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读后续写07家人亲情专题1.考察情况年份试卷原文情境主题升华方向亲情冲突类型2025全国一卷兄弟遗产纠纷个人利益→家庭责任与血脉纽带财产矛盾→亲情觉醒2024新高考Ⅱ卷父女旅行矛盾代际隔阂→理解与传承观念冲突→双向成长2023浙江卷照顾患病祖母抱怨→感恩与生命教育责任逃避→主动担当2022新高考I卷母子早餐互动日常琐事→母爱理解与反哺情感忽视→顿悟回报2021全国甲卷祖孙修自行车受助→孝道传承代际互助→文化延续2.命题规律及备考策略:(1)命题规律①场景聚焦“日常化”:高考真题多选择家庭生活中可落地的场景(如做饭、陪伴、家务、矛盾调解),避免复杂虚构情境,降低审题门槛。例如2024新高考II卷“教奶奶用手机”、2022新高考I卷“学做早餐”,均贴近高中生真实生活,易引发情感共鸣。②情节锚定“冲突和解”:核心情节围绕“亲情中的常见矛盾”展开(如代际观念差异、误解、情感缺位、手足争执),考查“矛盾化解过程+情感变化”。例如2023全国甲卷“祖孙因风筝修与丢的矛盾→爷爷默默修复→化解误会”,2021全国乙卷“弟弟抵触网课→姐姐耐心指导→弟弟接纳”。③主题指向“情感共鸣”:不强调“戏剧化情节”,更侧重亲情中的“细腻情感”(如感恩、理解、愧疚、守护)与“成长感悟”(如学会体谅、承担责任、读懂隐性关爱)。例如2022新高考I卷以“做早餐时打翻牛奶→妈妈不责备反而安慰”体现母爱,2025全国一卷以“爸爸补过生日的手写信”传递父爱。(2)备考策略(真题导向三步法)①素材锚定:按“亲情场景类型(代际互动/手足陪伴/家人照顾/矛盾调解)”分类积累词块,每日1012个,关联“动作+情感”。例如记“tucksb.in(给某人掖好被子)”时,同步联想“妈妈深夜帮我掖被角,手指轻触我额头试体温”的场景;记“mutteranapology(低声道歉)”时,关联“我因误会对爸爸发脾气后,攥着他的袖口低声说‘对不起’”的画面。②技法适配:针对“代际观念差异、误解冲突、情感缺位”3类高频亲情冲突,每类练习2篇5080词微场景,自查“冲突化解是否符合亲情逻辑”“情感是否通过动作/环境具象化”。例如写“愧疚”不用“Ifeltguilty”,而用“myfingerstwistedtheedgeofmyshirtasIavoidedMom’seyes”;写“关怀”不用“Dadcaredaboutme”,而用“Dadleftacupofwarmhoneywateronmydesk,withanotesaying‘Drinkbeforebed’”。③真题迁移:分析近3年真题的“亲情冲突触发点”(如2024新高考II卷“奶奶反复忘记手机操作步骤”、2023全国甲卷“我嫌爷爷修风筝太慢”),用同类词块改写旧作。例如将“代际冲突(教奶奶用手机)”改写为“代际冲突(教爷爷拍短视频)”,保留“耐心指导+重复练习+成功喜悦”的核心逻辑,强化场景适配能力。(一)四大场景类型及高频词汇1.家庭日常环境类(亲情互动的基础场景)基础词汇:kitchen(厨房)、livingroom(客厅)、bedroom(卧室)、diningtable(餐桌)、sofa(沙发)、lamp(台灯)进阶词汇:grandma’swickerchair(奶奶的藤椅)、mom’sapron(妈妈的围裙)、dad’stoolbox(爸爸的工具箱)、familyphotoalbum(家庭相册)、warmquilt(暖被子)、steamingbowl(冒着热气的碗)高考高频词块:thekitchenfilledwiththesmellofporridge(飘着粥香的厨房)、dad’stoolboxleftonthelivingroomfloor(爸爸落在客厅地板上的工具箱)、mom’sapronstainedwithflour(沾着面粉的妈妈的围裙)、thefamilyphotoalbumspreadonthesofa(摊在沙发上的家庭相册)高级表达:Themorningsunstreamedthroughthekitchenwindow,whereMomstoodbythestove,herapronflutteringslightlyasshestirredtheporridge—steamcurledup,mixingwiththesoftsoundofherhumminganoldsong.(清晨的阳光透过厨房窗户,妈妈站在灶台旁,搅拌粥时围裙轻轻晃动——热气袅袅升起,与她哼着老歌的轻柔声音交织在一起。)—————————————————————————————————————————————2.特殊时刻环境类(亲情升温的关键场景)基础词汇:birthday(生日)、sick(生病)、festival(节日)、trip(旅行)、graduation(毕业)、rainyday(雨天)进阶词汇:grandpa’shospitalward(爷爷的病房)、birthdaycakewithlitcandles(插着蜡烛的生日蛋糕)、MidAutumnFestivalmooncake(中秋月饼)、rainydayumbrella(雨天的伞)、graduationgiftfromdad(爸爸的毕业礼物)、familytripbackpack(家庭旅行背包)高考高频词块:thehospitalwardfilledwithfreshflowers(摆满鲜花的病房)、thebirthdaycakewith16litcandles(插着16根点燃蜡烛的生日蛋糕)、therainydayumbrellasharedbymomandme(妈妈和我共撑的雨天的伞)、thegraduationgiftwrappedindad’sfavoritebluepaper(用爸爸最爱的蓝纸包装的毕业礼物)高级表达:Itwasrainingheavilyoutside,andDadheldtheumbrellaovermyhead,hisshouldergettingsoakedbytherain—hedidn’tnotice,though,justsmilingandaskingifmyschoolbagwasdry.(外面下着大雨,爸爸把伞举在我头顶,肩膀被雨水打湿——但他没在意,只是笑着问我的书包有没有湿。)—————————————————————————————————————————————3.矛盾场景环境类(亲情磨合的典型场景)基础词汇:argument(争吵)、silence(沉默)、anger(生气)、misunderstanding(误会)、cold(冷战)、tear(眼泪)进阶词汇:thecolddiningtable(冷战的餐桌)、theclosedbedroomdoor(关着的卧室门)、thecrumplednote(皱巴巴的纸条)、theuntoucheddinner(没动过的晚饭)、thewettissue(用过的纸巾)、thequietlivingroom(安静得压抑的客厅)高考高频词块:thecolddiningtableafterourargument(争吵后冷冰冰的餐桌)、theclosedbedroomdoorwithanoteslippedunderit(门下塞着纸条的关着的卧室门)、theuntoucheddinnergettingcoldonthetable(桌上变凉的没动过的晚饭)、thequietlivingroomwithneitherofusspeaking(两人都不说话的安静客厅)高级表达:Thediningtablewascoveredwithcolddishes—Momhadcookedmyfavoritebraisedpork,butitsatuntouched.Istaredattheclosedbedroomdoor,whereacrumplednotepeekedoutfromunderit,mythroattightwithregretforyellingather.(餐桌上摆着冷掉的菜——妈妈做了我最爱吃的红烧肉,却一口没动。我盯着关着的卧室门,门下露出一角皱巴巴的纸条,想起刚才对她大吼,喉咙一阵发紧。)—————————————————————————————————————————————4.和解场景环境类(亲情修复的温暖场景)基础词汇:hug(拥抱)、smile(微笑)、talk(谈心)、help(帮忙)、share(分享)、forgive(原谅)进阶词汇:thesharedbowloffruit(共吃的一碗水果)、thehandpattingtheback(拍后背的手)、thewarmcupoftea(温热的茶杯)、thesharedblanket(共盖的毯子)、thelaughinthelivingroom(客厅里的笑声)、thejointcooking(一起做饭)高考高频词块:thehandpattingmybackgentlyduringourtalk(谈心时轻轻拍我后背的手)、thewarmcupofteaMomgavemeaftertheargument(争吵后妈妈给我的温热茶杯)、thesharedblanketonthesofawhilewatchingTV(看电视时沙发上共盖的毯子)、thejointcookinginthekitchenwithDad(和爸爸一起在厨房做饭)高级表达:Aftertalkingforalongtime,Momhandedmeawarmcupofchrysanthemumtea,herfingersbrushingmineslightly.Wesatonthesofaunderthesameblanket,andthelivingroomwasfilledwiththesoftsoundofourlaughter—justlikeoldtimes.(聊了很久后,妈妈递给我一杯温热的菊花茶,手指轻轻碰到我的手。我们坐在沙发上共盖一条毯子,客厅里满是我们轻柔的笑声——就像从前一样。)(二)高分词块分类素材库1.情感表达类(亲情中的核心情绪)关怀与体贴:基础词块:careforsb.(照顾某人)、askaboutsb.’sday(问某人一天过得怎样)、preparesb.’sfavoritefood(做某人爱吃的菜)、remindsb.towearwarmclothes(提醒某人穿暖和)进阶词块:feelsb.’sforeheadtocheckforfever(摸某人额头试体温)、tucksb.inandkisstheforehead(给某人掖好被子并亲额头)、leaveanotewithcaringwords(留一张写满关心的纸条)、warmupmilkforsb.beforebed(睡前给某人热牛奶)愧疚与道歉:基础词块:saysorrytosb.(向某人道歉)、feelguiltyaboutsth.(为某事愧疚)、apologizeforone’smistake(为错误道歉)、admitone’sfault(承认过错)进阶词块:mutteranapologywhilestaringatthefloor(盯着地板低声道歉)、holdsb.’shandandsay“I’mwrong”(握着某人的手说“我错了”)、writeasorrynotewithasmallgift(写道歉纸条并附小礼物)、lowerone’sheadinguiltandexplain(愧疚地低下头解释)感恩与珍惜:基础词块:thanksb.forsth.(为某事感谢某人)、cherishthetimewithsb.(珍惜和某人的时光)、begratefulforsb.’shelp(感激某人的帮助)、valuesb.’scare(珍视某人的关心)进阶词块:hugsb.tightlyandsay“Thankyou”(紧紧拥抱某人说“谢谢”)、keepthesmallgiftfromsb.carefully(小心收好某人送的小礼物)、say“I’mluckytohaveyou”withtears(含泪说“有你真好”)、writedownthetouchingmomentswithsb.(写下和某人的感动瞬间)和解与包容:基础词块:forgivesb.(原谅某人)、makeupwithsb.(和某人和好)、understandsb.’sfeeling(理解某人的感受)、acceptsb.’sapology(接受某人的道歉)进阶词块:smileandsay“It’sokay”(微笑着说“没关系”)、patsb.’sshouldertoshowforgiveness(拍某人肩膀表示原谅)、shareasnacktobreakthesilence(分享零食打破沉默)、say“Let’sforgetaboutit”gently(轻声说“咱们别在意了”)—————————————————————————————————————————————2.信息传递类(亲情中的沟通互动)叮嘱与提醒:基础词块:tellsb.tobecareful(告诉某人小心)、remindsb.ofsth.(提醒某人某事)、warnsb.nottodosth.(警告某人别做某事)、advisesb.torest(建议某人休息)进阶词块:calloutfromthedoorway“Don’tforgetyourumbrella!”(在门口喊“别忘带伞!”)、tapsb.’sarmandremind“Takeyourmedicine!”(轻碰某人胳膊提醒“吃药!”)、saywithafrown“Don’tstayuptoolate!”(皱着眉说“别熬夜太晚!”)、writeonastickynote“Buyeggsonthewayback!”(在便利贴上写“回来路上买鸡蛋!”)解释与说明:基础词块:explainsth.tosb.(向某人解释某事)、tellsb.thereason(告诉某人原因)、clarifyamisunderstanding(澄清误会)、saywhyonedidsth.(说明做某事的原因)进阶词块:sitdownandexplainslowly“IdiditbecauseIcared”(坐下慢慢解释“我是因为关心才这么做”)、showsb.thephototoclarify“It’snotwhatyouthought”(给某人看照片澄清“不是你想的那样”)、takeadeepbreathandsay“Letmetellyouthetruth”(深吸一口气说“我跟你说实话”)、pointtothebrokentoyandexplain“Ididn’tmeantobreakit”(指着坏玩具解释“我不是故意弄坏的”)道歉与安慰:基础词块:say“I’msorry”(说“对不起”)、fortsb.(安慰某人)、cheersb.up(让某人开心)、tellsb.“It’snotyourfault”(告诉某人“不是你的错”)进阶词块:holdsb.’shandandfort“It’llbebettersoon”(握着某人的手安慰“一切都会好起来的”)、patsb.’sbackandsay“Don’tcry”(拍某人后背说“别哭了”)、bringsb.afavoritesnacktocheerup(给某人带爱吃的零食让其开心)、hugsb.andsay“I’msorryIhurtyou”(拥抱某人说“对不起我伤害了你”)—————————————————————————————————————————————3.冲突解决类(亲情中的矛盾化解)误会澄清:基础词块:clearupamisunderstanding(澄清误会)、tellthetruth(说实话)、showevidence(出示证据)、explainthesituation(说明情况)进阶词块:takeouttheoldlettertoclearupthemisunderstanding(拿出旧信澄清误会)、sitdownfacetofaceandtellthewholetruth(面对面坐下说出全部真相)、showthevideotoexplainthesituation(给看视频说明情况)、holdsb.’sarmandsay“Letmeexplain”(抓着某人的胳膊说“我解释一下”)代际调解:基础词块:helpsb.understandeachother(帮某人互相理解)、bridgethegenerationgap(弥合代际差距)、translatefortheelderly(给老人翻译)、explainnewthingstotheold(给老人解释新事物)进阶词块:standbetweenmomandgrandmatomediate“Let’slistentoeachother”(站在妈妈和奶奶中间调解“咱们互相听听对方的想法”)、showgrandpathevideotutorialtoexplainthephonefunction(给爷爷看视频教程解释手机功能)、tellmom“Grandmajustwantstohelp”tobridgethegap(跟妈妈说“奶奶只是想帮忙”来弥合差距)、translategrandma’sdialectformomtoavoidmisunderstanding(给妈妈翻译奶奶的方言避免误会)矛盾缓和:基础词块:calmdown(冷静下来)、takeastepback(退一步)、promise(妥协)、say“Let’stalklater”(说“咱们稍后再谈”)进阶词块:pouracupofwaterfordadandsay“Let’scalmdownfirst”(给爸爸倒杯水说“咱们先冷静一下”)、takeastepbackandsay“Youmayberight”(退一步说“你也许是对的”)、suggestapromise“Let’sdoityourwaythistime”(提议妥协“这次听你的”)、say“Let’stakeabreakandtalkagain”(说“咱们休息会儿再谈”)—————————————————————————————————————————————4.日常互动类(亲情中的温暖细节)陪伴与守护:基础词块:staywithsb.(陪某人)、lookaftersb.(照顾某人)、protectsb.(保护某人)、bewithsb.whensb.issad(某人难过时陪在身边)进阶词块:sitbygrandma’sbedandreadherastory(坐在奶奶床边给她读故事)、walkhomewithlittlesisterandholdherhand(牵着妹妹的手一起回家)、stayupwithdadtofinishhiswork(陪爸爸熬夜完成工作)、hugmomwhensheissad(妈妈难过时拥抱她)照顾与关爱:基础词块:feedsb.(喂某人)、helpsb.dress(帮某人穿衣服)、carrysb.(抱某人)、maketeaforsb.(给某人泡茶)进阶词块:blowonthesouptocoolitbeforefeedinggrandpa(喂爷爷前先吹凉汤)、helpgrandmabuttonhercoatcarefully(仔细帮奶奶扣外套扣子)、carrylittlebrotheronthebackwhenheistired(弟弟累了背他)、makehoneyteaformomwhenshehasasorethroat(妈妈嗓子疼时给她泡蜂蜜茶)协作与分享:基础词块:cooktogether(一起做饭)、cleanthehousetogether(一起打扫房子)、sharefood(分享食物)、workonaprojecttogether(一起做一个项目)进阶词块:helpmomrolldumplingswhilechatting(边聊天边帮妈妈擀饺子皮)、cleanthelivingroomwithdadandlaughathismessycleaning(和爸爸一起打扫客厅,笑他打扫得乱糟糟)、sharethelastpieceofcakewithsister(和妹妹分享最后一块蛋糕)、workonthefamilyphotoalbumtogetherwithgrandma(和奶奶一起整理家庭相册)纪念与回忆:基础词块:takephotos(拍照)、keepasouvenir(保存纪念品)、talkaboutoldtimes(聊过去的事)、celebrateananniversary(庆祝纪念日)进阶词块:takeaphotoofmomandgrandmacookingtogether(给做饭的妈妈和奶奶拍照)、keepthefirstdrawingmylittlebrothermadeforme(保存弟弟给我画的第一幅画)、sitonthesofawithdadandtalkabouthischildhood(和爸爸坐在沙发上聊他的童年)、celebratethe20thweddinganniversaryofmyparents(庆祝父母结婚20周年纪念日)(三)写作技法及应用1.“对话+动作/神态”联动法技法说明:避免孤立使用对话,将亲情中的语言交流与人物的手部动作(如递东西、拍肩、握手)、面部神态(如微笑、皱眉、含泪)、身体姿态(如前倾、弯腰、拥抱)结合,让情感更立体可感。应用范例:基础版:“Don’tforgettowearascarf,”Momsaid.(“别忘了围围巾,”妈妈说。)升级版:“Don’tforgettowearascarf,”Momsaid,pullingtheredscarffromthecoatpocket—sheleanedovertowrapitaroundmyneck,herfingersbrushingmycoldearsgently,hereyessoftwithworry.(“别忘了围围巾,”妈妈说,从外套口袋里掏出那条红围巾——她弯腰帮我围在脖子上,手指轻轻蹭过我冰凉的耳朵,眼神里满是温柔的担忧。)亲情场景应用:Dadlookedupfromhisnewspaper,noticingmyredeyes.“What’swrong?”heasked,puttingdownthepaperandpattingthesofanexttohim—hisvoicewasquieterthanusual,andheleanedforwardalittle,likehewasreadytolistentoeveryword.(爸爸从报纸上抬起头,注意到我红着的眼睛。“怎么了?”他问,放下报纸拍了拍旁边的沙发——声音比平时轻,还微微前倾身体,像是准备好认真听我说每一句话。)【技法解析】“puttingdownthepaper”“pattingthesofa”“leanedforward”等动作,搭配“quietervoice”,生动体现爸爸从“专注读报”到“关注孩子情绪”的转变,传递隐性的父爱;避免直白说“Dadcaredaboutme”,让情感通过细节自然流露。—————————————————————————————————————————————2.潜台词设计法技法说明:不直接陈述亲情中的情感或意图,而是通过看似日常的对话、重复的动作或环境细节,暗示人物的深层想法(如妈妈反复整理书包暗示“不舍”,爸爸多做一碗饭暗示“等待”)。应用范例:直接表达:Momwasreluctanttoletmegotoboardingschool.(妈妈舍不得我去寄宿学校。)潜台词表达:Momfoldedmyclothesandputthemintothesuitcase—shefoldedthesweaterthreetimes,thenunfoldeditandfoldeditagain.“Doyourememberhowtowashthissweater?”sheasked,hervoicealittletight,likeshewasaskingmorethanjustaboutthesweater.(妈妈把我的衣服叠好放进行李箱——她把毛衣叠了三次,又展开重新叠。“你记得这毛衣怎么洗吗?”她问,声音有点发紧,好像问的不只是毛衣的事。)亲情场景应用:EveryeveningwhenIcamehomelate,thediningtablealwayshadabowlofwarmporridge—Dadwouldsay,“Imadetoomuch,soIleftyousome.”ButInoticedheneverhadporridgewhenIwashomeontime.(每天晚上我晚回家,餐桌上总放着一碗温热的粥——爸爸会说“我做多了,给你留了点”。但我发现,我按时回家时,他从来不吃粥。)【技法解析】“爸爸说粥做多了”是表面理由,“我按时回家时他不吃粥”的细节暗示“粥是特意为晚归的我准备的”,潜台词是“爸爸默默等我回家”,比直接说“Dadwaitedforme”更含蓄动人,符合亲情中“无声付出”的特点。—————————————————————————————————————————————3.语气词/停顿还原法技法说明:通过添加亲情交流中常见的语气词(如“哦”“哎”“呀”“呢”)、犹豫停顿(用省略号表示)、口语化表达(如“没事儿”“别担心”“慢慢来”),让对话更贴近真实家庭沟通场景,避免书面化生硬感。应用范例:书面化表达:Grandpasaidhecouldn’tseethephonescreenclearly.(爷爷说他看不清手机屏幕。)This...you...squintedatthephone,hisfingertappingthescreenslowly.“This...thiswordistoosmall,”hemurmured,leaningclosertothephone.“Canyou...canyoumakeitbiggerforme,kid?”(爷爷眯着眼睛看手机,手指慢慢点着屏幕。“这……这个字太小了,”他低声说,把手机拿得更近。“你能……能帮我调大一点吗,孩子?”)t...应用:Idroppedthebowlandthesoupspilledonthefloor.“I’msosorry!”Isaid,panicking.Momhurriedover,wipingthesoupwithacloth.“It’sokay,it’sokay,”shesaid,hervoicesoft.“Don’t...don’tblameyourself—wecangetanotherbowl,yeah?”(我把碗摔了,汤洒在地上。“对不起!”我慌慌张张地说。妈妈赶紧走过来,用布擦着汤。“没事没事,”她说,声音很轻。“别……别责怪自己,咱们再拿一个碗就行啦,啊?”)【技法解析】t...h”(呀)的语气词、“Don’t...don’tblame”的停顿,还原了妈妈看到孩子犯错后“先安抚再解决问题”的真实反应,口语化表达让母子间的安慰更自然温暖,避免“Momfortedme”的笼统表述。—————————————————————————————————————————————4.多感官描写整合法技法说明:在亲情场景中融入视觉(如妈妈的白发、爸爸的皱纹)、听觉(如奶奶的咳嗽声、弟弟的笑声)、触觉(如暖被子的温度、爸爸手掌的粗糙)、嗅觉(如妈妈做饭的香味、爷爷的药味)、味觉(如奶奶做的糖糕的甜味、爸爸泡的茶的苦味),营造沉浸式亲情体验。应用范例:单一感官描写:IhaddinnerwithGrandma.(我和奶奶一起吃晚饭。)多感官描写:Thediningtablewaslitbyawarmlamp—Grandma’shands,roughfromyearsoffarming,placedaplateofsweetcakesinfrontofme.Thesmellofthecakesfilledmynose,andwhenItookabite,thesweettastemeltedinmymouth.“Doyoulikeit?”sheasked,hervoicealittlehoarsefromacold,buthereyesshining.(餐桌被暖灯照亮——奶奶那双因多年种地而粗糙的手,把一盘糖糕放在我面前。糖糕的香味飘进鼻子,我咬了一口,甜味在嘴里化开。“好吃吗?”她问,声音因感冒有点沙哑,但眼睛亮晶晶的。)亲情场景应用:IsatbyDad’sbedwhenhewassick.Thesmellofmedicinewasintheair,andItouchedhisforehead—itwasstillhot.Heopenedhiseyesslightly,hisvoiceweak:“Didyoufinishyourhomework?”Inodded,handinghimacupofwarmwater.Thecupfeltwarminhiscoldhand,andhesmiledalittle,likethewaterhadmadehimfeelbetter.(爸爸生病时我坐在他床边。空气中有药味,我摸了摸他的额头——还是烫的。他轻轻睁开眼睛,声音虚弱:“作业写完了吗?”我点头,递给他一杯温水。杯子在他冰凉的手里显得暖暖的,他微微笑了笑,好像这杯水让他舒服了些。)【技法解析】整合嗅觉(药味)、触觉(额头烫、手凉、杯子暖)、听觉(声音虚弱)、视觉(眼睛微睁、微笑),全面展现“我照顾生病爸爸”的场景,让“父女间的牵挂”通过多感官细节传递,比单一描写更有感染力。(2526高二上·四川·期中)ItwasintheafternoonbeforetheendoftheSecondWorldWarthatAntonioBlack,whowastwelve,caughtsightofabeautifulbrooch(胸针)inashopwindow.Thebroochissobeautifulthathewasunwillingtoleavethestoreuntilhehadpurchasedit.Butitwastooexpensive—$5.Hisfamilywasverypoorandhisparentsstruggledtomakeendsmeet.Fivedollarswouldbuyalmostaweek’sfoodforhisfamily.Antoniocouldn’taskhisfatherforthemoney.Everythinghisfathermadethroughfishingwenttohismother,Susan.Slimandbeautiful,hismotherwasthecenterofthehomeandthegluethatheldittogether.Thehouseworkwasneverending,andshestruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren,butshewashappyasherfamilyandtheirwellbeingwereallshecaredabout.Nevertheless,heopenedtheshop’sdoorandwentinside.Standingproudlyandstraightinhisfloursack(面粉袋改做的)shirtandwashedouttrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,“ButIdon’thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”“I’lltry,”theshopkeepersmiled.“Peoplearoundheredon’tusuallyhavethatkindofmoneytospendonthings.Itshouldkeepforawhile.”Antoniorespectfullytouchedhisworncapandwalkedout.Hewouldraisethemoneyandnottellanybody,forhethoughtMumwouldbesurprisedwhenshesawthatbrooch.Onhearingthesoundofhammering(锤打)fromasidestreet,Antoniosuddenlyhadanideathathecouldraisemoneybysellingtheusednailbags.PeoplebuilttheirownhomesinBayRoberts,usingnailsboughtinbagsfromalocalfactory.Sometimestheusedbagswerethrownawayattheconstructionsite,andAntonioknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.Thatdayhesoldtwonailbagsandhidthemoneyinarustysodatin.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Everydayafterschool,Antoniostartedhisplan.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thedayfinallycame!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2025·河北邯郸·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。EverytimewewenttoLehman’sstore,Iwouldrushstraighttothesameshelf.Thereitwas:abrownlittleguywithalargenosethatfitperfectlyovermyshoulder.Ihuggedthebrownstuffedaardvark(土豚)dolltightlyandwhispered,“Hi,Artie.”Lastweek,mymotherfinallynoticed.“Whydoyoualwaysdisappear?”sheaskedatcheckout.“Nexttime,yourbrotherisgoingwithyou.”Oh,no!Mybrother,Rich,wasgoingtoacpanymeintothestore.Hewouldwatchmeandreporteverythingtoourmother.Anyway,Iwasn’tgoingtogiveupseeingmypreciousArtie.So,whenRichandIwalkedintothestoretogether,Iadvisedhimtogetthedailygroceries,sincehewasolder.HeagreedbutsaidIshouldn’tgoofftolookatthecosmetics(化妆品),asIwasn’tallowedtowearthemyet.Heneedn’thaveworriedaboutthat;IwasalreadyheadingtowardArtie.Thereitwas,awaitingme.Igrabbeditandhuggedittightly.Justthen,Iheardmybrother:“Whatintheworldareyoudoing?”“ThisisArtie,”Isaid.“IhugiteverysingletimeIehere.Don’ttellMom.Iknowwecan’taffordit,andIhopeitdoesn’tgetsold,becauseIjustlovethislittleguy.”ThelookonRich’sfacewasunreadable,butIknewdeepdownthathewasn’tgoingtomakefunofme.Infact,afewtimeswhenheacpaniedmetothestore,hesaid,“Goonandhugyouruglyanimal,ifit’sstillthere,andI’llgetthegroceries.”OnedaybeforeThanksgivingDay,RichwasworkingwithDadsomewhere,soMomtookmetoLehman’sbutwaitedoutside.“Yougoinbyyourself,”shesaid.“Mylegsaretiredtoday.Justdon’ttakeforever,okay?”注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。IrushedstraighttoArtie’sshelf,butitwasgone.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnThanksgivingDay,aswewereallowedtoopenonepresent,Richwalkedup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、用单词的适当形式填空(家人亲情主题)。​​1.Mom______(murmur)alullabywhileshetuckedmeintobedlastnight.2.Dad______(sigh)inreliefwhenhesawIcamehomesafelyintherain.3.Grandma______(pat)myshoulderandfortedmewhenIfailedtheexam.4.I______(hug)mylittlesistertightlyaftershecamebackfromherfirstschooltrip.5.Mom______(frown)alittlewhenshesawthemessyroom,butshestillhelpedmecleanit.6.Dad______(explain)themathproblemtomeagainpatiently,eventhoughIaskedthreetimes.7.Weall______(laugh)whenGrandpatoldusthefunnystoryofhischildhood.8.I______(apologize)toMomforforgettingherbirthday,andsheforgavemequickly.二、根据意思补全句子。​​1.Grandma________________(帮我掖好被子)andkissedmyforeheadbeforeturningoffthelight.2.Dad_______________________(拍着我的肩)andsaid:“Don’tbeafraid,I’llbewithyou.”3.Mom_____________________(把热牛奶放在我桌上)withanotesaying“Drinkitbeforedoinghomework.”4.I__________________________(握着爷爷的手)andlistenedtohimtalkabouthislifeasafarmer.5.Mylittlesister_______________________________(分享她的糖果给我)whenshesawIwassad.6.We_____________________________(一起整理家庭相册)onSundayafternoon,laughingattheoldphotos.一、句子中译英(校园竞赛场景)1.奶奶教我包饺子时,耐心纠正我捏褶子的手法,直到我能包出好看的饺子。2.爸爸加班晚归,我把饭菜热好放在餐桌上,他看到后笑着摸了摸我的头。3.妈妈生病时,我学着她平时的样子,给她熬了一碗姜茶,虽然味道有点怪。4.爷爷看不懂手机上的新闻,我坐在他身边,逐字逐句读给他听,他听得很认真。5.和妹妹因玩具吵架后,我把玩具让给她,她拉着我的手说“姐姐最好了”。二、微场景写作情境1:妈妈加班晚归,我热饭等她训练目标:通过“动作细节+环境烘托”体现“我对妈妈的关心”,避免直白抒情。提示词:kitchen,reheatedrice,warmsoup,mom’stiredface,smile情境2:和爷爷因手机使用吵架后道歉训练目标:用“对话+动作/神态”展现“道歉与和解”,包含1处潜台词(如爷爷的动作暗示原谅)。提示词:livingroom,oldphone,apologize,grandpa’shands,sharedtea(2025·全国一卷·高考真题)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.Ther

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