus,withhistailswingingupanddown.MylittlebrotherTobyimmediatelyspedupandrushedtowhereRubbywas.Hebentdown.pickedupsomethingandranbacktous.Itwasabunchofkeys.Wegatheredinacircle,examiningthekeysonebyone.hopingtofindsomeusefulinformationaboutitsowner.Therewere3keys—ahousekey,amailkeyandacarkeyandauniquekeyfob(吊坠)verylikelydesignedspecially.“Gosh,theownermightbeingreattrouble,”mysistersighed.Shewasright.Weoncelostourkeys.Althoughwehadanextrahousekey,ittookourparentsquitealongtimetogetanewmailkey.letalonetherewasacarkey.Whomighthavelostthem?Altermanywildguesses,wefinallydrewaconclusion.Itmightbelongtosomeoneinourneighborhoodasonlyourneighborswanderedintothewoodsforawalk.Butitwasstillimpossibletofigureoutwhoitwas.Wehadaverybigneighborhood.“Theownermightcomebacktolookforthem,”Tobyreminded.Sowedecidedtostaywherewewere,keepingawatchfuleyeonallpassers-by.Ourlittledogranincirclesofexcitementsincewestayedsolonginthewild.Weremainedinthewoodsfortwohours,askingeveryonewecameacrosswhethertheylosttheirkeys,butinvain.Itseemedwehadtogiveup.Butmysisterwouldn’t,sayingthatshejustcouldn’tstoppicturingtheownerbrushingasidetallgrasseshopingtofindthelostkeys.“Howanxiousandupsettheownerwouldbe!”Itookalookatthebunchofkeysagainandquitebyaccident,foundthekeyfobhadthealarmbutton.“Look!Ifwepressthealarmbutton,closeenoughofcourse,wecansetofftheowner’scaralarm.”“That’sbrilliant.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Werushedbacktoourneighborhood.——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Thedooropenedandinfrontofusstoodanoldlady.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：“我们”三人带着小狗Rubby在小路上玩耍时，小狗捡到一串钥匙，上面有三把钥匙和一个独特的钥匙扣。想到失主可能会很着急，“我们”猜测钥匙可能是邻居的，便在原地等了两个小时询问路人但无果。后来“我”发现钥匙扣上有警报按钮，于是决定回小区通过按警报来找车，进而找到失主。伏笔以及在续写中的回应：伏笔：“Therewere3keys—ahousekey,amailkeyandacarkeyandauniquekeyfob(吊坠)verylikelydesignedspecially.”（有三把钥匙——一把房门钥匙、一把信箱钥匙和一把汽车钥匙，还有一个很可能是特别设计的独特钥匙扣。）回应：续写中通过钥匙扣上的警报按钮找到了汽车，进而确定了失主，体现出钥匙扣这个独特设计的重要性，推动了情节发展。伏笔：“Wehadaverybigneighborhood.”（我们的社区非常大。）回应：这为“我们”在社区里寻找失主增加了难度，突出了“我们”坚持寻找的可贵，也使得找到失主后的成就感更强烈，同时呼应了按警报按钮找车这一方法的必要性。伏笔：“Ourlittledogranincirclesofexcitementsincewestayedsolonginthewild.”（因为我们在野外待了这么久，我们的小狗兴奋地跑来跑去。）回应：在续写中，小狗虽然没有直接参与找失主的关键情节，但它的兴奋状态从侧面反映出“我们”在等待和寻找过程中的坚持，与“我们”的行为形成一个整体氛围，丰富了故事场景。伏笔：“Weremainedinthewoodsfortwohours,askingeveryonewecameacrosswhethertheylosttheirkeys,butinvain.”（我们在树林里待了两个小时，问过我们遇到的每一个人是否丢了钥匙，但都没有结果。）回应：突出了“我们”一开始寻找失主的困难，与后面通过按警报按钮找到失主形成对比，体现出“我们”不放弃的精神，同时也为后面的情节转折做了铺垫。伏笔：“Itmightbelongtosomeoneinourneighborhoodasonlyourneighborswanderedintothewoodsforawalk.”（它可能是我们社区里的某个人的，因为只有我们的邻居会到树林里散步。）回应：为“我们”回社区找失主提供了合理的理由，限定了寻找范围，使故事的发展更具逻辑性，也让读者更容易理解“我们”的行为动机。续写要点（两段）：第一段：描述“我们”回到小区后，小心翼翼地按警报按钮，仔细听辨周围车辆的反应，同时紧张又期待地观察着周围的动静。当听到警报声后，如何兴奋地循声而去，最终确定是哪辆车，过程中可以增加一些对小区环境和“我们”心情的细节描写，比如心跳加速、眼睛紧紧盯着周围等，突出紧张刺激的氛围。第二段：重点刻画老妇人开门后的反应，从她最初的疑惑到看到钥匙后的惊喜和感激，通过语言、表情和动作等细节展现出来。“我们”看到她的反应后的内心感受，以及双方简单的交流互动，体现出帮助他人后的快乐和满足，升华故事的情感。情感线：

起初发现钥匙时，“我们”对失主充满担忧；在树林等待失主无果后，有些失落但仍不想放弃；回到小区寻找时，心情紧张又期待；找到失主后，看到老妇人的感激，“我们”内心充满喜悦和成就感，完成了从担忧到喜悦、从失落想放弃到坚持成功的情感转变，突出了帮助他人所带来的积极情感体验。故事线：

“我们”玩耍时小狗捡到钥匙，猜测是邻居的并在树林等待失主，无果后回小区利用钥匙扣警报按钮找车，最终确定失主是一位老妇人，归还钥匙后收获感激，完整地讲述了一个寻找失主归还钥匙的温暖故事，情节紧凑且合理。主旨升华句（5句英文）：Asmallactofkindnesscanbeabigrayofhopeinsomeone'scloudyday.（一个小小的善举可能是某人阴霾日子里的一大束希望之光。）Inthejourneyofhelpingothers,weoftenfindthetruemeaningandvalueofourownexistence.（在帮助他人的过程中，我们常常能找到自身存在的真正意义和价值。）Thewarmthofkindnessspreadslikeawildfire,lightingupnotonlythereceiver'sheartbutalsoourown.（善良的温暖像野火一样蔓延，不仅照亮了接受者的心，也照亮了我们自己的心。）Sometimes,thesimplestactionscarrythemostprofoundimpact,teachingusthepowerofempathyandcompassion.（有时，最简单的行动却有着最深远的影响，让我们懂得了同理心和同情心的力量。）Everyactofkindnessisaseedsowninthegardenofhumanity,growingintoabeautifulflowerofconnectionandlove.（每一个善举都是在人性的花园里播下的一颗种子，成长为一朵连接与爱的美丽花朵。）两篇写作示范：第一篇：Werushedbacktoourneighborhood.Tobyclutchedthekeys,hisfaceflushedwithexcitement.Aswewalked,Ipressedthealarmbuttonatshortintervals,myearsstrainingtocatchthefaintestsound.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,castinglongshadowsonthepavement.Ourstepsquickenedwitheverypress,theanticipationbuilding.Suddenly,ashrillbeepingpiercedtheair.Wedashedtowardsthesound,heartspounding.There,inadriveway,wasabluecarwithitslightsflashing.Wehadfoundit!Thedooropenedandinfrontofusstoodanoldlady.HereyeswidenedindisbeliefasshesawthekeysinToby'shand."Oh,mygoodness!I'vebeensearchinghighandlow.Youdearchildren,howcanIeverthankyou?"sheexclaimed,hervoicetremblingwithemotion.Wesmiledshyly,tellingheritwasnotroubleatall.Sheinsistedongivingussomehomemadecookies,andaswemunchedonthem,thesweetnessfillednotonlyourmouthsbutourhearts.Itwasinthatmomentthatwerealizedthepowerofasimpleactofkindness,andhowitcouldturnastranger'sdistressintoasharedmomentofjoy.第二篇：Werushedbacktoourneighborhood.Withbatedbreath,Ipressedthealarmbutton,myeyesscanningeverycarwepassed.Theneighborhoodwasquiet,theonlysoundbeingourhurriedfootstepsandtheintermittentbeeping.MysisterheldRubby'sleashtightly,asifdrawingstrengthfromourfurryfriend.Asweturnedacorner,aloudalarmechoedthroughthestreet.Wesawawhitecarwithitshazardlightsblinking.Reliefwashedoverusasweknewwewereclose.Thedooropenedandinfrontofusstoodanoldlady.Shelookedatuswithamixtureofsurpriseandgratitude."IthoughtI'dlostthemforever.Youangelshavesavedmesomuchtrouble,"shesaid,tearsglisteninginhereyes.Wehandedherthekeys,andshehuggedusonebyone.Inthatembrace,wefeltaconnection,abondformedthroughkindness.Thisexperiencetaughtusthateventhesmallestgesturescanhaveaprofoundimpact,andthatthekindnesswegiveawayalwaysfindsitswaybacktousinthemostunexpectedandbeautifulways.读后续写参考答案Werushedbacktoourneighborhood.Wefoundalotofcarsintheneighborhood.Wetriedtopasseachcar,pressingthealarm