高三英语读后续写专项复习-克服网瘾的历程导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。IcouldfeeltheexcitementrisinginmeasIheldthebeautifullywrappedpresentinmyhands.Itwasanewlaptop（笔记本电脑）.Ihadalwaysenviedmyfriendswhoweresharingnewsabout“chatrooms”and“emailing”.NowIwasgoingtofindout.Itstartedoutsimplyenough.IwassearchingforsomeinformationonlinewhenIcameacrossasocialnetworkingsite.SoonIbecamegluedtomynewfoundonlinefriend.IbegantospendmoreandmoretimeontheInternet.WheneverIwasnotvisitingthesesocialnetworkingsites,Iwouldbegoingthroughgossipwebsites.Astimepassed,IrealizedthatIwasaddictedtotheInternet.ItcametoapointwhereIchosetolockmyselfinmyroom,refusingtoeoutandtakepartinfamilydiscussions.SoonIwasspendingtheearlymorningontheInternet.Sleepwasreducedtonapsandmygradesatschoolalsobegandeteriorating（恶化）.Itwasaboutthistimethatmyparentsstartedvoicingtheirdisapproval.IwasaskedtocutdownonmyuseoftheInternet.Yet,howeverhardItried,Iwasunabletopullmyselfawayandunabletofocusonmylessons.Thenoneday,myfathertookawaymylaptop.Ishoutedangrily,buttonoeffect.ThatwaswhenIdecidedtotakethebigstep—tooveremyInternetaddiction.QuittingwasharderthanIexpected.ButIpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewpageandfindwaystobreakawayfromtheInternet.Istartedbycreatingalistofthingstobefinishedduringtheday.Then,Isetasidesometimeeachdaytoworkonthesetasks,whichhelpedmestayfocusedthroughouttheday.Withthehelpofmyfamily,myInternetaddictiongraduallyfadedaway.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.____________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.____________________________________________________________________________________________一、文本分析​1．角色：：____________________________________________________________​2．视角：第___人称​3．时空线：根据文中场景变化，补充完整时空发展脉络：from“我”拿到新笔记本电脑（家中）_______

_______​4.请在文章中梳理关键线索，思考并回答以下问题（可结合原文内容概括）：​Whydid“I”feelexcitedaboutthenewlaptop?：______________________________________________________________​Howdid“I”getaddictedtotheInternet?：____________________________________________________________​Whatchangeshappenedto“I”duetoInternetaddiction?：____________________________________________________________​Howdid“I”parentsreactto“I”Internetaddiction?：___________________________________________________________​Whatstepsdid“I”taketoovereInternetaddiction?：________________________________________________________________________​5．情节线：根据故事发展顺序，用简洁语言补充完整情节节点：“我”拿到新笔记本电脑，因向往网络社交而兴奋→_______

→_______

→→（续写）一天晚上“我”去妈妈房间进行难得的谈心；“我”承诺会开启新生活。​6．情感线：结合“我”的经历与心理变化，梳理“我”的情感发展过程：I：excited（拿到新电脑时）→______________________→________________________→________________________→（续写）→（续写）​综合以上信息，尝试用34句话概括文章大意（中英文各写一段）：​中文：_____________________________________________________________________​英文：_____________________________________________________________________​8.句式：从文中找出符合以下类型的句式（各举12例，可摘抄原句）：​宾语从句：______________________________________________________​非谓语：__________________________________________________________​感叹句：___________________________________________________________​同位语：___________________________________________________________​完全倒装句：______________________________________________________​比喻：___________________________________________________________​夸张：_____________________________________________________________（若文中无，可标注“无”）​本文属于“人与他人”主题范畴，请简要概括文中体现的“人与他人”关系核心：​____________________________________________________________________________二、情节构造​第一段提示句：OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.​衔接句1———对“rarehearttoheartedconversation”提问“‘我’会和妈妈聊些什么关于网瘾的事？”：Whatwould"I"talkaboutwithMumregardingInternetaddiction?​过渡句推演：衔接1→←衔接2​衔接句2———对“conversation”提问“这次谈心让‘我’有什么感受？”：Howwouldthistalkmake"I"feel?​第一段：OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.→①（提示：可思考“我”是否会为之前的行为道歉，或分享戒网的感受）→②_______（提示：可想象妈妈的回应方式，是安慰、鼓励还是分享她的担忧）→③_______（提示：可描述“我”在谈心后的心理变化）；​英文：_______（提示：根据中文思路，用简洁英文表达，注意时态和句式正确）​第二段提示句：IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.​衔接3———对“turnoveranewpage”提问“‘我’会具体承诺做些什么来开启新生活？”：Whatspecificthingswould"I"promisetodotostartanewlife?​过渡句推演：衔接3→←主题​主题：（提示：可围绕“成长”“改变”“家庭支持”等核心提炼）​第二段：IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.→④_______（提示：可思考“我”会从学习、生活、家庭互动等方面提出具体承诺）→⑤_______（提示：可想象“我”践行承诺时的场景，以及家人如何配合支持）→⑥_______（提示：可描述承诺兑现后“我”和家庭的变化）；​英文：_______（提示：根据中文思路，用简洁英文表达，注意逻辑连贯）​三、续写（思路启发，可自主创作）​Paragraph1:OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.​_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.​________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案一、文本分析​1．角色：“我”（曾沉迷网络，后决心并成功克服网瘾的人）；“我”的父母（关注“我”的状况，反对“我”过度上网，最终帮助“我”摆脱网瘾）​2．视角：第___一___人称​3．时空线：from“我”拿到新笔记本电脑（家中）“我”沉迷网络时的房间（家中）、学校

“我”与父母沟通、努力克服网瘾的场景（家中）​4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。​Whydid“I”feelexcitedaboutthenewlaptop?：“I”hadalwaysenviedfriendstalkingabout“chatrooms”and“emailing”，andnow“I”couldexperiencethemtoo.​Howdid“I”getaddictedtotheInternet?：“I”firstcameacrossasocialnetworkingsitewhilesearchingforinformation,thenbecamegluedtoonlinefriends,spentmoretimeonsocialsitesandgossipwebsites,andgraduallycouldn’tpullaway.​Whatchangeshappenedto“I”duetoInternetaddiction?：“I”lockedmyselfintheroom,refusedfamilydiscussions,reducedsleeptonaps,andmyschoolgradesdeteriorated.​Howdid“I”parentsreactto“I”Internetaddiction?：Theyvoiceddisapproval,asked“I”tocutdownInternetuse,andfathertookaway“I”laptopwhen“I”couldn’tcontrolmyself.​Whatstepsdid“I”taketoovereInternetaddiction?：“I”promisedparentstochange,createdadailytasklist,settimetofinishtaskstostayfocused,andgothelpfromfamily.​5．情节线：“我”拿到新笔记本电脑，因向往网络社交而兴奋→“我”偶然接触社交网站后沉迷，花大量时间上网，生活和学习受严重影响

→父母反对“我”过度上网，父亲没收电脑后，“我”决心克服网瘾

→“我”制定计划、在家人帮助下逐渐摆脱网瘾→（续写）一天晚上“我”去妈妈房间进行难得的谈心；“我”承诺会开启新生活。​6．情感线：I：excited（拿到新电脑时）→addictedandindulgent（沉迷网络时）→anxiousbuthelpless（无法自控、成绩下滑时）→angryatfirst,thendetermined（父亲收走电脑后，决心戒网瘾）→gratefulandresolute（与妈妈谈心、承诺改变时，续写）→persistentandhopeful（践行承诺时，续写）​综合以上信息，请用34句话概括文章大意。（中英各一个）​中文：“我”得到新笔记本电脑后，因接触社交网站而沉迷网络，导致生活作息混乱、学习成绩下滑。父母反对“我”过度上网并没收电脑，“我”因此决心克服网瘾，通过制定每日任务计划、在家人帮助下，逐渐摆脱了网瘾的困扰。​英文：Aftergettinganewlaptop,"I"gotaddictedtotheInternetbecauseofaccessingsocialnetworkingsites,whichmade"I"dailyroutinemessyandschoolgradesworse."I"parentsopposed"I"excessiveInternetuseandtookawaythelaptop,so"I"decidedtoovereInternetaddiction.Withadailytasklistandfamilyhelp,"I"graduallygotridoftheaddiction.​8.句式：宾语从句；非谓语；感叹句；同位语；完全倒装句；比喻；夸张​宾语从句：IrealizedthatIwasaddictedtotheInternet./IpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.​非谓语：IwassearchingforsomeinformationonlinewhenIcameacrossasocialnetworkingsite./WheneverIwasnotvisitingthesesocialnetworkingsites,Iwouldbegoingthroughgossipwebsites.​感叹句：QuittingwasharderthanIexpected!​同位语：Itwasanewlaptop（笔记本电脑）.（括号内中文为“laptop”的同位语，补充说明物品名称）​比喻：Ibecamegluedtomynewfoundonlinefriend.（将“沉迷于网友”比作“被粘住”，形象体现沉迷状态）​夸张：无明显夸张句式​9.本文属于人与他人：家人对“我”的关爱与引导，以及“我”在家人帮助下自我成长、克服困难的过程​二、情节构造​第一段提示句：OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.​衔接句1———对“rarehearttoheartedconversation”提问“‘我’会和妈妈聊些什么关于网瘾的事？”：Whatwould"I"talkaboutwithMumregardingInternetaddiction?​过渡句推演：衔接1→妈妈会如何回应“我”的倾诉？←衔接2​衔接句2———对“conversation”提问“这次谈心让‘我’有什么感受？”：Howwouldthistalkmake"I"feel?​第一段：OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.→①____“我”向妈妈道歉，承认之前因沉迷网络忽略家人、让他们担心，还说起自己戒网时的困难____→②____妈妈轻轻抱住“我”，说知道戒瘾不易，家人会一直支持“我”，还提起“我”以前专注学习的样子____→③____“我”听后眼眶发热，更加坚定了要彻底摆脱网瘾、回归正常生活的决心____；​衔接3———对“turnoveranewpage”提问“‘我’会具体承诺做些什么来开启新生活？”：Whatspecificthingswould"I"promisetodotostartanewlife?​过渡句推演：衔接3→“我”如何践行承诺，家人又如何支持？←主题​主题：“我”通过实际行动兑现承诺，在家人支持下彻底摆脱网瘾，实现自我成长​第二段：IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.→④____“我”承诺每天先完成学习任务，再用少量时间合理上网，还会主动参与家庭活动、多和父母沟通____→⑤____之后“我”每天按计划执行，遇到想上网的冲动时，妈妈会提醒“我”任务清单，爸爸会陪“我”去散步转移注意力____→⑥____渐渐地，“我”不再依赖网络，成绩慢慢回升，家庭氛围也变得温馨融洽____。​三、续写段落​Paragraph1:OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.​Isatbe