高考英语复习读后续写练习：Anna+Collins的暖心善举与意外收获+课件

AnnaCollins的暖心善举与意外收获1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文AnnaCollinswasa34-year-oldsinglemother.Herhusbanddiedwhiletheirtwinsonswerestillbabies.Whenthetwinsturnedone,Annaexperiencedyetanotherchallenge:Oneofhersons,Adam,couldn’twalkduetolegdiscrepancy(不一致).Afterconsultingseveredoctors,thebestsuggestiontheycouldgivewasforAdamtoreceivesurgery.Tosupportthefamily,Annaworkedtwojobs,oneasawaitressatafast-foodchainandtheotherasapizzadeliveryworker.However,theamountshewastakinghomewasn’tenoughtocoverAdam’ssurgery.4续写原文OneFridayafternoon,Annadecidedtogotothegrocer'stobuyhertwins’foodfortheweek.Asshelineduptopay,shenoticedanoldmaninfrontofherlookingconfused.“Sorry.Ican’tgiveyougoodsunlessyouhaveenoughmoneytopay!”explainedthecashierpatiently.Annafeltawkwardfortheoldman.AlthoughshewashavingahardtimesavingupforAdam’streatment,shedecidedtohelp.Shepaidfortheoldman’sgroceries.“Doyouknowyourwayhome?”sheaskedhim.Themanstoodstill,lookingconfusedagain.ItwasthenthatAnnarealizedthemanwaslikelysufferingfrommemoryloss.Luckily,theoldmanhadanaddresscardinhispocket.Itwasacoupleofblocksfromthegrocerystore.Annahelpedhimcarryhisgroceries,andtheywalkedtowardtheparkinglotwheresheparkedherpizzadeliveryservicecar.Aftershetookhimhome,Annawentstraighttowork.5续写原文Afewdayslater,Annareceivedacallfromtheoldman’ssonJames.“Ijustwanttothankyouforhelpingmydadouttheotherday,”saidJames.Annareplied,“I’mgladIwasabletohelphim.Ishedoingalright?”Jamesrepliedthathisfatherwasreceivingtreatmentbecauseofmemorylossandwasrecoveringgradually.6段首句Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.Paragraph2:AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文围绕单身母亲Anna展开。Anna丈夫早逝，独自抚养双胞胎儿子，儿子Adam因腿疾需手术，她身兼两职却难以负担手术费。一次购物时，她帮助了一位没钱付账且疑似失忆的老人，送老人回家后继续工作。几天后，老人儿子James致电感谢，故事在此处留下悬念，后续发展聚焦于James身为医生，是否会为Adam的病情带来转机。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1：ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.分析：此段应承接上文，描述Anna得知James身份时的震惊与惊喜。可详细刻画Anna的心理活动，如从不敢相信到燃起希望。接着，James主动提出为Adam检查，Anna讲述Adam的情况，James带着医疗设备前往Anna家检查，过程中展现他的专业认真，为下文的好消息做铺垫。11续写思路分析Paragraph2：AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.分析：这段重点在于James告知Anna关于Adam病情的好消息，详细说明Adam的状况并非毫无希望，介绍可行的治疗方案，强调医院会提供帮助，如资金支持和优质护理。Anna得知消息后，情绪从担忧转为欣慰和感激，最后可升华主题，突出善良会带来美好回报。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.Whenhearingthis,Annawasshockedatfirst.Then,aglimmerofhopesparkedinhereyes.ShequicklytoldJamesaboutAdam'sconditionandtheirdifficultfinancialsituation.JameslistenedattentivelyandofferedtocheckAdam'slegsforfree.Thenextday,JamesarrivedatAnna'shomewithsomemedicalequipment.HeexaminedAdamcarefully,movingAdam'slegsgentlyandtakingnotesfromtimetotime.Annawatchednervously,hopingforgoodnews.Paragraph2:AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.HesaidthatalthoughAdam'slegproblemwaschallenging,itcouldbecured.Therewereseveraltreatmentoptionsavailable,andhebelievedAdam'smobilitycouldbeimproved.Moreover,JamesinformedAnnathathishospitalwouldofferfinancialsupportandthebestmedicalcare.Annawasoverjoyed.Shecouldn'tstopthankingJames.SheknewthatthiswasaturningpointforAdam,andabrighterfuturewaswaitingforherson.14范文呈现Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.Annawassoastonishedthatshealmostdroppedthephone.“Areyouserious?”sheaskedindisbelief.Jamesassuredherandexpressedhiswillingnesstohelp.AnnapouredoutherworriesaboutAdam'sconditionandthefinancialburden.JamescomfortedherandarrangedtovisitAdamsoon.Whenhecame,hegreetedAdamwithakindsmile,makingAdamfeelatease.Then,hestartedthethoroughexamination,carefullyobservingeverydetail.Paragraph2:AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.“Adam'ssituationisnotasbadaswethought,”hesaidwithconfidence.“Wecanuseanewsurgicalmethodtotreathislegs,andthesuccessrateisveryhigh.”Jamesalsosaidthatthehospitalwouldwaivepartofthemedicalfees.Annawasoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Tearsofjoyrolleddownhercheeks.ShehuggedAdamtightly,feelingthatallhereffortswereworthit.Fromthenon,shelookedforwardtoAdam'srecoverywithfullhope.15升级版范文呈现Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.Uponhearingthisunexpectedrevelation,Annawasrenderedspeechlessforamoment,hermindracingwithawhirlwindofemotions-shock,disbelief,andacautiousglimmerofhope.Summoninghercomposure,shebegantopourouttheheart-wrenchingdetailsofAdam'sconditionandthefinancialstrugglesthathadbeenplaguingher.Jameslistenedintently,hisempatheticnodsandwordsofcomfortofferingAnnaamodicumofsolace.Eagertohelp,JameswastednotimeinarrangingavisittoexamineAdam.Thenextday,hearrivedatAnna'shumbleabode,equippedwithstate-of-the-artmedicalequipment.GreetingAdamwithawarmsmile,heimmediatelysettowork,meticulouslyexaminingAdam'slegs,hisprofessionaldemeanorinspiringconfidence.Paragraph2:AftercheckingAdam’slegs,JamestoldAnnathegoodnews.Withareassuringsmile,Jamesbegan,“Anna,Adam'scondition,whilecomplex,isindeedtreatable.Wehavearevolutionarysurgicalapproachthathasshownremarkableresultsinsimilarcases.Thisprocedurewillnotonlyimprovehismobilitybutalsoenhancehisqualityoflifesignificantly.”Jamesfurtherdisclosedthatthehospital,touchedbyAnna'skindness,haddecidedtoshoulderasubstantialportionofthemedicalexpenses.Overwhelmedwithafloodofemotions,Annawasreducedtotearsofjoy.ShethankedJamesprofusely,hervoicechokedwithgratitude.Inthatmoment,shefeltaprofoundsenseofrelief,knowingthatabrighterfutureawaitedAdam.16升级版范文呈现Paragraph1:ToAnna’ssurprise,Jamessaidhehimselfwasadoctortreatinglegs.ThemomentthewordsleftJames'mouth,Annafroze,herbreathcatchinginherthroat.Itwasasifarayofsunlighthadpiercedthroughthethickcloudsofdespairthathadbeenhangingoverher.Strugglingtocontainherexcitement,sherecountedAdam'sconditioningreatdetail,hervoicetingedwithbothworryandnew-foundhope.James,deeplymovedbyherstory,promisedtodoeverythinginhispowertohelp.Soonafter,hearrivedatAnna'shome.Adam,alittlenervousatfirst,wasquicklyputateasebyJames'friendlymanner.Jamesthencarriedoutacomprehensiveexamination,hiseyesfocusedandhismovement