专题04家人与朋友-备战2022年上海中考英语书面表达满分攻略(原卷版+解析)

（一）（2021年宝山一模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Anactofkindness”.(以“一个善意的举动”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。意思是一件很平凡微小的事情，哪怕如同赠人一只玫瑰般微不足道，但它带来的温馨都会在赠花人和爱花人的心底慢慢升腾、弥漫。因此，善待他人也是善待自己，请结合生活中的一次真实经历，谈一谈你对善良的看法。（注意：1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照搬阅读语篇内容不得分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表达仅供参考）havetroublewith/doinggiveahelphand....treatsbwithkindness...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）（2020年虹口一模）WritingWriteapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“inmymemory”.（以“我记忆中（的）”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）回顾初中几年的学习生活，你的记忆中一定有许多难忘的人、事、物或地点，请选取一个角度谈谈你的想法或感受。（注意：1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）（2020年嘉定一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“help(s)megrow”（以“助我成长”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）生活中的很多事或人能帮助我们成长。理想、品格、老师、亲人、朋友……都为我们的成长助力，请选取一个方面，结合发生在你自己身上的经历，来写一写他（它）是如何助力你成长的。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表达仅供参考）encouragesb.todo...dosb.afavourwiththehelpof...makegreatprogress________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）（2021年普陀区二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“_______haswonmyrespect”.（以“……赢得了我的尊敬”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）提示：AuntSandy用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心着你的成长？请先补全标题，再结合体事例谈谈自己的感受。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）（2021年松江区二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothefollowinginformation.意大利爷爷Paterno的励志故事使它成为很多青少年的偶像。相信在生活学习中你也有一位想效仿或追随的榜样。请以“AmodelIwanttofollow”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（六）（2021年闵行区二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myfunnestfamilymemory”(根据提示，以“我最有趣的家庭回忆”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)提示:回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。请结合你的亲身经历，描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿，并谈谈感想。(注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（七）（2019年青浦区一模）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ThemostvaluablelessonI’veeverlearned”（请以“我学到的最珍贵的一课”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingasareference(以下内容仅供参考）Whoorwhatgaveyouthemostvaluablelesson?Whydoyouthinkitisthemostvaluablelesson?Whatwillyoudoafterlearningthislesson?注意:抄袭试卷中内容不得分。文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（八）（2019年浦东新区一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“HowluckyIamtohave_________”（以“我多么幸运能够拥有__________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格，请在答题纸上把作文标题补充完整，如：atruefriend，awarmfamily，aninterestingbook……）在学习和生活中你可能因为拥有一位真诚的朋友、一个温暖的家、一本有趣的书等等而感到幸运，请选取一个方面谈谈自己的亲身经历，并说明为何感到幸运。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不子评分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表达仅供参考）BesatisfiedwithEncouragesb.todosthDosbafavorWiththehelpof________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（九）（2019年虹口区一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Iadmiremyself”（以“夸夸我自己”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：为了给初中四年的学习生活留下美好的回忆，你们班級策划了一次主题斑会。要求每位同学以“夸夸我自己”为题，用一至三个形容词概括自己的优点，并通过举例子或列举理由加以说明。（注意；短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十）（2019年金山区一模）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iamnolongeralittlechild”以“我不再是一个孩子”为题写一篇至少60字的短文。背景：如今，我们的父母一方面对我们百般呵护，一方面又时常抱怨我们长不大。请给你的父母写一封信，证明你不再是一个孩子了（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数）。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表达和图片仅供参考）※usedto※makeme※（be）fullof（注意：信中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十一）在中国传统文化中，“家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂，才是完整的家，温暖而有力量。请你结合下图，以“Home”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文。让外国朋友了解中国文化中的“家”。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十二）Lifeisfulloflove爱是荒漠甘泉，滋养你的心灵；爱是长夜明灯，指引你前进的方向。生活中爱无处不在，它或来自你的父母、家人；或来自你的老师、朋友、同学甚至陌生人。请你用英文以“Lifeisfulloflove”为题写一篇短文，叙述一个你经历过充满爱的故事。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十三）（2020年松江区二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Mygains”.(疫情期间，我们足不出户，但是我们看到听到了很多感人事迹，我们也经历了一段不同寻常的学习生活。无论是无私奉献的白衣天使或社区志愿者还是我们自己的生活经历都给我们带来了不同的感悟和收获。请结合这些感人事迹或自身经历，完成一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Thefollowingexpressionsarejustforreference:onlinelearningmovingmedicalworkersimpressivecommunityvolunteerswarm-hearted注意:短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十四）（2020年宝山区二模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Adaytoremember.(以“值得记住的一天”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)Thefollowingquestionsareforreferenceonly.(以下问题提示仅供参考）1.Isthereadaythatyouwillalwaysremember?2.Whathappenedonthatday?Wherewereyou?3.Howdidyoufeelaboutit?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十五）（2020年嘉定区二模）Inatleast60words,writealettertothepersonyouwanttoexpressyourthanks.（以"Athank-youletterto”为题，写一封不少于60个词的感谢信，标点符号不占格）2020年是不平凡的一年，在这段特殊的日子里，你一定感受到了父母、老师、朋友或是一些陌生人给你带来的温暖和感动，请结合自己的经历，写一封信给他(他们)，表达你的感激之情。Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表达仅供参考）thank...forbemovedbyprovide...with________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（十六）假如你是李明，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容，写一篇题为“ALettertoMyParents”的短文，用于投稿。注意：1.文中必须包含三个方面的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3.词数:80～100；4.文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。内容要点参考词汇Parents’carecookfood,take…toandfromschool,lookafter…Parents’lovetrust,advise,encourage…Mythanks…ALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LovefromLiMing（一）（2021年宝山一模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Anactofkindness”.(以“一个善意的举动”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。意思是一件很平凡微小的事情，哪怕如同赠人一只玫瑰般微不足道，但它带来的温馨都会在赠花人和爱花人的心底慢慢升腾、弥漫。因此，善待他人也是善待自己，请结合生活中的一次真实经历，谈一谈你对善良的看法。（注意：1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照搬阅读语篇内容不得分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表达仅供参考）havetroublewith/doinggiveahelphand....treatsbwithkindness...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AnactofkindnessHereisatouchingmomentinmylifethatlwillneverforget.lstillrememberthatwasarainyday.lfailedanexam,andlfeltveryupset.What’sworse,Ididn’tbringanumbrella.Countlessraindropsbeatagainstmybody.Suddenly,theraindropsdisappeared.Whenllookedup,lsawabigumbrellaandmydeskmate,Mike.Hesaid,“Anexamcan’tstandforeverything.lbelieveyoucangetgoodgradesnexttime.”Hiswordsreallytouchedmyheartandcheeredmeup.Afterthat,lstudiedharderandmadegreatprogress.It’sourdutytoshowkindnesstoothersaroundus.Ithinkeveryoneshouldtreatotherswithkindness,whenhavetroublewithsomething.【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时结合题目要求，进行作答写作，第一段引出话题“善意的举动”；第二段记叙一次善意的举动；第三段说明自己对善意的看法。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；记叙善意的举动这件事情，时态采用一般过去时为主，说明自己对于善良的看法，采用一般现在时为主。需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。（二）（2020年虹口一模）WritingWriteapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“inmymemory”.（以“我记忆中（的）”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）回顾初中几年的学习生活，你的记忆中一定有许多难忘的人、事、物或地点，请选取一个角度谈谈你的想法或感受。（注意：1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文AnunforgettableexperienceinmymemoryEverybodyhassomethingunforgettable.Forme,Istillrememberthedaymydadtaughtmehowtorideabike.Iwasafraidtorideabike.Butmydad'sencouragementmademedeterminedtolearnit.Atfirst,Ithoughthewasalwaysbehindme,holdingtheseatinordertokeepmefromfallingoff.Iwashappywiththis,butherealizedhecan'tholdmeupallmylife.Andhetoldmethatonedayhewouldhavetoleave,soImustbeindependent.Afteralongtime,Ifinallylearnedit.Thisunforgettableexperiencetoldmewecan'tdependonanyoneelsebutourselves.【解析】【详解】题干解读：这是一篇半命题作文。要求补全题目“inmymemory”并根据题目完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。例文点评：例文采用一段式；使用第一人称，时态选用一般过去时。向我们介绍了自己难忘的回忆。高分亮点：短语：somethingunforgettable；beafraidtodosth；inorderto；dependon等。句型：Forme,Istillrememberthedaymydadtaughtmehowtorideabike.使用了定语从句，that被省略。Thisunforgettableexperiencetoldmewecan'tdependonanyoneelsebutourselves宾语从句，that被省略。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（三）（2020年嘉定一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“help(s)megrow”（以“助我成长”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）生活中的很多事或人能帮助我们成长。理想、品格、老师、亲人、朋友……都为我们的成长助力，请选取一个方面，结合发生在你自己身上的经历，来写一写他（它）是如何助力你成长的。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（以下表达仅供参考）encouragesb.todo...dosb.afavourwiththehelpof...makegreatprogress________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MaryhelpsmegrowLookingbackonthepastfouryears’study,therehavebeenmanydifficultiesformenotonlyinstudybutalsoinlife.Thereisanunforgettableexperience.ItwasthefirsttimethatIdidn’tpassanimportantexam.Atthattime,IwassodepressedthatIcouldhardlycontrolmyself.AfterknowingthatIwasinbadmood,myfriendMaryspentallherfreetimecompanyingmeandneverstoppedencouragingme.Withherencouragement,Itriedmybestinstudy.Finally,Isucceededinmakingprogress,andIrealizedthathowimportantagoodfriendwastome.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，开头先概括描述，紧接着第二段围绕着受感触的事展开写。2.例文点评：文章以第一人称来叙述，时态采用一般过去时为主。描述事情情节时，条例清楚，语句表达通顺，逻辑性强。3.高分亮点：短语：notonly…butalso；spendsometimedoingsth句子：ItwasthefirsttimethatIdidn’tpassanimportantexam中that引导的定语从句；Irealizedthathowimportantagoodfriendwastome中that引导的宾语从句。（四）（2021年普陀区二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“_______haswonmyrespect”.（以“……赢得了我的尊敬”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）提示：AuntSandy用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心着你的成长？请先补全标题，再结合体事例谈谈自己的感受。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyfatherhaswonmyrespectThepeopleIrespectthemostismyfather.Heisadoctor.Healwaysbusywithwork.SinceIcouldremember,hehasneverspentawholeweekendtostaywithme.HegoestothehospitalveryearlybeforeIgetup,andcomesbackhomeafterIsleep.ButIdoesn’tmatteratall.Heisaherotome.Hedevotesalmostallthetimetohispatients,andmanylivesaresaved.Healwayssaid,amanshouldhavedignity,integrity,honor,andmostofall,behelpfultoothers.Thisaffectedmedeeply,soIworkhardsothatsomedayIcanbethemanlikemyfather.（五）（2021年松江区二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothefollowinginformation.意大利爷爷Paterno的励志故事使它成为很多青少年的偶像。相信在生活学习中你也有一位想效仿或追随的榜样。请以“AmodelIwanttofollow”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】AmodelIwanttofollowIhaveamodelinmyheartinsoccerfield--Messi,themodelIwanttofollow.Frommyprospective,inthepresentsoccerfield,Idonotthinkanyoneelsecanmatchhim.Firstofall,hisgreatballcontrollingskillsbroughtaworldoffansfantasticexclamation.Heisnotonlyfastbutalsocaneasilycrossthedefenderswhointendtostophim.Moreover,itishistalent,whichcanevenmatchthegodofsoccer--Marodona,hisdiligenceandpreciousqualitythatdeeplyattractme.Ultimately,heisthemodelwithdistinguishedcharacteristicIwanttofollowbecauseIamfondofsoccer,therealartisticsoccer.Therefore,Iwillstudyhardandtrymybesttopromotemysoccerskilltocatchupwithhiminordertobeanoutstandingsoccerplayer.（六）（2021年闵行区二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myfunnestfamilymemory”(根据提示，以“我最有趣的家庭回忆”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)提示:回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。请结合你的亲身经历，描述你和家人在一起时最有趣的事儿，并谈谈感想。(注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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