2025年中考英语写作常考文体提分训练：学校生活（解析版）

2025年中考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍

专题14学校生活

【题型分析】

分析全国中考真题可知此类话题通常考查：①介绍学校的环境、设施；②介绍校园活动安排及个人建议或

感受等；③介绍校园生活中难忘的经历及感受等。

【写作要点】

1介绍学校概况

校园环境

1.Myschoolisverybeautiful,andtherearesomeshopsaroundit

2.Myschoolislocatedinthecenterofourtown.

3.Itlookslikeagardenwithmanyflowersallyearround.

4.Therearemanytreesstandingaroundourschool.

5.Thereisabiglibraryinourschoolwheremanystudentswouldliketostudy.

6.Therearesixsciencelabsandfivecomputerroomsinthesciencebuilding.

7.Inthemiddleoftheschoolisabigplayground.

8.Infrontofourteachingbuildingisabeautifulgardenwithlotsofflowers.

9.Abeautifullakeliesinthecenterofourschool.

10.Theplaygroundcoversanareaof20,000squaremeters.

11.1likethelibrarybestbecausewecanspendourfreetimereadingbooksthere.

12.Thegymisverypopularwithstudentsbecausetheycanplaymanykindsofsportsthereevenonrainydays.

13.Wehavealargesportsgroundforfootballandtennis,wherewecanplaybothduringandafter

schoolhours.

14.ThethingIlikebestaboutourschoolisthesportsgroundbecauseIreallylikeplayingsoccer.

老师与同学

1.Thereareoverninehundredstudentsandeightyteachersinourschool.

2.MymusicteacherisMiss.Li.Sheisgreatfun.

3.Myteachersareyoungandactive.Theirclassesarelivelyandinteresting.

4.Ourteachersteachusnotonlyhowtolearnbutalsohowtobeausefulperson.

5.Teachersinmyschoolarefriendlyandknowledgeable.Wecanaskthemforhelpwheneverwemeetdifficultiesin

study.

6.Studentsinourschoolarefriendlyandweallworkhard.

7.Myclassmatesalwayshelpeachotherandplayhappilytogether.

8.1getonwellwithmyclassmatesandteachersinmyschool.

9.Ourteachersarekindtousandthestudentsgetalongverywell.

学校科目

1.1havealotofsubjectsatschool,suchasChinese,maths,English,music,P.E.andart.Ofallthesubjects,Ilike

Englishbestbecauseit'ssousefulandinteresting.

2.1havesevenclassesonweekdays,fourinthemorningandthreeintheafternoon.

3.Wehaveninesubjects.Amongthem,IlikeEnglishbest.

4.1likemathbecauseit*skindofdifficultbutfun/interesting.

5.At8:00Ihavemathclass.It'snotfun.Myteachersaysitisuseful,butIthinkit'sdifficult.

6.Afterlunch,IhaveChineseclass.It'smyfavoritesubject.OurChineseteacherisgreatfun.

7.Myclassesfinishat3:50.I'mverybusyonschooldays.

8.Ateleveno'clock,wehaveabreakintheplaygroundandItalktomyfriends.

9-Atschool,Ioftengooutoftheclassroomtoplaywithmyclassmatesordophysicalexerciseduringthebreaks.

》学校规则

1.Don'tarrivelateforclass.Youmustbeontime.

2.Don'teatintheclassroom.Youmusteatinthedininghall.

3.Wealwayshavetoweartheschooluniform.

4.Parentsandschoolsaresometimesstrict,butremember,theymakerulestohelpus.

5.1thinkIshouldbeallowedtomakethischoicemyself.OnlythenwillIhaveachancetoachievemydream.

6.Ifwedon'tfollowtheschoolrules,it'slikelythatwe'llbepunished.

7.Somestudentsmaythinktheschoolrulesaretoostrict,buttheyreallydogoodtous.

8.Followingtheschoolrulesishelpfulforustobemoreself-disciplined（自律的）.

》总结学校生活

1.OurschoollifeissorichandcolorfulthatIenjoyitverymuch.

2.Allinall,mymiddleschoollifeisbusyandcolorful.

3.Whatanenjoyableschoollifewehave!

》回顾过去

1.Howtimeflies!It'stimetosaygoodbyetomymiddleschoollife.

2.Myjuniorhighschooliscomingtoanend.ThereissomuchthatIwon'tforget.

3.1lovemyschoolandallmyteachers.Iwillneverforgetmythreeyears'schoollife.

4.I'msurethatyouallhaveyourownmemoriesaboutthehappinessofthelastthreeyears.

5.Pvenotonlydevelopedgoodlearninghabitsbutalsomadegreatprogressinstudy.

6.Inthepastthreeyears,Ihavelearnedhowtogetalongwithothersandmademanyfriends.We'vemuchinthe

pastthreeyears.

7.IremembermeetingallofmyclassmatesinGrade7.Andwe'vebeengoodfriendseversince.

8.MybestmemoryisthatIjoinedtheschooldancingclub.Ihavemadesomanyfriends.IrememberIusedtobe

scaredofMr.Brown.Hewassostrict.Ialwaysdidmyhomeworkcarefullytomeethisstandard.Thankstohim,I

gotgoodgrades.

9.1rememberMs.Chenalwaysencouragedmetoovercomedifficultiesandholdontomydreams.Withherhelp,I

putinmoreeffortandmadegreatprogress.

》展望未来及感恩祝福

l.Wearesettingoutonournewjourney.

2.1'mlookingforwardtoenteringintoagooduniversity.

3.Thelifeinseniorhighschoolwillbeharder,butI'llhavemorechancestolearnnewthings.

4.Iwillchoosewiselyandberesponsibleformydecisionsandactions.

5.1t*shardtosaygoodbye.Iwillmissmykindandcaringteachersandclassmates.I'msothankful/gratefultothem.

6.Iwishourteachersallthebest.Ihopeallmyclassmateswillachievetheirdreamsandhaveabrightfuture.

与学校生活有关的建议

1.Agoodrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentscanhelpyouimproveyourstudy.

2.Nomatterwhatkindofactivitiesyoutakepartin,remembernottospendtoomuchtimeonthem.

3.Youshouldtakeanactivepartindifferentkindsofclubactivitiestomakeyourschoollifemorecolorful.

4.Youshouldenjoytheprocessinsteadoftheresult.Therearealsomanyotherwaystorealizeyourdreams.

5.Inyourfreetime,youcandevelopinterestswhichcanmakeyourschoollifewonderful.

6.Youshouldbepolitetowhoeveryoumeet,whichwillmakeyougetonwellwithothers.

7.It'sourdutytodovolunteerworktomakeourschoolmorebeautiful.

介绍校园活动

校园活动简介

1.Wehavelotsofclubsandafter-schoolactivities.Everymonth,wegoonaschooltrip.

2.Joinourchessclub!Chesschallengesyouandmakesyouthinkhard.Youwilllearnandhavefunatthesame

time.

3.SportsDaywasagreatsuccessthisyear!AllthestudentsandteachersfromGrades7,8and9tookpartinthe

sportsevents.

4.Duringtheschoolyearthereareusuallyvisitstomuseumsandtocampsforactivitiessuchasclimbingand

walkinginthecountry.LastyearagroupofusevenwenttoJapan.

5.AssoonasIgottothejuniorhighschool,Ijoinedtheschoolswimmingteam.

6.Theartfestivalissoattractiveandinterestingthatlotsofstudentspreparetojoininit.

7.Thefestivalisheldtoimprovestudents5interestinlearningEnglish.

8.Thisactivityaimstoimprovestudents*Englishabilities.

9.ThereisgoingtobeaChineseCornerwhereyou'llhaveachancetolistentolecturesabouttraditionalChinese

culture.

10.1tookprideintheprizeIgotintherunningmatchatschool.

》活动邀请

1.1reallyhopethatyoucantakepartintheactivity.

2.1'mwritingtoinviteyoutoworkasajudgeforthecompetition.

3.Wewillbegreatlyhonoredifyoucanattendthecompetition.

4.1wouldliketoinviteyoutojoinintheartfestival.

活动时间、地点、内容

1.TherewillbeawelcomepartyforMissYang.

2.ThereisgoingtobeaChinesespeechabouttraditionalChineseculture.

3.Theactivitywillbeginat2:00andlastfortwohours.

4.Thecompetitionisgoingtotakeplaceatthestudents'activitycenternextFridayafternoon.

5.Lastmonth,myclasswentforaschooltriptoForestPark.

6.Ourschoolorganizestheschooltripregularlyeveryyear.

7.1tookpartinthetree-plantingactivityonApril22nd.

8.OurschoolisgoingtoorganizeatraditionalChineseskillfairthisweekend.

9.ToencouragestudentstolearnEnglishactively,wewillholdanEnglishspeechcompetition.

10.Wecleanedtheplaygroundcarefullyandpaintedthetreesinordertoprotectthemfrombeinghurtbysome

insects.

活动目的、意义、感受

l.Inshort,Ilearnedalotfromthisactivity.

2.1thinkthisactivityisverymeaningful.

3.Throughthiscompetition,Ilearnedthebenefitsofreadingmorebooks.

4.1hopetherewillbemoresuchactivitiesinthefuture.

5.1reallylookforwardtotakingpartinthesingingcompetition.

6.Throughtheseactivities,I'msureyouwillbeattractedbyChinesemusicandChinesecultureaswell.

7.WespeakhighlyoftheEnglishDay,andwehavelearntalotthroughpractice.ltalsomakesusrealizethe

importanceofteamwork.Wehopetherewillbemorecolourfulactivitiesinourschool.

8.Practicingwushuisagoodwaytoimproveourhealth.

9.Whatmakesmeinterestedisthatwecancookfoodbyourselvesandsellittoourschoolmatestoraisemoneyfor

charity.

10.Asingingcompetitionoffersagreatchancetoshowourtalentsandhelpsustolearnsomethingnew.

11.Studentsmayjoinasmanyclubsastheylike,buttheymustjoinatleastone.

12.ltisagoodtimeforustosharehappiness,loveandteamspirit.

13.It'sagoodchanceforyoutogetthepleasureofhardworkandlearntovalueeachother.

14.Thankstothesingingcompetition,Irealizedtheimportanceofteamwork.

【话题范文】

1.（2025•河北邯郸•一模）为了丰富学生的校园生活，李华的学校增加了“最美大课间”。请你以李华的

名义，根据下面四幅图片及文字提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下李华学校的“最美大课间”的活动，并谈谈

你的看法。

playchrs*singenddance

提示：

(1)Introducetheclassbreakactivities.

(2)Expressyourideasaboutthebigclassbreak.

注意：

(1)短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息及提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。

(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

Ourschoolhasabigclassbreakthisterm.Ifsanhourlongintheafternoon.

【答案】例文

Ourschoolhasabigclassbreakthisterm.It'sanhourlongintheafternoon.Wehavemanyactivities.

Boysusuallyplaybasketballorfootballduringthebreak.Studentscanalsorunandcheerforeachother.

Sometimes,ourteachersplayandrunwithus.WecanalsoplaychessintheclassroomandIoftenplayitwithmy

classmates.Whafsmore,studentswholovemusiccansinganddanceduringthebreak.Thafsagoodchanceto

developourhobbiesandmakenewfriends.

Allinall,thebigclassbreaknotonlymakesourschoollifecolorful,butalsohelpsusstayhealthyinboth

mindandbody.Iloveitverymuch.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。

②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。

③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括介绍大课间的活动内容和个人对大课间的看法。考生应确保这些要点

都得到涵盖，并可以适当添加细节，使描述更加生动。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍大课间的基本情况。可以通过"Ourschoolhasabigclassbreakthisterm.Ifsanhourlonginthe

afternoon”等表述来引出接下来要介绍的内容；

第二步，具体描述大课间的活动。首先介绍男生通常进行的体育活动，如打篮球或踢足球；然后提到学生

可以跑步和互相加油；接着提到老师也会参与其中；再介绍在教室里下棋的活动；最后提到喜欢音乐的学

生可以唱歌跳舞；

第三步，表达个人看法。可以提到大课间不仅丰富了校园生活，还有助于身心健康，并表达对大课间的喜

爱。

［亮点词汇］

①playbasketball打篮球

②cheerforeachother互相加油

③playchess下棋

©developourhobbies发展我们的爱好

⑤stayhealthy保持健康

［高分句型］

①What'smore,studentswholovemusiccansinganddanceduringthebreak.(定语从句)

②Allinall,thebigclassbreaknotonlymakesourschoollifecolorful,butalsohelpsusstayhealthyinbothmind

andbody.(并列句)

2.(24-25九年级下•浙江温州・开学考试)学校为初三学生提供了特色减压课程。假如你是交换生Henry,

请根据下表的提示，给负责选课活动的李老师写一封电子邮件，阐述你所选择的一门课程以及选择该课程

的理由，并提出你对该课程的期待。

注意：

(1)邮件需包含表格中所选课程的所有信息，可适当发挥；

(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；

(3)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Specialcourses

•improveourhealth

冰彩受Basketball•encourageustoworkingroups

*2

•…

•beinterestedinChineseculture

ChinesePainting•learnstoriesoffamouspainters

•…

•learntobepatient

等Baking•becreative

•…

DearMr.Li,

IamHenryfromClassTwo,GradeNine.Asforthespecialcourse,I'dliketochoose

Yours,

Henry

【答案】DearMr.Li,

IamHenryfromClassTwo,GradeNine.Asforthespecialcourse,I'dliketochoosebasketball.Doyouknow

why?Nowletmetellyouthereason.

First,Ilikeplayingbasketballbecauseplayingbasketballisgoodforourhealth.Second,whenweworkasa

team,wecanknowmoreprofessionalknowledgeaboutteamwork.Third,itwillmakeourlifecolorful.Finally,I

hopetheschoolcanhavemorePEteacherstoguidestudents.AndIhopewecanstartwiththebasics,because

maybetherearealotofstudentswhocan'tplaybasketball.

Lookforwardtoyourreplay.

Yours,

Henry

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文为一封电子邮件；

②时态：时态为一般现在时；

③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，考生应注意不要遗漏“提出你对该课程的希望”这一要求。

［写作步骤］

第一步，写出所选课程；

第二步，阐述选该课程的原因；

第三步，表达对该课程有何希望；

第四步，书写结语。

［亮点词汇］

①likedoing喜欢做某事

②begoodfor对...有益

③lookforwardto期待

［高分句型】

①Second,whenweworkasateam,wecanknowmoreprofessionalknowledgeaboutteamwork,（when弓|导的时

间状语从句）

②AndIhopewecanstartwiththebasics,becausemaybetherearealotofstudentswhocan'tplaybasketball.（省

略that的宾语从句）

3.假如你是李华，你的笔友汤姆（Tom）想了解你的数学老师张老师。根据下面的信息写一篇英语短文，

可以适当添加一些信息。词数不少于70。

Name:MrZhang

Age:about40Appearance:

yearsold^:一tallandthin,....

Characteristics:/\

{Others:…J

patient,friendly,“

hclpfUl…

DearTom,

Thanksforyourlastletter.Youwanttoknowaboutmymathsteacher.NowI'lltellyousomethingabout

him.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】例文

DearTom,

Thanksforyourlastletter.Youwanttoknowaboutmymathsteacher.NowI'lltellyousomethingabout

him.

MrZhangismymathsteacher.Heisaboutfortyyearsold.Heistallandthin.Hehasshort,blackhair.He

alwayswearsglasses.Heishard-working.Heisreallypatientwithstudents.Heoftenhelpsuswithourmaths.He

isfriendlytoeveryone.Heisnotonlyourmathsteacherbutalsoourfriend.Hisclassesareveryinteresting.Allof

uslikehisclasses.Butheisstrictaboutourstudies.Heisalsostrictwithhimself.Iwanttobeateacherlikehimin

thefuture.Whatdoyouthinkofhim?

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。

②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。

③提示：写作句式已给出，考生应注意可适当增加一些介绍人物的细节。

［写作步骤］

第一步，表明写作意图。用“现在我告诉你一些关于他的事情”引出下文。

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、其他”几个方面介绍MrZhang。

第三步，书写结语。用“最好的祝福”，表示礼貌问候。

［亮点词汇］

①patient耐心的

②friendly友好的

③strict严格的

［高分句型］

①Heisnotonlyourmathsteacherbutalsoourfriend,（notonly...butalso…不但...而且....）

4.（2025•江西•一模）国际数学日就要到了，校报英语版块正在就“我与数学的故事”进行征文。请你

写一篇英语短文去投稿，先说说你是否喜欢数学及其原因，再描述你学习数学的一段难忘经历，最后谈谈

你将如何学习数学。

写作要点：

1.Doyoulikemath?Whyorwhynot?

2.Whatwastheunforgettableexperienceoflearningmath?

3.Howareyougoingtolearnmath?

要求：

1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3.词数80—120,短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Teachersalwayssaythatmathisveryimportant.

【答案】例文

Teachersalwayssaythatmathisveryimportant.AndIcouldn,tagreemore.Ilikemathbecauseit'slike

solvingpuzzles.Everyproblemisachallenge,andfindingthesolutiongivesmeagreatsenseofachievement.

Anunforgettableexperiencewasinjuniorhigh.Wehadanextremelydifficultmathprobleminclass.Atfirst,

itseemedinsolvable.Ispenthourstryingdifferentwaysandfinallysolveditonmyown.Iwassoexcited!

Tolearnmathbetter,I'lldomoreexercises.Also,r11joinastudygrouptodiscussproblemswithothers.

Thisway,Icanimprovemymathskills.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，承接上文，说明自己喜欢数学引出下文；

第二步，具体介绍喜欢数学的原因以及学习数学的一段难忘经历；

第三步，书写结语，说明学习数学的计划。

［亮点词汇］

①solution解决办法

©extremely极其地

③insolvable不能解决的

［高分句型］

®Ilikemathbecauseifslikesolvingpuzzles.（because引导的原因状语从句）

②Tolearnmathbetter,Tildomoreexercises.（不定式表目的）

5.（2024・湖北武汉.模拟预测）习近平总书记在全国教育大会上强调，”要努力构建德智体美劳全面

培养的教育体系”。劳动教育贯通大中小学各学段，纳入人才培养全过程。假如你是李华，你校英文报社发

起了“AHelperofMyClass”的主题征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇短文，介绍你常做的事情，并谈

一谈你的心得和建议。

写作要点：

1.Whatdoyouoftendoforyourclass?

2.Whendoyoudothat?

3.Doyouthinkifsnecessary?Whyorwhynot?

4.Somesuggestionsforyourschoolmates.

注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总次数。

AHelperofMyClass

Iamagoodhelperofmyclass.

【答案】例文

AHelperofMyClass

Iamagoodhelperofmyclass.

IoftenhelphandoutexampapersandcleantheblackboardformyteacherswheneverIamfree.Sometimes

myclassmatesmeetsomeproblemsthattheycan'tsolve.Iamalwaysreadytohelpthemoutduringthebreaks

betweenclassesorinmysparetime.

"Helpingothersishelpingourselves.^^Certainlyitisnecessaryforustodosomethinghelpfulforourclass.

Itisnotenoughtojustgetgoodgrades,buthelpingothersisalsoimportant.SoIthinkweshouldgivethem

ahandintimewithoutthinkingtwicewheneverourclassmateshavedifficulties.Besidesweshouldalsocareabout

theirmentalhealth.Lefstakeactionnow.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：一般现在时；

③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生需要把所有要点都写进去，但是不能逐条翻译，注意内容的连贯性和逻

辑性。

［写作步骤］

第一步，描述自己经常在什么时候为班级做哪些事情；

第二步，谈论自己做这些事情的必要性；

第三步，给出建议并号召其他同学为班级做事情。

［亮点词汇］

①handout分发

②whenever无论何时

③bereadytodo准备好做某事

④sparetime空余时间

［高分句型］

①Sometimesmyclassmatesmeetsomeproblemsthattheycan'tsolve,（that弓I导的定语从句）

②Helpingothersishelpingourselves.（动名词作主语）

6.（2024.湖北武汉.模拟预测）即将告别初中校园，内心依依不舍。学校校刊以“MySchool”为题向

全体初三学生开展征文活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英文从目的、内容、意义等方面写一篇短文投稿。

内容提示：

Whatisyourschoollike?

Whatdoyoulikeaboutyourschool?

Howdoyoufeelaboutyourschoollife?

Somethingmoreaboutyourschool.

注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

MySchool

AsastudentofGrade9,I'mgoingtosaygoodbyetomyschool,whereIhavestudiedfornearly3years.

【答案】例文

MySchool

AsastudentofGrade9,Fmgoingtosaygoodbyetomyschool,whereIhavestudiedfornearly3years.

Inmyopinion,myschoolisgreatandverybeautifulwithmanymodernbuildings.Ispendmostofmy

schooltimeinmybigandcleanclassroomintheclassroombuilding.Westarteverydaybyreadingaloudwhile

standingstraight,whichisveryinterestingandhelpfultoourstudy.Myfavoriteplaceisthedininghallbecause

therearemanykindsofdeliciousfoodtofeedmyhungrystomachatnoon.Intheafternoon,Iusuallygotothe

largesportsfieldtodoexercisestogetherwithmyclassmates,whichhelpsuskeephealthy.

Allinall,myschoolistheveryplacetostartmydream!

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的学校，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。

［写作步骤］

第一步，引出主题；

第二步，具体介绍学校的情况，包括学校环境、学校生活等内容；

第三步，书写结语，进行总结。

［亮点词汇］

①inmyopinion在我看来

②manykindsof许多种

③keephealthy保持健康

©allinall总之

［高分句型］

®Westarteverydaybyreadingaloudwhilestandingstraight,whichisveryinterestingandhelpfultoourstudy,

（which引导非限制性定语从句）

②Myfavoriteplaceisthedininghallbecausetherearemanykindsofdeliciousfoodtofeedmyhungrystomachat

noon.（because引导原因状语从句）

7.（2024・湖北武汉.模拟预测）你校英语社团计划近期举办一次户外活动，社团外教Tony正在向学

生征集活动的内容和意义等有关意见。假设你是李明，请根据以下内容提示写一封邮件向Tony阐述你的想

法。内容提示：

Whatoutdooractivitydoyoulike?

Whydoyoulikeit?

Howwillyouorganizethisoutdooractivity?（when,where,whattodo...）

Somethingmoreaboutit.

注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。

DearSir,

I'mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivity.Tmwritingtotellyousomeofmyopinions.

Hopemysuggestionshelp.

Yours,

LiMing

【答案】例文：

Dearsir,

I'mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivity.I'mwritingtotellyousomeofmyopinions.Ilike

climbingmountainswithmyclassmates.Wecanenjoythebeautyofnature.Wecanalsomakefriendsandhelp

eachotherontheway.

Tomaketheactivitymoreinteresting,IhopetogotoEastMountainonJune25th.Sinceifsalittlefar,we'd

bettermeetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andgotherebybus.Wecancollectsomehistorystoriesaboutthe

famousmountainsothatwecansharethemtogether.Ifllbeniceifwecantrysomelocalfoodforlunchthere.In

theafternoon,wecanpickuptherubbishtoprotecttheenvironment.Thenwecangohomeat4:30p.m.We're

suretohavegreatfun.Iproposewewillschedulethehikeverysuccessfully.

Hopemysuggestionshelp.

Yours,

LiMing

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一封邮件；

②时态：本文以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；

③提示：题目要求根据提示向外教Tony阐述自己对举办户外活动的具体内容和意义的看法，包括自己喜欢

什么样的户外活动、为什么喜欢、怎样组织户外活动，以及关于户外活动的更多信息。写作时注意适当增

加细节，不要遗漏要点。

［写作步聚］

第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；

第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍自己对这次户外活动的具体内容、原因以及如何组织此次户外活动；

第三步，最后表达希望。

［亮点词汇］

①makefriends交朋友

②helpeachother互帮互助

③pickup捡起来

［高分句型］

①Tomaketheactivitymoreinteresting,IhopetogotoEastMountainonJune25th.（动词不定式作目的状语）

②Wecancollectsomehistorystoriesaboutthefamousmountainsothatwecansharethemtogether,（sothat引导

的目的状语从句）

8.（2024•浙江温州•模拟预测）你校英文报以“MyGrowth”为题，面向全校学生开展征文活动。请参考

下面提示，从你对成长的理解出发，描述某一次跟成长相关的经历，以及这次经历对你的影响。

—-Whatdoesgrowthmeantoyou?"

My-Growth^—Whatwasyourexperienceaboutgrowth?，

_•<Howdidthisexperienceinfluenceyou?^

注意：

（i）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；

（2）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

（3）可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。

MyGrowth

Everyonewantstogrowtobeabetterperson.

【答案】例文:

MyGrowth

Everyonewantstogrowtobeabetterperson.Forme,growthmeansfacingchallengesandlearningfrom

them.

Lastterm,Ihadahardtimewithmymath.Ialwaysfailedthetestsandfeltveryupset.Butmymathteacher

noticedthisandofferedtohelpme.IstartedtostudyharderandaskedmyteacherforhelpwheneverIhad

questions.Afterafewweeks,Igotagoodgradeinthemathexam.Iwassohappyandproudofmyself.

ThisexperiencetaughtmethatIcanovercomedifficultiesifItrymybest.Ialsolearnedtoaskforhelp

whenIneeditNowIammoreconfidentinmystudiesandbelieveIcangrowbettereveryday.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为一般过去时；

③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的成长经历，适当增加细节。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍自己对成长的理解；

第二步，描述某一次跟成长相关的经历；

第三步，介绍这次经历对你的影响。

［亮点词汇］

①offertodosth.主动提出做某事

②asksb.forhelp向某人寻求帮助

［高分句型］

①ThisexperiencetaughtmethatIcanovercomedifficultiesifItrymybest,（that引导的宾语从句，if引导的条

件状语从句）

②IalsolearnedtoaskforhelpwhenIneedit.（when引导的时间状语从句）

9.（2024.浙江•模拟预测）假设你是学校CulturalChina社团的成员李平，你将作为社团代表在校英

语文化节上介绍你所在的社团。请按照以下提示，撰写一篇发言稿，介绍社团活动以及你的收获。

注意：

(1)发言稿必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节;

(2)活动至少三项；

(3)词数：90-100o

【答案】例文

Hello,everyone!I'mLiPing,amemberofCulturalChinaClub.Tmheretointroducemyclubtoyou.

IfyouareaChineseculturelover,ourclubisagreatchoice.Manyinterestingactivitiesareofferedhere.You

canlearnhowtomakebeautifulpapercuttingthatisusuallyregardedasasymbolofgoodluck.Also,youcantry

makingtraditionalChinesefoodlikedumplings,zongziandsoon.Whafsmore,youcanexperiencethebeautyof

clayarthere.

Theclubactivitieshavehelpedmealot.Ihavenotonlylearnedlotsofskills,butalsomademanyfriends

here.

Ifyouareinterested,wearelookingforwardtohavingyouintheclub!

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”;

③提示：根据表格中所列要点进行写作，不可遗漏，适当补充细节，突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，自我介绍并引出下文；

第二步，详细介绍俱乐部的活动，如学习剪纸、制作传统美食等；

第三步，总结感受，表达对他人加入的期待。

［亮点词汇］

①offer提供

②beregardedas被认为是

③what'smore而且

［高分句型］

①IfyouareaChineseculturelover,ourclubisagreatchoice.（if引导的条件状语从句）

②Youcanlearnhowtomakebeautifulpapercuttingthatisusuallyregardedasasymbolofgoodluck,（that弓|导

的定语从句）

10.（2024.北京东城.模拟预测）假设你是李华，你们年级将组织露营活动。请你写一封邮件，告诉

因事请假的交换生Peter露营的具体事宜，包括学校安排露营活动的目的、露营准备，以及集合时间和地

点。

提示词语：improve,lifeskills,trainers,foodanddrink,Friday

提示问题：•Whydoesyourschoolorganizeacampingtrip?

•Whatdoyouneedtoprepareforit?

•Whenandwherewillyoumeet?

DearPeter,

Howseverythinggoing?

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】例文：

DearPeter,

How'severythinggoing?I'mwritingtoinformyouaboutourupcomingschoolcampingtripsinceyou're

currentlyonleave.

OurschoolhasorganizedacampingtripthisFridaytohelpusimproveourlifeskills.Webelievethatsuch

activitiesarenotonlyfunbutalsohelpuslearnhowtobemoreindependentandself-reliant.

Forthecampingtrip,you911needtopreparesomenecessarythings.Pleasebringalongtrainersforhiking,as

wellasfoodanddrinkforthedurationofthetrip.Ifsalsoagoodideatopacksomewarmclothes,asleepingbag,

andatentifyouhaveone.

Wewillmeetattheschoolgateat8:00a.m.onFriday.Pleasemakesuretobeontimeaswedon'twantto

keepeveryonewaiting.

Ihopeyoucanjoinusforthisexcitingadventure!Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorneedfurtherinformation,feel

freetoreplytothisemail.

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,