2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：双犬护主显忠诚爱与理解延续+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习双犬护主显忠诚，爱与理解延续1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文DogsnamedHeroandTorasavedtheirowner’slifeinMarch.Theyremainedbyhissidethroughtwocoldnights,foughtcoyotes(土狼),andwaitedforhelp.Theirstoryhaswontherespectoftheworld.AcharitydonationcampaignwaslaunchedbythevictimandthelocalshelterTaberLostPawsSocietytohelptheinjureddogs.Thestorybeganwithanattack.WhenapasserbynamedCurtisDahlwaswalkinghisdoginafieldofmuddygrassnearthesugarfactoryinthetownofTaber,anareathatisquiteremote,notwell-traveled,andquitecoldinMarch.Suddenly,Herocamerunningupandbithisdogaroundtheneck.DahlclaimedhefoughtwithHerofortenminutes,tryingtogethimoffhisdog,andhisfingerwashurtbytheendofit.Callingpoliceandanimalserviceswithacomplaint,hetoldthemaboutHero’spresence,butwhentheofficersarrivedandsawHerolyingdownthere,badlyhurtandtiredout,theysuddenlyheardacryforhelp.4续写原文Arriving,theyfoundamanlyingonhisbackinaditch(沟渠),tremblingandunabletomove.Hetoldpoliceheis61andlivesaloneandthathewaswalkinghistwodogsHeroandTorawhenhefelldown.He’dbeenstucktherefortwodaysandhisdogsprotectedhim.Themansaidthatwhenhefelldown,ToraandHerostayedwithhimtokeephimsafeandwarmforsometime,andthenToraranoff.“Iknowshewenthometofindsomehelpforme,buteverytimeshecameback,verysad,”saidtheman.Torawentbackandforthfromthesitewhereherownerwasandherhomeseveraltimes.BythetimeDahlwalkedbyandrescuersarrived,Torahadjustgonebackagain.5段首句Paragraph1：ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.Paragraph2：Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8三月，两只狗狗赫罗和托拉拯救了主人的生命。它们在寒冷的夜晚守在主人身边，与土狼搏斗等待救援。故事始于路人柯蒂斯・达尔的投诉，他称赫罗袭击了他的狗。但警察到达后发现受伤的赫罗及呼救的主人。原来主人独自散步时摔倒，被困两天，托拉往返家中求救，赫罗守护主人与土狼对抗。之后，达尔知晓真相后态度转变。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.主人回忆起赫罗和托拉如何保护他免受土狼的侵害。“那些土狼在周围徘徊，饥饿的眼神让人胆寒，它们一直寻找机会靠近我。但赫罗和托拉毫无惧色，始终坚定地守在我身前。赫罗尤其勇猛，每一次土狼试图靠近，它都毫不犹豫地冲上前去，发出低沉的吼声，露出锋利的牙齿，用自己的身躯为我筑起一道防线。在一次激烈的对抗中，一只体型较大的土狼从侧面突袭，赫罗为了保护我，被土狼抓伤了背部，鲜血染红了它的毛发，但它依然没有退缩。托拉也在一旁不断地吠叫，分散土狼的注意力。它们的勇敢和忠诚，支撑着我熬过了那艰难的两天。”主人说着，声音哽咽，眼中满是对两只狗狗的心疼与感激。10续写思路分析Para2：Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.了解事情的经过后，达尔对赫罗没有了丝毫的怨恨。回想起当时赫罗的状态，他意识到赫罗并非无端攻击，而是出于对主人的极度担忧和寻求帮助的急切心情。达尔深感愧疚，决定去动物收容所看望受伤的赫罗和托拉。他精心挑选了营养丰富的狗粮和可爱的玩具，满怀诚意地来到收容所。看到受伤的两只狗狗，达尔的眼眶湿润了，他轻声说道：“对不起，是我误会你们了。你们是真正的英雄。”从那以后，达尔经常来照顾它们，还会向身边的人讲述这个感人的故事，希望更多的人能感受到动物们的忠诚与爱。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes."Thosecoyoteswerelingeringaround,withtheirhungryeyesmakingmetremble.Theywereconstantlylookingforachancetoapproachme.However,HeroandTorashowednofearatall.Theyfirmlystoodinfrontofmeallthetime.Herowasespeciallybrave.Everytimeacoyotetriedtogetclose,itrushedforwardwithouthesitation,growlingdeeplyandshowingitssharpteeth,buildingadefenselineformewithitsownbody.Duringafierceconfrontation,arelativelylargecoyotelaunchedasurpriseattackfromtheside.Toprotectme,Herowasscratchedonthebackbythecoyote,anditsfurwasstainedwithblood.Butitstilldidn'tretreat.Torawasalsobarkingcontinuouslybeside,divertingthecoyotes'attention.Theircourageandloyaltysustainedmethroughthosetoughtwodays."Theman'svoicechokedupashespoke,hiseyesfullofdistressandgratitudeforthetwodogs.13范文呈现Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.RecallingHero'sstateatthattime,herealizedthatHerodidn'tattackhisdogwithoutreason.Instead,itwasoutofextremeworryaboutitsownerandeagernesstoseekhelp.DahlfeltdeeplyguiltyanddecidedtovisittheinjuredHeroandToraattheanimalshelter.Hecarefullyselectednutritiousdogfoodandlovelytoysandcametotheshelterwithfullsincerity.Seeingtheinjuredtwodogs,Dahl'seyeswelledupwithtears.Hesaidsoftly,"I'msorry.Imisunderstoodyou.Youarerealheroes."Sincethen,Dahloftencametotakecareofthemandwouldtellthistouchingstorytopeoplearoundhim,hopingthatmorepeoplecouldfeeltheloyaltyandloveofanimals.14升级版范文呈现ThemanvividlyrecalledtheharrowingmomentswhenHeroandTorashieldedhimfromthemenacingcoyotes.“Theretheywere,thoseravenouscoyotes,lurkingontheperiphery,theireyesglintingwithhunger,sendingshiversdownmyspine.Theyincessantlyprowled,seekinganopportunemomenttopounce.Butmyvaliantcompanions,HeroandTora,remainedsteadfast,theirunwaveringresolveevidentastheystoodresolutelybeforeme.Hero,inparticular,wasaparagonofcourage.Eachtimeacoyotedaredtoencroach,itsprangforwardwithunbridleddetermination,emittinggutturalgrowlsandbaringitsformidableteeth,usingitsownbodyasalivingbulwarktosafeguardme.Duringoneparticularlyintenseskirmish,alarge-sizedcoyotelaunchedasurpriseflankingattack.Inaselflessactofsacrifice,Herointerceptedtheassailant,sustainingadeepscratchonitsback.Thesightofitsfurstainedwithbloodwasheart-wrenching,yetitrefusedtoyieldaninch.Meanwhile,Torabarkedfuriously,divertingthecoyotes'attentionandaddingtothedefensivefront.Theirunwaveringloyaltyandindomitablespiritweretheverylifelinesthatsustainedmethroughthosearduoustwodays.”Theman'svoicequiveredwithemotion,hiseyesglisteningwithamixofpainandprofoundgratitudeforhisfour-leggedsaviors.15升级版范文呈现Uponlearningthefullextentofthestory,Dahl'sinitialanimositytowardsHeroevaporatedcompletely.ReflectingonHero'sdesperatestateduringtheencounter,hefinallygraspedthetruemotivebehindtheseeminglyunprovokedattack.ItdawnedonhimthatHero'sactionsweredrivenbyanoverwhelmingsenseofurgencytoprotectitsinjuredownerandsecurehelp.Overcomewithremorse,Dahlresolvedtomakeamends.Hemadeabeelinefortheanimalshelter,arme