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读后续写圣诞奇迹:找回失踪的猫咪讲义浙江省杭州市第二中学2024-2025学年高二上学期期末英语试题原题ItwasChristmasEvemorning,andIawokewithamission:tofindmylostcat,Daisy.Sure,ithadbeensixmonthssinceshe’dgonemissing,butIstillhadfaith.Itwastheseasonformiracles,afterall.Shewasabeautifullady,herfurasoftblendofbrown,gold,andblackstripes(条纹).Mostimportantly,shewasasmartcat.IusedtotakehereverywhereIcouldinacarrier(猫笼),andshewassocleverthatshelearnedtowalkintoitonherown,somethingIneverthoughtacatwoulddo.Athome,Daisywouldenjoyagoodnapcurledupinsidemyparents’fireplace.Welovedhersomuchthatshewasinthefamily’sChristmaspictureeveryyear.So,wewouldn’tlikehermissingthisyear’s.Dadalwayssupportedme,buthewassoskeptical.Hespentawholelotoftimetryingtopreparemefortheworstdespitethefactthathespentallsixmonthslookingforthecat.“She’seitherbeenhitbyacarorbeentakeninbysomeonewhofoundher,”hesaid.Irolledmyeyes!Hecoulddowithalittlemorefaith!Besides,thoughIcouldn’texplainit,IknewI’dseeDaisyagain.She’dbeenastray(走失的宠物)whenIfoundher—atoughlittlegirlthathadsurvivedallonherown.Ifanycatcoulddotheimpossible,itwasmyDaisy.ThisChristmas,Iwasdeterminedtopickupmysearch.IgrabbedDaisy’scatcarrierandloadeditintothecar,thenaskedmydadtodrivemetotheshelter,hopingshe’dbeenfound.Myeyesscannedcatsofallshapesandsizesattheshelter.Muchtomydisappointment,noneofthemwasmyDaisy.Wedrovethroughthetownwithoutrest,checkingeveryshelterandaskingeveryonewecouldfind,buteachresponsewasthesame:noonehadseenher.Finally,wepulledoverinfrontofthelastshelterintown.注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Isteppedintothehouseandheardafamiliarmeow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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故事分析开端圣诞节前夕,“我”决心寻找失踪六个月的猫咪黛西,它对“我”和家人意义重大,每年都出现在家庭圣诞照片中。发展“我”和爸爸四处寻找,查看了多个收容所并询问了很多人,但都没有黛西的消息。高潮(待续写)在最后一个收容所,“我”听到熟悉的猫叫,可能找到了黛西,但需要向工作人员证明它是“我”的猫,这是矛盾冲突的关键节点。结局(待续写)成功证明黛西是“我”的猫,“我”找回猫咪,收获喜悦,或许还能从中获得关于坚持和希望的感悟。伏笔以及在续写中的回应黛西很聪明,能自己走进猫笼:在续写中可利用这一点,让黛西在“我”面前走进猫笼,向工作人员证明它是“我”的猫。爸爸的怀疑态度:在找到黛西后,爸爸可能会转变态度,为故事增添情感变化。“我”坚定的信念:是推动“我”不断寻找的动力,在续写中体现信念支撑“我”不放弃,最终迎来好结果。续写要点(两段)第一段着重描写“我”听到猫叫后的激动心情,看到疑似黛西的猫时的惊喜与不确定。描述猫咪的状态,如比记忆中瘦等。还可写爸爸和收容所工作人员的反应,以及“我”初步与猫咪互动,更加确定它就是黛西。第二段描写“我”为证明猫咪是自己的所采取的行动,比如展示黛西会走进猫笼的技能。接着写工作人员认可后,“我”的喜悦之情,以及和爸爸带着黛西回家的情景,最后升华主题,表达这次经历带来的收获。情感线起初,“我”怀着坚定信念寻找黛西,过程中不断失望但仍不放弃。听到熟悉猫叫时,“我”从失落转为激动、惊喜,又因不确定而忐忑。确定是黛西后,“我”充满喜悦。在证明它是自己的猫的过程中,“我”紧张又期待。最后成功找回,“我”收获满满的幸福和对生活的感悟。故事线“我”走进最后一个收容所,听到熟悉猫叫。看到一只很像黛西的猫,与之互动确认。向工作人员证明这只猫是“我”的,展示黛西进猫笼的技能。得到工作人员认可,带着黛西和爸爸回家。从这次经历中获得成长和感悟。主旨升华句Thisexperiencetaughtmethataslongasweholdontohopeandnevergiveup,miraclesarealwaysaroundthecorner.(这次经历让我明白,只要我们心怀希望、永不放弃,奇迹总会在不远处。)ThroughthesearchforDaisy,Irealizedthatfaithcanovercomedifficultiesandleadustounexpectedhappiness.(在寻找黛西的过程中,我意识到信念能够战胜困难,引领我们走向意想不到的幸福。)Itwasn'tjustfindingacat;itwasajourneyofself-discovery,showingmethepowerofperseveranceandthebeautyofbelievinginsomethinggreaterthanourselves.(这不仅仅是找回一只猫,更是一次自我发现的旅程,让我看到坚持的力量以及相信美好事物的魅力。)ThisChristmas,Daisy'sreturnbecamethemostpreciousgift,remindingmethatthebestthingsinlifeoftencomewhenweleastexpectthem,aslongaswekeeplooking.(这个圣诞节,黛西的归来是最珍贵的礼物,提醒着我,生活中最美好的事物往往在我们最意想不到的时候出现,只要我们持续追寻。)ThestoryoffindingDaisyshowsthateveninthefaceoflong-lastingloss,hopecanbloomandbringbackthewarmthandlovewecherish.(寻找黛西的故事表明,即使面对长久的失去,希望也能绽放,带回我们珍视的温暖与爱。)写作示范一Isteppedintothehouseandheardafamiliarmeow.Myheartskippedabeat,andIrushedtowardsthesound.There,inthecorner,wasacatthatlookedexactlylikeDaisy.Shewasabitthinner,herfurnotasshinyasbefore,butthosebiggreeneyeswereunmistakable.Ikneltdownandreachedoutmyhand.“Daisy?”Icalledsoftly.Thecattiltedherhead,thenslowlywalkedtowardsmeandrubbedagainstmyhand.Iwasoverjoyed,tearswellingupinmyeyes.Dadcameover,lookingequallysurprised.Theshelterstaffwatchedwithcuriouseyes,abitskeptical.IknewIhadtoprovetothestaffthatshewasmycat.Iquicklyfetchedthecatcarrierfromthecar.RememberinghowDaisyusedtoenteritonherown,Iopenedthedoorandsaid,“Comeon,Daisy.”Tomyrelief,sheimmediatelyrecognizeditandwalkedrightin.Thestaffsmiledandnodded.WethankedthemandleftwithDaisy.Onthewayhome,Iheldthecarriertightly,feelinglikeIhadfoundalong-losttreasure.ThisChristmas,Itrulygotthebestgiftever.写作示范二Isteppedintothehouseandheardafamiliarmeow.Awaveofexcitementwashedoverme,andIcouldn'tbelievemyears.IscannedtheroomandspottedacatthatresembledDaisy.Sheseemedweak,butwhenshesawme,therewasaglimmerofrecognitioninhereyes.Ipickedherupgently,andshenuzzledintomyarms.Dadjoinedme,andwebothlookedatthecat,filledwithamixofhopeanddisbelief.Theshelterstaffwerehesitant,askingforproof.IknewIhadtoprovetothestaffthatshewasmycat.IrememberedthatDaisylovedaspecialtreatIalwaysgaveher.Luckily,Ihadsomeinmypocket.Itookitoutandshowedittothecat.Hereyeslitup,andshemeowedeagerly.Assheateithappily,thestaffwereconvinced.Wewereallowedtotakeherhome.Drivingback,Iwasfilledwithgratitude.Thisexperiencemademebelievethathopeandlovecanalwaysleadtobeautifulsurprises.参考答案Isteppedintothehouseandheardafamiliarmeow.Myheartleapedwithexcitement,andIfollowedthesoundwithbatedbreath.There,inasmallcage,wasacatthatlookedjustlikeDaisy.Shewasthinner,herfurabitscruffy,butIknewitwashe

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