高考英语一轮复习 板块3 层级写作 1写作技巧篇 第3讲　让亮点词汇添彩

第三讲让亮点词汇添彩内容索引·层级十不落俗套的“高级词”

写作这一题型主要考查学生遣词造句的能力，新的评分标准提倡考生使用高级词汇。考生如能在正确使用基本词汇的基础上，将一些基本词汇升级为高级词汇，就能为自己的作文增加亮点。层级十不落俗套的“高级词”在使用高级词汇时，我们可以尝试如下方法：一、无重复原则——求雅变异

写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的词汇水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是词汇高级用法的体现。1.Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikesplayingfootball. →Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherprefersplayingfootball.美句输入2.Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayalsohavedifferentwaystodealwithsuchasituation.→Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayalsohavevarious/diversewaystodealwithsuchasituation.二、具体化原则——生动贴切

所谓词义具体化原则是指，写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、模糊的词，而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。1.Heisagoodteacher.→Heisakind/patient/knowledgeableteacher.2.Hegoestoworkeveryday.→Herides/drivestoworkeveryday.三、晚词优先原则——新颖高级

为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，尽量用高年级阶段学到的词汇代替低年级阶段学到的词汇。1.IamverygladtoknowyouareinterestedinTangpoems. →Iamextremely/morethandelightedtoknowyouareinterestedinTangpoems.2.Ishouldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek. →Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.四、短语优先原则——凑词增色

用短语代替单词可使文章增加亮点。如果关键时刻思维短路，用短语凑字也是一个很好的选择。1.形容词变短语的方法：of＋同根名词Takingregularexerciseisverybeneficialtoourhealth.→Takingregularexerciseisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.2.动词变短语的方法：同义短语替换①Ilikeplayingfootballinmysparetime.→I’mfondofplayingfootballinmysparetime.→I’minterestedinplayingfootballinmysparetime.→I’mcrazyaboutplayingfootballinmysparetime.→I’maddictedtoplayingfootballinmysparetime.②Isincerelyhopethatyouwillconsidermysuggestions.→Isincerelyhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount/consideration.③Thestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition,whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexperiencethecharmofChineseart.→Thestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition,whichprovidesaplatformforthemtohaveatasteforthecharmofChineseart.(2021·浙江6月卷满分作文)Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换加黑词汇1.Heshouldhavedrivenmoreslowly. →He_____________________havedrivenmoreslowly.2.Mostofthestudentsareshort－sighted. →___________________thestudentsareshort－sighted.3.Jackisveryclever，whooftenthinksofnewideas. →Jackisveryclever，whooften_______________newideas.佳句输出issupposedtoThemajorityofcomesupwith4.Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsavesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks. →Somestudentsthinkthattheyshould____________someoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.5.I’mverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember. →I’m____________gladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.6.Wouldyoupleasehelpmetoturndowntheradio? →Wouldyouplease_________________toturndowntheradio?setasidemorethandomeafavorⅡ.根据提示用高级词汇改写下列句子1.Asaresult，theplanwasafailure.(turnout) →______________________________________2.Ibelievethatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.(convince) →________________________________________________________________Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Iamconvincedthatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.3.Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.(devote) →_____________________________________4.Assoonashearrived，hebeganhisresearch.(介词短语作状语) →______________________________________5.Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant.(of＋n.) →________________________________________________________________6.MoreandmoreAmericansarecuriousaboutChineseculture.(number) →________________________________________________________________ ___________________Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.O