读后续写-小狗串联的温暖：从陌生到守望相助+讲义 高一下学期第一次月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TiffanyMasseyhadjustmovedtothestateofMainelastyearandlivedalone.Sheenjoyedthebeachneartheneighbourhoodandjogging(慢跑)aroundintheevenings.ItwasduringoneofthoseeveningsthatshenoticedMrsJohnson.She’dneverforgettheirfirstmeeting.MrsJohnsonhadadognamedMax.Maxalmostattackedheroneeveningifithadn’tbeenforMrsJohnson.“Stopnow,oryouwon’tgetanyfoodtonight!”sheyelledatthedogfromadistance.“I’msorry.Maxdidn’tmeanit.Hejustdoesn’tlikestrangers!You’dbetterstayawayfromhim!”MrsJohnsonapologized,walkinguptoher.“Well...”BeforeTiffanycouldsayanything,theelderlywomanandthedogwalkedaway.Dayslater,shewasjoggingalongthebeachagainwhenMaxbarked(狗叫)atherliketheirfirstmeeting.Tiffanytriedtochangeherroute(路线)toescapehim.Thishappenedeveneverytimeshewentforajoglater,andTiffanyhadhadenoughofhim!Withweeksflying,thingschangedabitastheymetmoreoften.MaxnolongerbarkedatTiffanybutfollowedherinstead,obviouslyfriendly.Gradually,TiffanygotusedtojoggingonthebeachwithMaxrunningafterher,andMrsJohnsonwatchingthemrun.AndtheybegantheirconversationandTiffanybegantoknowaboutMrsJohnson,whowasinherlateseventiesandlivedaloneaswell.Orrather,withMax,shewasnotalone.Oneday,Tiffanywentforherusualjog,butshedidn’tseeMax.Shefeltabitupsetthathewasn’tfollowingher.However,inthefollowingdays,MrsJohnsonandMaxstilldidn’tshowuponthebeach.“Wherehashegone?Didtheymovesomewhere?”Tiffanywondered.MrsJohnsonandMaxhadbecomeapartofherdailyroutine,andtheirsuddenabsenceleftheruneasy.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withcuriosity,Tiffanydecidedtofigureoutwhathadhappened.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TiffanyofferedtotakecareofMaxuntilMrsJohnsonrecovered.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________续写中需要回答的问题HowdidTiffanyfindoutwhathappenedtoMrsJohnsonandMax?

Answer:Tiffanyaskedaroundtheneighborhood,andakindneighbortoldherthatMrsJohnsonhadfallenillandwasinthehospital,andMaxwasinalocalanimalshelter.HowdidTiffanyfeelwhensheheardaboutMrsJohnson'ssituation?

Answer:Tiffany'sheartsank,andshewasfilledwithconcern.WhatdidTiffanyoffertodo?

Answer:TiffanyofferedtotakecareofMaxuntilMrsJohnsonrecovered.HowdidMrsJohnsonreacttoTiffany'soffer?

Answer:MrsJohnsonwastouchedbyTiffany'skindnessandinitiallyexpressedconcernasMaxcouldbedifficulttohandle.WhathappenedwhenMrsJohnsonrecovered?

Answer:WhenMrsJohnsonrecoveredandcamehome,shewasgreetedbyahappyMaxandawarm-heartedTiffany,andtheirfriendshiphaddeepened.故事主旨Thestoryshowsthatevenstartingfromaninauspiciousbeginning,relationshipscangrowanddevelopintostrongbonds.Itemphasizesthepowerofkindnessandtheimportanceoflookingoutforoneanotherinacommunity.故事山Beginning:TiffanymovestoMaine,meetsMrsJohnsonandherdogMax.MaxinitiallyscaresTiffany.RisingAction:Overtime,Maxbecomesfriendly,andTiffanyandMrsJohnsonstarttalkingandbecomingpartofeachother'sroutines.Climax:MrsJohnsonandMaxsuddenlydisappear,andTiffanydecidestofindoutwhathappened.FallingAction:TiffanydiscoversMrsJohnsonisinthehospitalandofferstotakecareofMax.Ending:MrsJohnsonrecovers,andtheirfriendshipisstrengthened.故事发展线索Tiffany'sinitialfearofMaxduetohisaggressivebehaviorturnsintoafriendlyrelationshipastheymeetmoreoften.TheirdailyjoggingroutineisdisruptedwhenMrsJohnsonandMaxdisappear.Tiffany'ssearchleadshertothetruth,andheroffertotakecareofMaxfurtherdeepenstheirconnection.情感线索TiffanystartswithfearandannoyancetowardsMaxandMrsJohnson.Astimepasses,thisturnsintofamiliarityandfriendship.Whentheydisappear,shefeelsconcernandcuriosity.HeroffertotakecareofMaxshowsherkindnessandgrowingattachment,andthefinalreunionstrengthenstheirbond.续写布局与框架ThefirstparagraphfocusesonTiffany'seffortstofindoutwhathappenedtoMrsJohnsonandMaxandhervisittothehospital.ThesecondparagraphdetailsTiffany'soffertotakecareofMax,heractionsduringthattime,andthehappyreunionwhenMrsJohnsonrecovers.续写注意事项承接原文:Keepthecharacters'personalitiesconsistent.MrsJohnson'sinitialprotectivenessofMaxandTiffany'sgradualacceptanceshouldbemaintained.整体设计:Ensureasmoothtransitionfromthemysteryoftheirdisappearancetothediscoveryandthesubsequentevents.Theelementsofkindnessandgrowingfriendshipshouldbeclearlydeveloped.巧妙设计:UsedetailslikeTiffany'semotionalreactionsandMrsJohnson'sresponsestoshowthedeepeningrelationship.高分语句呼应原文:“Tiffany'sheartsank.Sheimmediatelymadeherwaytothehospital.”ThisechoesTiffany'sconcern,similartoheruneasinesswhentheyfirstdisappeared.高级句型:“MrsJohnsonwastouchedbyTiffany'skindness.”(usingthepassivevoicetoshowtheimpactofTiffany'saction)主题表达&意义延伸直接引语点明主旨:“Theirfriendship,whichhadstartedwithabitoffear,hadgrownintoadeepandpreciousbond.”Thisdirectlystatesthedevelopmentoftheirrelationship.促成转变，引发感悟:Tiffany'sinitialfearandhersubsequentkindnesscanmakereadersthinkabouthowfirstimpressionscanbeovercomeandthevalueofreachingouttoothers.借象征物点明主旨:MaxcanbeseenasasymboloftheconnectionbetweenTiffanyandMrsJohnson.Hisinitialaggressionandlaterfriendlinessmirrorthedevelopmentoftheirrelationship.学生写作示范Withcuriosity,Tiffanydecidedtofigureoutwhathadhappened.Sheknockedonseveraldoorsintheneighborhood,askingifanyoneknewaboutMrsJohnsonandMax.Atlast,anoldmantoldherthatMrsJohnsonhadhadabadfallandwasinthelocalhospital.Withouthesitation,Tiffanyrushedtothehospital.WhenshesawMrsJohnsonintheward,lookingpale,shefeltapangofsadness.“I'msosorrytohearaboutthis.Iwasreallyworriedaboutyou,”Tiffanysaidsoftly.MrsJohnsonmanagedaweaksmileandthankedherforcoming.

TiffanyofferedtotakecareofMaxuntilMrsJohnsonrecovered.MrsJohnson'seyesfilledwithtearsofgratitude.“You'resokind,Tiffany.Idon'tknowhowtothankyouenough.”Tiffanyassuredherthatitwasnotrouble.Shewenttotheanimalshelter,pickedupMax,andbroughthimhome.Everyday,shefedMax,playedwithhim,andtookhimforlongwalks.ShealsovisitedMrsJohnsonregularly,bringingherflowersandsharingstoriesaboutMax.WhenMrsJohnsonwasfinallydischargedfromthehospital,shefoundherhomecleanandMaxlookinghealthyandhappy.Theirfriendshiphadgrownstrongerthroughthisexperience,andTiffanyknewthatshehadmadeatruefriendforlife.【答案】参考范文：Withcuriosity,Tiffanydecidedtofigureoutwhathadhappened.Thenextday,shewenttoknockMrsJohnson’sdoor,however,receivingnoresponse.Feelingmoreconcerned,shethenaskedaroundtheneighborhood.AneighbourmentionedthatMrsJohnsonsufferedaheartattackseveraldaysagoandhadbeenbroughttohosp