2026届新高考英语冲刺复习书面表达之细节增加（开头结尾）

2026届新高考英语冲刺复习书面表达之细节增加（开头与结尾）Learningaims:TobetterthebeginningandendingbyaddingdetailsIamLiHua.Ihavemanyfriendsworldwide.Iamsobusywritingletters/emails.Thousandsofstudentspretendtobeme.邀请信2017-2018年一、引入

假定你是李华，你校成立了网上旅游俱乐部(OnlineTravelClub)，你想邀请你的英国朋友Evans加入。请你写一封邮件，告知该俱乐部的活动内容。内容包括：1.讨论旅游话题；2.推荐旅游景点；3.交流旅游经历。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；DearEvans,

I’mgladtotellyouthatourschoolhasfoundedOnlineTravelClub,andI’dliketoinviteyoutojoinit.

Alltheactivitieswillbeheldonline,whichisconvenientforusall.Wewilldiscussvarioustravellingtopics,whichcanbroadenourvisionandaddtoourknowledge.Besides,everyclubmemberhasthedutytorecommendwell-knowntouristattractionstoothers.Inthisway,we’llhaverichsightseeingresourcesandmorechoiceswhentravelling.Finally,theclubisalsoagoodplacetoshareourtravellingexperienceswitheachother.

Pleasanttravellingexperiencescanbringmuchpleasure.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua参考范文优秀作文：专家评分：25分，结构：(2-3)+(8-10)+(2-3),增添细节

Basedonthewritingtaskandcoverallthepoints.

“第五档（很好）：（21-25）1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。

3.适当增添了细节。”

－《全国高考英语作文评分标准（2018）》0102开头Beginning03正文Body结尾EndingWherecanweaddsomedetails?二、主题内容Beginning

Body

Ending

Part1theBeginning

I'mLiHuafromLianshiSchool,presidentoftheStudentsUnion.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheTalentShow,whichwillbeheldonnextFridayevening.邀请信

Iamwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyou.Becauseofyourhelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinlearningEnglish.感谢信

I'mdelightedtohearthatyouhavewonthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestofmiddleschoolstudents,soI'mwritingtogivemysincerecongratulations.祝贺信

I'mverysorrythatIcan'tgoonatriptoBeijingwithyounextweekend,whichIhavepromisedyou.I'mwritingtotellyouthereasonforit.道歉信Revision常考作文的开头句

【Tips】1..(2017全国I)假如你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Lesie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:(1)时间和地点;(2)内容:学习唐诗;(3)课前准备:简要了解唐诗。GladtoreceiveyourletterwhereyoumentionedyouareenthusiasticaboutChinese.Iamwritingtoinformyouoftheplanofournextlesson.IamLiHua.GiventhatyoushowagreatinterestaboutChinese,letmeinformyouourplansinthenextclass.Herefollowsthecontent.如何在开头适当增加细节？注意双方的关系therelationshipFriendsorstrangers?【Tips】2.

1).招呼(Greetings)(17全国I)Howareyougettingalongwith..?2).身份(identity):IamLiHua,a_____________(高三）studentof…IamLiHua,an__________________（交换生）fromChina.IamLiHua,___________________(主席）oftheStudentsUnionSeniorThreeexchangestudentpresident/chairman同位语邀请外教一起参观中国剪纸展。Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinmeinenjoyinganexhibitionofpaper-cutting,whereyoucanhaveagoodtasteoftraditionalChineseculture.

【Tips】3.补充原因、好处、意义

—补充可以得到的好处,增加说服力。—补充文化意义,增加活动吸引力邀请外教Lucy一起去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。I’dliketoinviteyoutojoinusforavisittothenursinghomenearbyfortheDoubleNinthFestival,whichisthedayfortheelderlyinourculture.1.假定你是李华，你校将举办才艺表演，你想邀请你的外国朋友Tom参加。A.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusintheTalentShow.

我写信是想邀请你参加“才艺表演”。Whichoneisbetter?B.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusintheTalentShow,inwhichyoucangetabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.我写信是想邀请你参加“才艺表演”。Practice1.选择1.假定你是学生会的主席李华，你校将举办主题为thankstoourmother的英语演讲比赛，想邀请你校外籍教师Brown先生当评委。

I'mliHua,____________________________.Ourschoolisgoingto_____________________________with_____________________________,soI’mwritingto_____________________________.Practice2.根据要求完成句子同位语：学生会主席presidentoftheStudentsUnion举办：hold,英语演讲比赛：EnglishSpeechContest主题：topic,......的主题:

thetopicofsth.评委:judgepresidentoftheStudentsUnionholdanEnglishSpeechContestthetopicofthankstoourmotherinviteyoutobeoneofthejudges填空2.假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs.Wilson写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助。

I’mgladtowriteto________________________andsharewithyou____________________________________,______________________________.表达：_________

感谢/感激之情：________________向某人表达感激之情：__________________________和某人分享某事：_______________________承认：_______被......录取：_______________________梦想做某事：_______________________________expressthanks,gratitudeexpressone'sgratidtudetosb.expressmygratitudetoyoumyhappinessofbeingadmittedtocollegewhichIhavebeendreamingofsharesth.withsb.admit

beadmittedtodreamof/aboutdoingsth.Part2theEnding

1.我真诚地希望你能接受我的邀请,我确定你一定不会后悔如果你能来。

Isincerelyhopeyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.I'msureyouwon'tregretifyoucouldcome.Para3.theEnding

常见的结尾句：

4.祝你开心幸福

Iwishyouallpossiblejoyandhappinessintheworld.

2.你的参与真的为我们的旅程增添色彩，我们都期待你的到来。

Yourparticipationcansurelyaddcolortoourtripandwearealllookingforwardtoyourinvolvement

/coming.

3.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldcome.Thankyouverymuchforthefavouryou’lldotous.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

(邀请对方帮忙）Para3.：theEnding(2017全国I)假如你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Lesie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:(1)时间和地点;(2)内容:学习唐诗;(3)课前准备:简要了解唐诗。

下面哪一个最好？1.Lookingforwardtoseeingyouagain.

2.

Expectingyourearlyreplyandyourparticipation.

3.(17年全国I优秀考场作文)：Ifyouhaveanyquestionintheprocessofpreparation,feelfreeto(随意)

askmebyemailorbyphone.IamlookingforwardtotheclassandhopingtosucceedinlearningChinese.

【Tips】：Itisalwayswisetotrytobeaspoliteaspossible.

(礼貌)

—Toexpressyour,appreciation,congratulations,wishesagain.2.Trytoemphasizeyouremotionwithadj.oradv.(形或副)

Thanksalotforyour_____(好心的)attentiontotheletter.Ishallappreciateit_________________(非常）if…Iam___________(非常)gladthat…I____________(真诚地)wishyou…kindalot/verymuchextremely

sincerely

Practice翻译句子1.你的到来(出席)真的为我们的演讲带来很大的帮助，我们都期待你的到来。（邀请信的结尾）

Yourpresencecansurelybeofgreathelptousandwearealllookingforwardtoyour

coming.使用高级词汇出场：presence有帮助的：helpful=ofgreathelp期待：lookforwardto2.正是你的帮助使得我的实现了我的梦想，在以后的时间里我会更加努力学习，以优异的成绩报答你的真诚帮助和期望。(感谢信的结尾)

Itis

yourhelpthatenablesmetoachievemydream.ForthefollowingyearsIwillstudyhardertoreturn(报答)

yoursincerehelpandexpectationswithexcellentgrades.使用高级句型使某人能够做某事enablesb.todosth.实现某人的梦想makeone'sdreamcometrue

realize/achieveone'sdream在以后的时间里forthefollowingyears用......回报returnsb.withsth.以优异的成绩with

excellentgrades期待expectvt.

expectationn.使用高级词汇Itbe...that...强调句1.假定你是学生会的主席李华，你校将举办主题为thankstoourmother的英语演讲比赛，想邀请你校外籍教师Brown先生当评委。

I'mliHua,presiddentoftheStudentsUnion.OurschoolisgoingtoholdanEnglishSpeechContestwiththetopicofthankstoourmother,soI’mwritingtoinviteyoutobeoneofthejudges.1.你的到来(出席)真的对我们的演讲有很大的帮助，我们都期待你的到来。（邀请信的结尾）

Yourpresencecansurelybeofgreathelptousandwearealllookingforwardtoyour

coming.把开头结尾连起来2.假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs.Wilson写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助。

I’mgladtowritetoexpressmygratitudetoyouandsharewithyoumyhappinessofbeingadmittedtocollege,whichIhavebeendreamingof.2.就是你的帮助使得我的实现了我的梦想，在以后的时间里我会更加努力学习，以优异的成绩报答你的真诚帮助和期望。(感谢信的结尾)