读后续写续写选狗故事讲义-广东省惠州市实验中学河源高级中学等校高二下学期4月联考英语试题

读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasmybrother'sidea.Let'sgetMomapetdogforherbirthday.Itwouldmakeherhappy.Ithoughtitwasagoodidea,asMomhadalwayswantedtoownadog.Bythetimeourconversationended,Ihadmytask:findourmotheradog.Afteracarefulsearch,Ifinallyfoundanadfordogsinalocalnewspaper.Anearbyfamilyhadadogwhohadjustgivenbirthtofivemalepuppies（小狗）！Allhadhadtheirfirstvaccines（疫苗），andwouldbereadytoleavetheirmominafewweeks.Igavethemacall.Themanwhoansweredthephonelistenedpatientlytomystoryandsetadateforustomeetthedogs.Whenthedayarrived,Igotintomybrother'scar.Wepulledupinfrontofsomehousesthatsatalonganarrowstreet.Aswesteppedontothesidewalk，weweregreetedbynoisybarks（吠叫声）.Fourdogshadpositionedthemselvesonthebackofasofaandwerewatchingusthroughalargewindow.Weclimbedontotheporch(门廊)andrangthedoorbell.Atallmanwithgrayinghairandakindsmileopenedthedoor.AsIreachedtoshakehishand,Icouldseethepuppiesbehindhim,runningtogettous.Eachpuppyworeadifferentcolorstringaroundhisneck.Wemettheman'swife,whoworeasimilarfriendlysmileandweledustoherhome.Wemetthepuppies'parentsandthensetaboutthebusinessofselectingafriendforourmother.Therewerefourpuppiesandfourvisitors;themanhandedeachofusadog.Threeofthepuppieslookedupatuswithlarge,curiouseyes.Thefourthone,whoIwasholding,begantowiggleexcitedlyandkissmyface."Let'stakethisone!He'stheone!Lookhowlovelyheis!"Isaid.AsfarasIwasconcerned,itwasadonedeal.注意：1.续写词数应为150词左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Twoweekslater,wepickedupthedogandhidhimaroundthecornerinmymom'slivingroomwhilesheopenedherbirthdaygifts.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________续写选狗故事续写分析第一段续写分析故事线：哥哥提出花时间了解每只小狗，“我”虽不耐烦但同意。众人与小狗互动，“我”怀中的小狗活泼且与“我”互动频繁，而其他小狗表现各异。最终哥哥认可“我”选的小狗最适合妈妈。短语：takesometime（花些时间）；gettoknow（了解）；incontrast（相比之下）；abitshy（有点害羞）；interestedin（对……感兴趣）；exploringtheroom（探索房间）；aspecialconnection（特殊联系）；noddedinagreement（点头同意）主旨升华句：①Thisprocessofgettingtoknowthepuppiestaughtustheimportanceofpatienceinmakingtherightchoice.（这个了解小狗的过程教会我们在做正确选择时耐心的重要性。）②Throughinteractingwiththepuppies,werealizedthatsometimesthebestconnectionisformedthroughgenuineandimmediateaffection.（通过与小狗们互动，我们意识到有时最好的联系是通过真诚且即时的喜爱建立起来的。）③Theuniquecharmofeachpuppyremindedusthateverycreaturehasitsownspecialqualitieswaitingtobediscovered.（每只小狗独特的魅力提醒我们，每个生物都有其等待被发现的特殊品质。）④Intheend,ourcollectivedecisionmakingnotonlyfoundtheperfectpetbutalsostrengthenedthebondamongfamilymembers.（最终，我们共同的决策不仅找到了完美的宠物，还加强了家庭成员之间的联系。）⑤Thisexperienceofchoosingapuppywasmorethanjustatask;itwasajourneyofunderstandingandunitywithinourfamily.（这次挑选小狗的经历不仅仅是一项任务，更是我们家庭中理解与团结的一次旅程。）第二段续写分析故事线：两周后，我们接回小狗并藏在妈妈客厅角落。妈妈开心拆完其他礼物后，我们带她到角落，小狗冲向妈妈，妈妈惊喜落泪，认为这是最好的生日礼物，我们也因计划成功而开心。短语：pickedup（接走，捡起）；hid...aroundthecorner（藏在角落）；openedherbirthdaygifts（打开她的生日礼物）；exchangedexcitedglances（交换兴奋的眼神）；led...to（带领……到）；rushedtowards（冲向）；burstintotearsofjoy（喜极而泣）；scooped...up（抱起）主旨升华句：①ThismomentofMom'spurehappinessshowedusthatthegreatestgiftsinlifearethosethatefromtheheart.（妈妈这一刻纯粹的快乐向我们表明，生命中最伟大的礼物是那些发自内心的礼物。）②Thepuppy'swarmweleandMom'semotionalresponsewereabeautifulreminderofthepowerofloveandsurprise.（小狗热情的迎接和妈妈激动的反应美好地提醒着我们爱与惊喜的力量。）③OurcarefullyplannedsurprisenotonlybroughtjoytoMombutalsocreatedapreciousmemorythatwouldbecherishedforalifetime.（我们精心策划的惊喜不仅给妈妈带来了快乐，还创造了一个将被珍藏一生的珍贵回忆。）④ThesightofMomandthepuppytogethersymbolizedthebeginningofanewchapterfilledwithloveandpanionshipinourfamily.（妈妈和小狗在一起的画面象征着我们家庭中充满爱与陪伴的新篇章的开始。）⑤Thisbirthdaygiftgivingexperiencetaughtusthatsmallgesturesoflovecanhaveaprofoundimpactonourlovedones'lives.（这次送生日礼物的经历教会我们，小小的爱的举动可以对我们所爱的人的生活产生深远的影响。）写作示范一Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem.Reluctantly,Iputasidemyeagernessandjoinedin.Asweplayedwiththepuppies,InoticedthattheoneIheldearlierwasnotonlylivelybutalsoextremelyintelligent.ItquicklylearnedtofetchasmallballItossed,whichmademeevenmoreconvincedofmychoice.Mybrother,observingthepuppy'scleverness,alsohadtoadmititscharm.Afteraheartwarminginteraction,wewerecertainthiswastheoneforMom.Twoweekslater,wepickedupthedogandhidhimaroundthecornerinmymom'slivingroomwhilesheopenedherbirthdaygifts.Momwasinhighspirits,enjoyingeverypresent.Whenallthegiftswereunwrapped,weguidedhertothesurprisespot.ThemomentthepuppysawMom,itleapedforward,waggingitstailvigorously.Momwasstunnedforasecondandthenabroadsmilespreadacrossherface.Shecroucheddownandembracedthepuppytightly,saying,"Youguysreallyknowhowtomakemehappy!"Thisspecialgiftnotonlybroughtanewmembertoourfamilybutalsoaddedmorewarmthtoourhome.写作示范二Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem.Despitemyinitialimpatience,Idecidedtogiveitatry.Asweengagedwiththepuppies,theoneinmyarmsdisplayedanendearingprotectiveness.Whenanotherpuppygotabittooclosetome,itgentlynudgeditaway,asiftosay"Thishumanismine!".Thissweetbehaviormeltedmyheartevenmore.Afterseeingthis,mybrothersmiledandagreedthatitwastheperfectfitforMom.Twoweekslater,wepickedupthedogandhidhimaroundthecornerinmymom'slivingroomwhilesheopenedherbirthdaygifts.Momwaschattingmerrilyassheunwrappedthepresents.Onceshewasdone,weledhertothehiddenpuppy.ThepuppyboundedtowardsMom,showeringherwithlicks.Momletoutadelightedscreamandthenheldthepuppyclosetoherchest."Thisisbeyondmywildestdreams!"shecried.Thisexperiencetaughtusthatthemostpreciousgiftsarethosethatbringunexpectedjoy,andweweregladtohavemadeMom'sbirthdaysomemorable.参考答案Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem.Wespentthenexthoursittingonthefloorplayingwithagroupofpuppies.Finally,wesettledonadifferentpuppyforourmom.Hewasthesmallestandweakestofthedo