Unit 2 Home sweet home复习课件人教版英语八年级上册 写作提优练

Unit2HomeSweetHome写作提优练[写作导引]本单元以“温馨之家”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①家庭生活中的温暖氛围;②家庭生活中家务活的积极参与;③家庭生活中的爱与感恩。[写作任务]俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上,老师开展了一次以“Whatcanwedotomakehomeahappierplace?”为主题的讨论,同学们交流了自己的想法。请结合图片,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊EnglishLearning投稿。要求：1.短文须包括所给要点信息,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名以及地名;3.词数80左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecoulddotomakehomeahappierplace.____________________________________________________________________________________________________[精彩范文]InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecoulddotomakehomeahappierplace.We’veshareddifferentideas.Somesayit’sagoodideatospendmoretimewithfamily.④

Theybelievefamilymembersshouldsharehappinessandworries①.Whentheymeetproblems,familymemberscandosomethingtocheerthemup②.⑤Homeisalwaysthefirstplaceforthemtogethelpandsupport.Othersthinkit’snecessarytorememberfamily’sbirthdaysandpreparesmallpresents.Inmyopinion③,showingloveforfamilyisreallyimportant.Sometimes,eventhesmallestthinglikewalkingwithfamilymakesthemhappier.亮点词块①sharehappinessandworries分享快乐和忧虑②cheerthemup让他们振作起来③inmyopinion在我看来高分句子④Somesayit’sagoodideatospendmoretimewithfamily.

(省略that的宾语从句)⑤Whentheymeetproblems,familymemberscandosomethingtocheerthemup.(when引导的时间状语从句)跟踪演练英文有句谚语“Noplacelikehome.”,家是幸福温暖的港湾。假如你是Sandy,请你以“Home,SweetHome”为题写一篇短文介绍你的家。要求：1.词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.内容可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;3.文中不得出现真实的人

名、校名和地名等相关信息。Home,SweetHomeIamSandy._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Home,SweetHomeIamSandy.Ilivewithmyfamily,andwesharemany

happymoments.Homeismyfavoriteplace.Itiswarmandfull

oflove.Myroomissmallbutcomfortable,withsoftblanketsand

adeskforstudying.Inthelivingroom,wewatchTVandtalk

together.Mymomcooksdeliciousfoodinthekitchen,andthe

smellmakesmefeelhappy.NomatterwhereIgo,Ialwaysmiss

myhome.I’mluckythatIhaveasweetfamily.Inthefuture,Iwi