考点24书面表达-备战2022年中考英语一轮复习考点帮(浙江专用)(原卷版+解析)

考点24书面表达一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为＂启、承、转、合＂。＂启＂就是开头，＂承＂就是承接，＂转＂是转折，＂合＂是综合或总结。1.用于表示＂启＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,firstly,tobeginwith,tostartwith,recently,now,atpresent,inrecentyears,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,lately等。2.用于表示＂承＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有second,inaddition,besides,then,moreover,what’smore,what’sworse,forexample,certainly,obviously,inotherwords,still,atthesametime,nodoubt等。3.用于表示＂转＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,otherwise,while,despite,inspiteof等。4.用于＂合＂的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有inaword,inshort,aboveall,afterall,finally,therefore,asaresult,onthewhole,insummary等。总之，要做好书面表达，需要大家把握以下几个原则：细读提示，抓要点：选择句型，准表达；确定线索，巧组合；适当发挥，保完整；规范书写，争高分；细查全文，除笔误。一、写作方法——十句作文法第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可调整两句的顺序，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。三段之间的衔接要灵活运用＂启、承、转、合＂的过渡手段。二、应急百宝箱一代，五加，一扩＂具体说来就是：1.以实代虚——写实2.增加限定语——定语、状语等3.增加例子——forexample,suchas4.增加原因——进一步说明5.加套语（词块）6.加格言、谚语等——进一步说明7.扩充建议——自主发挥，点到即可三、注意事项1.观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。2.层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。3.最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。4.通常采用一般现在时。5.语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。一、开头句型Asfaras...isconcernedItgoeswithoutsayingthat...Itcanbesaidwithcertaintythat...Astheproverbsays...Ithastobenoticedthat...It’sgenerallyrecognizedthat...It’slikelythat...It’shardlytoomuchtosaythat...Whatcallsforspecialattentionisthat...需要特别注意的是There’snodenyingthefactthat...毫无疑问，无可否认Nothingismoreimportantthanthefactthat...What’sfarmoreimportantisthat...二、衔接句型Acaseinpointis...Asisoftenthecase...Asstatedinthepreviousparagraph如前段所述Buttheproblemisnotsosimple.Therefore...然而问题并非如此简单，所以……Butit’sapitythat...Forallthat...Inspiteofthefactthat...Further,weholdopinionthat...However,thedifficultiesin...Similarly,weshouldpayattentionto...not(that)...but(that)...不是……而是……Inviewofthepresentstation...鉴于目前形势Ashasbeenmentionedabove...综上所述Inthisrespect,wemanyaswell(say)...从这个角度上我们可以说……However,wehavetolookattheothersideofthecoin,thatis...然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即……三、结尾句型Iwillconcludebysaying...Therefore,wehavethereasontobelievethat...Allthingsconsidered总而言之Itmaybesafelysaidthat...Therefore,inmyopinion,it’smoreadvisable...Itcanbeconcludedfromthediscussionthat...从中我们可以得出这样的结论Frommypointofview,itwouldbebetterif...在我看来……也许更好四、万能句型Let’stake...toillustratethis.试举例以兹证明Let’staketheabovechartasanexampletoillustratethis.Itremainstobefurtherstudied...There’squestionishow...观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。对比观点看法观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板Thetopicof主题isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavourite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof理由一.What’smore,理由二.Moreover,理由三.WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.First,理由一.Second(Besides),理由二.Third(Finally),理由三.Frommypointofview,Ithink我的观点.Thereasonisthat原因.Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformer(later)issurelyawisechoice.应用文应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体。它最突出的特点是它的实际应用性，应用文包括很广，如书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、请柬、电报、合同等。应用文的语言应使用规范语言，重在实用，力求朴实、准确、简洁。常用写作模板一、书信一、书信...MiddleSchool,...（写信人地址）April8th,2016...MiddleSchool,...（写信人地址）April8th,2016（写信的日期）DearXXX____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,____________信头称呼签名结束语正文二、日记二、日记三、通知三、通知Announcement/NoticeLadiesandgentlemen,Announcement/NoticeLadiesandgentlemen,Yourattention,please.Ihavesomethingtotellyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening./That’sall.Thanks.标题开场白称呼内容结束语四、启事四、启事1.遗失启事2.招领启事3.招聘启事五、便条五、便条六、发言稿六、发言稿七、倡议书七、倡议书八、调查报告八、调查报告一、通知假如你是李华，你们学校邀请到越剧演员茅威涛女士来你校进行讲座，请你用英语向你校国际班的留学生用英语进行口头通知。内容要点如下：1.讲座时间地点：本周三下午4点，学校报告厅；2.讲座内容：越剧发展史；3.邀请学生参加。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：越剧YueOperaMayIhaveyourattention,please?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、讲稿为积极响应习近平总书记提出的"光盘行动"，你校开展"EmptyYourPlate"Campaign英语演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿，谈一谈目前你校学生的就餐现状、光盘行动的意义，并提出建议。注意∶（1）短文必须包括表格中的全部内容，可适当发挥。（2）再提出2条合理建议。（3）词数：80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。（4）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。参考词汇：打包：packv.现状1.ordertoomuchfood2.cookfoodmorethanneeded意义1.savethefoodandprotecttheenvironment2.helptodevelopgoodeatinghabits建议1.haveclassmeetings2….3….Hello,everyone.Today,I'dliketotalkabout"EmptyYourPlate"Campaign.Nowadays____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、电子邮件假如你是李华，请根据所给邮件内容，给你的英国笔友Bill写一封回信。词数80—100词。DearLiHua,Inyourlastemail,youtoldmeyouhadalotoffuntalkinganewinvention—therubbishrecyclingrobot.Iaminterestedinit.Couldyoupleasetellmewhatitismadeof?Wherewasitmade?Whatisitusedfor?Andwhataretheadvantagesofit?Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouandexpectyoutoshareyourviewswithme.Yours,BillDearBill,Gladtoreceiveyouremail________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四、看图作文我们学校就疫情期间同学们在家的网课学习情况作了一个调查（结果见饼图）。请你根据下列所提供的图片和饼图写一篇短文，谈谈你对此的看法和建议，并向我们学校的公众号投稿。要求:（1）词数:110字左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。LastmonthwedidasurveyabouthowwellthestudentsinourschoolstudiedduringtheoutbreakofCOVID-19.Herearetheresultsofthesurvey.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五、材料作文随着科技的进步，获得知识的途径日益增多。有的人推崇师从电脑，有的人则支持师从教师的传统学习模式。请你结合自己的学习经历，选择其中一个观点进行阐述。learnfromcomputerslearnfromteachers•don’tneedtogotoschool•takefreecourses•moreeducationalresources•…•askforhelpintime•teachershelpdevelopinterest•necessarysupervision•…注意：（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数：80—100；（4）短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文首句：Withthedevelopmentofscience,therearemoreandmorewaystogetknowledge.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六、书信作文假如你是李平，你在美国游学时认识的同学Lisa将到中国游学，请你根据所给邮件给她写一封回信。From：LisaDearLiPing,How’sitgoing?Ihopeyou’refineandnottoobusy.Ican’twaittoleaveforChinanextweek.ButcouldyoutellmesomethingaboutChinesetablemanners?IhearpapercuttingisaspecialformofChinesetraditionalart.Iwanttobuysomeasgiftsformyfamilyandfriends.Canyouintroduceittome?Whatisitmadeof?Whatisitusedfor?Whyisitspecial?Hopetohearfromyousoon.LisaFromLiPingDearLisa,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________七、话题作文近年来，人们的生活发生了许多变化。请根据下表提供的信息以“Greatchangesinourlife”为题写一篇短文来阐述人们生活中的变化以及人们对未来生活的憧憬。CommunicationAmusement（娱乐）TransportationInthepastByletter,mobilephoneoronthephonewatchTV,readbooksorplaycardsonfootorbybikeAtpresentbymobilephone,emailorWeChatcheckoutvideosonTikTok（刷抖音）,playcomputergamesbybus,bycarorsubwayHopes……注意：1.文中必须包括所有要点，并适当拓展；2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；3.字数80﹣100。GreatchangesinourlifeNowadays,ourlifehaschangedalot.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1．（2021·浙江宁波·中考真题）假如你是李华,上个月你校举行了“祖国在我心中”的主题活动（themeevent）,请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历,写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。注意：（1）短文必须包括导图的所有要点,并适当发挥;（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;（3）词数80-100;标题已给出,不计入总词数。MotherlandinMyHeart________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2021·浙江嘉兴·中考真题）校学生会为即将到来的“健康周”活动策划了两个项目。假设你是学生会成员，请写一篇英语短文，在校英语报上介绍其中一个项目的活动内容及其益处。要点提示如下：ProjectsASchoolTripDayASportsDayActivities●flykites●haveapicnic●…●haveballgames●playtug-of-war(拔河)●…Benefits(益处)●developfriendship●feelrelaxed●…●developfriendship●keepfit●…注意:(1)短文必须包含表中你所选项目的所有信息，并适当发挥。(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。(3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。DuringtheHealthWeek,wewillhave____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2021·浙江湖州·中考真题）假定你是李雷。某英语杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据广告中的信息写一篇短文，用于投稿。文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；词数：80—100。ARTICLESWANTED!BeingHealthyWhichdoyouthinkismoreimportant,doingexerciseoreatinghealthyfood?Whatdoyoudotostayhealthy?Telluswhatyouthink!Writeanarticleansweringthesequestionsandwewillpublishthebestonesinourmagazine.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2021·浙江绍兴·中考真题）上个月，你们班为Children’sHome的孩子们组织了一次爱心义卖活动。请根据下表信息用英语写一篇短文，向某英语网站投稿，谈谈本次活动和你的体会。ThingsyoudidThingsyou’velearnedhandoutnoticesmakethingslike…sellthethingsgiveawaythemoneydeveloplifeskills…注意：（1）短文必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；（2）你的体会至少两条；（3）词数：80—100；（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。参考词汇：义卖活动charitysale短文首句：Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、话题作文5．（2021·浙江温州·中考真题）在中国传统文化中，“家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂，才是完整的家，温暖而有力量。请你结合下图，以“Home”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文。让外国朋友了解中国文化中的“家”。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2021·浙江衢州·中考真题）为助力打造“书香校园”，你校英语社团将举办以“热爱阅读”为主题的征文活动，请以“EnjoyReading,EnjoyLife”为标题写一篇短文介绍你自己的阅读情况并阐述阅读给你带来的好处。要求：1.短文应包括两个要点（阅读情况和阅读好处），可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；2.短文不能出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数：90～110。参考词汇：experience,habit,knowledge,pleasure________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、电子邮件7．（2021·浙江杭州·中考真题）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。HiLiPing,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?NextweekmycousinMikeisstayingwithme.We’rehavingapartynextSaturday.Pleasecome!We’llhavelotsofdrinks.Butifyouremember,canyoubringsomeChinesefood?Thepartywillbestartingat6p.m.Whattimedoyouthinkyou’llbecoming?I’llprobablyneedoneortwopeopletohelpmetidyupaftertheparty.Doyouthinkyou’llbeabletostayandhelp?Anyway,hopeyoucanmakeit.Pleasewritebacktotellmeifyoucancomeornot.Allthebest.MattDearMatt,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing8．（2021·浙江金华·中考真题）假如你叫Daming，本周六你们班要去浙江大学开展研学活动（studytour）。请根据下列表格中的内容，给外籍教师Mike发一份邮件，告知你们的计划，并邀请他一同前往。注意：1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3.词数：80～100；4.邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。内容要点：内容要点参考词汇WhenandwheretogoZhejiangUniversity,thisSaturdayHowtogobytrainWhattodovisit…,talkwith…,learnabout...,…Whattotakepassport,…Othersmeetattheschoolgate,7:30a.m.,…DearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Daming9．（2021·浙江台州·中考真题）假如你是李华，请给你的外国好友Andrew写一封电子邮件，介绍你校美食文化节（foodfestival）的相关内容及举办目的,并邀请他参加此次美食节。邮件内容包括：Time2:00p.m.Friday,June25thPlacetheschoolplaygroundActivitiescook,havesomethingdelicious...AimsexperienceChinesefoodculture,raisemoneyforcharity.注意：（1）邮件必须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；（2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；（3）词数：80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。To:AndrewFromLiHuaHi,AndrewHowisitgoing?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.LiHua10．（2021·浙江丽水·中考真题）外教Steve爱好艺术，喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据下面的要点，写一封邮件，邀请他到你家过周末。内容要点参考词汇weekendplan/activitiessports(ormusic/drawing)paint,playbasketball,….experienceofChineseculturesmakejiaozi,writewithaChinesebrush,…注意：（1）文中必须包含上表中的两个要点，可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息；（3）词数：80～100；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。ToSteve@SubjectWeekendPlanHi,Steve!I’mLiHua.Ihearyou’dliketoexperiencesomemoreChineseculturesbeforegoingback.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua一、讲稿1．（2021·浙江·一模）五一临近，学校将组织一次题为“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你结合身边同学们使用手机的情况，写一篇110词左右的发言稿，倡导同学们正确使用手机。注意：1.文中不能出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。2.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：radiation辐射eyesight视力beaddictedto...沉迷于……Boysandgirls,It’smypleasuretogiveyouaspeechhere.Nowadays,mobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongthemiddleschoolstudents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.二、电子邮件2．（2021·浙江·杭州市十三中教育集团（总校）二模）假如你是李平，最近收到英国笔友Peter的电子邮件，请你读后回复。注意：1.不要出现自己真实的学校和姓名;2.词数80左右。From:PeterDearLiPing,How’sitgoing?Ihearthatyouwillgraduatefromthejuniorhighschoolnextmonth.Congratulations!Howhaveyouchangedoverthethreeyears?Doyouhaveanythingoranyonewhoimpressedyoumost?Youmusthavemuchexpectationfortheseniorhighschoollife.Whatareyougoingtodoaftergraduation?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,PeterDearPeter,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing三、看图作文3．（2021·浙江·平阳县培培外国语学校一模）即将到来的中考使学生们倍感焦虑，为了查明焦虑原因，解决问题，校英语角做了一个问卷调查，请写一篇短文来描述下图的调查结果，并给出合理的建议（至少三点）。注意：1．文中不能出现真实的个人身份信息；2．词数：110词左右（开头已给出，不计入总次数）Recently,asurveyaboutwhystudentsfeelstressedhasbeendoneamongmiddleschoolstudents.Asisshowninthechart,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四、材料作文4．（2021·浙江浙江·模拟预测）词数：:80-100（帖子开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Topic:Howdoyoudealwithyouroldschoolthings?AmandaLv5Hi,guys!Juniorhighschoolwillbeoversoon.Howwillyoudealwithyouroldtextbooks,testpapers,exercisebooksandnotebooks?Willyousellsomeofthemforrecycling,keepallofthemforrecallingor...?Pleasetellusyourplansandreasons.Hello!I’minterestedinthistopic.Herearemyplans._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________