Unit5-写作课-公开课课件（二）

UNIT5MUSIC

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——固阳县第一中学授课班级：高一（3）班授课教师：边颖Lookatthepictures.Find

thesame（相同的）word

ineverypage(页）

Thesloganof2008BeijingOlympicGames:oneworld,

onedream.Fengjie

dreamstomarryahandsomeandrichhusband.Theboysare

dreamingaboutbeingsoilders.Whichwordappearsagainandagain?dreamWhattowriteaboutdreamsinEnglish?Whattowriteaboutyourdream?1.theimportanceofdreams(梦想的意义）2.introduceyourdreams(描述你的梦想）3.thereasonsforyourdream(有梦想的原因）4.theactionsneededtotake(需要采取的措施）5.futureplanning（未来的计划）Jobs：医生doctor;工程师engineer;

演员actor;记者reporter;

导游tourguide;烘焙师baker;厨师cook;农夫farmer;律师lawyerReview复习与回顾1.dream(n./v.)梦想2.haveadream有梦想3.dreamtobe梦想成为4.dreamaboutdoing梦想做5.inorderto为了6.inthefuture在未来7.thereasonwhy...的原因是Preview预习与巩固1.realizeone'sdream实现梦想2.formagoodhabit养成良好习惯3.tryone'sbesttodo尽力做某事4.devoteoneselftodoingsth/sth全神贯注做某事

Step1theimportanceofyourdream梦想的意义Let'strytomakesentence.(造句练习）提示：playanimportantpartin

在...中扮演重要角色eg:Dreams___________________

inourlife.梦想在我们的生命中扮演着重要角色。areplayinganimportantpartStep2IntroduceYourDream介绍你的梦想Let'strytomakesentence.(造句练习）提示：dreamtobe+职业梦想成为..Idreamtobeadoctor.我梦想成为一名医生。举一反三：苏志超梦想成为一名篮球运动员。SuZhichao______________

abasketballplayerdreamstobeAskandAnswer1.Whatisyourdream?Idreamtobe()().2.Whatisher/hisdream?She/Hedreamstobe()().Step3describethereasonsforhavingsuchadream描述拥有这样梦想的原因例子：Thereasonwhy

Iwanttobeateacher

isthatIamfondofteaching.我想要做老师的原因是我喜欢教学。befondofdoing喜欢做某事1）

dancerbefondofdancingsingerbefondofsingingdesigner--befondofdesigning拓展2

）earnmoney赚钱

3

）helpothers帮助他人

4

）gainhappinessandsatisfaction

获得幸福感和满足感提示：Thereasonwhyisthat...

的原因是Let'stry1.我选择做（歌手）的原因是（我喜欢唱歌）ThereasonwhyIwanttobea______isthat_________________.2.我选择做（设计师）的原因是（它能带来幸福和满足感）。ThereasonwhyIwanttobea______isthat____________________________.singerIamfondofsingingdesigneritcanbringhappinessandsatisfactionStep4youractionstorealizeyourdreams实现梦想需要采取的行动提示：inorderto为了

realizeone'sdream实现梦想例子：为了实现梦想，我会提高自己。Inordertorealizemydream,Iwillimprovemyself.

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相关短语：

拓展

1.形成学习的好习惯

formagoodhabitoflearning

2.提高自身

improveoneself

Let'stry1.为了实现梦想，我要提高自己。Inorderto____________,Iwill__________.2.为了实现梦想，我要养成良好的学习习惯。__________torealizemydream,Iwill________________________.realizemydreamimprovemyselfInordertoformagoodhabitoflearningStep5Futureplanning未来计划提示：devoteoneselfto+(n.)/doing专心致志做某事例子：如果我能做一名老师，我将会专心致志的教书育人。IfIcanbeateacher,Iwilldevotemyselfto

teachingstudents.举一反三：如果我能做一名警察，我将会专心致志的工作。IfIcanbe________,iwill___________tomyjob.apolicemandevotemyself

总结1.梦想的意义

playanimportantpartin2.你的梦想是

Idreamtobe+职业3.有梦想的原因

thereasonwhy...isthat…4.实现梦想行动

Inordertorealizedream,Iwillimproveoneself5.未来计划：

IfIcanbe…Iwilldevotemyselfto

Let'shaveatryWritedownyourdreamsonyournotebooks.Conclusion英文写作需注意的细节：（1）语言准确：文章在标点符号，语法，用词上无误。时态：一般现在时（2）词句丰富：用词避免重复琐碎，适当时候用高级词汇，比如我的梦想是…Ihaveadream,It's…;Idreamtobe…明显后者更高级（3）行文流畅：比如需要继续说明拓展的时候，用besidesthat,inaddition,exceptthat等连接会让文章显得更加有序。（4）注意开头结尾。开门见山，直击要点，结尾归纳前文，进行总结。（5）控制字数，符合要求。MyDream

Dreams___(be)playing___importantpartinourlife.Idream______ateacher.Thereason___IwanttobeateacheristhatIamfondof_____(teach).What‘smore,Itcanearnmoneyformyfamily.Moreimportantly,Igainmuch_______(happy)andsatisfactionfromit._______（为了）realizemydream,Iwillformagoodhabitof______(learn)___improvemysel