人教版必修 第一册Unit 1 Teenage life reading for writing课件

Unit1TeenagerLife（Writing）单元写作通道contents目录精准审题，谋篇布局头脑风暴，遣词造句斟酌词句，妙笔生花衔接过渡，斐然成篇一、精准审题，谋篇布局第一步

精准审题，谋篇布局1、明确体裁话题2、确定时态人称3、布局文章框架4、列出核心要点第一步

精准审题，谋篇布局明确体裁话题确定时态人称建议信；如何适应新环境一般现在时；第二人称为主第一步

精准审题，谋篇布局3.布局文章框架称呼DearXXX,（顶格）首段：对收到信进行反馈；安慰对方；想给建议引出后文中段：建议1/2/3+原因/结果尾段：希望我的建议可以帮到你；期待你的来信落款

Yours,（右对齐）XXX4.分析题目，列出核心要点1.指出问题所在2.提出摆脱困境、适应环境的建议A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.

B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason(s)D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Neversay:Youmust...Ifyouwanttogivesbadvice...Youcansay:Youshould...You'dbetter...Youmightaswell...ABCDEFIthinkyoushould...Irecommendthatyou(should)...Iadviseyouto...IfIwereyou,Iwould...You'dbetter...Whynot.../Whydon'tyou...Memorizethesesentencestructureswhenofferingadvice.Whataretheirproblems?Myparentswon'tlisten.Ialwaysfeellonely.ThereisagirlIlikeinmyclass.二、头脑风暴，遣词造句头脑风暴收信反馈分析现状，安慰对方想给建议，引出后文首段不要太担心面临同样的问题进入高中感觉不好不适应高中生活遣词——首段进入高中感觉不好适应高中生活不要太担心面临同样的问题enterhighschoolfeelbadgetusedto/adjusttoseniorhighschoollifenotworrytoomuchabout…facethesameproblem头脑风暴——中段建议一建议二原因方法/目的结果/意义放学后邀请同学一起参加活动遇到困难，互相帮助没有朋友/感到孤独不知道如何结交朋友多交新朋友沟通、相互理解丰富知识强壮身体校园生活将变得多姿多彩学习困难生活困难自我调节外界帮助听歌、看电影放松心情制定计划，专注学习同学互帮互助、向老师寻求帮助摆脱困境假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：(1)表示理解；(2)提出建议（不少于2点）。DearPeter,

Knowingthatyouhavedifficultyinadaptingtoanewenvironment,I'mwritingtooffermyadviceasIunderstandhowyoufeel.A.First,you

aresupposedto(应该)

getusedtolifeinChina.B.First,you

aresupposedto

makemoreChinesefriends.C.First,you

aresupposedto

makemoreChinesefriendswhowillhelpyouwheneverintrouble.Tip1:Adviceshouldbespecific.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：(1)表示理解；(2)提出建议（不少于2点）。DearPeter,

Knowingthatyouhavedifficultyinadaptingtoanewenvironment,I'mwritingtooffermyadviceasIunderstandhowyoufeel.First,youaresupposedtomakemoreChinesefriendswhowillhelpyouwheneverintrouble.A.Besides,it'sagoodideato

knowtheenvironment.B.Besides,it'sagoodideato

takepartinsomeactivities,whichwillhelpyougetusedtothelifehereeasily.C.Besides,it'sagoodideato

readmoreChinesebookswheneveryouareintrouble.specific假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter作为交换生来到中国不久，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给Peter回邮件。内容要点如下：(1)表示理解；(2)提出建议（不少于2点）。DearPeter,

Knowingthatyouhavedifficultyinadaptingtoanewenvironment,I'mwritingtooffermyadviceasIunderstandhowyoufeel.First,youaresupposedtomakemoreChinesefriendswhowillhelpyouwheneverintrouble.A.Besides,it'sagoodideato

knowtheenvironment.B.Besides,it'sagoodideato

takepartinsomeactivities,whichwillhelpyougetusedtothe