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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。FourteenyearoldNathanranasmallstandsellingcolorfulphonecasesattheannualmunitySummerCarnival(嘉年华).Whileyoungerkidscrowdedaroundotherattractions,hefocusedonhismodestbusiness.Hisrealambition,however,laybeyondthis:hedreamedofowninga3Dprinter.Withit,hecoulddesignandcreateuniquephonecaseshimself,transforminghissmallsummerjobintoaproperonlinebusiness.Oneafternoon,a10yearoldgirlnamedMichelestoppedbyandboughtonephonecaseforhermom.Astheytalked,Nathansharedhisdreamofhavinga3Dprinter.“Withthatprinter,Icanprintanythinginanyform,”Nathansaid.“Anythinginanyform?”Michele’seyeslitupwithsuddenexcitement.“Onceyougetit,couldyoupleasemakealegformypetduckTim?Becausehewasmissingone,”Michelesaidhopefully.“That’sacoolproject,”Nathanreplied.Hethoughtforaminute.“I’llmakehimone,butitwon’tbereadynow.Ihavetosaveupsomeofthemoneymyselftobuythe3Dprinter.”“HowluckyTimis!Youaresokind!”Michelesaidhappily,unabletocontainherexcitement.Beforeleaving,MicheleexchangedphonenumberswithNathan.Theydiscoveredthattheylivedinthesameneighborhood,whichmeantNathancouldeasilygetclosetotheduckandmeasurethesizeofitsleginpersontoensurethatasuitableprosthetic(假体的)legcouldbemade.Hepromisedtoreachoutassoonashecouldaffordaprinter.Thatevening,NathantoldhisfamilyaboutMicheleandhispromise.Hisparentspraisedhiskindnessandinitiative.Theyagreedtooffersomefinancialsupporttobuytheprinterbutalsoemphasizedtheimportanceofhisowneffort.“We’reproudyou’reearningthisyourself,Nathan,”hisfathersaid.“Savingyourshareshowsrealmitment.”Nathannoddedfirmly,feelingmoredeterminedthanever.注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Nathanworkedveryhardforthe3Dprinter.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________However,creatingthelegmodelwasnoteasy.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析1.角色___________________________________________________________________________2.视角第________人称3.时空线attheannualmunitySummerCarnival______________thateveningatNathan'shome4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来WhatdidNathandoattheSummerCarnival?:______________________________________________WhatwasNathan'srealambition?:____________________________________________WhatdidMicheleaskNathantodoforherafterhegotthe3Dprinter?:_______________________WhatdidNathanandMichelediscoverbeforesheleft?:___________________________________HowdidNathan'sparentsrespondtohispromisetoMichele?:_______________________WhatsupportdidNathan'sparentsofferhimtobuythe3Dprinter?:__________________________________________________WhydidNathanneedtomeasureTim'sleginperson?:___________________WhatdidNathan'sfatherthinkofhissavingmoneybyhimself?:_______________________________________HowdidNathanfeelaftertalkingwithhisparents?:____________________________________________________5.情节线Nathan在社区嘉年华卖手机壳,怀揣买3D打印机的梦想。→___________________________________→____________________________________→________________________________→(续写)Nathan为买3D打印机努力工作。→然而,制作鸭子的腿模型并不容易。6.情感线Nathan:focused→_____________→_______________→(续写)___________________→(续写)7.综合以上信息,请用34句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.句式宾语从句:________________________________________________________________非谓语:________________________________________________________________感叹句:________________________________________________________________同位语:________________________________________________________________比喻:________________________________________________________________夸张:________________________________________________________________9.本文属于人与他人______________________________________________________________________情节构造第一段提示句:Nathanworkedveryhardforthe3Dprinter.衔接句1———对前面的"hispromisetoMichele"提问“Nathan为实现承诺做了哪些具体努力?”:WhatspecificeffortsdidNathanmaketokeephispromise?过渡句推演:衔接1→?←衔接2衔接句2———对"workedveryhard"提问“努力后取得了什么进展?”:Whatprogressdidhemakeafterworkinghard?第二段提示句:However,creatingthelegmodelwasnoteasy.衔接3———对"noteasy"提问“制作过程中遇到了什么具体困难?”:Whatspecificdifficultiesdidheencounterintheproductionprocess?过渡句推演:衔接3→?←主题主题:_________________________________段落构思第一段:Nathan为买3D打印机努力工作。①__________________→②__________________→③__________________;英文:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:然而,制作鸭子的腿模型并不容易。④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥__________________。英文:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案1.角色Nathan(14岁,在嘉年华卖手机壳,梦想拥有3D打印机)、Michele(10岁女孩,想买鸭子假体腿)、Nathan'sparents(Nathan的父母,支持儿子)、Tim(Michele的宠物鸭,缺一条腿)2.视角第三人称3.时空线attheannualmunitySummerCarnivalMichelestoppingbyNathan'sstandandtalkingwithhimthateveningatNathan'shome4.请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来WhatdidNathandoattheSummerCarnival?:Heranasmallstandsellingcolorfulphonecases.WhatwasNathan'srealambition?:Hedreamedofowninga3Dprintertodesignuniquephonecasesandturnhissummerjobintoanonlinebusiness.WhatdidMicheleaskNathantodoforherafterhegotthe3Dprinter?:SheaskedhimtomakeaprostheticlegforherpetduckTim.WhatdidNathanandMichelediscoverbeforesheleft?:Theylivedinthesameneighborhood.HowdidNathan'sparentsrespondtohispromisetoMichele?:Theypraisedhiskindnessandinitiative.WhatsupportdidNathan'sparentsofferhimtobuythe3Dprinter?:Theyagreedtooffersomefinancialsupport.WhydidNathanneedtomeasureTim'sleginperson?:Toensurethatasuitableprostheticlegcouldbemade.WhatdidNathan'sfatherthinkofhissavingmoneybyhimself?:HethoughtsavinghisshareshowedrealmitmentandwasproudofNathan.HowdidNathanfeelaftertalkingwithhisparents?:Hefeltmoredeterminedthanever.5.情节线Nathan在社区嘉年华卖手机壳,怀揣买3D打印机的梦想。→Michele来买手机壳,得知Nathan的梦想后请求他为宠物鸭做假体腿,两人互留联系方式并发现住同一社区→Nathan晚上告诉家人此事,父母表扬他并愿提供部分资金支持,强调他自身努力的重要性→(续写)Nathan为买3D打印机努力工作。→然而,制作鸭子的腿模型并不容易。6.情感线Nathan:focused→enthusiastic(分享梦想时)→determined(承诺Michele后)→hardworking(为买打印机努力时,续写)→persistent(克服制作模型困难时,续写)7.综合以上信息,请用34句话概括文章大意中文:14岁的Nathan在社区嘉年华卖手机壳,梦想拥有3D打印机来拓展业务。10岁女孩Michele来买手机壳时,请求他日后用3D打印机为自己缺腿的宠物鸭Tim做假体腿,两人发现住同一社区。Nathan晚上告知家人此事,父母表扬他的善良,愿提供部分资金支持买打印机,同时强调他自身努力的重要性,Nathan因此更坚定。英文:FourteenyearoldNathanranastandsellingphonecasesatthemunitySummerCarnivalanddreamedofowninga3Dprintertoexpandhisbusiness.When10yearoldMichelecametobuyaphonecase,sheaskedhimtomakeaprostheticlegforherpetduckTimwiththe3Dprinterlater,andtheyfoundtheylivedinthesameneighborhood.Nathantoldhisfamilyaboutitthatnight,andhisparentspraisedhiskindness,agreedtooffersomefinancialsupportfortheprinterwhileemphasizingtheimportanceofhisownefforts,whichmadeNathanmoredetermined.8.句式宾语从句:Hepromisedtoreachoutassoonashecouldaffordaprinter.非谓语:Whileyoungerkidscrowdedaroundotherattractions,hefocusedonhismodestbusiness.感叹句:HowluckyTimis!同位语:Hisrealambition,however,laybeyondthis:hedreamedofowninga3Dprinter.比喻:Michele’seyeslitupwithsuddenexcitement.(此处“litup”将眼神比作灯光,体现兴奋)夸张:Michelesaidhappily,unabletocontainherexcitement.(“unabletocontain”夸张表现兴奋程度)9.本文属于人与他人Nathan与Michele之间的善意互动(承诺帮忙做假体腿)、Nathan与父母之间的支持与引导(父母支持买打印机并强调努力的重要性)情节构造第一段提示句:Nathanworkedveryhardforthe3Dprinter.衔接句1———对前面的"hispromisetoMichele"提问“Nathan为实现承诺做了哪些具体努力?”:WhatspecificeffortsdidNathanmaketokeephispromise?过渡句推演:衔接1→Howdidtheseeffortshelphimgetclosertobuyingthe3Dprinter?←衔接2衔接句2———对"workedveryhard"提问“努力后取得了什么进展?”:Whatprogressdidhemakeafterworkinghard?第二段提示句:However,creatingthelegmodelwasnoteasy.衔接3———对"noteasy"提问“制作过程中遇到了什么具体困难?”:Whatspecificdifficultiesdidheencounterintheproductionprocess?过渡句推演:衔接3→Howdidhesolvethesedifficultiestopletetheprostheticleg?←主题主题:Nathan为实现对Michele的承诺,努力赚钱买3D打印机,虽制作鸭子假体腿遇到困难但最终克服。段落构思第一段:Nathan为买3D打印机努力工作。①Hearrivedatthecarnivalearliereverymorningtosetuphisstandandstayedlatetoattractmorecustomers.②Heevendesignedsimplepatternsonsomephonecasesbyhandtomakethemmoreattractive,andthesalesofhisphonecasesincreasedalot.③Afteramonthofhardwork,hesavedenoughmoneytoaddtohisparents'supportandfinallyboughtthe3Dprinterhehadbeendreamingof.英文:Hearrivedatthecarnivalearliereverymorningtosetuphisstandand
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