专题41 书面表达咨询建议类-2020年中考英语母题题源解密（解析版）

专题41书面表达咨询建议类【母题来源1】【2020•山东省泰安市】【母题原题】52.新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。请根据以下思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的看法和建议。要求：（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥；（2）词数：80~100（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（3）文中不得出现学校姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。参考词汇：网上点餐orderfoodonline；减少外出reducegoingout；规避风险avoidrisks；塑料包装plasticpackagesWiththeoutbreakofCOVID-19,manyyoungpeoplepreferorderingfoodonline.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本文是一篇材料作文，新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。要求根据所给出思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述自己的看法和建议。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。【参考范文】WiththeoutbreakofCOVID-19,manyyoungpeoplepreferorderingfoodonline.It’struethatorderingfoodonlinehasmanyadvantages.Firstofall,itisconvenientandcansavetime.Besides,wecangetallkindsofdeliciousfoodbyshoppingonline.Wecanreducegoingout.Themostimportantthingisthatthefoodonlineisalwayscheaper.However,therearesomeproblemswithorderingfoodonline.Thequalityofthefoodseemsnotasgoodasitispromised.Theplasticpackageswillpollutetheenvironment.Intheway,eatinghabitsarenothealthy.Inaddition,itisnotgoodtoimproveourindependence.Inmyopinion,orderingfoodonlineshouldonlybeusedwhenneeded.That’stosay,youmaybuythingsyoucan’tfindinlocalmarkets.Besides,peopleshouldneverrelytoomuchontheInternet.【名师点评】1.例文点评：本文紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。而且还使用了一些较好的句式，为文章增添了不少色彩。2.高分亮点：短语：Firstofall，allkindsof，notas…as，inlocal，too

much，on

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Internet。句型：It’struethatorderingfoodonlinehasmanyadvantages.的确，网上订餐有很多优势。that引导宾语从句。Thequalityofthefoodseemsnotasgoodasitispromised.这食物的质量似乎没有它所承诺的那么好。not

as…as…不如……，是原级比较。【母题来源2】【2020•四川省达州市】【母题原题】76.近年来，全球自然灾害频发，极端天气频频出现，2020年新冠肺炎几乎在全球爆发，环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。尽管我国政府出台了一系列环境保护方面的政策，采取了很多措施，成效也很显著，但是，我们还需要付出更多的努力。地球是人类共同的家园，时代的一粒灰，落在个人头上就是一座山，没有人能独善其身。假如你叫李华，作为达州的学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢?请以“Let’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment”为题，向达州的学生发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大的努力保护环境!写作要点:（1）了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性；（2）在日常生活中节约用水，节约能源；（3）为了减少空气污染，最好乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学；（4）学会垃圾分类:少用塑料袋。（5）保护野生动物，不食用野生动物。写作要求:（1）要点齐全并适当发挥。（2）全文字数不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。（4）卷面整洁。参考词汇；（1）reducev.减少（2）sortgarbage垃圾分类（3）fourcategories（四类垃圾）:recyclable,harmful,dryandwetwaste（4）Nobusiness,nokilling.没有买卖就没有杀害。Let’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironmentDearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inDazhou.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedontheearthandunusualweatherappearedveryoften.Evenworse,thenovelcorona-virusbrokeoutnearlyallovertheworldthisyear.Allthesebadthingswerecausedbytheterribleenvironment,buttheterribleenvironmentwascausedbyhumans.Althoughourgovernmenthasmadesomepoliciesandtakenmanyusefulmeasurestoprotecttheenvironmentinthepastfewyears,therearestillmanythingstodo.AsstudentsinDazhou,whatshouldwedo?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifweallkeepdoingthesethings,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’stryourbest!Astudentworryingabouttheenvironment【写作思路】这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Let’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。【参考范文】Let’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironmentDearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inDazhou.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedontheearthandunusualweatherappearedveryoften.Evenworse,thenovelcorona-virusbrokeoutnearlyallovertheworldthisyear.Allthesebadthingswerecausedbytheterribleenvironment,buttheterribleenvironmentwascausedbyhumans.Althoughourgovernmenthasmadesomepoliciesandtakenmanyusefulmeasurestoprotecttheenvironmentinthepastfewyears,therearestillmanythingstodo.AsstudentsinDazhou,whatshouldwedo?First,weshouldknowandletmorepeopleknowtheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.Second,weshouldsavewaterandenergyinourdailylife.Third,inordertoreduceairpollution,itisbettertogotoschoolbybus,bybike,onfootorotherpublictransportationinsteadofusingprivatecars.Fourth,therearefourcategoriesofwaste:recyclable,harmful,dryandwetwaste.Weshouldlearnhowtosortgarbageandusefewplasticbags.Fifth,weshouldprotectwildanimalsanddonoteatthem.Ifweallkeepdoingthesethings,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’stryourbest!Astudentworryingabouttheenvironment【名师点评】例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。高分亮点：短语：allovertheworld；inourdailylife；insteadof；betterandbetter等。句型：First,weshouldknowandletmorepeopleknowtheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.Third,inordertoreduceairpollution,itisbettertogotoschoolbybus,bybike,onfootorotherpublictransportationinsteadofusingprivatecars.【母题来源3】【2020•四川凉山州】【母题原题】81.2020年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此变得有些艰难。请你根据所提供的信息，以LiveinaHealthierWay为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈怎样以更健康的生活方式度过这段特殊时期。保持健康远离疾病多锻炼多喝水日常习惯保障安全勤洗手戴口罩不聚集无论多难笑对生活培养爱好关心他人分享喜忧做得好过得好生活更易更快乐要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。2.短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。3.词数80左右。文章开头和结尾部分已给出，不计人总词数。________________________________In2020,peoplearoundtheworldsufferfromakindofseriousillnessnamedCOVID-19.Wehavetofacemoredifficultiesinourlifebecauseofit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankstothespecialperiod,wehavelearnedthatifweliveinahealthierway,wecanwin.【写作思路】阅读题干可知是结合2020年，COVID-19在全球肆虐，生活因此变得有些艰难的情况。以LiveinaHealthierWay为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈怎样以更健康的生活方式度过这段特殊时期。这是一篇建议类作文，写作内容应该包括日常生活方式和生活态度等等。【参考范文】LiveinaHealthierWayIn2020,peoplearoundtheworldsufferfromakindofseriousillnessnamedCOVID-19.Wehavetofacemoredifficultiesinourlifebecauseofit.Asweallknow,healthisimportancetous.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudywellandenjoylife.Sohowshouldwespendthisspecialperiodinahealthierlifestyle?Keepexercisinganddrinkmorewatercanmakeushealthier.Inordertostayawayfromdisease,weshouldwashourhandsfrequently,wearmasksanddonotgettogether.Itisalsoimportanttohaveagoodattitudetowardslife.Nomatterhowdifficultlifeis,weshouldfaceitwithasmile.Wecandevelophobbies,sharejoysandsorrowswithfriendsandfamily,andlearntocareaboutothers.Thebetteryoudo,thehappieryourlifewillbe.Thankstothespecialperiod,wehavelearnedthatifweliveinahealthierway,wecanwin.【名师点评】例文点评：这是一篇优秀的例文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确的运用的时态，例文中运用的是一般现在时为主，人称是第一人称为主，主谓一致。例文采取三段式的写作手法，第一段是题干给出的，点明了目前的情况；第二段开始强调健康的重要性，引出话题保持健康的重要性及一些保持健康的方法，从生活方式和生活态度两方面出发；最后一段也是题干给出，表达了积极的态度。例文同时使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。高分亮点：短语：Asweallknow众所周知；healthylifestyle健康生活方式；keepdoingsth一直做某事；Inorderto为了；gettogether一起；haveagoodattitudetowards对……有良好的态度。句型：（1）Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudywellandenjoylife.只有当我们身体健康时，我们才能好好学习，享受生活。Only位于句首的倒装句。（2）Thebetteryoudo,thehappieryourlifewillbe.你做得越好，你的生活就会越幸福。The+比较级…，the+比较级…越……,就越……。【母题来源4】【2020•浙江省湖州市】【母题原题】53.假定你是李雷，请你对英国朋友Bruce的邮件进行同复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。ToLiLei@SubjectExchangeVisit!Hithere,LiLei!I'mreallyexcitedaboutgoingtobeatyourschoolfortheexchangevisitlaterthisyear—hopeyouaretoo!Butthethingis,Ireallydon'twanttodothewrongthingwhileI'mthereandespeciallyattheschool,soI'mwonderingifyoucouldtellmeabitabouttherules,aboutphones,clothes,food...Couldyousendmeaquickemail?I'dlovetohearfromyou.Love,BruceToBruce@SubjectRe:ExchangeVisit!Hi,Bruce!Thanksforyouremail.I'mlookingforwardtotheexchangetoo!Love,LiLei【写作思路】这是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。【参考范文】Hi,Bruce!Thanksforyouremail.I'mlookingforwardtotheexchangetoo!Youreallydon'thavetoworryalotabouttheschoolruleshere.Butthereareafewthingsyouneedtoknow.Weusuallywearuniformsonschooldays,butyoucanwearwhatissuitable.Andit'llbekindofcoldwhenyouareheresoyou'dbetterbringsomewarmclothes.Wearenotallowedtousemobilephonesatschool.Besides,ifwebringfoodtoschool,wemusteatitoutsideduringthebreak.Hopethishelps.Tellmeifthere'sanythingelseyouwanttoknow.Love,LiLei【名师点评】例文点评：例文采用五段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。高分亮点：短语：lookforwardto；worryabout；needtodosth；kindof；beallowedtodosth等。句型：Andit'llbekindofcoldwhenyouareheresoyou'dbetterbringsomewarmclothes.Besides,ifwebringfoodtoschool,wemusteatitoutsideduringthebreak.【母题来源5】【2020•重庆市B卷】【母题原题】62.某中学对高一新生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查,以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。假如你是该校高一新生,请结合下图数据和自身口语情况,给你的英语老师写一篇短文。要求∶1.80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息:1.描述问卷调查结果（频率、方法）;2.介绍自身口语情况（水平、打算·…）;3.….Theresultsofthesurveyshowthat17%ofthestudentshardlyeverpractisespeakingEnglish.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】这是一个看图作文，图中列出了某中学对学生进行的英语口语能力的调查问卷，包括两个问题，一个是“你多久练习说一次英语”；另一个是“你怎样练习说英语”。学生们应仔细观察图表中的信息，将这两个问题的调查结果表达出来。短文中还应包括另外一个内容，即介绍自己口语的情况，并对如何提高口语能力，提出自己的建议。短文应以一般现在时态为主，根据表达需要选择适当的人称。【参考范文】Theresultsofthesurveyshowthat17%ofthestudentshardlyeverpractisespeakingEnglish.45%ofthestudentsusuallypracticespeakingEnglish,and38%ofthestudentspractisespeakingEnglishsometimes.HowdoyoupractisespeakingEnglish?Moststudentsspeakmoreonlyinclass.SomeofthestudentstalkwithfriendsinEnglish.SomestudentspractisespekingEnglishinotherways.Inmyopinion,weshouldtalkwithourpartnersinEnglishasmuchaswecan.Also,weshouldoftenlistentoEnglishstoriesinordertoimproveourunderstandingaboutEnglish.NeverbeafraidofspeakingEnglishinfrontofothers!Thisisquiteimportant.Overandabove,weshouldlearnmoreEnglishwords.Onlyinthisway,canwebegoodEnglishspeaker!【名师点评】例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，叙述条理，结构清晰。文章采取两段式结构，第一段主要介绍该问卷调查的结果，包含了图表中的所有信息，没有遗漏要点，且各部分内容安排合理，有层次；第二段是自己的口语情况，以及对如何提高口语能力的建议。其次短文语法正确，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为基础，还使用了祈使句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。高分亮点：短语：talkwith；inotherways；inone’sopinion；beafraidof；inthisway。句型：45%ofthestudentsusuallypracticespeakingEnglish,and38%ofthestudentspractisespeakingEnglishsometimes.；Inmyopinion,weshouldtalkwithourpartnersinEnglishasmuchaswecan.；NeverbeafraidofspeakingEnglishinfrontofothers!；Onlyinthisway,canwebegoodEnglishspeaker!【母题来源6】【2020•重庆市A卷】【母题原题】62.国家提出了将劳动教育(LaborEducation)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目EnglishWorld就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以"SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinOurSchool"为题，写一篇短文参赛。要求:1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计人总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.劳动教育的意义(学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……)；2.校内劳动教育建议(开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……)；3.……SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinOurSchoolIt'sreportedthatLaborEducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本文是一篇材料作文，国家提出了将劳动教育(LaborEducation)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，学校校报英语栏目EnglishWorld就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。要求以"SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinOurSchool"为题，写一篇短文参赛。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。【参考范文】SomeAdviceonDevelopingLaborEducationinOurSchoolIt'sreportedthatLaborEducationwillbeincludedintheeducationofmiddleschoolsandprimaryschoolsinChina.Ithinkit'simportant.Wecanlearnsomelifeskillsandformgoodhabits.Bothwillhelpusalotinthefuture.Asforhowtorunthecourseinourschool,Ihavesomeideas.Theschoolcanofferclassestoteachushowtodothecleaningandgrowplants.What'smore,theschoolcansetupsomeclubs,suchascookingclubandpaper-cuttingclub.Theschoolcanalsoholdcompetitionstoseewhoisthebestinmakingcakes.Suchactivitieswillmakeourschoollifemorecolorfulandmeaningful.Iamlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm.IbelieveIwilldowellinit.【解析】【名师点评】1.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。2.高分亮点：短语：alot，inthefuture，what'smore，setup，suchas，lookforwardto，dowellin。句型：Iamlookingforwardtotakingthecourseinthenewterm.我期待着在新学期上这门课。lookforwardtodoingsth期待做某事，固定搭配。IbelieveIwilldowellinit.我相信我会做得很好。Ibelieve后接宾语从句；dowellin在……方面做得好。【母题1】【来源】【2020•北京市丰台区三模】假设你是李华，Peter是你的加拿大笔友，由于全球性的新冠肺炎疫情（NCP），他也开始了在家的线上学习。Peter给你写邮件来询问疫情期间你的生活和学习状况，请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他你的情况和感受，并对Peter提出一些居家学习和生活的建议。提示词语：livestreaming⽹络直播课，courageous,protect,plan,doexercise提⽰问题：●WhatdoyouthinkofyourlifeduringtheNCP?●WhatshouldPeterdotogothroughthespecialperiod?DearPeter,I'msogladtoreceiveyourletter,butI'msorrytoknowthatthereisNCPinyourcountry.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,I'msogladtoreceiveyourletter,butI'msorrytoknowthatthereisNCPinyourcountry.Whenthewinterholidaycametotheend,wecouldn’tgobacktoschool.WealsohadtotakelivestreamingathomebecauseofNCP.AtfirstIwasworriedandboredathome,butnowIamusedtoit.Iwillgiveyousomeadviceonhowtogothroughthespecialperiod.First,weshouldbecourageoustofaceNCP.ThendothefollowingthingsyoucanprotectyourselffromNCP.You’dbetternotgoout.Ifyouhavetogoout,wearafacemask.Opendoorsandwindowstogetfreshair.Washyourhandsfrequently.Doexercisetokeephealthy.Eatmorevegetablesandfruitanddrinkmorewater.Asforstudy,youcantakeonlinelessons.Butyoumusttakecareofyoureyes.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldplanyourtimeproperly.Thenlifeathomewillberelaxingandinteresting.Ifpeopleallovertheworldworktogether,NCPwillbeovercomeassoonaspossible.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】题干解读：这是一篇书信作文，但是短文的开头和结尾已经给出。在写作时应承接短文开头，简单介绍自己疫情期间的学习生活及感受；第二段对彼得提出居家学习生活的建议，这一部分是短文的重点。最后提出早日战胜疫情的愿望。例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来介绍自己疫情期间的生活；时态采用一般过去时为主；用第二人称提出建议和意见，主要采用一般现在时态，叙述完整且条理清晰。高分亮点：短语：haveto；becauseof；atfirst；worktogether；allovertheworld；assoonaspossible;asfor;takecareof。句型：when引导的时间状语从句：Whenthewinterholidaycametotheend,wecouldn’tgobacktoschool；if引导的条件状语从句：Ifyouhavetogoout,wearafacemask.【母题2】【来源】【2020•广州省珠海市香洲区二模】根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置假如你是李华的好朋友Mike,请针对李华信中提到的问题写一封回复他的建议信。内容包括：1.对李华的感受表示理解；2.以自己或他人的例子对李华的问题提出两条或以上建议；3.鼓励李华，希望他振作精神，学习进步。注意事项：1.不得在文章中出现真实姓名和校名，不能照抄原文。2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范。3.词数80左右。文章的开头给出，不计入总词数。DearLiHua,I’vereceivedyourletterrecently.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mike.【答案】DearLiHua,Iamsorrytohearyourproblem.It’scommontohavesuchproblems.Ihavemoreorlessthesameproblemasyoudo.Atfirst,Iwasnotusedtostudyingonlinesofoughtwithmypar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解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。疫情期间，学生线上学习时不注意保护视力，导致视力下降，在我国，70%的学生有视力方面的问题。本文要求以"SavingOurEyesight"为题写一篇作文分析青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议。我们可从造成近视的原因和如何保护视力两个方面来写。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态主要为一般现在时。第一段介绍造成近视的原因。第二段介绍保护视力的合理建议。第