高考英语复习读后续写练习：“寻物高手”：与伙伴寻找妈妈丢失的钻石戒指+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习《“寻物高手”：与伙伴寻找妈妈丢失的钻石戒指》1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文I'mFranklinG.Takata,betterknownas“Find-ItFrankie”duetomyexceptionaltrackingabilities.Iwillsaythatthere'snothingoutthereIcan'tfind.Iamfortunatetohavealoyalandskilledpartner,Munchy,bymyside.Hewasselectedespeciallyformefromananimalshelterbymyparentsontheoccasionofmyfifthbirthday.OneThursdayafternoon,MunchyandIwereplayinginthegardenwhenMomrevealedthathercherisheddiamondringhaddisappeared,entrustinguswiththetaskoflocatingit.HadIknownhowtrickythecasewouldbe,Imighthavethoughttwice.ButIsaidthenasI'dsaytoday,“Iassureyouthatthere'snothingwecan'tlocate!"4续写原文Wheneveranitemdisappears,myinitialinquirytoMomis,“Doyourecallthelastplaceyousawit?"“Iwasoccupiedmakingcookiesinthekitchen,”Momreplied,“whenIremovedmyringandsetitonthecounter.However,aftertakingacallfromyouraunt,Ireturnedtodiscovertheringmissing!"“Hmm.Well,itcouldn'thavedisappearedallbyitself,"Isaid.“Munchy,let'sgotakeacloserlook."Munchyledthewaytothekitchen.Thecounterborenoindicationofthering'swhereabouts(下落);however,theflourbetrayedfaintpawprints,whichpointedtowardthecriminal'sidentity.“Thecat”Isaid.“Mr.Jinglesmusthavebeenplayingwiththering,causingittodroptotheground!”Crawlingonthefloor,Isearchedhighandlowforthering.Myeffortswereinvain.5段首句Paragraph1:“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”__Paragraph2:IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8富兰克林・G・高田因出色的追踪能力被称为“寻物高手弗兰基”，他有个忠诚又能干的伙伴芒奇。一个周四下午，他和芒奇在花园玩耍时，妈妈说她心爱的钻石戒指不见了，便委托他们寻找。弗兰基自信满满地答应下来。他询问妈妈最后一次看到戒指的地方，妈妈说在厨房做饼干时把戒指放在了柜台上，接了个电话回来就发现戒指不见了。弗兰基和芒奇来到厨房，柜台上没有戒指的踪迹，但面粉上有淡淡的爪印，指向了“嫌疑人”——猫金格斯先生。弗兰基认为金格斯先生可能在玩耍时把戒指弄到了地上，于是他在地板上四处寻找，却一无所获。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”“芒奇，该你上场了！去找金格斯先生。”芒奇立刻竖起耳朵，鼻子在空中嗅来嗅去，顺着猫的气味迅速行动起来。它带着我在屋子里四处搜寻，不放过任何一个角落。我们先来到了客厅，芒奇在沙发下仔细闻了闻，没有发现金格斯先生的踪迹。接着，我们又去了卧室，它在床底、衣柜旁认真寻找，依旧一无所获。最后，芒奇把我带到了地下室的门口，它用爪子不停地挠门，发出急切的叫声。我打开门，和它一起小心翼翼地走下去。地下室光线昏暗，弥漫着一股陈旧的味道。芒奇在地下室里转了一圈，突然停在一个旧箱子前，兴奋地叫了起来。我打开箱子，发现金格斯先生正蜷缩在里面，可戒指却不在它身边。我有些失望，心想难道我们找错方向了？但我还是没有放弃，我仔细观察着金格斯先生，发现它的爪子上好像沾了一些面粉。我灵机一动，说不定戒指还在厨房里，只是我们刚才没有找对地方。于是，我带着芒奇又回到了厨房。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.我正要放弃的时候，妈妈递给我一块热乎乎的饼干，我咬了一口。突然，我感觉嘴里有个硬邦邦的东西，吐出来一看，竟然是妈妈的钻石戒指！我惊讶地看着妈妈，妈妈也一脸诧异。原来，金格斯先生把戒指带到了厨房，在妈妈做饼干的时候，戒指不小心掉进了面粉里，然后随着面粉一起被做成了饼干。我笑着对妈妈说：“虽然过程曲折，但我们终究还是找到了戒指。”妈妈欣慰地笑了，她抱起芒奇，夸奖它是个了不起的小助手。我也对芒奇竖起了大拇指，感谢它在这次寻找戒指的过程中发挥了重要作用。通过这次经历，我更加坚信只要不放弃，就一定能找到解决问题的办法。而芒奇也用它的行动证明了自己是我最可靠的伙伴。从那以后，每当家里再有东西丢失，我和芒奇都会毫不犹豫地接受任务，开始我们的寻物之旅。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”Munchyimmediatelyperkeduphisearsandsniffedtheair,followingthescentofthecatandmovingquickly.Heledmearoundthehouse,searchingeverynookandcranny.First,wewenttothelivingroom.Munchycarefullysniffedunderthesofa,buttherewasnosignofMr.Jingles.Then,wemovedontothebedroom.Hesearchedunderthebedandaroundthewardrobe,yetstillfoundnothing.Finally,Munchyledmetothedoorofthebasement.Hescratchedthedoorwithhispawsandbarkedeagerly.Iopenedthedoorandwewalkeddowncarefullytogether.Thebasementwasdimlylitandfilledwithamustysmell.Munchycircledaroundthebasement.Suddenly,hestoppedinfrontofanoldboxandbarkedexcitedly.IopenedtheboxandfoundMr.Jinglescurledupinside,buttheringwasnotwithhim.Iwasabitdisappointed.Ithoughtmaybewewereonthewrongtrack.However,Ididn'tgiveup.IobservedMr.Jinglescarefullyandnoticedthatthereseemedtobesomeflouronhispaws.Abrilliantideaflashedthroughmymind.Maybetheringwasstillinthekitchen,butwejustdidn'tlookintherightplacebefore.So,ItookMunchybacktothekitchen.13范文呈现IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.Suddenly,Ifeltsomethinghardinmymouth.Ispatitoutandtomysurprise,itwasMom'sdiamondring!IlookedatMominastonishment,andshehadalookofsurpriseonherfacetoo.ItturnedoutthatMr.Jingleshadbroughttheringtothekitchen.WhileMomwasmakingcookies,theringaccidentallyfellintotheflourandthenwasmadeintoacookiealongwiththeflour.IsmiledandsaidtoMom,"Althoughitwasalongandwindingprocess,wefinallyfoundthering."Momsmiledwithrelief.ShepickedupMunchyandpraisedhimforbeingawonderfullittlehelper.IalsogaveMunchyathumbs-upandthankedhimforplayinganimportantroleinthisring-findingprocess.Throughthisexperience,Ibecameevenmoreconvincedthataslongaswedon'tgiveup,wewilldefinitelyfindawaytosolvetheproblem.AndMunchyprovedwithhisactionsthatheismymostreliablepartner.Sincethen,wheneversomethingislostathome,MunchyandIwillnothesitatetotakeonthetaskandstartourtreasure-huntingjourney.14升级版范文呈现“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”Atmycommand,Munchyinstantlyprickeduphisears,hisnosetwitchingashecaughtthefaintscentofthecat.Withgreatdetermination,hesetoff,leadingmeonathoroughsearchthroughoutthehouse.Wefirstmadeourwaytothelivingroom.Munchycroucheddown,hisnoseclosetothegroundashesniffedintentlyunderthesofa,buttherewasnotraceofMr.Jingles.Undeterred,wethenmovedtothebedroom.Heexploredeveryinchunderthebedandaroundthewardrobe,yethiseffortsyieldednoresults.Finally,Munchy'snoseguidedustothedoorofthebasement.Hepawedatthedoorrelentlessly,barkingexcitedly.Iopenedthedoor,andtogether,wedescendedintothedimly-lit,mustybasement.Munchycircledaroundthespace,andthen,abruptly,hestoppedinfrontofanoldbox,barkingwithenthusiasm.IopenedtheboxandfoundMr.Jinglescurledupinside,butthepreciousringwasnowheretobeseen.Disappointmentwashedoverme,andIbegantodoubtourapproach.However,Irefusedtogiveup.AsIexaminedMr.Jinglesclosely,Inoticedtracesofflouronhispaws.Asparkofinspirationhitme.Perhapstheringwasstillinthekitchen;wejusthadn'tsearchedintherightspot.So,IturnedaroundandledMunchybacktothekitchen.15升级版范文呈现IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.Allofasudden,Ifeltahardobjectinmymouth.Ispatitout,andtomyutteramazement,itwasMom'sdiamondring!IstaredatMomindisbelief,andherfacemirroredmyshock.ItdawnedonusthatMr.Jingleshadcarriedtheringintothekitchen,andduringMom'scookie-makingprocess,theringhadinadvertentlyfalleninto