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第27讲书面表达之图画作文(模拟精练+真题演练)(2023·广东广州·广州市玉岩中学校考二模)请根据以下图片及关键词,用英语讲述《丑小鸭》这个童话故事。要求:1.80词左右;可适当发挥;2.故事内容合理、完整;句子及篇章结构准确、连贯;3.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息,否则不予评分。ItwasalongtimebeforeMotherDuck’slasteggbroke.WhenUglyDucklingwasborn,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ItwasalongtimebeforeMotherDuck’slasteggbroke.WhenUglyDucklingwasborn,helookedverydifferentfromhisbrothersandsisters.Hewasmuchbiggerthanthemandhewasgrey.Becausehewassodifferent,alltheduckshatedhimandbithim.UglyDucklingwantedtoplaygameswiththem,buttheypushedhimawayfromtheirgames.Hebecamesounhappythathecriedsadlyandleftthelake.Astimewentby,UglyDucklinggrewbiggerandhewasnolongeraterriblegreythingthatnobodyliked.Hisneckgrewlongandhisbodyturnedwhite.Hebecameaswan.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于看图作文写作;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;③提示:文章开头以及关键词已经给出,按照提示的关键词和图片逐点讲述故事,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,承接短文开头,继续讲述故事;第二步,根据提示的关键词,按照图片所示故事情节讲述《丑小鸭》的故事。[亮点词汇]①pushsbaway把某人推开②astimewentby随着时间的推移③nolonger不再[高分句型]①Becausehewassodifferent,alltheduckshatedhimandbithim.(because引导的原因状语从句)②Hebecamesounhappythathecriedsadlyandleftthelake.(so…that引导的结果状语从句)③Astimewentby,UglyDucklinggrewbiggerandhewasnolongeraterriblegreythingthatnobodyliked.(that引导的限制性定语从句)(2023·山东菏泽·统考二模)假如你是王磊,红旗中学的一名学生,你们学校的校刊计划开辟一个“Fables(寓言)tellus”专栏,现面向全体学生征集稿件。你打算报名参加,并选取了《郑人买履》这个故事。请你根据以下图片和文字提示,写一篇英文短文,讲述这个寓言故事。要求:1.短文内容需包括图片信息,可适当发挥;2.书写规范,语言准确,行文连贯;3.不少于100词;开头已给出,不计入总词数。Longlongago,amanofthestateofZhengwantedtobuyapairofshoes.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Longlongago,amanofthestateofZhengwantedtobuyapairofshoes.Tobuyapairofshoesoftherightsize,hemeasuredhisfeetwitharulerandwrotedownhissizeonapieceofpaper.However,whenhewenttothemarketheforgottobringthepaper.Atthesametime,heforgothisshoesize.Theowneroftheshoestoreaskedhimtotryontheshoes,buthedidn’tlistentotheowner.Hedecidedtogobackhometogetthepaper.Asaresult,theshophadbeenclosedwhenhegotbacktotheshoestore.Inmyopinion,it’snotonlyafunnystory,butagoodlessonforme.Ithinkweshouldsolvetheproblemsaccordingtothefacts.Therearemanywaystosolveaproblem,sodon’tsticktotheoldrules.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于看图作文写作;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;③提示:文章开头已经给出,要点已以图片形式给出,按照提示的要点逐点讲述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,承接短文开头,讲述故事;第二步,根据图片所示情节及提示的内容讲述《郑人买履》这一寓言故事;第三步,抒发这个故事给你带来的感悟并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①decidetodosth决定做某事②asaresult结果③solvetheproblemsaccordingtothefacts根据实际情况解决问题④notonly…but…不仅……而且……⑤sticktotheoldrules墨守陈规[高分句型]①However,whenhewenttothemarketheforgottobringthepaper.(when引导的时间状语从句)②Ithinkweshouldsolvetheproblemsaccordingtothefacts.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)(2023·山东威海·统考一模)学校英语社团开展“讲好中国故事”活动,请根据所给图片提示,写一篇100词左右的英文故事。提示词:vat缸要求:1、故事叙述完整;2、语句规范、通顺;3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:DuringtheSongDynasty,therewasacleverchildnamedSimaGuang.Oneday,heandhisfriendswereplayinghideandseekinthebackyard.Allthechildrenhidbehindthetreesorinthegrassandoneevenclimbedupontherockery.Unfortunately,theboywhohidontherockeryslippedandfellintoabigvatofwater.SimaGuangwantedtosavethedrowningboybutthetopofthevatwastoohightoreach.Hecouldnotclimbupthesteepsides.Hewascalmandquicklyrantogetaheavystone.Hethrewitatthevatwithallhismight.Finallythedrowningboyslippedoutoftheholewiththewater.HowbraveandcalmSimaGuangwas!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:这是一篇看图作文,是记叙文;②时态:主要是一般过去时;③提示:按照图片顺序描写故事《司马光砸缸》,表达完整事情经过即可,不需要细节描写。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍司马光在和小伙伴捉迷藏(第一幅图);第二步,描写一位小伙伴掉进了缸里(第二、三幅图);第三步,描写司马光砸缸的过程(第四幅图)。第四步,评价司马光很冷静、勇敢。[亮点词汇]①playhideandseek捉迷藏②toohightoreach太高而够不着③withallhismight竭尽全力[高分句型]①Unfortunately,theboywhohidontherockeyslippedandfellintoabigvatofwater.(定语从句)②HowbraveandcalmSimaGuangwas!(感叹句)4.(2023·上海浦东新·统考二模)Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)初三毕业典礼即将到来,为此学校开展了主题海报设计活动。目前初步确定了三幅主题为“友谊长存”、“感谢师恩”、“美好未来”的候选海报,并在学校网站展示,征询学生们的意见。假设你是该校学生李华,请在学校网站留言,选择其中的一幅海报,并结合海报内容阐述你的理由。注意:1、短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。2、照抄阅读语篇不得分。Poster1
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Poster3_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Iwouldliketosay“thankyou”tomyEnglishteacher.He’satallmanwiththickglasses.Helikessportsandoftenplaysfootballandbasketballwithus.He’shumorousandalwaysmakeshisclasseslivelyandinteresting.He’skindbutstrictwithus.Heneverallowsustopretendthatweknowwhatwedon’tknow.Heoftentellsusthatit’snousememorizingnewwordswithoutunderstanding.MyEnglishhasgreatlyimprovedwithhishelp.Ithinkheisthebestinmymind.Iwillrememberhimforever.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:选择其中一幅海报进行阐述,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述清晰,语句通顺。[写作步骤]第一步,开篇点题,表达想感谢哪位老师;第二步,描述老师的基本特征及老师对我的影响;第三步,书写结语,表达感受。[亮点词汇]①bestrictwithsb对某人严格②playfootball踢足球③it’snousedoingsth做某事是没用的[高分句型]①Heneverallowsustopretendthatweknowwhatwedon’tknow.(that引导宾语从句)②He’skindbutstrictwithus.(but表转折)5.(2023·河北石家庄·统考一模)暑假即将到来,如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义?学校网站的英文版块向大家征集建议,请你根据以下图片信息,给出一些建议并逐条说明理由。注意:(1)短文须包括图片中的所有信息,并适当发挥。(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数80个左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。Thesummervacationiscoming.Howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyoucanhaveacolourfulvacation.【答案】例文:Thesummervacationiscoming.Howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice.First,wehadbetterdosomesports.Wecangorunningeverymorning.Itcanhelpuskeephealthy.Besides,weshoulddosomehouseworkathome.It’snecessaryforustolearnsomelifeskillsandlookafterourselves.What’smore,weneedtoreadsomebooks.Readinghelpsimproveourknowledgeandopensupawholenewworldtous.Wecanalsojoinsomeclubs,suchasthesingingcluborthedancingclub.Itcanhelpusdevelophobbies.Ihopeyoucanhaveacolourfulvacation.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为看图作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步,建议我们可以做运动;第二步,建议我们可以做家务以及阅读;第三步,可以建议参加各种各样的俱乐部。[亮点词汇]①hadbetterdo最好做②besides此外③what’smore而且④suchas比如[高分句型]①It’snecessaryforustolearnsomelifeskillsandlookafterourselves.(动词不定式作主语)②Readinghelpsimproveourknowledgeandopensupawholenewworldtous.(动名词作主语)(2023·山东青岛·统考一模)植树节期间,学校英语节将举行以“ProtectingTrees”为主题的征文比赛,请根据以下两幅图,结合某些地方、某些人的做法写一篇文章,谈谈你的观点。要求:1)词数80—100;2)包含图片中提到的信息,可适当拓展;3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。参考词汇:TreePlantingDay植树节ProtectingTrees_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:ProtectingTreesAsweknow,treesareveryimportanttohumans.Firstofall,theybenefitourhealth.Theysendoutoxygenforustobreathe.Wecan’tlivewithouttrees.Also,treescanbeautifyourenvironment.Inaddition,treescanalsopreventwindandfixsand.Forthefutureoftheearthandhumans,wemusttryourbesttoprotecttrees.Inmyhometown,peopleusedtocutdowntreestomakemoney.Somechildrenscribbledonthetree.Thesebehaviorsseriouslyaffectthegrowthoftrees.Wemustmakethelaws.Don’tcutdowntreesatwill.Don’tscribbleonthetree.Wemustprotectthetrees.Atthesametime,wemustplantasmanytreesaspossibleonTreePlantingDay.Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappilyinthebeautifulworld.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇看图作文的说明文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:根据题目图片提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍树木在生活中的作用;第二步,介绍人们乱砍滥伐的行为;第三步,最后呼吁大家应该多植树,共同保护树木。[亮点词汇]①tryone’sbesttodo尽全力做某事②cutdown砍倒③atthesametime与此同时[高分句型]①Onlyinthiswaycanwelivehappilyinthebeautifulworld.(倒装句)(2023·河南洛阳·统考二模)现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国而努力奋斗。请根据下列图示内容写一篇英语短文,谈谈以下几种职业是怎样做贡献的。作为学生,你又该怎么做?要求:1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;2.短文必须包含图示内容要点,可以适当发挥;3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;4.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。NowalltheChinesepeoplearemakingacontributiontobuildingabeautifulChina.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:NowalltheChinesepeoplearemakingacontributiontobuildingabeautifulChina.Doctorsaretryingtheirbesttosavepatients’livesandhelpthemkeephealthy.Policemenworkhardtoprotectpeoplefromdanger.It’sscientist’dutytoinventmoreusefulthingstomaketheworldbetter.Farmerstrytheirbesttoplantcropsforus.Asastudent,Ihavetonotonlybegoodatmystudy,butalsobeagoodperson.Iamsupposedtocontributealottothesocietyandachievemydream.Ibelieveifwepulltogether,ourworldwillbeabetterplace.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为看图作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:请根据所给图示内容写一篇英语短文,谈谈图片中的几种职业是怎样做贡献的。作为学生,你又该怎么做。注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步:先仔细审视图片内容。第二步:谈谈图片中的几种职业是怎样做贡献的。第三步:介绍一下作为学生,你应该怎么做。[亮点词汇]①makeacontributionto为……做出贡献②keephealthy保持健康③workhard努力工作④begoodat擅长⑤besupposedto应该[高分句型]①Doctorsaretryingtheirbesttosavepatients’livesandhelpthemkeephealthy.(tryone’sbesttodosth.尽力做某事)②It’sscientist’dutytoinventmoreusefulthingstomaketheworldbetter.(it是形式主语)③Asastudent,Ihavetonotonlybegoodatmystudy,butalsobeagoodperson.(notonly…butalso…不但……而且……)④Ibelieveifwepulltogether,ourworldwillbeabetterplace.(if引导的宾语从句)(2023·山东菏泽·统考一模)为加强劳动教育,本学期,你学校组织了一系列劳动时间活动。请你根据以下图片信息,选出一种你最喜欢的劳动实践活动,并结合自己的经历,以Ilovelabour为题写一篇短文,谈一下活动经过或者感悟。Labour
activities写作要求:1.短文可以按照以上图片信息,也可以根据自己的爱好选择一种活动;2.语言表达要准确,语句通顺连贯;3.词数不少于100,短文开头已经给出,但不计入总词数。Ilovelabour!Toputlaboureducationinpractice,ourschoolorganizedaseriesoflabouractivitiesthisterm,suchas______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ILoveLabor!Toputlaboreducationintopractice,ourschoolorganizedaseriesoflaboractivitiesthisterm,suchascooking,growingvegetablesandwashingclothes.Ofalltheactivities,Ilikegrowingvegetablesbest.AtthebeginningofJuly,ourclassteachertaughtushowtodigholesandplantvegetableslikecabbagesandcarrots.Afterthat,wewateredthevegetablesonceaweekanddaybydaythevegetablesgrewbiggerandbigger.InlateOctober,thevegetablesweresobigthatwepickedthem.Ievencookedthembymyself.Ithoughttheywerethemostdeliciousfoodintheworld.Fromthisactivity,Ilearnedhowhardfarmerswork.FromnowonIwillalwaysfinisheverythingonmyplate.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为看图作文;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;③提示:根据图片的提示介绍自己喜欢的劳动实践活动,适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步,引出话题,表示学校组织了很多劳动活动;第二步,详细介绍自己的劳动实践活动;第三步,介绍自己从中学到了什么。[亮点词汇]①atthebeginningof在……开始时②daybyday一天一天[高分句型]①InlateOctober,thevegetablesweresobigthatwepickedthem.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)②Ilearnedhowhardfarmerswork.(how引导的宾语从句)(2023·山东德州·统考一模)某英文网站开展关于”美丽校园,健康生活”的征稿活动。请你根据以下图示内容积极投稿,倡导同学们”爱护校园环境,健康快乐生活”。keeptheschoolclean
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lookafteryourself
other要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.词数:80-100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。Studentsneedtohaveahealthyschoollife.Whatcanwedotomakeit?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:Studentsneedtohaveahealthyschoollife.Whatcanwedotomakeit?HereI’vegotsomeideastosharewithyou.First,it’simportanttokeepourschoolclean.Forexample,wecancleanthedesksandflooreveryday,becausegoodenvironmentishelpfultoourstudyandhealth.Second,it’sgoodtodosomesportslikerunning,playingbasketballandsoon.Third,we’dbetterlookafterourselveswell,suchaswashinghandsintimeandwearingmaskswhenitisnecessary.Finally,ifwealwaysgetonwellwitheachotherandkeephappy,we’llenjoyahappyandhealthyschoollife.
Ibelievethatifallofuscanmakeefforts,wewillliveahealthierandhappierlife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己将分享一些关于如何有一个健康的学校生活的观点;第二步,根据图片提示具体阐述如何有一个健康的学校生活;第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①makeefforts作出努力②sharewithsb和某人分享③hadbetterdosth.最好做某事[高分句型]①it’simportanttokeepourschoolclean.(it固定句型)②ifwealwaysgetonwellwitheachotherandkeephappy,we’llenjoyahappyandhealthyschoollife.(if引导的条件状语从句)(2023·山东滨州·统考一模)请根据以下四幅图画信息,用英语写一篇文章,以“MemoriesofaSnowyDay”为题目。参考词汇:rollvt.滚动要求:(1)词数80左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文章应包括所给内容要点,可适当增加细节,使文章连贯;(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。MemoriesofaSnowyDay____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文:MemoriesofaSnowyDayIhavesweetmemoriesofasnowyday.Oneday,whenIgotup,Ifounditwassnowingoutside.Everythingwascoveredindeepwhitesnow.ThenIworethickwarmclothesandwentouttoenjoytheworldofsnow.Imadeabigsnowballandrolledithappily.Later,myfriendscameandweplayedtogether.Wemadeasnowmanandusedacarrotforitsnose.Itlookedfunny.Itwasalsoexcitingtohavebigsnowballfights.Wethrewsnowballsateachother,screamingandlaughing.Wereallyenjoyedourselvesonthesnowyday.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为看图作文;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍下雪了自己出去滚雪球;第二步,介绍自己和朋友一起堆雪人和打雪仗。[亮点词汇]①getup起床②makeasnowman堆雪人③enjoyoneself玩得开心[高分句型]①whenIgotup,Ifounditwassnowingoutside.(when引导的时间状语从句)②Wethrewsnowballsateachother,screamingandlaughing.(现在分词作状语)(2021·黑龙江双鸭山·统考一模)仔细观察图片描述,展开合理想象,然后写一篇短文。要求:(1)话题作文或图示作文任选其一。(2)词数:80~100之间。(3)字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LastSunday,theweatherwasverygreatsoTomandhisfriendJohndecidedtogototheparktoenjoythemselves.Whentheyarrivedatthegateofthepark,theysawaboylyingontheground.Theywenttofindoutwhathappenedasquicklyaspossible.Theyfoundtheboyhurthislegswhenhewasridinghisbike.Sotheysenttheboytothehospitalwiththehelpofanotherman.Whenthedoctorwasexaminingtheboy,theycalledhisparents.Hisparentsweregratefulfortheirkindness.Afterknowingtheboywassafe,theysaidgoodbyetothemandwenthome.Thoughtheydidn’thavefuninthepark,theyfeltveryhappytohelpothers.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;③提示:根据图片的内容介绍故事的发展,可适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步,根据图片内容详细介绍他们帮助这个男孩的过程;第二步,介绍他们的感受。[亮点词汇]①ontheground在地上②asquicklyaspossible尽快[高分句型]①theweatherwasverygreatsoTomandhisfriendJohndecidedtogototheparktoenjoythemselves.(so连接的并列句,动词不定式作宾语以及目的状语)②Whentheyarrivedatthegateofthepark,theysawaboylyingontheground.(when引导的时间状语从句)③Thoughtheydidn’thavefuninthepark,theyfeltveryhappytohelpothers.(though引导的让步状语从句)(2023·贵州遵义·统考一模)从脱贫攻坚到乡村振兴,我国农村发生了翻天覆地的喜人变化。假如你是向阳村的小军,请结合以下图片,以“ChangesinMyVillage”为题写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍家乡的变化,并谈谈你的感受。开头已给出,不计入总词数。ChangesinMyVillageI’mXiaojun,astudentfromXiangyangVillage.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:ChangesinMyVillageI’mXiaojun,astudentfromXiangyangVillage.Frompovertyalleviationtoruralrevitalization,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthevillage.Inthepast,theroadsherewerenarrowandcrowded.Thehouseswereveryoldandsmall.Becauseofthepoverty,wehadsimplemealseveryday.Nowadays,theroadsbecomewideandclean.Itisreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.Lotsoftallbuildingshavebeenbuiltinthecity.Andmostofusmovetobigandbeautifulhouses.What’smore,wecanchooserichandnutritiousfoodtoeatindailylife.Ithinkthesechangesmakeourlifemorecomfortable.Howgreattheyare!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇看图作文。②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,根据文章开头提示,介绍乡村过去的情况;第二步,介绍乡村现在的情况;第三步,发表对这些变化的看法。[亮点词汇]①takeplace发生②becauseof因为[高分句型]Itisreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.(itisadj.forsb.todosth.句型)(2023·山西临汾·校联考一模)近期你校英语社团举办了“第三届看图编故事”比赛,根据比赛规则,每位参赛选手抽签选择图片。假如你是参赛选手李华,你抽到的故事见下图,请根据图片内容用英语写一篇短文为你的即兴讲故事做准备。要求:1.仔细观察图片内容,展开合理想象叙述故事;2.词数不少于80词,故事的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。参考词汇:灌木丛bush;手提箱suitcaseAtthreelastSundayagroupofboyswereplayingfootballhappily.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
AtthreelastSundayagroupofboyswereplayingfootballhappily.WhenitwasJim’sturn,hekickedtheballsohardthatitlandedinabush.Hehadtogetit.Tohissurprise,hefoundasuitcaseaswellastheball.Helookedatthesuitcasecarefully,andthoughtitmustbevaluable.Hecalledthepoliceatonce.Verysoon,apolicemancameoverandtookthesuitcaseaway.Severaldayslater,Jimreceivedacall.Hesaidhewastheownerofthesuitcase.HethankedJimagainandagain.ThankstoJim,hefoundthemoneythathewasgoingtousetosavehissickson.HowhappyJimfelt!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇看图作文,为记叙文;②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;③提示:结合图片内容,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,具体阐述事件发生的过程;第二步,对于整件故事进行总结。[亮点词汇]①toone’ssurprise令某人惊讶的是②aswellas也③thankstosb.多亏了某人[高分句型]①Helookedatthesuitcasecarefully,andthoughtitmustbevaluable.(and连接两个并列句,thought后接宾语从句)②ThankstoJim,hefoundthemoneythathewasgoingtousetosavehissickson.(that引导的定语从句)(2023·河北唐山·统考一模)请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。内容提示:1.Whatcanyouseeinthepicture?2.Whodoyouthinkisright?要求:(1)短文须包括所有提示的内容,可适当发挥。(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)Icanseetwostudentsaredoinghomeworkinthepicture.Thegirl…________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:Icanseetwostudentsaredoinghomeworkinthepicture.Thegirlfindsthehomeworktoodifficultandwantstoaskthephoneforhelp.Buttheboytriestostophimfromdoingthat.Hethinksitisbadforher.Inmyopinion,thegirlisn’tsupposedtousethephonetofinishherhomework.Homeworkisthedutyofstudentsandweneedtofinishitindependently.Ifwecan’tworkoutsomeproblems,wecandiscussthemwithourclassmates.Butifweoftenaskthephoneforhelp,wewouldrelyonit.It’sbadforourstudy.【详解】[总体分析]题材:本文是一篇议论文写作,为看图作文;时态:时态为“一般过去时”为主;提示:观点已给出,写作时注意结构清晰;适当添加细节,突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,承接开头。描写图片内容,引出主题;第二步,详细描述自己的观点。[亮点词汇]①asksbforhelp请求帮助②trytodosth尝试做某事③stopsbfromdoing阻止某人做某事④besupposedtodo应该做某事⑤duty职责⑥independently独立地⑦workout解决⑧discusswith与某人讨论某事⑨relyon依赖[高分句型]①Icanseetwostudentsaredoinghomeworkinthepicture.(宾语从句:由that引导宾语从句跟在see后,其中that已省略)②Hethinksitisbadforher.(宾语从句:由that引导宾语从句跟在thinks后,其中that已省略;句型:itis+形容词+forsb)③Ifwecan’tworkoutsomeproblems,wecandiscussthemwithourclassmates.(状语从句:由if引导条件状语从句)④Butifweoftenaskthephoneforhelp,wewouldrelyonit.(状语从句:由if引导条件状语从句)(2023·上海杨浦·统考一模)LastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Lookatthepicturesandwriteastoryinatleast80wordsonthetopicLuckyMary(上周五,Mary去了夜市。请根据图片提示,以《幸运的玛丽》为题,写一篇不少于80个单词的短文)写作提示及要求:①下列词汇你在写作的过程中可能会使用到:dartn.飞镖,teddybearn.玩具熊,gamestand游戏摊位。②关注图片传递的信息与图片之间的关联,适当增加对话或内心独白。③写作内容中不得出现真实姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:LuckyMaryLastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.While
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