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Unit5Education1.“值得”家族①beworthdoing值得做②beworthyofbeingdone某事值得做③beworthytobedone某事值得被做④Itisworthwhiledoing...做……是值得的。⑤Itisworthwhiletodo...做……是值得的。2.“最后”聚焦①finallyadv.最后②ultimatelyadv.最后③eventuallyadv.最后④atlast最后,终于⑤intheend最后⑥inconclusion最后Ⅰ.单元话题微写作——四种模式之读后续写Istartedplayingthecello(大提琴)whenIwasthreeyearsold.Itslargewoodenbodymademelookverytiny.Everyweekmyfatherwoulddrivemepastgardens,andIwouldlookoutofthewindowtowatchdogsrunningandlookforflowersalltheway.Thiswastheroadtomycelloteacher'shome.Mychildhoodwasamixtureofcelloperformances,athomeconcerts,andinstrumentrehearsals(彩排).Myhandsranupanddowntheinstrument,andadultssmiledwhenIplayedwell.Actually,Ididn'tenjoyallofthat.Tome,allwasjustaboutgettingAgrades,practisingaccompaniedbymymotherandheropinionsaboutwhatthemusicshouldfeelandsoundlike.Ifeltthepressuretosucceed,andIdidit.Igotmydiploma(文凭)at14,andmyparentsboughtanexpensivecelloformewhenIwas16,hopingIwouldbecomethenextYoYoMa,awellknowncellist.Icontinuedtopractiseandplayunwillingly,spendingalmosteverySaturdayatamusicprogram.However,Ididn'tfeelmuchtowardsit.Whenhighschoolfinished,Istoppedplaying,leavingthecellosittinginitsplacesilently.Growingup,Isometimesresented(怨恨)myparentsforexpectingsomuchfromme,andwonderedwhytheywouldn'tletmedecidemyownhobbiesandinterests.WhenIgaveupplaying,relativescomplainedaboutmywastedtalentatfamilygatherings,whichmademefeellikeIhadnothingelsetooffer.AtthattimeIwasjustlikealotoftoday'syoungpeople,whofeelangrywhentheyareforcedtodowhattheydon'treallylike.Butthingshavechangedinthelastfewyears.IbegantohaveastrongdesireforcellowhenIfeltlonelyinastrangecity.Imisseditsfamiliarsound,anditarousedpassioninmymind.Withoutanyhesitation,IaskedmyparentstodrivemycellodownfromSydneytoMelbourne.Istartedplayingagain,writingsongsthatsoundedmorelikethekindthatI'dalwayswanttoplayinbandsandaloneinmyroom.注意:续写词数应为150个左右。Playingthecelloagainwasbothunfamiliarandfamiliartome.NowIhavearealunderstandingofmyparents'decisionsforme.Step1快读文本获取信息1.故事发展线索:3岁开始学大提琴,14岁时拿到证书→高中毕业后不再演奏→在陌生的城市因孤独重新开始演奏→手法陌生,后悔→重新练习→意识到了父母的良苦用心2.情感发展线索:并不喜欢演奏大提琴→在压力下拿到证书→演奏时不情愿→不再演奏大提琴,怨恨父母期望过高→因放弃被亲戚抱怨,感到生气→在陌生的城市里感到孤独,想要演奏大提琴→理解了父母Step2细读首句合理推测1.针对续写段首1:Playingthecelloagainwasbothunfamiliarandfamiliartome.设问:①Whywasplayingthecellounfamiliarandfamiliarto“me”?②Howdid“I”practiseplayingthecelloagain?③Whatwastheresultofthepractice?Whateffectdidthepracticebring?推测:重新开始练习,找回了熟悉的感觉,手法越来越娴熟,并消除了身在陌生城市的孤独感。2.针对续写段首2:NowIhavearealunderstandingofmyparents'decisionsforme.设问:①Howdid“I”feelabout“my”parentsinthepast?②Howdo“I”feelaboutwhattheydidfor“me”now?③Whathave“I”learnedfromthisexperience?推测:理解了父母的良苦用心,为父母做过的事情感到感激。Step3恰当用词打造靓句1.我的技法有点落下了,我的手指也不像以前那样灵活了。Mytechniquehadfallenbehind,andmyfingersbecamelessflexibleasbefore.2.我后悔自己停了那么久。IregrettedthatIhadquitteditsolong.3.刚开始,我恼怒的是他们总是强迫我按照他们的安排行事。Atfirst,Iwasannoyedthattheywerealwaysforcingmetodoastheyarranged.4.每一次他们替我做决定,我都感到生气。Ireallyfeltupseteverytimetheymadedecisionsforme.5.事实是,他们给我提供一切机会让我学习技能,希望我所学到的东西能在将来使我的人生有所不同。Actually,thefactisthattheyofferedmeeveryopportunitytolearnskills,hopingthatallIlearnedwouldmakeadifferencetomylifeinthefuture.Step4衔接过渡组句成篇参考范文:Playingthecelloagainwasbothunfamiliarandfamiliartome.Mytechniquehadfallenbehind,andmyfingersbecamelessflexibleasbefore.Iwonderedhowitcouldbesoeasyinthepast.AndIregrettedthatIhadquitteditsolong.Inthefollowingdays,Inolongertriedtogetawayfromitlikebeforebutspentmuchtimepractisingiteveryday.GraduallyIregainedthefamiliarfeelingofplayinganddevelopedadeeperrelationshipwiththecello.Moreimportantly,Iwasnotlonelyanymore.NowIhavearealunderstandingofmyparents'decisionsforme.Atfirst,Iwasannoyedthattheywerealwaysforcingmetodoastheyarranged.Ireallyfeltupseteverytimetheymadedecisionsforme.Actually,thefactisthattheyofferedmeeveryopportunitytolearnskills,hopingthatallIlearnedwouldmakeadifferencetomylifeinthefuture.Absolutely,themusicconveyedbythecelloenrichesmylifealot.Iamsogratefultomyparentsforwhattheydidforme.
Ⅱ.微型写作——续写提能练教材语料整合亮词[情感描写]sympathy;unbearable;troublesome;superb;straightforward;excitement;painful;enthusiastic;complex;gently;disappointed;puzzle;critical;integrity;conventional;preoccupied[人物描写]promote;facilitates;insist;evaluate;stubborn;enlighten;grasp;expand;gain;pursue;educate;contribute;expose;stimulate;assess;approve;urge;abandon;owe;restrict美句1.Shewassometimestroublesome,stubbornandangry,andhadatendencytobreakthingswhennooneunderstoodher.(人物描写)2.However,becauseHelenwassoenthusiasticaboutlearning,theresultswereamazing.(情感描写)3.Whenherteachersaidthatitwasn't,shewasconfusedanddisappointed.(情感描写)4.Youcannottouchloveeither;butyoufeelthesweetnessthatitpoursintoeverything.Withoutloveyouwouldnotbehappyorwanttoplay.(主旨升华)5.Heisnowknownasthefatherofastronomy.(比喻)6.Inthepicture,amaniswearingahatandanapron,andiscarryinganumbrellabecauseitisrainingheavily.(人物描写)7.Itisimportantnottobecometoopreoccupiedwithroutinesandschedules,becausetheycanmakeusblindtowhatisinfrontofus.(主旨升华)拓展语料积累【动作细节描写:“嘴”动“唇”动】词块openmouthed目瞪口呆的mouthdrops/hangswideopen张大嘴巴widenone'smouth咧开嘴feelone'sthroattightandone'smouthdry感到喉咙发紧,嘴发干cup/coverone'smouth捂住某人的嘴downinthemouth垂头丧气,嘴角下垂one'sheartinone'smouth提心吊胆lickone'slips舔嘴唇purseone'slips噘嘴biteone'slip忍住话,抑制情感流露句型Shefroze,hermouthhangingopen.(独立主格)她呆住了,嘴张开着。Hermouthgrewstiffwithpainanddistress.疼痛和悲伤让她嘴巴发僵。Hestraightenedupandlookedatme,openmouthed/hismouthdroppingopeninsurprise.他直起身,目瞪口呆地看着我。Withasmileplayingaroundhismouth,herecalledthehappypastdays.(with复合结构)嘴角挂着微笑,他回忆起过去的快乐时光。Agentlesmiledancedaroundthecornersofhermouth,makingusfeelatease/puttingusatease.(拟人)她的嘴角露出一抹温柔的笑意,使我们放松下来。MymouthstartedwateringwhenIsmelledthefood.闻到食物的香味,我的嘴开始流口水了。Shebitherlowerliptokeepitfromtremblingastearsran/streamed/rolleddownhercheeks.她咬着下唇不让它颤抖,泪水顺着她的脸颊流下来。语料运用【“第一课”】ThefirsttimeIdeliveredalectureasauniversitylecturer,Ifeltextremelypainfulandanxious,①mythroattightandmymouthdry(独立主格结构).②Ihaveanurgetoescape,butIwasnotastudentbutateachernow.Thinkingofit,Itriedto③bitemyupperliptokeepitfromtremb
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