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读后续写:人与自然救助并照顾走失的小松鼠读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。MyhusbandandIenjoyseeinglifethroughtheeyesofourchildren.It'samazingtowatchastheydiscovertheirworld.Whilewewereoutdoorslastsummerenjoyingthesunshine,ouroldestdaughter,Kaytlin,calledmetothedoorway.Beneaththestepswasababyredsquirrel.Wewatcheditfromadistance,notwantingtodisturbitorscareoffitsmother.Butafteralongwait-andlookingallaroundourhouseforsignsofanestoramother--werealizedthetinysquirrelwaslost.Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,buttheInlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.Aftersomequickresearch,weconcludedthatthebestwaytogivethesquirrelafightingchancewastocareforhimourselves.Soatriptothelocalstoreformilkandsupplieswasinorder.Moreresearchtaughtushowmuchtofeedhim,howtoestimatehisage,howandwhentowean(断奶)him,andthatweshouldlethimgoassoonashecouldsurviveonhisown.OurdaughtersandItookturnsinfeeding“Squirt".Kaytlintookonthemostresponsibility.Shetaughthimtoeatfromabottle,andshewokeinthenightforhisfeeds.Toourrelief,Squirtsoonbecamehealthyandstrong.Withinafewweekshebecamemoreactive.Hewouldchatter(吱吱叫)forhisnextmeal,playfullygoaroundthegirls,andliedownonthemforsleep.Itwasn'tlongbeforehewasweanedontosolidfoodandreintroducedtothewild.Hisfirstfewvisitstothegreatoutdoorswerefunny.Justlikeachild,hewouldplayinthegrassandthenrunbacktoKaytlinforsafety.Soonshehadhimclimbingtreesandfindingnestmaterial.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150个左右。2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgray
squirrels.
"________Paragraph2:Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.
"______主旨大意文章围绕一家人救助并照顾走失小松鼠的经历展开,体现了人与动物间的温暖情谊以及对生命的关爱。伏笔例如“Shakingterribly,hewasweak,thin,andhungry.Wetriedtofindanexperttohelp,buttheInlandFisheriesandWildlifewebsiteshowedthattherewerenowildlifeexpertsinourarea.”为后文自行照顾小松鼠做铺垫。故事情节发现小松鼠-尝试找专家-自行照顾-小松鼠成长-放归野外-续写部分的后续情况。情绪变化担心谨慎-认真负责-欣慰-牵挂不舍。主题句1.Loveandcareforanimalscanbridgethegapbetweenhumansandtheanimalkingdom.对动物的关爱能够弥合人类与动物世界之间的鸿沟。2.Takingresponsibilityforahelplesscreatureenrichesourliveswithwarmthandmeaning.为一个无助的生灵担起责任,让我们的生活充满温暖与意义。
3.Whenweextendahelpinghandtowildlife,wecreatebeautifulbondsoffriendship.当我们向野生动物伸出援手时,我们就创造了美好的友谊纽带。4.Nurturingalostanimalshowsthepowerofkindnessinthecycleoflife.养育一只走失的动物展现了生命轮回中善良的力量。5.Ouractsofcompassiontowardsanimalscanbringharmonytonature.我们对动物的同情之举能够为大自然带来和谐。范文一Paragraph1:Onedayinthetrees,Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.
Heseemedabithesitantatfirst,standingstillonabranchandlookingatthemnervously.Butthefriendlychatteringofthegraysquirrelssoonputhimatease.Theywelcomedhimintotheirgroup,showinghimwheretofindthebestnutsandhowtobuildamorecomfortablenest.Squirtquicklyadaptedandstartedplayingwiththem.Watchingfromadistance,Kaytlinfeltasenseofreliefandhappiness,knowingthatSquirthadfoundhisownkindandwouldnolongerisaloneinthewild.Newwords:"hesitant":adj.犹豫的;迟疑的"atease":舒适;自在;不拘束"adapt":v.适应;改编Paragraph2:Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.
Kaytlinwasworriedsick,pacingbackandforthintheroom,fearingthatsomethingbadhadhappenedtohim.However,thenextmorning,whenthesunpeekedthroughtheclouds,Squirtshowedupattheedgeofouryard,lookingenergeticasever.Hehadjustfoundacozyshelterduringtherainandcamebacktosayhello.Kaytlinrantohimandgavehimagentlehug,realizingthateventhoughSquirtnowbelongedtothewild,theirbondwouldalwaysremain.Newwords:"worriedsick":非常担心;极度忧虑"pace":v.踱步;缓慢而行"peek":v.窥视;偷看"cozy":adj.舒适的;惬意的范文二Paragraph1
Onedayinthetrees,
Squirtmetupwithafamilyofgraysquirrels.
Hewatchedthemfromafarforawhile,hisbodytensedasifunsurewhethertoapproach.Butthen,oneofthelittlegraysquirrelscameovertohimwithafriendlygesture,waggingitsbushytail.Squirtpluckeduphiscourageandslowlymovedtowardsthem.Theybegansharingfoodwithhimandteachinghimhowtojumpfrombranchtobranchmorenimbly.Squirtwashavingagreattimewiththem,anditwasclearthathewasgraduallybecomingpartofthisnewfamily.Newwords:"afar":adv.在远处;从远处"tense":adj.紧张的;绷紧的"pluckup":鼓起(勇气等)"nimbly":adv.敏捷地;灵活地Paragraph2:Onenight,Squirtdidn'tcomebacktoourhouseanditrainedhard.
Thewindwashowling,andtherainwaslashingagainstthewindows.Kaytlincouldn'tfallasleep,hermindfilledwiththoughtsofSquirtoutthereinthestorm.Whendawnbroke,therainfinallystopped.KaytlinrushedoutsidetolookforSquirt.Toherdelight,shefoundhimonanearbytree,dryinghisfurinthesunlight.Squirtchirpe
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