高考英语复习读后续写练习：从贫困社区走出的短跑传奇：雪莉・安的逆袭人生+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从贫困社区走出的短跑传奇：雪莉・安的逆袭人生1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Notsolongago,mostpeopledidn’tknowwhoShellyAnnFrancisPrycewasgoingtobecome.Shewasjustanaveragehighschoolathlete.TherewaseveryindicationthatshewasjustanotherAmericanteenagerwithoutmuchofafuture.However,onepersonwantstochangethis.StephenFrancisobservedtheneighteen-year-oldShellyAnnatatrackmeetandwasconvincedthathehadseenthebeginningoftruegreatness.Hertimeswerenotexactlyimpressive,butevenso,hesensedtherewassomethingtryingtogetout.HedecidedtoofferShelly-Annaplaceinhisverystricttrainingseasons.Theircooperationquicklyproducedresults,andafewyearslateratJamaica’sOlympicgamesinearly2008,ShellyAnn,whoatthattimeonlyrankednumber70intheworld,beatJamaica’sunchallengedqueenofthesprint(短跑).4续写原文“Wheredidshecomefrom?”askedanastonishedsprintingworld,beforeconcludingthatshemustbeoneofthoseone-hitwondersthatspringupfromtimetotime,onlytodisappearagainwithoutsigns.ButShelly-Annwastoprovethatshewasanythingbutaone-hitwonder.AttheBeijingOlympicshesweptawayanydoubtsaboutherabilitytoperformconsistentlybybecomingthefirstJamaicanwomanevertowinthe100metersOlympicgold.ShellyAnnisalittlewomanwithabigsmile.Herjourneytobecomingthefastestwomanonearthhasbeenanythingbutsmoothandeffortless.ShegrewupinoneofJamaica’stoughestinner-citycommunitiesknownasWaterhouse,oneofthepoorestcommunitiesinJamaica.Sometimesherfamilydidn’thaveenoughtoeat.Sheranattheschoolchampionshipsbarefootedbecauseshecouldn’taffordshoes.HermotherMaximehadbeenanathleteherselfasayounggirlbut,likesomanyothergirlsinWaterhouse,hadtostopaftershehadherfirstbaby.Maxime’searlyentryintotheadultworldwithitsresponsibilitiesgaveherthedeterminationtoensurethatherkidswouldnotendupinWaterhouse’sroundaboutofpoverty.OneofthefirstthingsMaximeusedtodowithShelly-Annwastakinghertothetrack,andshewasreadytosacrifice(牺牲)everything.5段首句Paragraph1：Itdidn’ttakelongforShellyAnntomeethermother’sexpectations.Paragraph2:ButShellyAnn’svictorywasfargreaterthanthat.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8曾经，雪莉・安只是一名普通的高中运动员，看似和众多前途渺茫的美国青少年一样。但斯蒂芬・弗朗西斯在一场田径比赛中发现了18岁的她，坚信她潜力非凡，于是邀请她加入严格的训练。他们的合作成果显著，几年后在2008年初的牙买加奥运会上，当时世界排名仅70的雪莉・安战胜了牙买加短跑界无可争议的女王。人们起初认为她只是昙花一现，但在北京奥运会上，她夺得女子100米奥运金牌，成为牙买加首位获此殊荣的女性，彻底打消了人们的疑虑。雪莉・安成长于牙买加最贫困的社区之一“水屋”，家境贫寒，有时连饭都吃不饱，甚至在学校锦标赛上因买不起鞋而赤脚参赛。她的母亲马克西姆年轻时也是运动员，因家庭责任放弃了运动生涯，她决心不让孩子重蹈贫困的覆辙，很早就带雪莉・安去田径场训练，并愿意为此牺牲一切。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1：Itdidn’ttakelongforShellyAnntomeethermother’sexpectations.没过多久，雪莉・安就不负母亲的期望。在后续的各类国际赛事中，她屡屡斩获佳绩，成为了赛场上的常胜将军。每一次站在起跑线上，她都能感受到母亲的支持和自己肩负的使命。她凭借着顽强的毅力和不懈的努力，不断突破自己的极限，刷新着一个又一个记录。她的名字在世界田径界越来越响亮，成为了无数人心中的偶像。她用自己的成功改变了家庭的命运，让家人过上了富足的生活。她为母亲在“水屋”社区购置了宽敞舒适的房子，让母亲不用再为生活发愁。同时，她还积极投身于慈善事业，为“水屋”的孩子们修建了新的体育设施，鼓励他们勇敢追求自己的梦想，不要被贫困束缚。她经常回到社区，亲自指导孩子们训练，分享自己的成长经历，激励他们努力奋斗。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:ButShellyAnn’svictorywasfargreaterthanthat.但雪莉・安的胜利远不止于此。她的成功成为了整个牙买加的骄傲，为国家带来了巨大的荣誉。她的故事激励着无数牙买加人，尤其是那些生活在贫困社区的孩子们，让他们相信只要有梦想，并为之努力奋斗，就一定能够改变自己的命运。在她的影响下，牙买加掀起了一股运动热潮，越来越多的孩子投身到田径运动中，牙买加的田径事业也因此得到了蓬勃发展。雪莉・安还成为了国际体育界的一面旗帜，她用自己的行动诠释了坚持、拼搏和永不放弃的体育精神。她的成功不仅仅是个人的胜利，更是整个牙买加民族的胜利，她的故事将永远被铭记在人们心中，激励着一代又一代的人奋勇前行。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Itdidn’ttakelongforShellyAnntomeethermother’sexpectations.Invarioussubsequentinternationalcompetitions,shefrequentlyachievedexcellentresultsandbecameafrequentwinneronthefield.Everytimeshestoodatthestartingline,shecouldfeelhermother'ssupportandthemissionshecarried.Withhertenaciousperseveranceandunremittingefforts,sheconstantlybrokethroughherownlimitsandrefreshedonerecordafteranother.Hernamebecamemoreandmorefamousintheworldoftrackandfieldandshebecameanidolintheheartsofcountlesspeople.Shechangedthefateofherfamilywithhersuccessandenabledherfamilytoliveaprosperouslife.SheboughtaspaciousandcomfortablehouseforhermotherintheWaterhousecommunitysothathermothernolongerhadtoworryaboutlife.Atthesametime,sheactivelyengagedincharitywork.ShebuiltnewsportsfacilitiesforthechildreninWaterhouse,encouragedthemtobravelypursuetheirdreamsandnotbeboundbypoverty.Sheoftenreturnedtothecommunitytopersonallyguidethechildrenintrainingandshareherowngrowthexperiencestoinspirethemtostrivehard.13范文呈现ButShellyAnn’svictorywasfargreaterthanthat.HersuccessbecametheprideoftheentireJamaicaandbroughtgreathonortothecountry.HerstoryinspiredcountlessJamaicans,especiallythechildrenlivinginpoorcommunities,makingthembelievethataslongastheyhavedreamsandworkhardforthem,theywilldefinitelybeabletochangetheirowndestinies.Underherinfluence,asportscrazesweptthroughJamaica.Moreandmorechildrendevotedthemselvestotrackandfieldsports,andJamaica'strackandfieldcausethusdevelopedvigorously.ShellyAnnalsobecameaflagintheinternationalsportscommunity.Sheusedheractionstointerpretthesportsspiritofperseverance,hardworkandnevergivingup.HersuccesswasnotjustapersonalvictorybutalsoavictoryfortheentireJamaicannation.Herstorywillalwaysberememberedinpeople'sheartsandinspiregenerationsofpeopletomoveforwardbravely.14升级版范文呈现Itdidn’ttakelongforShellyAnntomeethermother’sexpectations.Inaplethoraofsubsequentinternationalcompetitions,sheconsistentlyemergedvictorious,establishingherselfasadominantforceontheathleticstage.Eachtimeshetookherpositionatthestartingline,shecouldvividlyfeelhermother'sunwaveringsupportandtheweightofthemissionshecarriedonhershoulders.Drivenbyherindomitableperseveranceandceaselessefforts,sherelentlesslypushedtheboundariesofherowncapabilities,shatteringrecordsoneafteranother.Hernamerapidlygainedinternationalacclaimintheworldoftrackandfield,transformingherintoanidolforcountlessindividuals.Withherhard-wonsuccess,shenotonlyupliftedherfamilyoutofpovertybutalsoprovidedthemwithalifeofcomfortandprosperity.ShepurchasedaspaciousandcozyhouseforhermotherintheWaterhousecommunity,relievinghermotherofanyfinancialworries.Moreover,sheactivelydedicatedherselftocharitableendeavors.ShespearheadedtheconstructionofnewsportsfacilitiesinWaterhouse,inspiringthelocalchildrentopursuetheirdreamsfearlessly,undeterredbytheconstraintsofpoverty.Regularly,shewouldreturntothecommunity,personallymentoringtheyoungathletes,sharingherownjourneyofgrowthandmotivatingthemtostriveforexcellence.15升级版范文呈现ButShellyAnn’svictorywasfargreaterthanthat.HertriumphbecameasourceofimmensepridefortheentirenationofJamaica,bringingunparalleledhonortoherhomeland.HerstoryservedasapowerfulinspirationforcountlessJamaicans,particularlythechildrengrowingupinimpoverishedcommunities.Itinstilledinthemthebeliefthatwithunwaveringdeterminationandhardwork,theycoulddefytheoddsandrewritetheirowndestinies.Inthewakeofhersucces