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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一个完整的短文。ThomasandChristineNoctorhavelivedandraisedtheirfamilyinthehomeforthreedecades.Theyandtheir12yearoldgrandsonDean,wholiveswiththem,hadmostoftheirpersonalbelongingsdamagedordestroyedafterafirebrokeoutinThomas’homeofficeonSaturdayevening.AllyNoctorwasinthehomewithhermother,father,nephewDean,andbrotherJameswhentheincidenthappened.“MymomhasCOPD(慢性阻寒性肺病)soIsaid‘justgetouttheback’,andshetookthedogouttheback,”Allyrecalled.“Mybrothercamerunningdownlookingforafireextinguisher(灭火器),andmydadwasscreaming,‘Fire!’”ThefirestartedintheboxroomIt’sThomashomeoffice.He’djustdoneitup.Itwasclearlyanelectricalfaultbutnoonethoughtatthetimetoturnofftheelectricity.Theroomstartedfillingwithsmokequicklyandtheyhadtoleaveimmediately.Thehouseislocatedjustashortwalkawayfromthefirestation.Butwhenneighborscalled,theavailabletruckswerealreadyout—sonearly20minuteshadpassedbeforethefirecrewarrived.Thankfully,theymanagedtopreventthefirefromspreadingtotheattic(阁楼)ortoanymorehomesinthemunity.Thefamilythenwentbackinsidethehousetoinvestigatewhathadhappenedandsurveythedamagecaused.Dean’sgamingPCwasmelted,toysweremelted,andeventheshowerwasmelted.Alltheirclothescouldn’tbetakenout.“Thedownstairsisokay,butthereissmokedamageandwaterdamage.Andalloftheupstairsispletelydamaged.Mymomisstillinshock.She’sjuststaringintospace,”Allysaid.ButAllywasquicktopraisehermunity,whowererighttheretohelptheNoctorsgetoutofthehousethemomenttheysensedtroubleandeveryoneofthefamilygottimelyhelp.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置上作答。Allyranoutthedoorwithoutshoesonwhenescaping.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThetemporaryhouseisOKbutNewYearmaybedifficult.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________火灾故事续写一、续写分析第一段续写分析:此段围绕Ally逃生后的遭遇展开。故事线从火灾发生时Ally赤脚跑出家门,到邻居们对她及家人的及时救助。高频单词有escape(逃跑)、chaos(混乱)、distress(痛苦)、neighbor(邻居)、support(支持)。短语包括ranout(跑出)、inthechaos(在混乱中)、watching...billowing(看着……滚滚而来)、brought...over(拿来)、provide...for(为……提供)。主旨升华句如:“Intimesofcrisis,thekindnessofneighborscanturnatragedyintoamomentofhope.”(在危机时刻,邻居的善意能将悲剧转变为充满希望的时刻。)“Theimmediateresponseofthemunityshowedthathumanityshinesbrightestinthefaceofadversity.”(社区的迅速反应表明,人性在逆境中最为闪耀。)第二段续写分析:该段聚焦于火灾后家庭在新年期间的状况以及社区的关爱。故事线从家庭难以适应临时住所、新年临近的悲伤,到社区组织特别聚会带来温暖。高频单词有temporary(临时的)、adjust(适应)、celebration(庆祝)、kindness(善良)、munity(社区)。短语有tryingtoadjustto(努力适应)、theapproachingNewYear(即将到来的新年)、loomwith(笼罩着)、organizinga...gathering(组织一场……聚会)、bringback(带回)。主旨升华句比如:“Eveninthedarkestoftimes,thepowerofmunitycanlightupthepathtorecovery.”(即使在最黑暗的时刻,社区的力量也能照亮恢复之路。)“Themunity'seffortsduringtheNewYearnotonlybroughtjoybutalsoreaffirmedthestrengthofhumanconnection.”(社区在新年期间的努力不仅带来了欢乐,还再次证实了人与人之间联系的力量。)二、故事线第一段故事线:火灾突发,Ally赤脚逃出家门,震惊地看着自家房子起火。邻居们发现她的困境,纷纷伸出援手,送拖鞋、毛毯,提供临时住所,慈善机构也送来生活必需品,家人感受到社区支持带来的希望。第二段故事线:家庭搬到临时住所,新年将至,因无法在自家庆祝而难过。社区得知后,组织特别的新年聚会,装饰临时住所、准备大餐,让Noctors一家深受感动,意识到社区的爱和支持是他们面对未来的坚实力量。三、高频单词第一段高频单词:escape(逃跑)、chaos(混乱)、distress(痛苦)、neighbor(邻居)、slipper(拖鞋)、blanket(毛毯)、charity(慈善机构)、necessity(必需品)第二段高频单词:temporary(临时的)、adjust(适应)、celebration(庆祝)、sadness(悲伤)、munity(社区)、organize(组织)、decorate(装饰)、meal(餐食)四、短语第一段短语:ranout(跑出)、inthechaos(在混乱中)、watching...billowing(看着……滚滚而来)、brought...over(拿来)、provide...for(为……提供)、offertodo(主动提出做)、sendover(送来)、aglimmerofhope(一线希望)第二段短语:tryingtoadjustto(努力适应)、theapproachingNewYear(即将到来的新年)、loomwith(笼罩着)、organizinga...gathering(组织一场……聚会)、decorate...with(用……装饰)、preparea...meal(准备一顿……餐食)、bringback(带回)、bedeeplytouchedby(被……深深感动)五、主旨升华句第一段主旨升华句:“Intimesofcrisis,thekindnessofneighborscanturnatragedyintoamomentofhope.”(在危机时刻,邻居的善意能将悲剧转变为充满希望的时刻。)“Theimmediateresponseofthemunityshowedthathumanityshinesbrightestinthefaceofadversity.”(社区的迅速反应表明,人性在逆境中最为闪耀。)“Thesupportfromneighborsandcharitiesdemonstratedthepowerofunityinoveringdifficulties.”(邻居和慈善机构的支持展示了团结克服困难的力量。)第二段主旨升华句:“Eveninthedarkestoftimes,thepowerofmunitycanlightupthepathtorecovery.”(即使在最黑暗的时刻,社区的力量也能照亮恢复之路。)“Themunity'seffortsduringtheNewYearnotonlybroughtjoybutalsoreaffirmedthestrengthofhumanconnection.”(社区在新年期间的努力不仅带来了欢乐,还再次证实了人与人之间联系的力量。)“ThisspecialNewYear'sgatheringsymbolizedtheresilienceofthefamilyandtheunwaveringsupportoftheirmunity.”(这次特别的新年聚会象征着家庭的坚韧和社区坚定不移的支持。)六、写作示范示范一Allyranoutthedoorwithoutshoesonwhenescaping.Theintenseheatandthicksmokepropelledherforwardinablindpanic.Standingoutside,herheartracedasshewitnessedtheinfernoconsumingherhome.Neighborsrushedtoherside,theirfacesfilledwithconcern.Oneneighborquicklyfetchedapairofoldbutfortableslippers,whileanotherwrappedasoftblanketaroundhertremblingshoulders.Someneighborsimmediatelycalledlocalcharities,andwithinhours,boxesoffoodandessentialitemsarrived.Theirselflessactionswereabeaconoflightintheotherwisedarksituation,makingAllyandherfamilyfeelasenseofwarmthandsecuritydespitetheloss.ThetemporaryhouseisOKbutNewYearmaybedifficult.Thefamilyhasbeenstrugglingtoetotermswiththeirnewlivingarrangement.AstheNewYearapproaches,theabsenceoftheirfamiliarhomeandtraditionsweighsheavilyontheirhearts.However,themunityhasonceagainsteppedin.NeighborsarebusyplanningasurpriseNewYear'sparty.Theyaregatheringdecorations,bakingdelicioustreats,andarrangingmusicalperformances.ThiscollectiveeffortisnotjustaboutcelebratingthenewbeginningbutalsoaboutmendingthebrokenspiritsoftheNoctors.Thefamily,touchedbythisoutpouringoflove,realizesthathomeisnotjustaphysicalplacebutthepeoplewhocareandsupportthem.示范二Allyranoutthedoorwithoutshoesonwhenescaping.Thesuddennessofthefireleftherdisoriented,andshestumbledoutside,herfeetstingingonthecoldground.Thesightofherhomeengulfedinflameswasheartwrenching.Neighbors,alertedbythemotion,werequicktoact.Theybroughthershoesandofferedwordsoffort.Someopenedtheirhomes,invitingthefamilytotakeshelter.Localcharities,informedofthesituation,dispatchedvolunteerswithbagsoffoodandclothing.Themunity'simmediateandcoordinatedresponsewasoverwhelming,givingtheNoctorsthecouragetofacethedifficultdaysahead.ThetemporaryhouseisOKbutNewYearmaybedifficult.Adjustingtothetemporaryhousehasbeenachallengeforthefamily.TheapproachingNewYear,usuallyatimeofgreatcelebration,nowseemsgloomy.Butthemunityhasaplantochangethat.TheyareorganizingaNewYear'seventatthelocalmunitycenter.Volunteersareworkinghardtodecoratethecenterwithfestivelightsandstreamers.TheyarealsocollectingdonationsforaspecialNewYear'sdinnerfortheNoctors.Thisgestureofkindnessisapowerfulreminderthatinthefaceofdisaster,themunity'sloveandsupportcanturnadifficultsituationaround.TheNoctorsarefilledwithgratitude,knowingthattheyarenotaloneinrebuildingtheirlives.参考答案Allyranoutthedoorwithoutshoesonwhenescaping.Anei
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