Unit2Schoollife建议信(单元写作讲义)译林版2024八年级上册(原卷版)

Unit2Schoollife同步写作课讲义译林版2024八年级上册⭐话题解读⭐⭐话题解读⭐Unit2的主题围绕“人与自我：学校生活”展开，校园活动、读书学习、场馆特色等都是这一主题下的重要元素。在具体的英语写作中，学生应做到以下几点：1.要精准捕捉学校生活的核心要素。例如，描述运动会时，可聚焦接力赛中同学们眼神交汇传递的信任，或是跳高选手腾空时飞扬的衣角；记录课堂场景，不妨观察老师板书时粉笔灰飘落的瞬间，以及同桌在草稿纸上偷偷画的简笔画。通过这些细腻的生活切片，结合自身独特的经历与观察，挖掘出与众不同的写作视角。2.by...上，需储备丰富的英语词汇与多样句式。描述校园美景时，可使用"lushgreenlawns（葱郁草坪）""bloomingflowerbeds（盛放的花坛）"等短语；表达情感体验，善用"Iwasdeeplytouchedby..."或"Anunforgettablememoryrushedtomymind"等句型。同时，学会运用连接词如"moreover""however""therefore"，确保句子间过渡自然，观点表达清晰流畅。3.文章结构的搭建至关重要。开头可采用"悬念式"抛出问题，如"Doyouknowwhatmakesmyschoollifesparkle？"，或用"场景描写式"直接将读者带入校园清晨的朗朗书声中；主体部分按重要程度或时间顺序，分点叙述学习、活动、人际关系等内容；结尾处通过总结感悟升华主题，例如"Schoollifeisnotjustaboutclasses—it’sacolorfuljourneyshapingwhoIam"，使文章逻辑严密，内容完整。⭐写作任务⭐⭐写作任务⭐本单元核心写作任务聚焦于撰写校园建设建议信，旨在引导学生以批判性思维审视校园生活场景。在创作过程中，学生需深入观察教学楼硬件设施，如教室照明不足、运动器材老化等具体问题；剖析校园环境细节，例如绿化带维护缺失、垃圾分类标识模糊等现象；评估课外活动安排，像社团资源分配不均、体育活动时间不足等状况。通过系统分析现存问题，运用"问题原因对策"的逻辑框架，提出如加装护眼灯具、定期检修器械、增设绿植养护课程、优化社团申请机制等兼具创新性与可操作性的改进方案。这一实践不仅能锻炼学生发现问题的敏锐观察力、分析问题的逻辑思考力，更能通过英语书面表达，实现语言知识向实际应用能力的转化，切实提升学生用英语解决现实问题的综合素养。⭐审题指导⭐⭐审题指导⭐本单元主要话题是学校生活，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与校园设施、学习环境、课外活动、课程设置等相结合。命题内容以校园实际情况为主，根据提示记叙或描述校园建设相关的情况。写作时应注意建议信的内容、格式以及时态的运用。内容一般从以下几方面着手：Whereisthebestplacetobuildanewreadingroom?"（建造新阅览室的最佳位置在哪里？）Howcanweimprovetheschoolgardentomakeitmorebeautiful?（我们怎样才能改进学校花园，使它更漂亮？）Howcanweencouragemorestudentstojointhescienceclub?（我们怎样才能鼓励更多学生加入科学俱乐部？）Howcanwecreateabetterstudyatmosphereintheclassroom?（我们怎样才能在教室里营造更好的学习氛围？）Whatkindofsportsfacilitiesshouldweaddtotheplayground?（我们应该在操场增加什么样的体育设施？）写作步骤◆步骤一：精准审题，锚定方向拿到题目后，逐字研读题干中的关键词、限定词和任务指令。例如，若题目要求围绕“改善校园图书馆使用体验”撰写建议信，需明确写作对象（如校领导或图书馆负责人）、核心主题（优化图书馆服务）和具体要点（如开放时间、藏书种类、借阅流程等）。通过标注关键词、梳理逻辑关系，初步搭建建议信的核心框架。◆步骤二：深度调研，系统规划结合日常观察与切身体验，通过思维导图或表格形式梳理校园现存问题。例如，若聚焦食堂卫生问题，可从食材新鲜度、餐具清洁、就餐环境等维度展开分析；若讨论课外活动不足，可从社团种类、活动频率、学生参与度等方面收集案例。在此基础上，按“问题原因解决方案”的逻辑结构拟定提纲，确保每条建议具体、可行且有针对性。◆步骤三：规范写作，打磨细节suggest...if......Iwouldliketosuggest...”“Itwouldbebeneficialif...”）和礼貌用语（如“Thankyouforyourconsideration”）展开行文。灵活使用连接词（如firstly,moreover,inaddition）增强文章连贯性，适当引用数据或实例（如“80%的学生反映...”）提升说服力。完成初稿后，对照英文书信格式检查称呼、结尾敬语、署名等要素，同时通过朗读检查语法错误和表达流畅度，确保文章严谨规范。⭐写作框架⭐⭐写作框架⭐开头引入：Dearschoolleaders,I’mLiHua,astudentfromClass2,Grade8....引入话题：Ourschool,withitspicturesquesceneryandvibrantatmosphere,alreadyprovidesawonderfullearningspace.However,...主体部分（建议1）：Firstandforemost,thecurrentschoollibrary,whilewellstockedwithvaluableresources,oftenstrugglestoacmodatetheincreasingnumberofstudentsseekingaquietstudyarea....表达情感：Ifirmlybelievethatimplementingthesesuggestionswillnotonlyelevatethequalityofourcampuslifebutalsoinspirestudentstoengagemoreactivelyintheirstudies.Isincerelyhopethat...结尾部分：Bestwishesforthecontinuousprosperityofourschool!Yourssincerely,LiHua思维导图：⭐素材宝库⭐⭐素材宝库⭐词汇积累词汇积累在描写“学校生活”主题时，掌握丰富且准确的词汇能让文章更加生动立体。以下是围绕校园环境、设施、活动及改进建议等方面的核心词汇，帮助同学们精准表达：1.campus（n.）校园例句：Ourcampusissurroundedbylushtrees,creatingapeacefulstudyenvironment.常见短语：campuslife（校园生活）、campusculture（校园文化）2.construction（n.）建设例句：Thenewteachingbuildingconstructionwillbepletednextmonth.近义词：building,development3.suggestion（n.）建议例句：I'dliketomakeasuggestiontoimproveourschoollibraryservice.常见短语：give/makeasuggestion（提出建议）4.facility（n.）设施（常用复数形式facilities）例句：Ourschoolprovidesexcellentsportsfacilities,includingagymandaswimmingpool.常见短语：publicfacilities（公共设施）、learningfacilities（学习设施）5.environment（n.）环境例句：Acleanandquietenvironmentisessentialforeffectivelearning.形容词形式：environmental（环境的）6.improve（v.）改善；提高例句：Weshouldtakeactiontoimprovethecampussafety.名词形式：improvement7.library（n.）图书馆例句：Thelibraryismyfavoriteplacetoreadandstudyafterclass.拓展词汇：readingroom（阅览室）、referencesection（参考资料区）8.playground（n.）操场例句：StudentsgatherontheplaygroundforPEclassesandafterschoolactivities.近义词：sportsfield9.garden（n.）花园例句：Theschoolgardenisfilledwithcolorfulflowers,makingitarelaxingspot.常见短语：botanicalgarden（植物园）10.classroom（n.）教室例句：Ourclassroomisequippedwithmodernteachingtoolslikesmartboards.常见短语：classroommanagement（课堂管理）11.activity（n.）活动例句：Therearevariousextracurricularactivitiestochoosefrom,suchasdebateclubsandartshows.复数形式：activities12.club（n.）俱乐部例句：IjoinedtheEnglishclubtopracticespeakingwithotherstudents.常见类型：chessclub（象棋俱乐部）、scienceclub（科学俱乐部）13.atmosphere（n.）氛围例句：Thefriendlyatmosphereinourclassmakeslearningenjoyable.常见短语：learningatmosphere（学习氛围）、activeatmosphere（活跃氛围）14.measure（n.）措施；（v.）测量例句：Theschoolhastakennewmeasurestoreducestudents'stress.常见短语：takemeasures（采取措施）15.encourage（v.）鼓励例句：Teachersoftenencourageustoexpressourownopinions.名词形式：encouragement16.participate（v.）参与例句：Everyoneshouldparticipateintheschoolvolunteerprogram.常见短语：participatein（参与）、participation（n.参与）17.beautiful（adj.）美丽的例句：Thebeautifulsceneryofthecampusattractsmanyvisitors.副词形式：beautifullyfortable（adj.）舒适的例句：Thenewlyrenovatedclassroomsaremorefortableforstudying.名词形式：fort19.convenient（adj.）方便的例句：Thelocationofthecafeteriaisveryconvenientforstudents.名词形式：convenience20.necessary（adj.）必要的例句：Goodmunicationbetweenteachersandstudentsisnecessaryforaharmoniouscampus.反义词：unnecessary句型积累句型积累※基础句型think...think...我认为……Itisimportantto...做……很重要Weshould...我们应该……Thereis/are...有……Ihope...我希望……Forexample,...例如，……Inmyopinion,...在我看来，……Let’s...让我们……Wecan...我们可以……The...istoo...这个……太……※升级句型Itwouldbebetterif...如果……将会更好Notonly...butalso...不但……而且……What’smore,...而且，……Inaddition,...此外，……Asaresult,...结果，……Ononehand,...ontheotherhand,...一方面，……另一方面，……Itissuggestedthat...建议……paredwith...,this...与……相比，这个……Itisobviousthat...很明显……Tomakemattersbetter,...为了让情况更好，……※高分句型Itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimprovethecampusenvironment.（是我们采取措施改善校园环境的时候了。）Onlyinthiswaycanwecreateamorefortablelearningatmosphere.（只有这样，我们才能营造一个更舒适的学习氛围。）Whatweneedtodonowistoencouragemorestudentstoparticipateincampusactivities.（我们现在需要做的是鼓励更多学生参与校园活动。）Withthedevelopmentofourschool,itbeesnecessarytoupgradetheteachingfacilities.（随着我们学校的发展，升级教学设施变得很有必要。）Notuntilwesolvetheseproblemscanweenjoyabetterschoollife.（直到我们解决这些问题，我们才能享受更好的学校生活。）Itisbelievedthatthenewmeasureswillbringgreatchangestoourcampus.（人们相信这些新措施将给我们的校园带来巨大变化。）ThereasonwhyIputforwardthissuggestionisthatitcanbenefitallstudents.（我提出这个建议的原因是它能让所有学生受益。）AsfarasI’mconcerned,buildinganewartcenterisofgreatsignificance.（在我看来，建造一个新的艺术中心意义重大。）Takingeverythingintoconsideration,weshouldstartthecampusconstructionassoonaspossible.（综合考虑所有因素，我们应该尽快开始校园建设。）Ifweworktogether,thereisnodoubtthatourschoolwillbeemorebeautiful.（如果我们齐心协力，毫无疑问我们的学校将会变得更美丽。）谚语名句谚语名句AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量。Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Timeandtidewaitfornoman.岁月不待人。Learnandlive.活着，为了学习。Wisdominthemindisbetterthanmoneyinthehand.脑中有知识，胜过手中有金钱。Nevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老。Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行，始于足下。Booksaretheladderofhumanprogress.书籍是人类进步的阶梯。Themoreyouread,thewiseryoubee.读书越多，越有智慧。Unityisstrength.团结就是力量。Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。Healthisbetterthanwealth.健康胜过财富。Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。Don’tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.今日事，今日毕。Everymanhashisfaults.金无足赤，人无完人。写作模板写作模板Dear[收信人称呼],I’m[你的名字],astudentfrom[班级].I’mwritingthislettertosharesomesuggestionsabout[有关学校哪方面的建议，如campusconstruction].Ourschoolhasmanywonderfulaspects,buttherearestillsomeareasthatneedimprovement.Forexample,[指出存在的问题1].Tosolvethisproblem,Ithinkweshould[提出建议1].What’smore,[指出存在的问题2].Inmyopinion,[提出建议2].Ibelievethesesuggestionswillmakeourschoolabetterplacetostudyandlive.Ihopemysuggestionscanbeconsidered.ThankyouforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,[你的名字]⭐参考范文⭐⭐参考范文⭐（范文1）Dearschoolleaders,I’mWangLeifromClass3,Grade8.I’dliketosharetwosuggestionstomakeourschoolbetter.First,theplaygroundistoosmall.Duringbreaks,manystudentscan’tplaybasketballorruntogetherbecauseit’stoocrowded.Expandingtheplaygroundwouldletusexercisehappily.Second,thecafeteriahasonlyafewdishes.Somestudentsbringfoodfromoutsidebecausetheydon’tlikethemenu.Ifweinvitenewfoodsuppliers,wecanenjoynoodles,sandwiches,andfreshfruiteveryday!Thesechangeswillhelpusstudybetterandstayhealthy.Ihopeyoucanthinkaboutmyideas.Thankyou!Yourssincerely,WangLei（范文2）Dearteachers,I’mLiMeifromClass1,Grade8.Herearemysuggestionsforcampuslife.Thelibraryisalwaysfullofstudentsreadingordoinghomework,butmanyhavetostandbecausetherearenoseats.Buildinganewfloorwithmorereadingroomswouldsolvethisproblem.Also,theschoolgardenonlyhasgreengrassnow.Plantingroses,sunflowers,andsmallpinetreeswillmakeitabeautifulplaceforustotakephotosorreadbooks.Ibelievetheseideaswillmakeourschoolmorelikeahappyfamily.Thankyouforreading!Yourssincerely,LiMei（范文3）Dearheadmaster,I’mZhangMinginGrade8.Ourclassroomsneedsomechanges.Somedesksarebroken,andthechairsmakenoisewhenwesitdown.Repairingthemorbuyingnewoneswillhelpusstudyinabetterenvironment.Besides,wehavenoplacetorelaxafterclass.Asmallparkwithcolorfulbenchesandswingsneartheplaygroundwouldbeperfect!Wecouldchatwithfriendsthereorreadicsunderthetrees.Theseimprovementswillmakeourschoollifemorefortable.Thankyouforyourattention!Yourssincerely,ZhangMing（范文4）Dearschoolheadteacher,I’mChenYingfromClass4,Grade8.Letmesharetwoproblems.Theputerroomissosmallthatonly30studentscanuseitatatime,andtheoldputersoftengetstuck.WeneedabiggerroomwithnewputersforourITclasses.Also,theschoolhallistoosmallforschoolconcertsorbigmeetings.Anewhallwithmoreseatsandastagewillletusenjoyperformancesbetter.Ihopethesesuggestionscanmakeourschoolmoremodern.Thankyou!Yourssincerely,ChenYing(范文5)Dearschoolleaders,I’mLiuYanginGrade8.Here’swhatIthink:thecanteenistoocrowdedatlunch.Studentsoftenwait20minutestobuyfood.Addingmorefoodwindows—likeanoodlewindowandasaladwindow—willsavetime.Also,theplaygroundonlyhastwobasketballhoops.Ifweaddbadmintonnets,tabletennistables,andarunningtrack,morestudentscanplaydifferentsportstogether.Thesechangeswillmakeourschoollifemorefun.Thankyouforconsideringmyideas!Yourssincerely,LiuYang⭐写作拓展⭐⭐写作拓展⭐考情分析考情分析近几年考情分析年份卷区话题命题形式2023年上海针对“时间管理”的培训方案给社区负责人写建议信提纲类2022年广西河池对即将开设的劳动课给校长写一建议封信提纲类湖北十堰针对校园里的优缺点给校长写信表达看法表格类2021年湖南益阳因为想为学弟学妹做点事而给校长提建议提纲类变式提升训练变式提升训练（1）（20242025八年级上·广东深圳·单元测试）假如你是Alice，学校计划选拔几位学生到英国交流学习，你很希望能够成为其中一员。请根据下面的提示，给校长Mr.Brown写一份80词左右的申请书，希望得到学校的批准。注意：1.文章必须包含表格所有的内容，并适当发挥；2.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。DearMr.Brown,MynameisAlice.I’mwritingtogetachancetobeaneducationalexchangestudent.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeI’mgoodenoughtobeoneoftheeducationalexchangestudents.ThankyouforyourtimeandIlookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,Alice（2）（20182019八年级上·四川达州·期中）我们达州高中本月将开展评选“最佳学生”活动，你向校长推荐丽丽(Lily)为“最佳学生”。要点如下：1.她又高又苗条。她脸上总是带着微笑。2.她每天是最早到教室的学生，她学习成绩是最好的之一。3.她总是乐于助人。总是主动给我们提供帮助。4.上周学校秋游，她为同班同学拍照。并把照片放在她的网页上供大家欣赏。5.她希望……要求：1.文章须包含所有要点，语句通顺、意思连贯；卷面分1分。2.词数100个左右；3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。Dearheadmaster,I’dliketoremendLilytowintheBestStudentAward.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（3）（20242025八年级上·浙江温州·期中）假如你是GreenSchool的学生李华，学校将组织本学期的学校郊游活动。请从以下两个方案中选取一个，给校长MsMendozer写一封80词左右的信，说明选择该方案的理由，介绍活动内容并增加一项活动。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：poster海报DearMsMendozer,Ithinkit’sgreattohaveaschooltripeveryterm.Forthisterm’sschooltrip,IthinkPlan______isabetterchoice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________