A Day to Remember Period 5七年级下册英语课件

ADaytoRemember(Period5)SectionB(2a-Reflecting)Nowshareyourdiarywithus.FreetalktookabustookphotosboughtgiftsWhatdidBobdointhepicture?Bob’sschooltripFreetalktookabusboughtgiftsWheredidBobgo?Howdidhegothere?Whatdidhesee?Whatdidhedothere?tookphotos2aMakenotesaboutyourlastschooltrip.MySchoolTrip1．Wheredidyougo?_____________________2．Whatdidyoudo/see?__________________________________________3．Howdidyoufeel?_____________________4．Whatdidyoulearn?__________________________________________Introduceyourschooltripaccordingto2a.MySchoolTrip1．Wheredidyougo?_____________________2．Whatdidyoudo/see?__________________________________________3．Howdidyoufeel?_____________________4．Whatdidyoulearn?__________________________________________Iwentto…andI…2bWriteadiaryentryabouttheschooltrip.Useyournotesin2aandtheexpressionstohelpyou.Ihada(n)amazing/good/bad/terribledaytoday.Ourclasswentonaschooltripto…Whataday!Friday,6JuneIhadareallygooddaytoday.Ourclasswentonaschooltriptoanartmuseum…Sunday,6October

Ihadareallygooddaytoday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whataday!Let’swriteSunday,6October

Ihadareallygooddaytoday.Itwassunnyandourclasswentonaschooltriptoafarm.Theschooltripwasinteresting.Wewenttherebybus.Onthefarm,Isawalotofanimals.Ilearnedtomilkacow.Ialsorodeahorseandclimbedthemountainswithmyclassmates.Wepickedsomestrawberries.Theyweredelicious.Thetripwasreallyfunny.Ilikeit!Whataday!Samplewriting:上周六，你和父母去了你叔叔的农场。请根据表格提示写一篇题为“AMemorableDay”的短文，描述你一天所做的事情并谈谈自己的感受和收获。要求：1．内容要包含表格提供的信息，可适当发挥；2．80词左右。时间地点花费时间活动收获和感受上周六叔叔的农场1小时到农场1.参观农场；看到了叔叔饲养的鸡、鸭和奶牛，还有很多蔬菜大棚2.劳动：喂了鸡，摘了黄瓜，学着给西红柿苗修剪枝叶累但很开心审题审题AMemorableDay_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________①我们看到了很多蔬菜大棚。Wesawmany________________withdifferentkindsofvegetables.②我很累，但我喜欢用我的双手工作。Iwas________butI_________________withmyhands.③他带领我们参观了农场。He________________________thefarm.④我们甚至学会了如何从西红柿苗上剪下树枝和叶子。Weeven________howto________________________________fromtomatoplants.large

tentstiredshowedusaroundlearnedcutbranchesandleaves素材积累enjoyedworking1．词汇与句型2．连接词与过渡语①First,myuncleshowedusaroundthefarm.(first、then、finally表示顺序)②IwastiredbutIenjoyedworkingwithmyhands.(but表示转折)③Weevenlearnedhowtocutbranchesandleavesfromtomatoplants.(even表示程度)素材积累分段构思1引出话题，概括描述这次活动2详细介绍参观农场的活动3结尾表达感受，总结这次活动谋篇布局AMemorableDay_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作AMemorableDayLastSaturday,Iwenttomyuncle’sfarmwithmyparents.First,myuncleshowedusaroundthefarm.Wesawmanylargetentswithdifferentkindsofvegetables.Therewerealsomanychickens,ducksandcowsonthefarm.Thenwegotstraighttowork.Wefedchickensandpickedcucumbers.Weevenlearnedhowtocutbranchesandleavesfromtomatoplants.Finally,myunclecookedlunchforuswithfreshvegetables.Itwasdelicious!IwastiredbutIenjoyedworkingwithmyhands.Itwastrulyamemorabledayforme.参考范文1．文章逻辑清晰地运用了“总—分—总”的结构。2．描述这次活动时，恰当运用了first、but、even等词，使文章更有条理性。3．开头用“LastSaturday,Iwenttomyuncle’sfarmwithmyparents.”引出要描述的内容，结尾用“IwastiredbutIenjoyedworkingwithmyhands.Itwastrulyamemorabledayforme.”总结全文，表达感受，升华主题。4．好句：Weevenlearnedhowtocutbranchesandleavesfromtomatoplants.Finally,myunclecookedlunchforuswithfreshvegetables.IwastiredbutIenjoyedworkingwithmyhands.范文点评WriteachainstoryaboutamemorabledayIngroups,thinkofaplaceorsituationwherethestorytookplace.Shareanyinterestingorspecialexperiences.Usethequestionstohelpyou.3a·Whatdidyouseeordothere?·Howdidyoufeel?·Didyoulearnanything?Writeachainstorytogether.Taketurnstoaddoneortwosentenceseach.Youcanuseyourexperiencesfrom3atohelpyou.Readtheexamplebelow.3bLastsummer,wehadaverymemorableday!Wewereonholidayinthemountains.Atfirstitwasaniceday,butthentheweatherchanged.Itstartedraining.Weheardthunderandsawlightningflashacrossthesky.Justthen,wesawsomeoneintrouble.…Readyourstorytotheclass.Voteonthemostinterestingorspecialstory.3cSelfCheckHowwellcanyoudothesethings?VerywellOKNeedswork