读后续写：杰德相机故事+讲义 高三下学期3月月考英语试题

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整短文。“Unbelievable,”Jadescreamedwhileexamininghercamerathat,secondsbefore,hadbeenaccidentallydroppedintotheseawaterbyher.Itwasherfather’sfavourite.Shehadbroughtittoherclassbeachbarbecuetorecordmemorablemomentswithherhighschoolclassmates.Jadeheldthecameraclosetoherchestbeforedryingitwithatowel.Shepressedthepowerbuttonseveraltimes.Noresponse.Tearsofsadnesswellingupinhereyes,Jadegatheredherbelongings,determinedtoleave.“Jade,whereareyougoing?”Herputzzledclassmatescalledbehindher,butsheignoredthem.Withoutsayinggoodbye,sheranawayfromthebarbecue.Shewantedtotakethecameratotherepairmanimmediately.UncleLee,thetrustyrepairmanforallthingsdigital,couldonlyshakehishead,giveheraresignedlookandsay,“It’sbeyondrepair.”ThecamerawasagiftfromJade’smothertoherfatheronhisfortiethbirthday.Sincethen,ithadbeenhiscompanionforallevents,bigandsmall.Ithadbeeninstrumentalincapturingallthesignificantmilestonesintheirfamily.Numerousadvanceddigitalcamerashadcomeontothemarketbuthisfatherhadnointentionofreplacingthetreasure.Butthistimeshehadsecretlytakenitoutandruinedit!Herfatherwouldgetcrosswithherandprobablynevertrustherwithhisbelongingsagain.Thinkingofthis,Jadeputbackthedisabledcameraquietlyinherfather’sdrawerinthehopethatherfatherwouldn’tfindoutthetruth.Jaderemaineddisturbedforafewdays.ThencamethedaywhenherfatherwentforhiscamerabecauseJade’syoungersisterwouldbegraduatingfromkindergartenandhewaspreparingfortheceremony.“What’swrongwithmycamera?ItwasingoodconditionlastSaturday.Maybeit’stoooldtowork,”Jade’sfathersaidindisbelief,havingtriedturningitonseveraltimesandfailed.“Takeiteasy,dear.Perhapsit’shightimetochangeforanadvancedone,”Jade’smothercomfortedhimsmilingly.“ButIcan’tpartwiththisbigtreasure.”Herfatherresponded.

注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________杰德相机故事续写续写分析（两段）​第一段：“Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.”开篇即点明Jade的心理转变，从之前的逃避、隐瞒到此刻决定直面错误，为故事发展带来关键转折。“Withherheartpoundingwildly,shesteppedforwardandstammered...”通过对Jade心跳、动作及结巴说话的细节描写，生动展现出她坦白时内心的极度紧张与懊悔。她详细讲述相机损坏的经过，“Itookyourcameratothebeachbarbecuewithoutpermission.Idroppeditintothesea,andthat'swhyitdoesn'tworknow.”表明她对自己错误的清晰认知。“Sheloweredherhead,waitingforthestormofanger.”进一步刻画她忐忑的心理，害怕父亲发怒。而父亲的反应出乎意料，“However,herfatherjustlookedathergentlyandsaid,‘Jade,I'mabitdisappointed,butIknowyoudidn'tmeanit.Whatmattersisyoutoldmethetruth.’”父亲温柔的眼神与包容的话语，既体现对Jade犯错的失望，更突出对她诚实的看重，展现了亲情的温暖与宽容，推动故事从矛盾冲突向和解方向发展，为Jade的内心转变奠定基础。​第二段：“Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.”此句开启新情节，新手机的出现制造悬念。“Therewasanotebesideit,saying,‘Jade,thisisforyou.Iknowyoulikerecordingmemories.Althoughthecameraisgone,wecanstartanewwiththis.Love,Dad.’”通过纸条内容，直接展现父亲对Jade的理解与关爱，他不仅没有责怪，还以实际行动支持Jade继续记录生活。“TearsfilledJade'seyesagain,butthistimetheyweretearsofjoy.”描写Jade的反应，与之前因相机损坏而流泪形成鲜明对比，突出她内心的感动与喜悦。“Sherealizedthatherfather'slovewasfarmorepreciousthananycamera.Fromthenon,shelearnedtocherishthethingsandpeoplearoundher,alwayskeepinginmindtheimportanceofhonesty.”最后两句从Jade的内心感悟出发，升华故事主题，强调她在经历此事后的成长，明白了亲情的珍贵与诚实的重要性，使故事在情感和主题上达到高潮。​故事线​Jade将父亲心爱的相机带到班级海滩烧烤活动，意外将其掉进海水导致相机损坏，相机无法修复。这台相机是母亲在父亲四十岁生日时送的礼物，对父亲意义重大，Jade深知自己闯祸，偷偷将损坏的相机放回父亲抽屉，试图隐瞒真相。​Jade的妹妹幼儿园毕业，父亲准备用相机记录仪式，却发现相机无法开机。父亲疑惑，母亲提议换相机，父亲表示不舍。Jade在此时鼓起勇气，向父亲坦白自己未经允许拿走相机并使其损坏的事实。父亲虽失望，但因Jade的诚实选择原谅。​第二天，Jade回家看到桌上有一部新智能手机和父亲的留言，父亲理解她喜欢记录回忆，用新手机鼓励她重新开始。Jade深受感动，意识到父亲的爱比相机更珍贵，从此学会珍惜身边的人和事，铭记诚实的重要性。​短语​gatherupone'scourage鼓起某人的勇气​withone'sheartpoundingwildly某人的心狂跳​stepforward向前走​withoutpermission未经允许​lowerone'shead低下头​waitingfor等待​astormofanger一阵愤怒​bedisappointed感到失望​meantodosth.有意做某事​matter重要​berelieved感到宽慰​begratefulfor对……感激​anew重新​keepinmind记住​主旨升华句​ThisheartwarmingnarrativeofJadeandherfathernotonlyshowcasesthepowerofhonestyinmendingfamilyrelationshipsbutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatinthefaceofmistakes,familylovecanbethemostforgivingandhealingforce.​这个关于Jade和她父亲的温馨故事，不仅展示了诚实修复家庭关系的力量，还深刻地提醒我们，在面对错误时，家庭之爱是最宽容、最具治愈力的力量。​ThroughJade'sjourneyfromaguilt-riddengirlwhotriedtohidehermistaketoagratefulandenlightenedonewholearnedfromit,wearevividlyshownthebeautyofpersonalgrowthandtheunwaveringnatureofparentallove.Theirstoryimpartsthevaluablelessonthathonestyandunderstandingarethecornerstonesofaharmoniousfamily.​通过Jade从一个试图隐瞒错误、充满愧疚的女孩成长为一个从中学习、心怀感激且觉悟的女孩的历程，我们生动地看到了个人成长的美好以及父母之爱的坚定不移。他们的故事传达了一个宝贵的教训，即诚实和理解是和谐家庭的基石。ThestoryofJadeandthedamagedcameraisnotmerelyataleofabrokenpossession;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytoadmitwrongdoing,toforgive,andtogrow.Itremindsusthateveryfamilychallengecanbeanopportunityfordeeperconnectionandself-improvement.​Jade和损坏相机的故事不仅仅是一个关于物品损坏的故事，它是对人类精神承认错误、原谅他人以及成长能力的深刻探索。它提醒我们，每一个家庭挑战都可以是一个建立更深厚联系和自我提升的机会。​Inaworldoftenfilledwiththefearoffacingconsequencesandthetemptationtocoverupmistakes,Jadeandherfather'sstorystandsasapowerfulstatement,illuminatingthepathtowardsamorehonestandlovingfamilylife.Itshowsthatbybeingbraveenoughtotellthetruthandgenerousenoughtoforgive,wecancreateahomefilledwithwarmthandtrust.​在一个常常充满对面对后果的恐惧以及掩盖错误诱惑的世界里，Jade和她父亲的故事是一个有力的声明，照亮了通往更诚实、更充满爱的家庭生活的道路。它表明，只要有足够的勇气说出真相，有足够的宽容去原谅，我们就能营造一个充满温暖和信任的家。​Fromtheinitialdespairofadamagedcameratotheultimaterealizationofthepricelessnessoffamilylove,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofhope,themagicofforgiveness,andtheunwaveringbeliefthatthroughhonestyandlove,wecanovercomeanyobstacleandbuildastronger,moremeaningfulfamilybond.​从相机损坏的最初绝望到最终认识到家庭之爱的无价，这个故事体现了希望的本质、宽恕的魔力，以及坚定的信念，即通过诚实和爱，我们可以克服任何障碍，建立更强大、更有意义的家庭纽带。​写作示范​示范一​Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.Herhandswereshakingasshetookadeepbreathandsaid,“Dad,I'msosorry.IwassoexcitedtocapturethefunatthebeachbarbecuethatIdidn'tthinktwicebeforetakingyourcamera.Iwasclumsyanddroppedit.Iwassoscaredyou'dbemadthatIhidit.”Hervoicetrembledwithguilt.Herfatherlookedather,hiseyessoftening.“Jade,mistakeshappen.What'simportantisthatyou'rebraveenoughtoownuptoit.I'mproudofyouforbeinghonest.”Jadefeltahugeweightliftedoffhershoulders,filledwithgratitudeforherfather'sunderstanding.​Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.Alongwithitwasaphotoalbumfilledwithpicturestakenwiththeoldcamera.Thenoteread,“Jade,thememoriesarewhatmatter.Let'smakenewoneswiththisphone.Love,Dad.”Jade'seyeswelledupwithtears.Sherealizedthatherfatherhadgivenhernotjustaphonebutachancetocherishmemories,oldandnew.Fromthatdayon,shewasmorecarefulwithherthingsandalwaysvaluedhonestyaboveall.​示范二​Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.Withalumpinherthroat,shesaid,“Dad,Imadeahugemistake.IthoughtIcouldusethecameratomakesomegreatmemorieswithmyfriends,butIendedupruiningit.Iwastooafraidtotellyou.”Shebitherlip,waitingforherfather'sreaction.Herfatherputhisarmaroundherandsaid,“Jade,I'mdisappointed,butI'mgladyoutoldme.Everyonemakesmistakes.What'simportantislearningfromthem.”Jadefeltarushofreliefandhuggedherfathertightly.​Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.Therewasalsoasmallkeychainwithapictureoftheirfamily.Thenotesaid,“Jade,thisphoneisforyoutocreatemorewonderfulmemories.Remember,ourfamilyismoreimportantthananything.Love,Dad.”Jadesmiled,herheartfulloflove.Sheknewthatthisexperiencehadtaughtherthetruevalueoffamilyandhonesty.Fromthenon,shemadeitapointtoalwaysbehonestandcherisheverymomentwithherfamily.​参考答案Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.Fullofapologyandregret,Jadegavean