英语读后续写之情绪描写技巧

英语读后续写之情绪描写技巧在写作中，对人物情感的描写常常能使人物的形象显得生动鲜活。人的情感可以分很多种，如喜悦、满意、失望、悲伤、憎恨、愤怒、惊讶、恐惧、赞赏等等。在英语中有很多不同的词和句式来表达这些不同的情感。一、情绪描写之喜乐喜乐的情绪通常和动作“笑”结合，这样写出来的句式更灵动活泼。常见的表达方式有：smilebrightly;laugh;beam;light(sth)up;lightupwith;burstintolaughter;burstoutlaughing；wearabright/broadsmile;givesbasmile。学一学：beam:smileveryhappilylightup:ifsomeone'sfaceoreyeslightup,theyshowpleasure,excitementetc.lightupwith：Hiseyeslitupwithlaughter.Herfacelitupwithpleasure.lightsthup:tomakesomeone'sfaceoreyesshowpleasureorexcitement.Suddenlyabrightsmilelitupherface/eyes.例如：他的父母满意地笑了。译法一：Hisparentsbeamed/smiledwithsatisfaction.译法二：Hisparentsworeasatisfiedsmileonhisface.练一练：1.看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。【答案一】Atthesightofthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.【答案二】Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.【答案三】Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.【答案四】Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupJane'sface/eyes.2.当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。【答案一】Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywasfullofjoy.【答案二】Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.(非常开心)【答案三】Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)二、情绪描写之激动动词：whistle（吹口哨）/dance/jump/leapwithjoy;feelasurge（激增）ofhappiness/delight/joy/excitement;(one'seyes)twinkle（闪闪发光）;(one'sheart)beat/poundwildly（心跳加速）;canhardlyconcealone'sexcited(几乎无法掩饰兴奋的心情)形容词：delighted;overjoyed;excited;thrilled;bewildwithjoy（欣喜若狂）句子：Awildgaiety（快乐）tookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高兴得难以形容。Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.(flushv.发红）她激动得满脸通红。练一练：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。【答案一】Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltexcited/thrilled.【答案二】Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.【答案三】Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.【答案四】Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.【答案五】Knowingshewontheprize,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.【答案六】Knowingshewontheprize,shewasovercomewithexcitement.三、情绪描写之生气feel/getangry/furious;seizedbyanger;feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury);eyesblaze;stormoutof/into/off（气冲冲地…）;storm(怒吼);句子：①Iwasseizedbyanger.我被愤怒覆盖。②Hewasfumingwithrage.他大发雷霆。③Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒情绪突然爆发起来了。④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住自己的愤怒。⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他怒火冲天。⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他看了我一眼，怒不可遏。练一练：Sam感到非常生气。【答案一】：Samfeltveryangry.【答案二】：Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.【答案三】：Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.【答案四】：Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.【答案五】：Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦sad;bitter;sorrowful;feelasurgeofsadness;(sadness)surgewithinsb;one'sheartache;beovercomewithsadness句子：①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着脸颊滚了下来②IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我觉得我在悲伤的海洋中漂浮。③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。④Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她抽泣着，双手掩面。⑤Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。我的眼睛充满了泪水。⑥Afrown(皱眉)nowstoodonhisface.他开始皱眉。⑦Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那里，脸上带着忧郁的表情。⑧Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.这个消息使他脸上蒙一片阴影。练一练：1.她伤心不已。【答案一】：Shefeltextremelysad.【答案二】：Asadnesscameoverher.【答案三】：Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.【答案四】：Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.【答案五】：Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.【答案六】：Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.2.他哽咽欲哭。【答案】：Alumpcametohisthroat.3.她的双眼哭得通红【答案】：Hereyeswereredfromcrying.4.她的眼里满含泪水。【答案】：Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.5.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.【答案】：Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.6.Oliver独自一人在房间里流下了孤独伤心的泪水【答案】：Aloneintheroom,Olivercriedbitter,lonelytears．7.Wilbur哭着直到睡着。【答案】：Wilburcriedhimselftosleep.五、情绪描写之恐惧frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwithterror;berootedtothespot;freeze;runaway;flee;one'skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat;句子：①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转向我，眼睛里充满了恐惧。②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地涌在她身上。③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...当……时，她被吓坏了④Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她的脸变得苍白，站在那里结结巴巴。⑤Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心里涌起一股恐惧。⑥Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated(窒息).她的心跳太剧烈，几乎要窒息了练一练：我感到很害怕。【答案一】：Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.【答案二】：Iwasin(a)panic/wasfulloffear.【答案三】：Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.【答案四】：Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.【答案五】：Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.【答案六】：Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror;mypalmssweating.六、情绪描写之其他1)感动①Toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感动,我们……②Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。③Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,……2)紧张①Herfaceturnedpal,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.她的脸刷白，感觉如坐针毡。②Hispalmsweresweatyandkneesweresoft.他手心出汗，膝盖发软。3)尴尬/羞愧①Hewasembarrassed/ashamed.②Hisfaceflushed(通红)/burned(燃烧)withembarrassment/shame.他因尴尬而满脸通红。他窘得脸都红了。③Hehung/dropped/loweredhisheadinshame.他羞愧地低下了头。④Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。⑤Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到羞愧极了，血液涌上脸颊。4)绝望①Hefelthopeless/desperate.②Uponhearingthebadnew,shewassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.听到这个坏消息，他突然被投入黑暗世界，陷入绝望。③Hisbeliefsinlookingforwardandseeingthepositiveineverythingdesertedhim.他那种向前看、看到一切事物积极一面的信念抛弃了他。5)感谢①Iranovertomyfather,reachedoutmyhandsandhugged/embracedhimtightly/firmly.我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。②Withgratefultearshanginginhiseye,shekeptextending(表达)hisgratitude(感激)，“Thankyousomuch!”他眼中满是