2025届高三英语基础写作：图表作文之调查图表+评价+建议课件

假定你是李华，在外教Jack的帮助下你的航模（model

aircraft）在学校科技展上获得了一等奖，请你写封邮件，内容包括：1.告知消息；2.回想经过；3.表达期望。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

自己遇到的困难，外教给予的具体指导和帮助期望得到更多的指导；期待以后的合作

DearJack,

Hopetheletterfindsyouwell.Ican’twaittosharetheupliftingnewswithyouthatthemodel

aircraft

I

made

underyourguidance

wonfirst

prizeinthe

school

technologyexhibition.Morethandelighted,Iwouldliketoextend/conveytoyoumyheartfeltgratitude.

Recallingtheprocessofmakingthemodelaircrafttogether,Iwasmostimpressedbyyourguidanceandassistance.Itwasyourgraciousandtimelyhelpthatenabledmetogetthroughthedifficultiesduringmodeldesigning,materialselection,trialflightandmodelimprovement.NeverwillIforgetyourgeneroushelpthatcontributestomyachivement.Haditnotbeenyou,Iwouldnothavefulfilledmydream.Wordsfailtoexpressmysincerestappreciationtoyou.Ieagerlyanticipatethatwecanjoinhandstomakegreaterprogressinthefuturecompetition.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua

DearJack,

Extremelydelightedtobeinformedthatmymodelaircraftwonfirstprizeintheschooltechnologyexhibition,hardlycanIwaittosharethenewswithyouandextendmysinceregratitudetoyou.

Thepastweekswitnessedourdiligentdedicationtobuildingthemodelaircrafttogether.Fromtheverybeginning,youguidedmethroughthedesignandconstructionphases.

Then,together,wespentcountlesshoursrefiningeveryaspectoftheaircraft.Whetheritwasadjustingthewingsizeorenhancingthesystem,yourexpertiseandguidancewereinvaluableinmakingitagreatsuccess.

WhatimpressedmemostwasyourencouragementwheneverIfeltfrustratedbythefailureinthetrialflight.

Itrulycouldn’thavedoneitwithoutyou.

Thankyouonceagain.Isincerelyhopethatwecancontinuetocollaborateonsimilarprojectsinthefutureand

achieveevengreaterachievementstogether.ClubActivityRecommendation标题It’sapleasuretosharemyrecommendation—thereadingclubactivitieswhichIhavebeenparticipatinginfortwoyears我推荐的社团.Asaproudandactivememberinthereadingclub,notonlycanIappreciateliteraryworksduringtheweeklygathering,butIcanalsoshareinsightful

富有洞察力的;有深刻见解的ideasandmakelike-mindedfriends内容+受益.Besides,Ialsobenefittremendously:fromtherewardinglifelessonsIlearntotheupgradedreadingskillsnowIhave受益.WheneverIamgoingthroughatoughtime,itisthementalsupportgainedfromtheclubactivitiesthatleadsmeoutofthedark受益.That’swhyitcomesfirstonmylistofrecommendation

总结句.Whenitcomestothesuggestionoftheclubactivitiesinyourschool,Istronglyrecommendgivingstudentsmorefreechoicesinselectingandexchangingtheirownfavoritebooks建议.Bydoingso,youngreaderscangreatlyextendtheirknowledgeoflifeandbenefitfromeachother建议原因.

小葵教英语学校英语俱乐部正在开展以WaystoRelieveStress为题的讨论。请根据图表中的调查结果写一篇发言稿,内容包括：1.简述调查结果；2.评价并提出建议。WaystoRelieveStressRecentlyasurveywascarriedoutaboutwaystorelievestress._________________________________________1.审题：

体裁：发言稿

主题：WaystoRelieveStress2.信息归纳：1)高三学生减压方式：listentomusic65%watchvideos80%dosports30%talktoothers40%2)我的评价3)我的建议3.StructurePara.1引言及简述调查结果：更为概括的表述方式，不要求一一列出调查结果中的具体数

据，但要能够正确反映图表中呈现的结果。Para.2评价调查结果

可从减压方法多样性、合理性、有效性以及对减压方式的喜好倾向

等方面切入。Para.3建议

可从学生个人、社团（如英语俱乐部）或学校三个维度思考

WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果Para.3建议listentomusic65%watchvideos80%dosports30%talktoothers40%引言的相关句子表达(1)上周，我们对sb.进行了关于sth.的调查①Lastweek,wecarriedout/made/did/conducted/undertookasurveyonsth.among(sb.)②Asurveywascarriedoutamongsb.onthethemeof...③

Laskweekwitnessedasurveyconductedbyourschoolonthethemeof...(2)调查结果显示......Theresultsshow/revealthatstudents...(3)数据的相关词块表达…的数量:thenumberof+n.占…比例:accountfor/takeup+百分比大多数的:themajorityof+n.大约:about/

approximately/around几分之几:

基数词+序数词(s)eg.onethirdtwothirdsWaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果Para.3建议listentomusic65%watchvideos80%dosports30%talktoothers40%仅次于:AissecondtoB占比最高的是:Onthetopofthelistis…占比最低的是:Atthebottomis……百分比是:

thepercentageof..is…WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果Para.3建议listentomusic65%watchvideos80%dosports30%talktoothers40%(4)该柱形图/横条形图/饼形图/曲线图描述/说明/显示……Thecolumnchart/barchart/piechart/graphdescribes/tells/shows/reveals...Accordingtothesurvey...

Accordingtothefiguresgivenby/presentedinthegraph...(5)如图表所示，……一直在上升/下降Asisshowninthechart,....hasbeenontherise/increase/decrease/decline.(6)从曲线图可以得出结论，......已经大大下降/上升。

Itcanbeconcludedfromthegraphthattherehasbeenagreat/sharpdecline/increasein...

呈现数据的常用表达(1)图中清楚地显示……排在第一位/最高的，而……结果最低。Itisobviousfromthegraph/chartthat...rankfirst/thehighest,while...turnouttobethelowest.(2)A排在第一，占……%，紧接着B，占……%，跟着是C，占……%；最后是D，E，F，分别占……%，……%，和……%。A,whichaccountsfor...%,ranksfirst;nextinlineisBwith...%,followedbyC,makingup...%;finallyD,E,Fat...%...%...%respectively.Para.1LaskweekwitnessedasurveyconductedamongSenior3studentsinourschoolontheirwaystorelievestress.Accordingtothesurvey,80%oftherespondents/participantssaidtheyhaveapreferenceforwatchingvideostorelaxthemselves,followedcloselybylisteningtomusic.Comparatively,onlyasmallnumberofstudentschooseexerciseortalkingtootherstoreduceburden.n用更为概括的表述方式，不要求一一列出调查结果中的具体数据，但要能够正确反映图表中呈现的结果。WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果Para.3建议Para.1LaskweekourschoolconductedasurveyamongSenior3studentsinourschoolontheirwaystorelievestress.Thesurveyrevealsthatmostofthestudentsrelievestressbywatchingvideosandlisteningtomusic,whileasmallnumber/portionofstudentsdosportsandchatwithotherstorelievestress.WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果Para.3建议n用更为概括的表述方式，不要求一一列出调查结果中的具体数据，但要能够正确反映图表中呈现的结果。Para.2WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果方法多样性、合理性、有效性以及对减压方式的喜好倾向Para.3建议调查结果表明，学生采用多种方法来缓解压力，以提高学习效率，实现全面的减压效果。Thesurveyrevealsthatstudentshaveadoptedavarietyofwaystorelievestressinordertoimprove/enhancetheeffectiveness/efficiencyandachieveacomprehensivestress-reducingeffect.Para.2虽然调查结果显示音乐和视频是主流的减压方式，但这两种方式容易导致学生形成手机依赖。相比之下，运动和社交的减压途径可能获益更大。Althoughthesurveyshowsthatmusicandvideoarethemainstreamwaystoreducestress,thesetwowayscaneasilyleadtostudents’dependenceonmobilephones.Incontrast/Onthecontrary,stressreliefthroughexerciseandsocialactivitiesmaybenefit

usstudentsmore.WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果方法多样性、合理性、有效性以及对减压方式的喜好倾向Para.3建议Para.21.Whilevideosandmusicareentertaining,spendingtoomuchtimeonthemcanmakeusrelytoomuchonourphonesandignoremoreimportantthings.2.Thesurveydemonstratesthatmostofusrelieveourstressbyusingelectronicdevicesinsteadofdoingexercise,whichnotonlyisharmfultoourhealthandgrowth,butmayleadto/contributetoouraddictiontophones.WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果方法多样性、合理性、有效性以及对减压方式的喜好倾向Para.3建议Para.3Weseniorthreestudentsareencouragednotonlytousestatic,personalwaystoreducestresssuchasmusicandvideos,butalsototrymoredynamicwayssuchasoutdoorsportsandchattingwithfriendstofullyenjoythebenefitsofphysicalexerciseandsocialinteraction.鼓励高三学生不仅仅通过音乐和视频等静态的、个人的减压方式，还可以多尝试户外运动，与朋友聊天等动态的方式，充分享受身体锻炼和社交带来的好处。WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果Para.3建议Para.3Itissuggestedthatschoolsshouldorganizeandadvocateavarietyofstress-reducingactivities

soastopromotethefriendshipbetweenstudentsaswellastoenhancetheirmutualsupportandemotionalconnection.Anyway,studentsareencouraged/expected

toface/encounter

pressuremoreactivelyandhappily.建议学校多组织并且倡导多样化的减压活动，以促进学生间的友谊以及彼此的相互支持与情感联系，鼓励学生们更积极、愉快地面对压力。WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果Para.3建议Para.3WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果Para.3建议Thereareactuallybetteroptionsavailable.Forexample,doingexerciseortalkingwithfriendsnotonlyrelievesstressbutalsobringsusclosertoeachother.So,ifwearefeelingalotofstress,it’sagoodideatotrydifferentwaystorelax.Butmostimportantly,weshouldfocusonthingsthathelpbothourbodyandmind/facilitateourhealthbothphysicallyandmentally.Para.3

It’shightimethatwereduceusingelectronicdevicesanddoexercisesoutdoorsmoreoften.Notonlycandoingexercisesstrengthenourbody,butit

also

improvesourmood,enablingustorelievestressandbetterfocusonstudy.What’smore,wearesupposedtowalkintothebreathtakingnaturesothatwecangainabettermoodaswellasahealthierlife.WaystoRelieveStress

Para.1引言及简述调查结果Para.2评价调查结果Para.3建议

WaystoRelieveStressRecentlyasurveywascarriedoutaboutwaystorelievestress.Surprisingly,approximately4/5oftherespondentsregardwatchingvideosastheirpreferredwaytoeasestress,closelyfollowedbylisteningtomusic.Incontrast,onlyasmallpercentofindividualschoosesportsorchattingwithothersasmeansofreducingtheirpsychologicalburden.Whilevideosandmusicofferamusementandfascination,excessiveindulgencecanintensifyourdependenceonsmartphones,thusdistractingourattentionfromourstudiesanddailylives.Infact,alternativeapproaches,suchassportsandsocialinteraction,canoffergreaterbenefits.Notonlydoesparticipatinginsportspromotephysicalwell-being,butcommunicatingwithourfriendsandparentscanalsoprovidecomfortandenhancetheirconnection.Therefore,Isuggestthatseniorthreestudentsadoptacombinationofstress-reliefmethods,prioritizingthosethatenhancebothourphysicalandmentalhealth.Thankyouforlistening!评分标准：评分时，主要从内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性、上下文的连贯性等方面考查，具体为：1)覆盖所有的内容要点，内容完整，条例清晰有逻辑；2)使用词汇、句型准确、恰当、多样；3)上下文的衔接连贯，语言流畅；4)书写美，整篇文章书写工整，大小适宜，词间距大小合适

[2022·全国乙卷]学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.学习活动状况描述;2.简单评论;3.你的建议。学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)同体裁不同话题（图表类）LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom

Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,asignificantnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.

ItcaneasilybeseenfromthechartthatthepercentageofstudentswhopreferlisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesis65%and50%respectively.Bycomparison,thosechoosingtoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.

TheresultssuggestthatmoststudentswouldratherstudyEnglishinamoreentertainingway.Frommyperspective,weshouldtakereadingEnglishbooksintoconsideration,thuslayingasolidfoundationforEnglish.同体裁不同话题（图表类）（福建4月质检）近日，你校英语报拟介绍学生参与社团的情况。请你结合图表信息，以“OurSchoolClubs”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括：1.参与社团的情况；2.你的看法。

小葵教英语Withtheaimofenrichingstudents’campuslife,ourschoolprovidesstudentswithawiderangeofclubs,sothatwecanpositivelyjointheminoursparetime.Hereisthegeneralsituationconcerningthestudents’participationinclubs.Firstofall,nearlyhalfofthestudentsprefertheChineseCalligraphyandPaintingClubbecauseoftheirpassionforChineseart.Meanwhile,onefourthofthestudentswouldratherbemembersofthePingpongClubtobuilduptheirbodiesand17%ofthestudentschooseotherclubsaccordingtotheirowninterests.Lastly,thepercentageofthestudentsjoiningtheErhuClubonlyaccountsfor10%.Inmyhumbleopinion,itisthesevariousclubsthatareofgreatbenefittousstudents.Notonlydotheclubsprovideaplatformforustoshowourtalents,butalsoofferusgoodopportunitiestoimproveourall-roundabilities.同体裁不同话题（图表类）

你校要举行一次英语演讲比赛,话题是“畅想未来,享受人生”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。你可以从科技发展给人们未来的生活、学习和工作带来的影响,以及如何准备迎接挑战,适应新生活等方面展开描述和讨论。

同体裁不同话题（发言稿）

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