安徽省2025秋七年级英语上册Unit7HappyBirthday整合提升创新表达-写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

Unit7大单元整合提升创新表达—写作能力提升练写作实践假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike想要了解家人和朋友是怎么给你的爷爷过生日的，因此给你写信询问。请你给他写一封回信。要点如下:1.给爷爷举办一个生日聚会；2.老友来参加聚会；3.买生日蛋糕并唱生日歌；4.买爷爷喜欢的茶。要求:词数60~80。［审题指导］1.体裁：记叙文2.话题：爷爷过生日3.人称：以第三人称和第一人称为主4.时态：以一般现在时为主［思路构建］DearMike,Mygrandpais70yearsoldandmyfamilyhaveabigbirthdaypartyforhim.Threeofhisoldfriendscometotheparty.Grandpaisveryhappytoseeallofus.Webuyabigbirthdaycake.MygrandpablowsoutthecandlesandwesingHappyBirthdaytohim.GrandpalikestodrinkteasoIbuyhimsometea.Weallhaveagreattime.Yours,LiHua精彩范文高分点评:1.思路清晰，采用“总—分—总”三段式结构。2.一些短语，比如：haveabirthdayparty,blowout,haveagreattime等的准确运用，展示了作者的扎实的基本功。3.文中so引导的并列句的运用成为文章的加分点。下面句子均有1—2处错误，请找出并写出正确的句子。（6分）1.Mybirthdayisin28thJuly.______________________________________________2.MyfriendDavidenjoyplaybasketball.______________________________________________3.It’sagoodideaplantsometrees.______________________________________________话题写作常见错误呈现Mybirthdayison28thJuly.MyfriendDavidenjoysplayingbasketball.It'sagoodideatoplantsometrees.4.Planttreesforyourbirthdayisagreatidea.______________________________________________5.Howmanymilkdoesthegirlwant?______________________________________________6.MrsSmithwantherdaughterbeanurse.______________________________________________Plantingtreesforyourbirthdayisagreatidea.Howmuchmilkdoesthegirlwant?MrsSmithwantsherdaughtertobeanurse.假设你是Jenny，本周六是你的生日，你想邀请你的好朋友Lucy来参加你13岁的生日聚会。请你根据下面的提示信息，用英语写一封邮件，向你的好朋友Lucy发出邀请，并告诉她聚会的相关信息。实战演练MyBirthdayPartyTime:6:00p.m.,27thDecemberPlace:atmyhomeActivities:◆haveabigdinnerandeatabirthdaycake◆… 要求:词数：60~80（格式已给出，但不计入总词数）。DearLucy,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mythirteenthbirthdayiscoming.Ihopeyoucancomeandcelebratewithus.It'son27thDecember,andIwanttohavethepartyatmyhome.Thepartystartsat6：00p．m.Wecanhaveabigdinnerandeatabirthdaycake.Afterthat,wecanplaygamesandenjoysomefunactivitiestogether.Pleaseletmeknowifyoucancome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________