专题09 未来与规划-备战2022年上海中考英语书面表达满分攻略（解析版）

（一）（2021年崇明区二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Inthreeyears’time”（以“三年以后”为题写一遍不少于60个词的短文，标定符合不占格。）你是否想象过，三年以后你的生活或者周围的世界会发生产怎样的变化？你对三年以后的自己周围的世界有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Inthreeyears’timeThereisnodenyingthattheworldischangingfast.Idobelievethatmylifewillbedifferentinthreeyears'time.Ononehand,itwillbemoreconvenient,wecanstudyathome.Whetherwegotoschoolorstayathomedependsonourchoices.Certainly,unlikethelastspecialyear,wehadtostudyonlinebecauseofthevirus.Ontheotherhand,theenvironmentmaybecomeworseespeciallywhitepollution.Sadly,Thenumberofpeoplewholiketothroweverywhereisstillrising.Ihopetheworldwillbemorebeautiful.Toachievethis,Ineedtolearnmoreknowledgeabouthowtoprotecttheenvironment.Callonmorepeopletotakepartinfightingagainstpollution.Onlybyworkingtogetherwillourfuturebebetterin3years.（二）（2019年崇明区一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic＂Mydreamwillcometrue“（以“我的未来不是梦”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）你对自己的未来一定有美好的梦想：但梦想的实现取决于勤奋、努力等诸多因素。请结合你自己的梦想，谈谈你将如何使美梦成真。Thefollowingwordsorphrasesareonlyforreference．（以下词或短语仅供参考）Mydreamistobe/dowiththehelpetruetakepartinhardworkingrealize（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】MydreamwillcometrueThereisnodoubtthateverypersonhasadream.Somepeoplemaywanttobeasuperstarandothersarewillingtoberichmen.Butmydreamistobeateacherjustlikemymom.Asweallknow,nobodycangainsuccesswithoutcontinuoushardworking.Inordertomakemydreamcometrue,IrealizethatIshouldtakepartinvariouskindsofactivitieswhichareorganizedbymyteacherssothatIcanimprovemyselftosomeextentandmakemyselfaperfectperson.What’smore,IknowthatifIwanttobeateacher,Imustbeapersonwhohasagoodcommandofknowledge.Withthehelpofmymom,Iknowthatnopainsnogains.WheneverandwhereverImeetdifficulties,mymomwillgivemeconfidenceandcourage.Inbrief,inordertorealizemydream,IwillsparenoefforttostudyhardandwhenIhavetroubleandlearnfrommyclassmatesaswellasmyteachers.IfirmlybelievethatIcanmakeit.（三）三年将尽，未来已来，我们如何成为更好的自己？请以“ToBeaBetterMan”为题，写一篇英文短文，从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等方面进行描述。写作要求：1.参考所给提示，可适当发挥；2.条理清晰，语句通顺；3.文中不得出现姓名、学校名等个人真实信息；4.短文词数在80至120词之间。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ToBeaBetterManEveryonewantstobebetter.Inordertoimprovemyself,Ihavemadesomeplans.Firstofall,Iwillstudyharder.Iamgoingtolistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandfinishthehouseworkontime.WhenImeetdifficulties,Iwilltrymybesttosolvethem.Second,Iplantopayattentiontomyhealth.Iwilleatmo