高考英语复习读后续写练习：小红罐的温暖传承：家族记忆的延续+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习小红罐的温暖传承：家族记忆的延续1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Oneofmyfavoritepossessionsisalittleredcan.Itsitsamongmycollections,lookingsomewhatoldandoutofplace.Butthiscanisspecial.Ithasahistory.ItwasdeartomewhenIwasyounger,butmeanevenmoretomenow.I’vealwayslovedtovisitmygrandparentsinCleburne,Texas,andasanyoneinthefamilycantellyou,thereisalwaysagatheringaroundthediningroomtableformealsandconversationssothatwecankeepintouchclosely.Itisimportanttokeepintouchwiththefamilymemberssincewearebusywithourownbusiness,somyfamilymemberskeepthetraditiontohavethegatheringeverymonth.Weenjoythemomentwhenallofusmeetinaplaceandcommunicationhelpsustosolvetheproblemofisolation.Asthefirstgrandbaby,though,Iwasataslightdisadvantage.WhenIsatinthediningchair,onlymynosecouldreachthetable.Cleburneisasmalltownwithasmallpopulation,andthephonebookcouldonlyliftmeaninch.So,GrandmaandGrandpacameupwiththeideaofthelittleredcan.4续写原文Itwasabouttenincheshigh,madeoftin,andpaintedagloriousshinyred.Itworkedperfectly,enablingmetobangawayonthetablewithmylittlespoonandcupasItriedtokeepupwiththejoyfultalksaroundthetable.AfterIfinishedameal,Iwasplacedonthefloor,andthecanwasopened,andallsortsofsurpriseskeptmebusywhiletheadultsvisited.Thecanwasfulloflovelydollswhichattractedlittlegirlslikemegreatly.Besides,therewerefreshandnovelitemsthatweremysterioustomeandleftmetoexplore.5段首句Paragraph1:Prettysoon,othergrandbabiesstartedtoarrive,andeachofthemhadtheirownturnonthelittleredcan.Paragraph2:Decadeslater,GrandmaproudlypulledoutthelittleredcanagainwhenItraveledtoCleburnewithmydaughter.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8作者最珍视的物品之一是一个小红罐，它虽看起来有些陈旧且格格不入，但对作者意义非凡。作者一直喜欢去得克萨斯州克莱本看望祖父母，家族有每月在餐厅聚餐交流的传统，以此保持紧密联系，消除彼此的疏离感。由于作者是第一个孙辈，坐在餐椅上时身高不够，鼻子才刚够到餐桌，电话簿也只能垫高一点点，于是祖父母想出了用小红罐的办法。这个小红罐约十英寸高，由锡制成，漆成了闪亮的红色，它解决了作者的身高问题，让作者能和大家一起参与餐桌交流。用餐结束后，打开小红罐，里面有各种惊喜，比如可爱的玩偶和新奇的小物件，能让作者在大人们聊天时也有事可做。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:Prettysoon,othergrandbabiesstartedtoarrive,andeachofthemhadtheirownturnonthelittleredcan.很快，其他孙辈陆续出生，他们每个人都有机会坐在小红罐上。每当家族聚餐时，那个小红罐就成了孩子们眼中的“宝座”。孩子们眼巴巴地盼着轮到自己坐在上面，感受那种能和大人们平起平坐的喜悦。每个孩子坐在小红罐上，都会有不一样的表现。有的孩子像我当年一样，拿着小勺子和杯子在餐桌上敲敲打打，兴奋地加入到大家的讨论中；有的孩子则安静地坐在那里，眼睛好奇地打量着周围的一切，听着大人们分享生活中的趣事。而用餐结束后，打开小红罐，里面的惊喜也不断更新。祖父母会根据每个孩子的喜好，往里面添加新的小物件。对于喜欢汽车的小男孩，会放进一些精致的玩具小汽车；对于喜欢画画的小女孩，会放进彩色画笔和画纸。小红罐见证了每一个孙辈的成长瞬间，成为了家族聚会中不可或缺的一部分，承载着孩子们无数的欢乐回忆。随着时间的推移，小红罐的表面渐渐有了磨损，红色的漆也有些剥落，但它在孩子们心中的地位却从未改变。它就像一个温暖的符号，将家族的每一代孩子紧密地联系在一起。10续写思路分析Paragraph2:Decadeslater,GrandmaproudlypulledoutthelittleredcanagainwhenItraveledtoCleburnewithmydaughter.几十年后，当我带着女儿前往克莱本时，奶奶骄傲地再次拿出了那个小红罐。看到小红罐的那一刻，我的心中涌起了一股暖流，童年的回忆如潮水般涌上心头。我仿佛又看到了当年那个小小的自己，坐在小红罐上，开心地和家人聊天、玩耍。女儿看到小红罐，眼中充满了好奇，她伸手摸了摸这个看起来有些破旧的罐子，问道：“妈妈，这是什么呀？”我微笑着给她讲述了小红罐的故事，告诉她这个小红罐在家族中的重要意义。女儿听得入了迷，眼睛里闪烁着光芒。奶奶把小红罐放在女儿的餐椅上，女儿兴奋地爬了上去，坐在上面，和当年的我一样，好奇地打量着周围的一切。看着女儿坐在小红罐上的模样，我心中感慨万千。这个小红罐不仅见证了我的成长，如今又将陪伴着我的女儿度过美好的时光。它就像一条无形的纽带，将家族的爱与温暖一代又一代地传承下去。在这次家族聚餐中，女儿坐在小红罐上，积极地和大家交流，分享着她在学校里的趣事。而用餐结束后，打开小红罐，里面依然有各种惊喜等待着她。小红罐依旧散发着独特的魅力，继续书写着家族的温馨故事。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Prettysoon,othergrandbabiesstartedtoarrive,andeachofthemhadtheirownturnonthelittleredcan.Whenevertherewasafamilygathering,thelittleredcanbecamethe"throne"intheeyesofthechildren.Thekidseagerlylookedforwardtotheirturntositonitandexperiencethejoyofbeingonthesamelevelastheadults.Eachchildhaddifferentbehaviorswhensittingonthelittleredcan.Somechildren,justlikemebackthen,bangedonthetablewiththeirlittlespoonsandcups,excitedlyjoininginthediscussions.Otherssatquietly,theireyescuriouslyscanningeverythingaroundthem,listeningtotheadultssharinginterestingstoriesfromlife.Afterthemeal,whenthecanwasopened,thesurprisesinsidewereconstantlyupdated.GrandmaandGrandpawouldaddnewsmallitemsaccordingtoeachchild'spreferences.Forlittleboyswholovedcars,theywouldputinsomedelicatetoycars;forlittlegirlswholoveddrawing,theywouldputincoloredpensanddrawingpaper.Thelittleredcanwitnessedeverygrandchild'sgrowthmomentsandbecameanindispensablepartoffamilygatherings,carryingcountlesshappymemoriesofthechildren.Astimewentby,thesurfaceofthelittleredcangraduallybecameworn,andtheredpaintpeeledoffabit,butitsstatusinthechildren'sheartsneverchanged.Itwaslikeawarmsymbol,closelyconnectingeverygenerationofchildreninthefamily.13范文呈现Decadeslater,GrandmaproudlypulledoutthelittleredcanagainwhenItraveledtoCleburnewithmydaughter.ThemomentIsawthelittleredcan,awarmcurrentsurgedinmyheart,andchildhoodmemoriesfloodedback.Iseemedtoseethelittlemesittingonthelittleredcan,chattingandplayinghappilywithmyfamily.Whenmydaughtersawthelittleredcan,hereyeswerefullofcuriosity.Shereachedoutandtouchedthesomewhatworn-outcanandasked,"Mom,what'sthis?"Ismiledandtoldherthestoryofthelittleredcan,tellingheritsimportantsignificanceinthefamily.Mydaughterlistenedintently,hereyesshiningwithexcitement.Grandmaputthelittleredcanonmydaughter'sdiningchair,andmydaughterclimbedontoitexcitedly.Sittingonit,justlikeIdidbackthen,shecuriouslylookedaround.Lookingatmydaughtersittingonthelittleredcan,Ifeltalotofemotions.Thislittleredcannotonlywitnessedmygrowthbutnowwouldaccompanymydaughterthroughwonderfultimes.Itwaslikeaninvisiblebond,passingontheloveandwarmthofthefamilyfromgenerationtogeneration.Duringthisfamilygathering,mydaughtersatonthelittleredcan,activelycommunicatingwitheveryoneandsharinginterestingthingsthathappenedatschool.Andafterthemeal,whenthecanwasopened,therewerestillallkindsofsurpriseswaitingforher.Thelittleredcanstillexudeditsuniquecharmandcontinuedtowritethewarmstoryofthefamily.14升级版范文呈现Prettysoon,othergrandbabiesstartedtoarrive,andeachofthemhadtheirownturnonthelittleredcan.Wheneverafamilygatheringwasinfullswing,thelittleredcaninstantlytransformedintothe"covetedthrone"intheeyesofthechildren.Witheageranticipation,theywouldimpatientlywaitfortheirturntoperchuponit,yearningtoexperiencethethrillofbeingonparwiththeadultsaroundthetable.Eachchildbroughttheirownuniquepersonalitytothe"throne."Some,muchlikeIhadinmyyoungerdays,wouldenthusiasticallybangawayonthetablewiththeirdiminutivespoonsandcups,theirhigh-pitchedvoiceschiminginwiththelivelydiscussions.Others,however,wouldsitinquietcontemplation,theirwideeyesscanningthesurroundingswithcuriosity,soakingupeverywordoftheadults'tales.Afterthemeal,whenthecanwaspriedopen,aworldoffreshsurprisesawaited.GrandmaandGrandpa,withtheirkeenunderstandingofeachchild'sinterests,wouldmeticulouslycuratethecontents.Forthelittleboysfascinatedbyautomobiles,theywouldplaceminiature,intricatelydetailedtoycarsinside.Forthebuddingyoungartistsamongthegirls,vibrantcoloredpensandcrispdrawingpaperwouldbeadded.Thelittleredcan,overtime,becameasilentwitnesstothegrowthanddevelopmentofeverygrandchildinthefamily.Itssurface,thoughmarredbythepassageoftimewithscratchesandpeelingpaint,heldanirreplaceableplaceintheheartsofthechildren.Itservedasawarmandtangiblesymbol,bindinggenerationsoffamilymemberstogetherwiththethreadsofsharedmemories.15升级版范文呈现Decadeslater,GrandmaproudlypulledoutthelittleredcanagainwhenItraveledtoCleburnewithmydaughter.Theinstantmyeyesfelluponthelittleredcan,awaveofnostalgiawashedoverme,andafloodofchildhoodmemoriescamerushingback.Icouldvividlypicturetheyoungme,perchedonthecan,chattinganimatedlywithmylovedones,filledwithpurejoy.Mydaughter,uponseeingthecan,hereyeswidenedwithcuriosity.Shereachedouthersmallhandandgentlytouchedtheslightlyweatheredsurface,asking,"Mom,what'sthis?"Withatendersmile,Irecountedthestoryofthelittleredcan,sharingitsprofoundsignificancewithinourfamily.Mydaughterlistenedintently,hereyesalightwithwonder.Grandmathenplacedthecanonmydaught