Unit1CouldyoupleasecleanyourroomWriting课件鲁教版(五四学制)（2012）八年级英语上册

Unit1Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom?WritingLearningobjectivesSkillobjectives:1.复习本单元的重点词组，能就青少年是否应当承担家务劳动发表自己的观点。2.了解议论文写作最简单的结构，学会写议论文。3.初步了解议论文的最简单最常用的写作结构和写作的方法技巧，理清范文结构,能独立完成一篇针对做家务的想法的短文。Emotionalobjectives:能就青少年是否应当承担家务劳动发表自己的观点,能有分担家务的正确意识,增强家庭责任感。Doyoulikedoingchores?Why?Whynot?Yes,Ido.BecauseIthinkdoingchoresis...No,Idon't.BecauseIthinkdoingchoresis...importantnecessaryhelpfulenjoyableboring/meaninglessfundiffcultrelaxingLeadin.Ioftendothedishesfold

theclothessweepthefloorcookdinnertakeouttherubbishmakethebedwashtheclothestakethedogforawalkWhatdoyouoftendotohelpyourparentsathome?Pre-writing3aDoyouthinkchildrenshoulddosomechoresathome?Whyorwhynot?Discussthiswithaparnterandtakenotes.shouldn'tHowtoexpressyourownopinions?1.Doingchoreshelpstodevelopchildren’sindependence.2.Doingchoresteacheschildrenhowtolookafterthemselves.6.Doingchoresisgoodfortheirfuture.3.Sharingthehouseworkcanmakeparentshappy.4.Childrencanunderstandtheideaoffairness.5.Doingchorescanhelpthemkeephealthy.1.Doingchoresisawasteofchildren’stime.2.Childrenalreadyhaveenoughstressfromschool.3.Childrenshouldspendtheirtimeontheirschoolwork.4.Itistheparents’jobtoprovideacleanandcomfortableenvironmentathome.5.Sometimesdoingchoresisdifficultforthem.6.Theywillhavetodohouseworksothereisnoneedforthemtodoitnow.shouldWhile-writing3bWritealettertotheSundayMailandexpressyouropinion.DearSirorMadam,Ithink/believethat____________________________. Iagree/disagreethat___________________________.Ithinkitisfair/unfairforchildrento_______________.Ithinkchildrenshould/shouldnot___________________because_______________________________________.Forexample,theyshould/shouldnot_________________because_______________________________________.Yourstruly,_______1审consider2列list/outline3加add4连connect5查check美beautify晒show一、审题干：正确审题，确定写作基本模式。1.体裁______________2.人称______________3.时态______________书信/观点类第一人称一般现在时体裁：文章的形式和风格

Writeanoutline(OREC)weshould(not)dochores.Beginning(Para.1)

Ithinkitisimportantforchildrentolearnhowtodochoresandhelptheirparentswithhousework...Body(Para.2)reason1.todevelopchildren'sindependence；Ending

(Para.3)reason2.tounderstandtheideaoffairnessexample.Ioftendochoresathome,suchassweepingthflooranddoingthedishes.BecausethiscanmakeourfamilyhappiertoshowyouropiniontogivesomereasonsorexamplestoshowyouropinionagainConclusionAllinall,Inmyopinion,DearSirorMadam,Ithink/believethat________________________. Iagree/disagreethat_______________________.Ithinkitisfair/unfairforchildrento__________.Ithinkchildrenshould/shouldnot_____________because_________________________________.Forexample,theyshould/shouldnot____________because__________________________________.Yourstruly,_______thestructureoftheletter称呼署名正文结尾敬语DearSir,Ithinkitisimportantforchildrentolearnhowtodochoresandhelptheirparentswithhousework.It'snotenoughtojustgetgoodgradesatschool.Childrenthesedaysdependontheirparentstoomuch.They'realwaysasking,“Couldyougetthisforme?”or“Couldyouhelpmewiththat?”Doingchoreshelpstodevelopchildren'sindependenceandteachesthemhowtolookafterthemselves.Italsohelpsthemtounderstandtheideaoffairness.Sincetheyliveinonehousewiththeirparents,theyshouldknowthateveryoneshoulddotheirpartinkeepingitcleanandtidy.Ourneighbors'songotintoagoodcollegebutduringhisfirstyear,hehadnoideahowtotakecareofhimself.Asaresult,heoftenfellillandhisgradesdropped.Theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.Mr.SmithDoyourememberthestructure?二列提纲Opinion:StateyouropinionExamples:GivesomeexamplesReason:

GiveyourreasonsOpinion:Restateyouropinion二、列思路OpinionReasonConclusion(结论)ExampleAgreeDisagreeIthink/agreethat…I(don't)think/disagreethat…Because...First...Second.../What’smore...Moreover/Besides/Lastbutnotleast...Forexample,...Inaword/Allinall,/Anyway,Asaresult...Pre-writingR三、加AgreeKidsshoulddochores.Doingchoreshelpstodevelopchildren’sindependence.Italsohelpsustounderstandtheideaoffairness.Doingchorescanmakeparentshappy.Canyougivesomeexamples?EAgreeKidsshoulddochores.Doingchoreshelpstodevelopchildren’sindependence.Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,

suchasdoingthedishes,foldingclothesandcleaningmybedroom.Asaresult,Iamabletotakegoodcareofmyselfnow.三、加EAgreeKidsshoulddochores.Sinceweliveinonehousewithourparents,weshouldknowthateveryoneshoulddotheirpartinkeepingitcleanandtidy.Italsohelpsustounderstandtheideaoffairness.三、加EAgreeKidsshoulddochores.

Ourparentshavetoworkhardalldayandtheyaremuchtootired.Ifwesharethehousework,theywillhavetimetorelax.Doingchorescanmakeparentshappy.Howtomakeyouropinionsclearer?三、加Wethink/believeit’simportantforchildrento….It’snotenoughto….First,childrendependon…Second,doingchoreshelpsto…What’smore,italsohelpsthemtounderstand…Allinall/Inaword,Ithinktheearlier…,thebetter….Ithinkkidsshouldn’thelpwithhouseworkathome.First,kidsalreadyhaveenoughstress…Theydon’thavetimeto…Houseworkisawaste…Second,theyshouldspendtimeon…Also,…What’smore,…Allinall/Inaword,Idisagreekidsdochoresathome.Inmyopinion,Asforme,四、增添连接词Pros支持Against反对五：美书写规范整洁美观，没有语法拼写错误，句式优美。

post-writingCheckyourwritingEvaluationcriteriaResultStructureBeginningtopresentafact/situation2分Bodyreason1.2分reason2.2分example13分example2.3分Endingtoshowyouropinion2分Grammarandspelling5Totalexpression5Totalpoints1

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CheckingListpointsYesNo1.结构清晰Didyouhaveaclearstructure?2

2.分段写Didyouwrite3or4paragraphs?2

3.礼貌表达Didyouusepoliteexpression?2

4.好词好句Didyouusegoodwordsandsentences?6

5.行文连贯Didyouuselinkingwords?6

6.书写美观Didyouwriteneatly?3

7.80词以上Didyouwriteover80words?4

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CheckingListYesNo1.结构清晰Didhe/shehaveaclearstructure?

2.分段写Didhe/shewrite3or4paragraphs?

3.礼貌表达Didhe/sheusepoliteexpression?

4.好词好句Didhe/sheusegoodwordsandsentences?

5.行文连贯Didhe/sheuselinkingwords?

6.书写美观Didhe/shewriteneatly?

7.80词以上Didhe/shewriteover80words?

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CheckingListYesNo1.结构清晰Didhe/shehaveaclearstructure?

2.分段写Didhe/shewrite3or4paragraphs?

3.礼貌表达Didhe/sheusepoliteexpression?

4.好词好句Didhe/sheusegoodwordsandsentences?

5.行文连贯Didhe/sheuselinkingwords?

6.书写美观Didhe/shewriteneatly?

7.80词以上Didhe/shewriteover80words?

ChecktogetherPost-writing六：评档次分值评分标准一档20---25分内容切题，层次清楚，语言流畅，基本无语言表达错误。二档15---19分内容切题，层次比较清楚，语言比较流畅，语言表达错误较少。三档11---14分内容基本切题，层次不够分明，语言表达错误较多。四档1---10分有一定内容，但语法错误较多。注意：书面表达，语法错误，全卷扣分不得超过两分，单词拼写错误，全卷扣分不得超过两分，抄袭卷中阅读材料的抄袭部分不给分。小试牛刀

有人认为孩子应该把所有时间都放在学习上，做家务方面的事情，孩子不需要做。也有人认为孩子应该帮父母做家务，这样可以培养他们自立，使他们学会更好地照顾自己。请结合班里同学做家务的情况，写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。

要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，内容可适当发挥，80字左右。DearSirorMadam,Doyouthinkchildrenshoulddosomechoresathome?Inmyopinion,Iagreethat__________________________________.Ithinkitisimportantforchildrento_____

______________.Nowadays,___

_.Ihaveseveralreasonsforthis.First,itisimportantforchildrento_____________.Second,_____________.What'smore，______________________.Forexample,____________________________________________Allinall,childrenshould_______

_________.Itisgoodforthemtodevelopthemselves._____________________.Yourstruly,__________DearSirorMadam,Doyouthinkchildrenshoulddosomechoresathome?Inmyopinion,Ithinkkidsshouldn’thelpwithhousework____________.Ithinkitisunfairforchildrento_____

________________.Nowadays,___

_.Ihaveseveralreasonsforthis.First,itisimportantforchildrento_______________________.Second,_____________.What'smore，______________________.Forexample,____________________________________________Allinall,childrenshouldnot_______

__.Itisgoodforthemtodevelopthemselves.Yourstruly,__________DearSirorMadam,Asforme，Ithink/believeit’simportantforchildrentodochores.It’snotenoughtogetgoodgrades.First,childrendependontheirparentstoomuch.Second,doingchoreshelpstodevelopchildren’sindependence.What’smore,italsohelpsthemtounderstandtheideaoffairness.Forexample,becausetheylivewiththeirparents,it’snecessaryforthemtokeepthehousecleanandtidy.Allinall/Inaword,Ithinktheearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.Yourstruly,____________Pros支持Topicsentence(论点)Reasons/Facts(论据)Conclusion(结论)DearSirorMadam,Yourstruly,____________

Inmyopinion,Ithinkkidsshouldn’thelpwithhouseworkathome.

First,kidsalreadyhaveenoughstressfromschool.Theydon’thavetimetodohousework.Houseworkisawasteoftime.Second,theyshouldspendtimeonschoolwork.Also/What’smore,it’stheparents’jobtoprovideacleanandcomfortableenvironmentathomefortheirchildren.Forexample,parentsdon’tminddoingthedishesfortheirchildrenbecauseit’snotdifficult.Allinall/Inaword,Idisagreekidsdochoresathome.Against反对Topicsentence(论点)Reasons/Facts(论据）Conclusion