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易错点18应用文写作
目录
01易错陷阱(3大陷阱)
02举一反三
【易错点提醒一】审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点
【易错点提醒二】语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【易错点提醒三】句子错误,汉式英语易混易错点
03易错题通关
易错陷阱1:审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点。
【分析】
应用文中主要以以考查各类书信或电子邮件为主,如建议信、申请信、感谢信等。有的考生盲目套用
所谓写作模板,文不对题,造成扣分降档。因此,考生要想获得高分,需要认真审题,明确写作体裁。
易错陷阱2:语言平淡或复杂易混易错点。
【分析】
良好的开端就成功了一半。好的开头和结尾是留给阅卷老师的第一印象。因此,应当运用精彩的开头
和结尾,多变的句式和词汇,有了风头、猪肚和豹尾,自然会提升文章的整体档次。
易错陷阱3:句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点。
【分析】
考生因基础词汇和句型掌握不牢,导致无法正确运用正确的语言,把所找出的要点表达清楚。为突出
主题,减少错误,除了在平时学习中大量积累词汇、短语和句型外,在造句时还应当使用与话题相关的词
语和句型。最后检查单词拼写、语法以及衔接等方面是否存在错误。
【易错点提醒一】体裁格式、结构易混易错点
【例1】(24-25高三上·重庆·阶段练习)你校上周日举办了一场“非物质文化遗产(IntangibleCulturalHeritage)
进校园”活动。请你给校英语报写一篇报道,介绍此次活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
2.活动意义。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:传承人inheritor
LastSunday,ourschoollaunchedthe“IntangibleCulturalHeritageintotheCampus”activity.
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易错分析:思维固化,总是以书信格式开头或结尾易错,内容要点易忽略。
【答案】
LastSunday,ourschoollaunchedthe“IntangibleCulturalHeritageintotheCampus”activity.Thisactivity
aimstointegrateintangibleculturalheritageintoschooleducation,sothatstudentscanfeelthecharmof
traditionalculture.
Attheevent,theschoolinvitedinheritorsofintangibleculturalheritagetodemonstratetheirskillsand
interactwithstudents.Somerelatedpracticalactivities,suchashandicraftmaking,werealsoorganizedtolet
studentshaveabetterunderstandingofintangibleculturalheritagethroughhands-onpractice.
Thisactivityisnotonlyanopportunityforculturalinheritance,butalsoatouchingandenlighteningexperience
forstudents.
【变式1】(24-25高三上·江苏徐州·阶段练习)假如你是李华,某武术协会计划举办一场大型的国际武术
表演,正在招聘英语志愿者。请你给武术协会的负责人写封邮件,应征该职位,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.应征原因及你的优势;
3.你的期望。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
DearSirorMadam,
I’mLiHua,astudentfromGuangmingSeniorHighSchool.
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】DearSirorMadam,
I’mLiHua,astudentfromGuangmingSeniorHighSchool.Learningthatyou’relookingforvolunteers
thataregoodatoralEnglishforacominggrandmartialartsperformance,I’mwritingtobeoneofthem.
ThereasonwhyI’mapplyingforthispositionisthatIwanttohelpspreadthistraditionalculture.Ispeak
fluentEnglish,soitwon’tbeaproblemformetocommunicatewithforeigners.Besides,Ioncevolunteeredfor
theInternationalTraditionalWushuCompetitionheldinourcity.
I’msureIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.AndIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldtakemy
applicationintoconsideration.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply!
Yours,
LiHua
【变式2】(24-25高三上·四川·阶段练习)你校将举行“用英语讲述中因故事”为主题的征文活动,请以一
位中国历史人物为题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.人物事迹;2.意义;3.启示。
注意:(1)100词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Onepossibleversion:
Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoral
values,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomto
countlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.
ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.Histeachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundation
ofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Even
today,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.
Confucius’slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuit
ofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindus
oftheimportanceofintegrity,compassion,andsocialresponsibility.
【变式3】(24-25高三上·江苏盐城·阶段练习)假定你是学生会主席李华,国庆节将至,为了向在校留学
生展示国庆节,你校将举办一场以“我和我的祖国”为主题的摄影作品比赛。请你用英语写一则通知,内容
包括:
1.活动的目的;
2.活动的要求;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Notice
TheNationalDayisdrawingnear.Ourschoolwillholdaphotographcompetitionthemed“Mycountryand
I”toshowstudentsthecelebrationsofournationalday.Youarewelcometojoininit!
ThiscompetitionisscheduledonOctober8th.PleasesendyourphotostotheStudents’Unionbefore
October5th.Makesureallitemsenteredforthecompetitionaresuitable,clearandpositive.Notonlywillthe
competitiongiveinternationalstudentsaglimpseofthisnationwidefestival,butitwillalsoenablethemtolearn
moreaboutourgreatachievements.
Lookingforwardtoyourphotographyworks.
Students’Union
【易错点提醒二】语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【例2】
写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、笼统的表达,根据语境使用具体生动的词。
SogooddotheylookthatIthinkyoucouldbeinterestedinthem.
→SoattractiveandalivedotheylookthatIthinkyoucouldbeinterestedinthem.
【变式1】为了表现自己的语言功底,吸引阅卷老师的眼球,尽量用高年级阶段学到的高级词汇代替
低年级阶段学到的词汇。
Eventually,IwanttoknowwhichaspectsoftraditionalChineseculturearouseyourcuriositymost.
→Eventually,IamstronglyeagertoknowwhichaspectsoftraditionalChineseculturearouseyourcuriosity
most.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
【变式2】用短语代替不仅会使文章增加亮点,而且如果关键时刻思维短路,用短语凑词数也是一个
很好的选择。
形容词变短语的方法:of+同根名词
Furthermore,guzhengisverysignificanttoChinesefolkmusicleadingyoutoafantasticworldofmusic.
→Furthermore,guzhengisofgreatsignificancetoChinesefolkmusicleadingyoutoafantasticworldof
music.(2021·全国甲卷满分作文)
【变式3】运用谚语
·Asthefamoussayinggoes...
正如名言所说……
Asweallknow,ourfriendslendusahelpinghandwhenweneedhelpandtheyhelpusgetthroughdifficult
situations.
众所周知,在我们需要帮助的时候,我们的朋友会伸出援手,并且他们会帮助我们渡过困境。
【易错点提醒三】句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点
【例3】HewanttocometoChinaforavisit.他想要来中国参观。
易错分析:基础知识和词汇掌握不牢。主谓一致不熟悉。
【详解】低级语法错误和单词拼写错误是文章扣分的一大因素。这些基础词汇和语法的熟练运用需要积累
大量知识。
【变式1】Iamwrittingto...我给你写信......;
【详解】write过去式wrote;过去分词written;现在分词writing。
【变式2】Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyou.
【详解】下列短语中,to是介词,后面需要跟动词的ing形式。
1.(2025·山东·一模)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落。请你给他写
一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表示理解;
(2)提出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
DearFrank,
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】DearFrank,
Asafellowstudentwhohasthesameexperience,Iunderstandhowoverwhelmingacademicpressurecan
be.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmighthelpyoumanageit.
Firstofall,it’scrucialtodecideonpriorities.Thisway,youcanmakeyourschedulewell-organized.You
canalsojoinastudygrouptodiscussdifficulttopicsandlearnfromeachother.Don’tforgettoengagein
extracurricularactivitiestorefreshyourselfandrelieveyourpressure.
Allinall,academicpressureisacommonchallenge,butwithproperorganization,supportandself-care,
youcandealwithiteffectivelyandstayontrack.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就你的英国朋友Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落情况
给他写一封邮件。其内容包括:表示理解和提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力:pressure→stress
首先:firstofall→tobeginwith
重要的:crucial→vital
处理:dealwith→copewith
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Youcanalsojoinastudygrouptodiscussdifficulttopicsandlearnfromeachother.
拓展句:Itisalsoadvisablethatyoushouldjoinastudygrouptodiscussdifficulttopicsandlearnfromeachother.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Asafellowstudentwhohasthesameexperience,Iunderstandhowoverwhelming
academicpressurecanbe.(运用了who引导的定语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Herearesomesuggestionsthatmighthelpyoumanageit.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
2.(24-25高三上·山东青岛·阶段练习)假设你是李华,你校外籍教师Williams想暑假期间到中国各地旅游,
需聘请一位旅游爱好者做他的导游。请写一封邮件推荐你的朋友李明给他,要点如下:
1.写信的目的;
2.介绍李明的优势;
3.希望安排面试。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】DearMr.Williams,
I’mwritingtorecommendmyfriendLiMingasyourguideforyoursummertravelsinChina.
LiMing,akeentraveler,speaksfluentEnglishandhasextensiveknowledgeofChinesecultureandhistory.
Hispreviousexperienceasapart-timetourguidehasequippedhimwiththeskillstohandleanysituationthat
mayariseduringthetrip.He’spassionate,reliable,andalwaysreadytohelp.
IkindlyrequestyoutoconsiderarranginganinterviewwithLiMing.I’mconfidenthe’llbeanexcellent
companionforyourjourney.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于推荐信。要求考生就外籍教师Williams想暑假期间到中国各地旅游,需聘请一
位旅游爱好者做他的导游这一需求,向Williams推荐自己的朋友李明,并说明推荐理由及希望安排面试。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐:recommend→suggest/introduce
配备:equip→arm
处理:handle→dealwith
热情:passionate→enthusiastic/zealous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:LiMing,akeentraveler,speaksfluentEnglishandhasextensiveknowledgeofChinesecultureandhistory.
拓展句:LiMing,whoisakeentraveler,speaksfluentEnglishandhasextensiveknowledgeofChineseculture
andhistory.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Hispreviousexperienceasapart-timetourguidehasequippedhimwiththeskillstohandle
anysituationthatmayariseduringthetrip.(运用了关系代词that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2]I’mconfidenthe’llbeanexcellentcompanionforyourjourney.(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
3.(24-25高三上·新疆乌鲁木齐·阶段练习)假设你是李华,你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike给你来信说
他最近沉迷于电脑难以控制。请你给他回一封信,告诉他网瘾可能会给学习、健康、人际关系等带来不好
的影响,并提出一些建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:网瘾Internetaddiction
DearMike,
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【答案】DearMike,
I’msorrytohearthatyouareaddictedtotheInternetandhavedifficultycontrollingit.Internetaddiction
canhavebadeffectsonyourstudy,healthandrelationships.
Youshouldlimityourtimeonline.Youcanalsodomoreoutdooractivitieslikesportsorgoingforawalk.
Besides,trytofocusonyourstudiesandsetgoalsforyourself.
Isincerelyhopethesesuggestionswillbehelpfultoyouandthatyoucangetoutofthisdifficultsituation
soon.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike写封信,就其最近沉迷于电脑难以控制一事给
出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做……有困难:havedifficultydoing→havetroubledoing
影响:effect→influence/impact
此外:besides→what’smore
专注于:focuson→concentrateon
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Internetaddictioncanhavebadeffectsonyourstudy,healthandrelationships.
拓展句:IfyouareaddictedtotheInternet,itcanhavebadeffectsonyourstudy,healthandrelationships.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’msorrytohearthatyouareaddictedtotheInternetandhavedifficultycontrollingit(.运
用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Isincerelyhopethesesuggestionswillbehelpfultoyouandthatyoucangetoutofthisdifficult
situationsoon.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
4.(24-25高三上·湖南长沙·阶段练习)在育才中学某班的英语课堂上,张老师用英语带领学生们了解月饼
的历史并制作月饼。请你就此写一则英语帖子发表在某网站英语论坛上。内容包括:
1.课堂简介;
2.你的观点。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】MissZhang,anEnglishteacherfromYucaiHighSchool,helpedthestudentsbewell-informedabout
thehistoryofmooncakesinEnglishandaskedstudentstodiscusstheoriginsandthesymbolicmeaningbehind
mooncakes.Then,MissZhangguidedtheminmakingmooncakes.
Ipersonallythinkthisisaverycreativewayofteaching.Bydoingso,studentsnotonlyimprovetheirEnglish,
butalsogainadeeperunderstandingofChinesetraditions.Also,thishands-onexperiencehelpsstudentsdevelop
practicalskills,makingthelearningmoreengagingandmeaningful.Furthermore,thisapproachdevelopsbetter
communicationandcooperationskills,thuspromotingstudents’globalperspective.Inconclusion,suchmethods
shouldbeencouragedinmoreclassroomstoinspirestudents’interestinlearningandculturalexploration.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一则关于育才中学的张老师在课堂上用英语带领学生们了
解月饼的历史并制作月饼的英语帖子。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此:thus→therefore
总之:inconclusion→inshort
提高:improve→promote
激发……在某方面的兴趣:inspireone’sinterestin→arouseone’sinterestin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Inconclusion,suchmethodsshouldbeencouragedinmoreclassroomstoinspirestudents’interestin
learningandculturalexploration.
拓展句:Inconclusion,Ithinksuchmethodsshouldbeencouragedinmoreclassroomstoinspirestudents’interest
inlearningandculturalexploration.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Also,thishands-onexperiencehelpsstudentsdeveloppracticalskills,makingthelearning
moreengagingandmeaningful.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】Ipersonallythinkthisisaverycreativewayofteaching.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
5.(24-25高三上·吉林·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你校将举行建校74周年庆典,请代表校学生会向你校
的英国留学生Chris发出这邀请。内容包括:
1.庆典时间、地点;
2.庆典活动安排;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1、词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:建校thefoundingoftheschool周年庆典anniversarycelebration
DearChris,
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Yourssincerely,
LiHua
【答案】DearChris,
I’mLiHua,onbehalfoftheStudents’Union.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoourschool’s74thanniversary
celebration.
Thecelebrationwillbeheldinourschoolstadiumat9a.m.onOctober1st.Therewillbevariousactivities.
Forexample,therewillbeatleast10wonderfulperformances,includingsinging,dancing,andmagicshows.Also,
anexhibitionoftheschool’shistoryandachievementswillbepresented,featuringover50preciousphotosand
documents.
Wesincerelyhopeyoucancomeandenjoythisspecialoccasionwithus.
Lookingforwardtoseeingyouthen.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生代表校学生会向学校的英国留学生Chris发
出这邀请,邀请其参加学校建校74周年庆典。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:various→avarietyof
举行:hold→host
真诚地:sincerely→genuinely
宝贵的:precious→valuable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Also,anexhibitionoftheschool’shistoryandachievementswillbepresented,featuringover50precious
photosanddocuments.
拓展句:Also,anexhibitionoftheschool’shistoryandachievementswillbepresented,whichfeaturesover50
preciousphotosanddocuments.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Also,anexhibitionoftheschool’shistoryandachievementswillbepresented,featuring
over50preciousphotosanddocuments.(运用了现在分词featuring作状语)
【高分句型2】Wesincerelyhopeyoucancomeandenjoythisspecialoccasionwithus(.运用了省略引导词that
的宾语从句作hope的宾语)
6.(24-25高三上·四川成都·阶段练习)假如你是学生会主席李华,学校将为高三的同学举办“成人
礼”(Coming-of-ageCeremony),请你以学生会名义发一则英文通知,欢迎全校师生参加。包含以下内容:
1.活动目的及时间地点;
2.主要环节;
3.注意事项。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
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