读后续写微技能无灵主语课件-高三英语二轮复习

---用无灵主语句突破“困境”读后续写微技能训练Micro-skillsofcontinuationwritingLearningAims

Bytheendofthisclass,youwillbeableto:1.knowandmastertheusageofInanimatesubjects.2.understandandbeawareofthedifferencesbetweenChineseandEnglishexpressions.3.beabletojudge,appreciateandcreatetheexpressionswithinanimatesubjectsinwriting.Hello!Myfriends.Welcometotheexpedition,IamthecaptainShackleton.Doyoustillrememberthestory.Let’sreviewit.Review:Completethepassagewiththecorrectformsofthewordsabandonaboardassigncrewcupboardseizedsetoffsinkturn...downvoyageAftertheadvertisementinthenewspapercaughthiseye,adetermination

PerceBlackborowtojointheAntarcticexpedition（南极探险）ledbySirErnestShackleton.Unfortunately,hisapplication_________________becausehewastooyoungandnotqualifiedenough.However,hemanagedtoget_______theEndurance

（忍耐号）withhisfriend'shelp.Hehidina__________,butwassoondiscoveredandbroughttoShackleton.Althoughthecaptainwasangry,he_________theboythejobofcookingforthe

.Their/encountereddifficulties,andtheEndurancebecametrappedintheice.BeforetheEndurancewascrushedand

intothesea,anorderto

shipwasissuedbyShackleton,andthecrewhadtocamponice.TheythensailedtoElephantIsland.Soonafterthat,aboatpartyselectedbyShackleton_________forSouthGeorgiaIslandtogethelp.seizedwasturneddownaboardcupboardassignedcrewvoyagesankabandonsetoff

Appreciate&Find1.Aftertheadvertisementinthenewspapercaughthiseye,adeterminationseizedPerceBlackborowtojointheAntarcticexpeditionledbySirErnestShackleton,undeterredbyanypotentialchallenges.2.Theirvoyageencountereddifficulties,andtheEndurancebecametrappedintheice.3.Soonafterthat,aboatpartyselectedbyShackletonsetoffforSouthGeorgiaIslandtogethelp.lifelessnounsanimateverbs无灵主语inanimatesubject

无灵主语句，是指用无生命的事物做主语，用人或社会团体的行为或动作做谓语，因此这类句子常带有拟人化的修辞色彩。GuessingGame2.Everyminutecounts.3.Actionspeakslouderthanwords.4.

Fortuneknocksonceatleastateveryman'sdoor.

5.

Time

healsallwounds.

6.

Money

makesthemarego.

1.Constantdropping

wearsastone.水滴石穿。分秒必争。行动胜于雄辩。人人都有好运的一天。时间能治愈一切创伤。有钱能使鬼推磨。MycrewarecampingonElephantIslandnow,andIhavetoleftthemtofindhelponSouthGeorgiaIsland.Theyarefacingextremelychallengingcircumstancesandmentalchallenges.Mission1Changethefollowingadjectivesintonounsandusethemasthesubject.Enter请在此输入标题Changethefollowingadjectivesintonounsandusethemasthesubject.anxietypanicdespairhopelessnesshorrorhappinessguiltworryangerdepressionstresssadnessGap-filling当船驶离时，担忧笼罩了每一个人并使他们双腿发软。1.Whentheboatsailedaway,

coveredeveryoneandmadetheirlegsweak.worry/anxiety

Gap-filling他们虚弱的身体突然感觉更有力量了，在进食的时候幸福传遍全身，希望填满了他们的内心。2.Theirweakbodiessuddenlyfeltstronger,

spreadingthroughthemastheyenjoyedthemeal，and

（用无灵主语句）.happinesshopefilledtheirheartsGap-filling当象岛上的船员们看到沙克尔顿船长的船时，感激之情在他们心中涌起，驱散了数月以来的孤独与绝望。3.

welledupin（涌入）thecrewonElephantIslandastheysawCaptainShackleton’sship,chasedawaymonthsoflonelinessanddespairGratitude/AppreciationCategory1：

情感状态名词作主语+谓语（突出人物心理描写）

Summary1：主语是情感状态类名词，如

常见的谓语：happiness/joy/delight;excitement；gratitude,appreciation；fear,terror,fright,panic；puzzlement；satisfaction；eagerness；admiration；

；nervousness,anxiety；disappointment;depression；despair等。

wellupinsb（涌入);gripsb(紧抓),overwhelmsb，strikesb,hitsb,catchsb,surroundsb,comeoversb(支配，影响),creepoversb（不知不觉地产生）,sweepoversb,,takepossessionofsb等。Mission2Choosethecorrectanimateverbtofilleachmissingpart.EnterChooseanimateverbs(有灵谓语）withtheirproperforms.

slipbreakrevealswallowdriveThe

minutes

____________

by

quickly.时间一分一分地溜走了。The

bitter

weather

had

_________

everyone

indoors.由于天气寒冷，大家都躲进了室内。ThecoldAntarcticnighthad

thehopesofthecrew.南极寒冷的黑夜吞噬了船员们的希望。4.Dawnfinally

,itspalelight

howserioustheirtroublewas.黎明终于破晓，那微弱的光线揭示了他们所处困境的严重程度。slippeddrivenbrokeswallowedrevealedCategory2：时间/地点/场景类名词+谓语（烘托主题场景描写）

Summary2：

主语是表示时间/地点/场景类名词，如

___________________________________等常见的谓语：dusk黄昏；dawn黎明；night；cold；silenceswallow；drive；reveal；break；slip...Mission3Rewritethefollowingsentenceswithinanimatesubjects.EnterRewritethefollowingsentenceswithinanimatesubjects.1.Thecrewwasfilledwithdespairwhentheysawthedesertedisland.3.Whentheythoughtofgoinghome,theyhadthestrengthtoaccomplishthemission.2.ThecrewonElephantIslanddecidedtocatchseals（海豹）forfood,andthischangedtheirlives.Thesight

ofthedesertedislandfilledthemwithdespair.Thethoughtofgoinghomegavethemthestrengthtoaccomplishthemission.

ThedecisionofthecrewonElephantIslandtocatchsealsforfoodchangedtheirlives.Category3：行为动作的名词作主语+谓语（推动情节发展）

Summary3：主语是行为动作类名词，如

常见的谓语：sight看到；thought想法,glance一瞥,look看到,idea想法,feeling感受,walk走路等。signal；shatter摧毁；overwhelm压倒；strike打击侵袭；arouse唤起；remind想起；fill...with充满...；change改变；bring带来等。战战挑挑

CHALLENGE1.Findoutinanimatesubjectsentencestructuresinthepassage.Lifefellintoaregularpattern.Stayingalivetookallourtimeandenergy.ElephantIslandofferednowater,forcingustofindotherwaystosurvive.Wefoundthatwecouldmelticefromtheoceananddrinkthewaterfromit.Buthowcouldwemakefire?TherewerenotreesgrowingonAntarcticaandnooil,sotheonlyfuelwecouldusewasanimalfat.Thisgaveoffoily,blacksmoke,butitstayedburningeveninstrongwinds.Fearofillnessfromchangingtemperatureskeptusinsidemostofthetime.Thesweatcouldfreezeveryquickly.Thesmokyairfromburninganimalfatattackedourbodies,makingussick.2.Completethesesentences.狂风似乎都卷走了他们仅存希望的一小部分，只留下疑虑。(leavebehind留下)

_____

(无灵主语)seemedto

(有灵动词）asliceoftheirremaininghope,

(有灵动词）onlydoubt.2.由于没有淡水供应，他们不得不融化从冰冻海面上采集来的冰块，这一过程十分累人，考验着他们的耐心与忍耐力。Withoutaccesstofreshwater,theywereforcedtomelticeharvestedfromthefrozensea,

(无灵主语)that

(有灵动语)theirpatienceandendurance.carryawayatiringprocessleavingbehindtestedWildwinds3.刺骨的寒冷吞噬了他们，使他们举步维艰。

(无灵主语)

(有灵动词）them,makingithardforthemtomoveforward.ThefreezingcoldAndthen,justwhen

(无灵主语)

(有灵动词）them，

hopeappearedonthehorizon.swallowed4.就在他们感到绝望之际，地平线上出现了希望的曙光。

despairseized2.用无灵主语句补充完整下列句子。Category1：

情感状态名词作主语+谓语（突出人物心理描写）

Summary1：主语是情感状态类名词，如

常见的谓语：happiness/joy/delight;gratitude,appreciation；fear,terror,fright,panic；puzzlement；satisfaction；eagerness；admiration；

；nervousness,anxiety；disappointment;depression；despair等。

gripsb(紧抓)；wellupinsb（涌入);overwhelmsb，strikesb,hitsb,catchsb,surroundsb,comeoversb(支配，影响),creepoversb（不知不觉地产生）,sweepoversb,,takepossessionofsb等。Category2：Summary2：

主语是表示时间/地点/场景类名词，如

常见的谓语：dusk黄昏；dawn黎明；night；cold；silenceswallow；reveal；break；drive；slip...时间/地点/场景类名词+谓语（烘