读后续写-2025年高考英语大题突破训练（原卷版）

大题10读后续写

》明考情-笈方向》•

历年考情

体裁：读后续写的语篇均为记叙文，有部分夹叙夹议。故事性强，情节有一定起伏，如2022年全国新高

考I卷，作者在越野赛跑前发现学生David打算放弃比赛，情节由此展开，吸引读者并为续写留下空间。

难度：文章词汇和语法难度适中，高中生通过日常学习积累可理解。但部分文章会出现熟词生义、地道短

语等增加理解难度，如2024年部分真题中出现的一些特定情境下的词汇用法。叙事结构上，多遵循时间

或事件发展顺序，逻辑清晰，便于学生梳理情节脉络，但也要求学生能精准把握细节，为续写做准备。

命题规律

从选材上来看，语篇选材情节曲折，逻辑性强。读后续写所提供的语篇材料一般是具有正能量而且故事性

比较强的文章。一般来说，文章内容通俗易懂，故事线素的逻辑性较强，写作要求续写的部分多是故事的

高潮或结局。例如2022年全国新高考I卷的读后续写，所给文章讲述了作者在一次越野赛跑前发现学生David

打算放弃比赛。续写部分内容大致为了解清楚原因之后，在作者的鼓动下，David勇敢地参加了比赛。

从语言特点上来看，读后续写原材料一般是记叙文，或夹叙夹议类体裁，叙述性语言和描写性语言相结合。

语言生动、细腻、富有感情，简洁朴素，画面感强。因此，考生在续写过程中，应该体会原材料故事中的

语言特点，继而完成语言风格契合度高的短文。

考向预测

预测2025年高考对于读后续写的考查：

1.难度稳中有升：词汇方面，可能出现更多高级词汇、学术词汇或特定领域词汇；语法结构上，长难句、

复杂句式的比例可能增加，对学生语法理解和运用能力要求更高。如在故事中出现一些涉及专业知识（如

科技、艺术）的词汇，或者使用较多的非谓语动词、各类从句嵌套的句子。

2.更注重思维考查：在情节设计上，要求学生的续写情节更具创新性、合理性和逻辑性，不能过于平淡或

俗套。同时，对学生批判性思维的考查可能加强，如要求学生对故事中的某个观点、行为进行评价并续写

相关情节，考查学生独立思考和分析问题的能力。

◎研大题-梃能力

主题与情节分析（占比约40二）

语言风格与人物情感（占比约30%）

读后续写考点

段■句攫示：段苜句常隐含时间、地点或关疑动作，需紧扣提示膜开（如“Ju”»«Ihejwereabout«ogiveup.「11示精

r4-折）.

逻辑衔接（占比约20。。）

：伏第呼应：需回应原文伏笔（如2021年全国2卷中提到的Fm）sleriou5leUcr”需在搂号中N9续）.

5合理结局：结局需符合逑《!（如“助人故事-以成功帮助收尾，,倡险故事..以脱院或懑悟结束）.

词汇丰富性：避免重震用词（如“hnpp、”—"cklightcd/<»verjoy«r）；

语言能力（占比约10%）：句式多样性：交替使用简单句、然合句、非谓语结构（如Heringthtrnoise,hefroze"）；

~r

—衔接手段：使用逻辑连接词（MeMimhik.Houever/EvenlHdly）.代词指代（idthe》）和词汇发现.

典例

【2024新课标I&II卷】ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.Ihadplannedtofly

toViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourand

ahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgot

offtheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithouta

secondthought.

ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoingbuthesaidhehadn*theardofthebusstation.I

thoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenI

wasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlasted

forwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.

Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue（队歹!j）

stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabig

smileonhisface.nWemadeit,"hesaid.

JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmy

Portuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.Afeelingof

helplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.

Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacash

machine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthe

message:"Outoforder.Sorry."

注意：

（1）续写词数应为150个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.

瞎

读后续写的满分公式：

“精准审题抓伏笔+逻辑合理扣段首+描写细腻升情感+语言丰富显功底”

1.精准审题，锁定原文伏笔

Step1速读原文，抓核心要素：

人物关系（如父女、朋友、人与动物）；

冲突类型（误解、危险、目标障碍）；

情感线索（焦虑一释然、孤独一温暖）。

Step2分析段首句，明确续写方向：

1）段首句功能：

第一段首句：推动情节高潮；

第二段首句：引导结局升华。

情节设计：遵循“冲突一解决一升华”模板

模板公式：冲突激化一行动尝试（失败）一转折点-问题解决一情感/哲理升华

2）高分技巧：

a.加入细节动作：

b.呼应原文伏笔：

3.语言升级：情感描写与句式多样性

1）情感描写细腻化：

情感基础表达升级表达

紧张Shewasnervous.Herpalmssweated,andherbreathquickened.

感动Shewasmoved.Tearsofreliefwelledupinhereyes,blurringhervision.

决心、Hedecidedtotry.Asurgeofdeterminationcoursedthroughhimashegrippedtheropetighter.

2）句式多样化：

三f谓语作状语：Hearingthedog'swhimper,sherushedtoitsside.

倒装句：Notonlydidtheysavethedog,buttheyalsolearnedthevalueofcompassion.

比喻彳修辞：Thestormoutsidemirroredtheturmoilinherheart.

雪式

【福建师范大学附属中学2024-2025学年高三上学期期末考】Foryears,swimmingwasoneofthose

thingswhereIthought:"I'mnotgoodatit,andIneverwillbe."Thatthoughtlingeredtheremostofmychildhood.

ThisallchangedlastyearwhenthecompanyIworkedforannouncedthattheyweregoingtoarrangea

swimrun,aracewhereyoupartiallyswimandpartiallyruntofinishtherace.Ofcourse,itwasavoluntaryactivity

andIwasnotgoingtoparticipate.

However,astheweeksprogressed,Istartedthinkingtomyself."Whatwoulditfeelliketobreakthroughmy

comfortzoneandfinallyfacemyinsecurity?^^Tohelptheswimrunparticipantspreparefortherace,thecompany

arrangedanopportunitytolearnhowtoswimfreestylewithaswiminstructor.Iultimatelydecidedtoatleast

participateinthefirstswimminglesson.

Iwasmentallypreparedtobetheworststudentduringthelesson.However,asitturnedout,Ihadplentyof

co-workersthatwereequallybadatswimming.Afterafewswimminglessons,Ievengotcomplimentsforhow

quicklyImanagedtoimprove.NotonlyhadIshatteredmyoldbeliefaboutmydisabilityinwater,butsomething

elsehadstartedtostir.Ihadgottenatasteforswimmingandwascurioustoseewhereitcouldleadme."How

woulditfeelliketobecompletelycomfortableinthewater?991wondered.

IstartedgoingtothepublicbathhousetopracticethefewtipsIhadgottenfromtheswimminginstructor.I'd

watchYouTubevideosandtryandmimicthemovementsbymyselfinthewatertothebestofmyabilities.

Withoutadoubt-inthebeginning,Ilookedlikeadrowningmonkey.Iwouldswim;Iwouldsink,coughing

upwater,andrepeatitalloveragain.Fdgetyelledatforswimmingtooslowatthefreestylerange.However,I

focusedontheprocessandthesoon-to-benewskillsetthatIdidnotgetdiscouragedbytheslowprogressnorthe

occasionalscolding.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Thethoughtsofglidingthroughwatereffortlesslywaswhatkeptmegoing.

Paragraph2:

Regardingtheswimrun,Ieventuallydecidedtoparticipate.

、倒大题・拿高分八

Passage(1)

【安徽省合肥市第一中学2024-2025学年高三上学期12月阶段性诊断检测】IfIhadn'tbeenafailed

violinistImightneverhavebecomeawriter.

WhenIwasinfourthgrade,thepublicschoolIattendedhadacovetedorchestraprogram.Isignedupto

learntheviolin,alongwithmyfriendIreneCervantes.Wewerebothobsessedwiththeviolinandtheprospectof

beingintheorchestra.Everyweek,IreneandIwalkedtogetherthroughourworking-classneighborhoodtoour

before-schoolmusiclessons,proudlyholdingourblackviolincases.

Mr.Baumgartner,theorchestrateacher,wasverystrict.Heemphasizedthatifanythinghappenedtothe

instrumentweplayedwe'dbecutfromtheprogrambecausetheschoolcouldnotaffordtoreplaceit.Weall

understood.

Iwasn'tverygoodattheviolin.Nomatter,destinyintervenedandtheterriblethinghappened:Iwas

practicingathomewhenthebridgepoppedoffmyviolinandflewacrosstheroom,thestringscollapsingbefore

myeyes.

TerrifiedofMr.Baumgartner^reaction,andhavingnoideathiswasacommonviolinisfsmishap(because

thebridgeisheldinplacebythetensionofthestrings),Itriedtofixit.Itiptoedintothegarageandsecuredthe

bridgebackinplacewithglobsofanunfamiliarglue,makingsureitwouldnever,ever,popoffagain.Itwasonly

slightlycrooked.IprayedthatMr.Baumgartnerwouldn'tnotice.

Ofcourse,hedid.AndwhenIsawthecolordrainfromhisface,Iknewmyfatewassealed.Sadly,hepatted

meonthebackandtoldmethatmaybeIcouldjointheorchestranextyear.WhenIcried,hesuggestedthatIjoin

singingclub,whichoftensangduringassemblieswiththeorchestra.

Ididswitchtosingingclub,whereIstayed,thinkingI'dfoundmyplace.Asluckwouldhaveit,the

elementaryschoolgleeclubautomaticallyfedintothejuniorhighchorus.Insteadofaviolinist,Iwouldbeasinger

inanorchestraofvoices.Don'tbeconfused.Ididn'thaveagoodvoice,butinthemidstofsomanyothers,Icould

blend.

注意：

⑴续写词数应为150个左右；

⑵请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

OneMondayafterabigperformance,myEnglishteacheraskedifanyonewasinterestedinwritinganarticle

abouthis/hersingingexperience.

IsawIreneCervantesyearslateratahighschoolreunion.

Passage(2)

【福建省泉州市四校联考2024-2025学年高三下学期开学】Mostpeoplethinkthatprocrastination(拖延

症）isanegativehabit.Butpeoplelikemewhoroutinelyputoffdoingassignments,arelikelytodefendour

“slower“approachtogettingtasksdone.

Pmtheonlyprocrastinationinmyfamily.Myparentsandsisterwereallbomwiththe"doitrightnow^^gift.

Theyarealwaysinarush,asifcloselyrushedbyaninvisibledeadline.Personally,Ipreferamorerelaxedpace.

Whenmyparentsvoicedtheirconcernaboutmytendencies,saying"Don'tputoffuntiltomorrowwhatyoucando

today,9,“Noway!”Iresponded,confidentlypresentingmyresearchasadefense.Itsaidpeopleprocrastinatedwhen

theyneedtosolveaproblemorcommittoatopicorproject.Inthesecases,delayingadecisioncanbebeneficial.

Thiswasbecauseourmindscontinuetoreflectonproblemsevenwhenwewerenotactivelythinkingaboutthem,

whichcouldleadtomorecreativesolutions.Myfindingsfilledmewithsatisfactionandpride.Mymethodof

gettingthingsdonewasjustasgoodasmysister's...orsoIthought.

Atschoolwe'dbeentalkingaboutarchitectureanddesign.AspartofthefinalassessmentmyteacherMr.

Smithannouncedanexcitingprojectthateachstudentwouldhaveamonthtocomplete.Wewereexpectedto

chooseourmaterials,constructasmallbuildingandmakeuseofthingswehadlearnedinclass.Notonlywouldthe

winnersreceiveextracredit,butthewinningconstructionswouldbeproudlydisplayedinthecafeteria.a<Ihaveno

cluehowIcouldgetitdone,^^myfriendNatesighedindespair.Ididn'tsayanything.NotbecauseIsharedhis

anxietybutbecauseIwasnotnervousatall.Ilovedhands-onprojects!Picturingmybrilliantworkexhibitedinthe

cafeteria,IwasfullyconvincedthatIwoulddefinitelyproducesomethingthatcouldimpresseveryone.Sorelaxed

wasIthatIdidn'tgiveitasecondthoughtforweeks.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

BeforeIknewit,Ihadonlyonedayleftfortheproject.

Thattaughtmeagreatlesson.

Passage（3）

【广东省红岭中学2024-2025学年高三下学期第五次统一考试】OnNewYear'sEve,theairwasfilled

withexcitementandexpectation.Everykidwasoverjoyed,andonesuchkidwaslittleJohnny.Johnnywasthrilled

becausehewasgoingtothemarketwithhisfathertobuyvariousitemsthatheliked.Themarketwasbustlingwith

activity,andallthebusinessesweredecoratedwithcolorfullights,creatingafestiveatmosphere.

AsJohnnyandhisfatherwalkedthroughthemarket,theyweresurroundedbythesoundsofvendorscalling

outtheirwares,thelaughterofchildren,andtheclatterofshoppingcarts.Theairwasfilledwiththescentof

freshlycookedfoodandthebrightlightsofthedecorations.Johnny'seyeswidenedinwonderashetookinthe

sightsandsoundsofthebustlingmarket.

Whilewanderingthroughthemarket,Johnny'sattentionwasdrawntoashopwithalargenumberofcaged

birds.Thebirdswereconstantlyslammingtheirbeaksagainstthecageinadesperateattempttoescape.Manyof

themweredrippingwithblood,andtheirfeatherswereruffled（竖起）anddirty.Johnnyfeltapangofsorrowand

wasdeeplymovedbytheplight（困境）ofthebirds.

Unabletocontrolhisemotions,Johnnyapproachedtheshopkeeper."Whyhaveyoucapturedthesehelpless

birds?”heinquired,hisvoicetremblingwithconcern.Johnnythoughttohimselfthatitwasnotrighttolimit

someone'sfreedom,especiallyforinnocentcreatureslikethesebirds.

TheshopkeeperlookedatJohnnywithamixtureoffrustrationandsadness.don'tlikeit,“headmitted,

“butIdon'thaveanyotheroptions.Ineedthejobandalsorequirefundstofeedmyfamily.9,Listeningtothe

shopkeeper'sexplanation,Johnnyunderstoodthecomplexityofthesituation.Heturnedtohisfatherandsaid,“Dad,

canwebuythesebirdsandsetthemfree?^^Meanwhile,hewassearchingformoneyinhispocket.ctWhataboutall

thoseitemsyouwereplanningtobuy,Johnny?Whatifthemanloseshisjob?”Johnny'sfatherinquired.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Forabriefmoment,Johnnywasconfusedandslightlyanxious.

TheshopkeeperwasoveijoyedandhandedthecagetoJohnny.

Passage(4)

【湖北省武汉市第一中学2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考】Peoplealwayssaythatwithexercise,

puttingonyourshoesisthehardestpart.ButforEmma,thiswasalie.Therealpainalwaysstartedwhenallthe

studentsweregatheredonthetrack,readytorun.Itwasn'tthefatiguesheminded,itwasthelooksothersgaveher.

Emmawasbiggerthanothersofherage.Backinprimaryschool,sheremembersherclassmatesaskingherwhy

herthighs(大腿)weresobigandherchestsowide.Ontheoutside,shelookedbig,butontheinside,shefeltas

smallasapea.AndPEclasswaswhenshefeltathersmallest.

Notallherclassmatesmadeherfeeluncomfortable,though.Itwasmainlyagroupofgirlsandboys一the

loud,outspoken,popularkids.AlthoughtheycouldrunfasterthanEmma,theypreferredtojogabitbehindher,

burstingoutinlaughtereverynowandthen,commentingonhowEmmajogged.

Justonemoreyear,Emmakepttellingherself.Onemoreyearandrilhavegraduatedandwon'thavetotake

thisstupidPEclassanymore.Shejustwantedtosurviveit.

ButeverythingchangedwhenanewgirlcalledKitjoinedtheclass.Shehadshort,jet-blackhair,brighteyes,

andalongscaracrosstheleftsideofherface.Herentranceintotheclassroomthatdaywasmetbydozensof

curiouseyes.

Althoughtheirteacher,MsHardy,didn'taskKitforapersonalintroduction,uponputtingherbagdownon

herdesk,Kitrose,saying,“Hi,everyone,nicetomeetyou,FmKit.Iloveboxing,animationandfashion.You

mightbewonderingaboutmyscar.IgotitwhenIwasyoungwhenIfelloffmybike.Luckily,Ididn'tgethurt

moreseriously.IfsnowlikeacooltrademarkofalltheadventuresIhadasakid.”

AfterKifsintroduction,Emmasimplysatthere,herheartpoundingandmouthwideopen.Howcould

someonebesoconfident?Eventhepopularkidsweresittingthereinshock.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedoverto

them.

OnFriday,itwastimeforthefearfulPEclass,butthistime,Kitwaswithher.

Passage(5)

【华中师范大学第一附属中学2024-2025学年高三下学期开学】Theboysintheblockweregoingtohave

aroller-skating(滑旱冰)racenextSaturday.Theyweredividedintotwoteams:theSunnysidersandthe

Shadysiders,withfiveboysoneachteam.AndywasontheSunnysiders.Theylostlastyear,sotheyweredesperate

towinthistime.ButAndyknewhisshortlegsmadeithardforhimtoskatefast.

Oneday,Andywasgreetedbyapleasant“Hello“ashewasputtingonhisroller-skates.Helookedupand

sawhisnewneighbor,Francis.46Hello!”herepliedcheerfully,noticinghisneighbor'slonglegs.uWannaskatewith

me?Lookatyourlonglegs!Justtherightkindtomakeyouagoodskater.9,"I'dloveto.Youknow,I'mreallygood

atrollerskatingandIusedtohelpmyteamwin.^^Francissaid,histonenowheavywithsadness.atButIlostmy

rollerskatesandmymomjustcannotaffordtobuymeanotherpair.^^

AndythoughtitwasashameforFrancis.Asanewcomer,therewereundoubtedlymanymomentswhenhe

musthavefeltlonely.Andythoughttohimself,wonderingwhathecoulddoforFrancis.Buthehadtosaygoodbye

inahurrysincetheteamweremeetingintheopenspaceonthecornertotalkoversomeplans.

Whentalkingtotheteamcaptain,Andysuggestedaddinganotherboytotheirteam,Francis.Butthecaptain

said"No"astheteamknewnothingabouthim.Besides,theShadysiderswouldn'tletthemtakeonanextraplayer.

Inthefollowingdays,Andypracticedveryhardwithhisteam.Thencamethedaybeforetheracewhenhe

sawFrancisonthesidewalk,watchingthemskatepast,hiseyesfilledwithasenseofloss.SomehowitupsetAndy,

andhisdesiretohelphisnewneighborresurfaced.Thenhethoughtofawaythatcouldnotonlyhelphisteamwin,

buthelpFrancisfitin.

注意：

(1)续写词数应为150个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

HerushedtoFrancis,excitedtotellhimhisplan.

Thenextday,theracebeganasscheduled.

Passage(6)

【广东省深圳市高级中学2024-2025学年高三上学期第三次诊断考试】AFour-leggedGuardianAngel

SnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach,Saskatchewan.Ihadjust

cleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjobwiththeprovincial

government,andnowourfinancialsituationwasgrim.Indespair,Ihadfinallyputthehomeonthemarket,anda

realestateagentwasduetoshowuplaterthatday.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane

(大丹犬)Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.Thethoughtoflosingthedogandour

beautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.

Deepindespair,Isattypingupresumesandcoverletters.OutofthecomerofmyeyeIcouldseemy

thirteen-month-oldson,Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentlenanny-dog,Brigitte.Itseemed

asifBrigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamilyandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanion.

BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmas

packageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlooked

down,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasno

waythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppy

somewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcome

anadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.

Thinkingofthese,Icouldn'thelpheavingasighandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn'ttyped

morethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingfuriouslyandrunningbackandforthtotheslidingglassdoor

overlookingourpool.

Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,Irealized

Forrestwasnowheretobeseen.Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.

Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.

Passage(7)

【河北省沧衡名校联盟2024-2025学年高三下学期开学考试】Rushingintothesupermarketthatfall

afternoon,IdidnotknowIwouldgettobeapartofsomethingbeautiful.Inallhonesty,Ican'tevenrememberwhy

Iwasinthisgrocerystore.Inevershoppedhere.ItwasoutofmywayandoutofthecirclethatIlivedmylife

within.Butitwasmeantformetobethereatthisparticulartime.

Afterselectingmyitems,Iproceededtothecheckoutline.Inoticedayoungwomaninthelineinfrontof

me.Herclotheswereworn,andshelookedsotired.Shehadatoddler(学步的儿童)whocouldnothavebeen

morethanthreeandanewbornbabywhowasjustafewweeksold.Thetoddlerwasrunningandjumpingaround

justliketoddlersdo.Thebabywascrying.Myheartwentouttoher.Ihadbeeninhershoeswithmyowntwosons.

Shemanagedtogethergroceriesonthemovingbeltdespiteallthechaosofherkids,andtheclerkstarted

checkingoutheritems.AsIstoodbehindher,Inoticedthatshewaslosingpatiencewithherkidsbutdidn'tknow

whattodo.Shewastryingtobalancebothtaskswithoutcausingahugedisturbance.Ibegantowhisperaprayerof

peaceandstrengthoverthiswoman.Thelinebehindmecontinuedtosnakeitswayintoanotherpassage.The

pressurewasgrowing.

AsIwatchedher,IrememberedthetimewhenIhadbeeninagrocerystorewithatoddlerwhowasrunning

aroundandascreamingbaby.Irememberedthemean,oldmanbehindmeandtheinappropriatecommenthemade

onmeasIcheckedout.Thatmemorytookmeawayfromthecheckoutlineforamoment.WhenIcamebacktothe

present,Irealizedthattheyoungwomanwaslookingatafewitemsandtryingtodecidewhatsheneededtoput

back.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thepeopleinlinebehindmeweregettingimpatient.

Iwasabouttopayforthewoman,butthemanbehindofferedtosharethecost.

Passage(8)

【湖南师范大学附属中学2024-2025学年高三下学期2月月考】ThesunwassettingoverSpringdale,

castingshadowsacrossthebusycommunitycenter.Agroupofteenagers,themembersoftheSpringdaleYouth

Committee,gatheredatatable.Theylookeddeterminedandworried.AmongthemwasEmily,asmartbutoften

unnoticedgirlwholoveshelpingothers.

Forweeks,theyhadbeenorganizingafundraisingeventforthelocalhomelessshelter,astheshelter

struggledtoassisttheincreasingnumberofindividualsseekinghelp.Thebigdaywasoneweekaway,and

everythingwasset-untiltheydiscoveredanothergrouphadasimilarcharityeventonthesameday.Thiscould

dividethepeoplewhomightcomeandthedonationstheyhopedtoget.

“Wecan'tchangethedatenow,“saidTom,aseniormember,hisvoicefilledwithfrustration."We'vealready

sentoutinvitations,andtheplaceisbooked.^^Emilylistenedquietlytothediscussion.Sheknewchangingthedate

wasn'tpossible,butshealsorealizedcompetingwithanotherworthycausecouldhurtbothsides.

Afterthemeetingendedwithoutasolution,Emilydecidedtotakeaction.Shespentthenextdaylookinginto

waystoworkwiththeothergroup,hopingtofindawaythatwouldhelpboththehomelessshelterandtheother

cause.

Thenextday,shecametothecommitteewithasuggestion."Whatifwejoinourevents?^^sheasked.ctWe

couldshareresources,worktogetheronpromoting,andmostimportantly,makesurebothcausesaresupportedby

thecommunity.^^

Thememberslookedateachother,somedoubtful,othersinterested."That'sagreatidea,Emily,buthow

willwegetthemtoagree?^^Laura,anothermember,asked.Emilyhadalreadythoughtthisthrough.uriltalkto

theirorganizerandshowthemthebenefitsofajointevent.9,Sheknewthepathaheadwouldbechallenging,butshe

wasdeterminedtomakeithappenforSpringdaleanditspeople.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Para1ThecommitteeagreedtoletEmilyleadthiseffort.

Para2Afterdaysofnegotiation,Emilyfinallygotapositivereply.

Passage(1)

[2024浙江1月卷】Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthe

majorheadachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.Itwasasix-storybuilding.Oneachfloor,

hallwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachers5offices.Somewhereinthe

building,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.

Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.Allthedifferent

hallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.Shedecidedthatshewould

memorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn'texist.

InherfirstPEclass,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunonemilearoundthe

trackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewasnothingshefearedmorethan

havingtorunawholemile.ToEva,"amile^^wasusedtodescribelongdistances.Itwastenmilesfromherhometo

hergrandfather^,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,eveninacar!

WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(口肖子)，Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,whilesomeofher

classmatesedgedahead,othersactuallyfellbehind.Ifsjustthebeginning,aashethought.^^rilcomeinlastforsure.

SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Evastartedusing

amindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword"mile."Instead,shefocusedonreachingtheshadowcast

onthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrackcurved(拐弯).

Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.

Paragraph2:

Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.

Passage(2)

【2023年新高考全国I&II卷】WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoentera

writingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil