高考英语复习读后续写练习：艾米丽在画展中面对画作售卖请求的艰难抉择+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习艾米丽在画展中面对画作售卖请求的艰难抉择1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Itwasawarmspringafternoon,andthesuncastagoldenhue(色调)overthesmalltownofWillowCreek.Thecity’sannualartexhibitionwasgoingon,andthevisitorswerediscussingtheworkswithexcitement.AmongthemwasEmily,atalentedartist.Sheappreciatedthepictureswithherheartpoundinginherchest.Emilyhadalwaysbeenpassionateaboutpaintingsinceyoung.Overtheyears,hertalenthadbloomed,andherpictureshadbecomeareflectionofhersoul—fulloflifeandemotion.Eachbrushstroke(笔画)wasawhisperofherthoughts,asecretsharedwiththeworld.Today,sheexhibitedapaintingofhergrandmother,awomanwhohadshapedherlifewithloveandcare.Thepaintingwasareminderoftheimpacthergrandmotherhadonherlife,asymbolofthebondthatwouldneverfade.4续写原文Astheexhibitioncontinued,Emilywatchedwithnervousanticipationaspeoplemovedaroundtheroom,admiringvariousworks.Emilysearchedtheirfacesforareaction,herheartjumpingwhenshesawasmileoranodofappreciation.Suddenly,afamiliarvoicecalledout,“Emily,thisiswonderful!Yourgrandmotherlookssoaliveonthispicture.”Itwasherartteacher,Mr.Smith,standingbeforeherpaintingwithalookofgenuineadmiration.Hiswordsfilledherwithasenseofachievementandrelief.Therestoftheafternoonpassedsoon.Morepraisescameherway.Butitwastheelderlymanwhocaughtherattention.Hestoodbeforeherpaintingforwhatseemedlikeacentury,hiseyesmistywithmemories.Whenhefinallyspoke,hisoffertookherbysurprise.“Thispaintingremindsmesomuchofmylategrandmother.Iwouldliketomakeyouanoffer.Wouldyouconsidersellingthispaintingtome?”5段首句Paragraph1：Atthatmoment,Emilyhesitated.Paragraph2：Seeingthemanleavingdisappointedly,Emilymadeanewdecision.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8在温暖春日的柳树溪镇年度画展上，热爱绘画的艾米丽展出了一幅描绘深爱着她的祖母的画作。画展期间，人们欣赏着作品，艾米丽紧张又期待地观察着大家的反应。她的艺术老师史密斯先生对画作给予了高度赞赏，这让她很有成就感。之后，一位老人长时间凝视画作后，表示因其让自己想起已故祖母而想买下它。这让艾米丽陷入了犹豫，因为这幅画对她有着深厚的情感价值。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Atthatmoment,Emilyhesitated.艾米丽犹豫之际，脑海中不断浮现出与祖母相处的温馨画面，那是祖母在她小时候教她画画的场景，还有祖母在她失落时给予的温暖拥抱。她深知这幅画承载着太多的情感与回忆。但看着老人那充满渴望的眼神，她又有些于心不忍。于是她走向老人，轻声说道：“先生，这画对我真的很重要，但我能理解您的感受，您能给我讲讲您和您祖母的故事吗？”老人微微一愣，随后缓缓讲述起那些美好的过往，艾米丽听得入神，心中的天平开始慢慢倾斜。10续写思路分析Para2：Seeingthemanleavingdisappointedly,Emilymadeanewdecision.看到老人失望地转身欲走，艾米丽的心猛地揪了一下。她突然意识到，也许让这幅画给老人带来慰藉才是更有意义的事。她急忙追上老人，大声说：“先生，您等等！我决定把画卖给您。”老人惊讶地回过头，眼中满是惊喜与感激。艾米丽接着说：“我希望这幅画能像陪伴我一样，陪伴您度过美好的时光，也让您的回忆有处安放。”老人紧紧握住艾米丽的手，不停地道谢，艾米丽看着老人开心的样子，心中也涌起一股暖流，她知道自己做了一个正确的决定。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Atthatmoment,Emilyhesitated.Hermindwasfloodedwiththewarmmemoriesofhergrandmother.Sherememberedthetimewhenhergrandmotherpatientlytaughtherhowtoholdapaintbrushandthecountlesshugsshereceivedduringdifficulttimes.Thispaintingwaslikeaprecioustreasurechestfilledwiththeirsharedlove.However,seeingtheeagernessintheoldman'seyesmadeherheartsoften.Shewalkedtowardshimandsaidsoftly,"Sir,thispaintingmeanstheworldtome.ButIcansenseyourstrongconnection.Couldyoutellmeaboutyourgrandmother?"Theoldmanwasabitsurprisedatfirstbutthenstartedtosharehisbeautifulmemories.Emilylistenedattentively,andherheartbegantochange.13范文呈现Seeingthemanleavingdisappointedly,Emilymadeanewdecision.Shecouldn'tletthemanleavewithsadness.Shequicklychasedafterhimandshouted,"Sir,wait!I'vedecidedtosellittoyou."Theoldmanturnedaroundinastonishment,hiseyesfullofgratitude.Emilycontinued,"Ihopethispaintingcanbringyouthesamecomfortasitdidtomeandgiveyourmemoriesaplacetostay."TheoldmanheldEmily'shandtightlyandthankedherrepeatedly.Emilyfeltawarmcurrentinherheart,knowingshehadmadetherightchoice.14升级版范文呈现Atthatmoment,Emilyhesitated.Memoriesofhergrandmotherswarmedhermindlikeaflockofaffectionatebirds.Itwashergrandmotherwhohadpainstakinglyguidedherintheartofpaintingandofferedcountlesshugsintimesofdistress.Thepaintingwasapricelessrepositoryoftheirlove.Yet,theyearningintheoldman'seyestuggedatherheartstrings.Approachinghim,shemurmured,"Sir,thispaintingismyheart'sjewel.ButIfeelyourdeepbond.Wouldyoushareyourgrandma'sstory?"Surprisedinitially,theoldmanthenrecountedhischerishedmemories.Emilylistenedintently,herheartswaying.15升级版范文呈现Seeingthemanleavingdisappointedly,Emilymadeanewdecision.Unabletobearhisdejection,shedartedafterhim."Sir,wait!I'llsellittoyou,"sheexclaimed.Theoldmanwheeledaround,eyesglisteningwithgratitude."Ihopethispaintingwillbeasourceofcomfortforyou,justasithasbeenforme,andhouseyour