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【2024年高考真题】
1.(2024年新课标I卷)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtake
abustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.Itouched
downinViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iran
likecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.
ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.I
thoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenI
wasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlasted
forwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.
Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队
列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabig
smileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.
JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmy
Portuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.Afeelingof
helplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.
Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacash
machine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthe
message:"Outoforder.Sorry."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.________________________________________________
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Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.____________________________
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【答案】
IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Flashing
himanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I’llbelatefor
theconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan’taffordtomissit!”Iexplained.“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?I
willcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”Iadded,
handinghimmywatchaswellasmybusinesscard.Gunteracceptedmybusinesscardbutrejectedmywatch.He
wrotedownhisphonenumberandgaveittome.“Justkeepyourpromise,Sir.”Afeelingofgratitudewashedover
measIheardhiswords.Givinghimafirmhandshake,Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthebus,and
jumpedontoitjustbeforeitsdeparture.
Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Hepickedmeupatthebusstation
wherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.Beamingawarmsmileathim,IgavehimabighugthemomentI
sawhim.Wechattedhappilyonthewaytotheairport.Itoldhimthatthankstohisgenerosityandtimelyhelp,
everythinghadgonesmoothly.Whenhestoppedhistaxioutsidetheairport,Ipaidhimforthe“doublecarride”,
backandforthfromtheairporttothebusstation,togetherwithageneroustipthatheturneddown.Ialsogavehim
anattractivesouvenirIhadboughtatPrague,whichheacceptedwithdelight.Webecamegoodfriendsandkeptin
touchwitheachotherregularly.Ifeltblessedtohavesuchawarm-heartedfriendlikeGunter.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中,匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站
赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置,通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发
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现自己没带现金,尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功,而车站的取款机也故障了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里,告诉他这个坏消息。”可知,第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话,
承诺会还钱给对方,冈特同意,最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。
②由第二段首句内容“四天后,当我回到维也纳时,我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知,第二段可描写作者
付费给冈特,并向对方表示感激,两人成为了好朋友。
2.续写线索:作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两
人成为朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拒绝:reject/refuse
②给某人拥抱:givesb.ahug/embracesb.
③记下,写下:writedown/setdown
情绪类
①难以置信地:indisbelief/incredibly/unbelievably
②开心地:happily/joyfully
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hepickedmeupatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.(运用
了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Whenhestoppedhistaxioutsidetheairport,Ipaidhimforthe“doublecarride”,backandforth
fromtheairporttothebusstation,togetherwithageneroustipthatheturneddown.(运用了when引导的时间状
语从句,that引导的限制性定语从句)
2.(2024年新课标II卷)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtake
abustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.Itouched
downinViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iran
likecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.
ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.I
thoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenI
wasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlasted
forwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.
Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队
列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabig
smileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.
JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmy
Portuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.Afeelingof
helplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.
Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacash
machine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthe
message:"Outoforder.Sorry."
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.____________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Flashing
himanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I’llbelatefor
theconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan’taffordtomissit!”Iexplained.“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?I
willcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”Iadded,
handinghimmywatchaswellasmybusinesscard.Gunteracceptedmybusinesscardbutrejectedmywatch.He
wrotedownhisphonenumberandgaveittome.“Justkeepyourpromise,Sir.”Afeelingofgratitudewashedover
measIheardhiswords.Givinghimafirmhandshake,Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthebus,and
jumpedontoitjustbeforeitsdeparture.
Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Hepickedmeupatthebusstation
wherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.Beamingawarmsmileathim,IgavehimabighugthemomentI
sawhim.Wechattedhappilyonthewaytotheairport.Itoldhimthatthankstohisgenerosityandtimelyhelp,
everythinghadgonesmoothly.Whenhestoppedhistaxioutsidetheairport,Ipaidhimforthe“doublecarride”,
backandforthfromtheairporttothebusstation,togetherwithageneroustipthatheturneddown.Ialsogavehim
anattractivesouvenirIhadboughtatPrague,whichheacceptedwithdelight.Webecamegoodfriendsandkeptin
touchwitheachotherregularly.Ifeltblessedtohavesuchawarm-heartedfriendlikeGunter.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中,匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站
赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置,通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发
现自己没带现金,尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功,而车站的取款机也故障了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里,告诉他这个坏消息。”可知,第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话,
承诺会还钱给对方,冈特同意,最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。
②由第二段首句内容“四天后,当我回到维也纳时,我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知,第二段可描写作者
付费给冈特,并向对方表示感激,两人成为了好朋友。
2.续写线索:作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两
人成为朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拒绝:reject/refuse
②给某人拥抱:givesb.ahug/embracesb.
③记下,写下:writedown/setdown
情绪类
①难以置信地:indisbelief/incredibly/unbelievably
②开心地:happily/joyfully
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hepickedmeupatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.(运用
了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Whenhestoppedhistaxioutsidetheairport,Ipaidhimforthe“doublecarride”,backandforth
fromtheairporttothebusstation,togetherwithageneroustipthatheturneddown.(运用了when引导的时间状
语从句,that引导的限制性定语从句)
3.(2024年新课标Ⅰ卷·浙江)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthemajorheadachesfor
herwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.Itwasasix-storybuilding.Oneachfloor,hallwaysstretched
infourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachers’offices.Somewhereinthebuilding,therewas
alsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.
Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.Allthe
differenthallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.Shedecidedthatshe
wouldmemorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn’texist.
InherfirstPEclass,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunonemilearound
thetrackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewasnothingshefearedmore
thanhavingtorunawholemile.ToEva,“amile”wasusedtodescribelongdistances.Itwastenmilesfromher
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hometohergrandfather’s,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,eveninacar!
WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(哨子),Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,whilesomeof
herclassmatesedgedahead,othersactuallyfellbehind.“It’sjustthebeginning,”shethought.“I’llcomeinlastfor
sure.”
SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Evastarted
usingamindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword”mile.“Instead,shefocusedonreachingthe
shadowcastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrack
curved(拐弯).Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,
thenfour.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.________________________
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Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.__________________________________
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【答案】
WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.Inthevastexpanseofher
school,agirlwithpoordirectionalskillsstruggledtonavigateandoftengotlost.Oneday,duringgymclass,she
observedauniquewaytofindherway-followingtheshadowsoftrees.Asthesuncastitsrays,thegirlnoticed
howtheshadowscreatedpatternsontheground,guidingherpath.Shetookaleapoffaithandfollowedthe
shadows,surprisingherselfwitheachturnandstretch.Hereffortswerenoticedbytheteacher,whopraisedher
innovativethinking.
Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.Sheusedtheshadowstonavigatethe
schoolhallways,findherclasses,andevenlocatetheschool'svariousfacilities.Thisnewfoundskillnotonly
helpedthegirlnavigateherschoolbutalsoinstilledinherasenseofconfidenceandadventure.Shelearned
excitedlythatwithalittlecreativityandobservation,anychallengecouldbeovercome.Andwitheachstepshe
took,sheleftbehindalegacyofinspirationforthosewhofollowedinherfootsteps,knowingthatevenwithouta
clearsenseofdirection,there'salwaysawaytofindone'sway.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了高中生Eva因为方向感不强,经常在学校里迷路,在一次体
育课上教练要求他们沿着校园跑步的时候Eva发现跟着树的影子能找到方向,她通过这个方法重新认识到
了校园。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当Pitt教练在终点线对她说:“干得好!”,伊娃很惊讶。”可知,第一段可描写Eva通过
自己追随影子的方法找到方向,并且受到了教练的称赞。
②由第二段首句内容“Eva决定用同样的手段来记住学校大楼。”可知,第二段可描写Eva通过记住影子的方
法来记住学校大楼并且通过这件事之后的感悟。
2.续写线索:方向感太差记不住学校建筑的位置——体育课上绕着学校跑却找不到方向——害怕最后一名心
里非常紧张——跟随影子找到方向——受到教练的赞赏——获得感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①努力做某事:struggletodosth./strivetodosth.
②导航:navigate/guide
③了解:learn/know/acknowledge
情绪类
①使某人惊讶:surprisesb./astonishsb.
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②激动地:excitedly/inexcitement
【点睛】[高分句型1]Hereffortswerenoticedbytheteacher,whopraisedherinnovativethinking.(who引导的
非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Shelearnedthatwithalittlecreativityandobservation,anychallengecouldbeovercome.(that引导
的宾语从句)
【2023年高考真题】
1.(2023年新高考I卷)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithout
thinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writing
wassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingofthe
Titanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.
So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyour
stories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreed
togiveitatry.
IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseat
nightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcome
straightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.
Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?I
sympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.I
workedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalfdozen
booksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.
WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”
Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytothe
enjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews._____________________________
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Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.__________________________________________
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【答案】
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirst
prizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.Iwassohappytohearthe
newsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaid
excitedly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythanksto
myteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyour
recognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”
Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,
hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”“YouknowIdidn’tlikewritingbefore,butnow
Iamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,Ihavewrittenmanygood
worksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroad
towriting.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者上中学的时候,社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。
作者不喜欢写作,于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下,作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽
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然很累,但是没有放弃,坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时,作者感到写作让他很快乐,他已经不在乎
输赢了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后,当我几乎忘记比赛的时候,传来了消息。”和第二段首句“颁奖后我
去了老师的办公室。”可知,第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖,在颁奖典礼上作者表达了对社会老师的感
激。
②由第二段首句内容“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知,第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作,自此
作者坚持写作取得了成功,作者将这一切归功于自己的老师。
2.续写线索:比赛消息传来——作者获奖——高兴——颁奖典礼感谢老师——颁奖后来到老师办公室
——老师告诉作者坚持写作——作者表达了对写作的喜爱——作者写作取得了成功——感激老师
3.词汇激活
行为类
①告知:inform/tell
②成功做到:makeit/succeed
③表达:express/convey
情绪类
①高兴的:happy/glad
②激动地:excitedly/withexcitement
【点睛】[高分句型1]IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbe
anawardpresentationintwodays.(运用了由连接词that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.(运用了强调句)
[高分句型3]Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting(.运用了
who引导的限制性定语从句)
2.(2023年新高考II卷)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithout
thinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writing
wassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingofthe
Titanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.
So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyour
stories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreed
togiveitatry.
IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseat
nightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcome
straightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.
Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?I
sympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.I
workedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalfdozen
booksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.
WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”
Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytothe
enjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.______________________________
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Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.__________________________________________
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【答案】
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirst
prizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.Iwassohappytohearthe
newsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaid
excitedly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythanksto
myteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyour
recognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”
Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,
hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”“YouknowIdidn’tlikewritingbefore,butnow
Iamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,Ihavewrittenmanygood
worksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroad
towriting.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者上中学的时候,社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。
作者不喜欢写作,于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下,作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽
然很累,但是没有放弃,坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时,作者感到写作让他很快乐,他已经不在乎
输赢了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后,当我几乎忘记比赛的时候,传来了消息。”和第二段首句“颁奖后我
去了老师的办公室。”可知,第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖,在颁奖典礼上作者表达了对社会老师的感
激。
②由第二段首句内容“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室。”可知,第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作,自此
作者坚持写作取得了成功,作者将这一切归功于自己的老师。
2.续写线索:比赛消息传来——作者获奖——高兴——颁奖典礼感谢老师——颁奖后来到老师办公室
——老师告诉作者坚持写作——作者表达了对写作的喜爱——作者写作取得了成功——感激老师
3.词汇激活
行为类
①告知:inform/tell
②成功做到:makeit/succeed
③表达:express/convey
情绪类
①高兴的:happy/glad
②激动地:excitedly/withexcitement
【点睛】[高分句型1]IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbe
anawardpresentationintwodays.(运用了由连接词that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.(运用了强调句)
[高分句型3]Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting(.运用了
who引导的限制性定语从句)
3.(2023年浙江卷1月)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmand
walkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.
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