2026届高考英语冲刺复习2025年全国1卷英语读后续写

2026届高考英语冲刺复习2025年全国1卷英语

读后续写

ContinuationWriting

-BasedonBookOneUnitTwoandUnitThreeDevelopempathythroughanalyzingcharacteremotionsTeachingObjectives：321Understandthe"storymountain"structureandapplyittoanalyzetheoriginalarticle.理解“故事山”结构，并将其应用于分析原文。Masterthecoherencewiththeoriginaltext,languageaccuracyandrichness.掌握与原文的连贯性，语言的准确性和丰富性。Developempathythroughanalyzingcharacteremotions.通过分析人物情感来培养同理心。

LeadinDoyouhavesiblings/ˈsɪblɪŋz/?Haveyourememberedthebiggestquarrelbetweenyouandyourbrother/sister?Howdoyousettlesuchquarrels?ContinuationWritingActivityOne:Readtheoriginalstory.MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.①asmallgathering

小聚会

②

snacks

小吃

③

backyard后院

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Ihadn’tcountedon

我没想到

Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.knockover将某物击倒在地，使其倒下showedup出现Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.①usingup用尽

②backandforth来来回回地③Unexpectedlyadv.出乎意料地Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrother

decidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.①awkwardadj.令人尴尬的②decidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.决定离开而不是强行解决这个问题。

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.（推理）

①textedv.发短信

②

Notachance绝对不可能

③partedv.离开

④getover克服

⑤reasoned

v.推理Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butI

resisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfin

mybrother’s

shoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.①resistedv.回击

②conscience/ˈkɑːnʃəns/n.良知③putmyselfinmybrother’sshoes设身处地为我哥哥着想

④constantcompanion忠实的伴侣ContinuationWriting

ActivityTwo:TextAnalysis(5W+1H)2.TextAnalysis

when

wherewho

whathow

whyStoryMywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.WhoWhatWhenWherewhenintheearlysummer/aftersupper/Afewdayspassed/Twomonthspassed/afewmonthsearlierwhereatournewhome/inthebackyardwhoI,mywife,mybrother,Tobywhat1.Beginning:Iandmywifeplannedtohostasmallgatheringatmynewhomeinearlysummer;mywifepreparedsnacks,andItidiedthebackyard.2.Development:MybrotherbroughthisdogTobytothegathering.IaskedthebrothertokeepTobyoutside,andTobystayedoutsidehappilyatfirst.3.Conflict:Ididn’twantTobyinside,thebrotherleftunhappily.Later,Itextedthebrother,butthebrotherrefusedtomeet;Iresistedcontactinghimatfirstbutthenfeltguilty.4.Reflection:Irealizedmybrotherwasgoingthroughhardtimes(healthissues,wife’sdeath)andthatTobywasthebrother’sonlycompanion.whyFocusingonthechild'ssafety,yetoverlookingthebrother'sdependenceonToby.HowAtfirst,Ithought“he’llgetoverit”;then,myconsciencebotheredme,andhefeltguiltywhenIputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.ContinuationWriting

ActivityThree:PlotDesign十句五定法展开剧情十句五定法读后续写要求续写词数为150词左右。若一句话平均15词，则10句话就够了。“十句五定”通常指10句话中5句的位置及内容已定，并不限于文章是10句话。para1para2第1句：接着para1给出首句（心理/情绪）第6句：接着para2给出首句（心理/情绪）第2句：动作描写第7句：动作加环境描写第3句：动作描写第8句：动作加神态描写第4句：语言动作描写第9句：故事结局（动作加语言）第5句：根据para2首句来写（动作/情绪）第10句：主题升华

Para1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.

Para2:Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.①Whatwasmyfault?②HowdidIfeel?③WhatdidIdecidetodoandwhatdidweprepare?①Whenthedoorwasopened,whatweretheirreactions?②WhatdidIsayanddo?Whatwasmybrother'sresponse?③Whatdidwedotogether?④Whatwasthetheme?注意:作者向弟弟道歉或者兄弟俩聊天的时候,没有心要把前文弟弟妻子去世的事情再说一遍!PlotDesignMakeaprediction.Whatwillhappennext?ContinuationWritingActivityFour:LanguageExpressionsStrangersunderthesameroof?Friendshipontherock:pleaseadvise!2025Continuationwritingwords矛盾相关：tensions、arguments、silences、disagree、concerns、struggle和好相关：improve、communicate、understand、calm、listen、explain、worktogether矛盾相关：lie、trick、hurt、angry、stress、problem、ignore、suffer和好相关：save、apologize、explain、listen、solve、value、understandphrasesturnintoabattle（变成一场争执）cannotseeeyetoeye（无法达成共识）heatedargumentsandcoldsilencesabreakdowninyourrelationship（关系破裂）strugglewiththestress（承受压力、应对压力）regularandhonestcommunication（定期且真诚的沟通）calmdown（冷静下来）understand...fromone'spointofviewexplainone'sactionsandfeelingsaddressone'sconcerns（回应某人的担忧）healthydiscussion（健康的讨论）worktogethertoimprove（共同努力改善）breakone’sheart（让某人心碎）pickupthepieces（收拾残局、平复心情）beatalosswhattodo（不知所措）thestressofthissituation（这种情况带来的压力）avoidsb.（避开某人）tricksb.（欺骗某人）ignoreone’sfeelings（忽视某人的感受）haveafullandfranktalk（进行一次全面且坦诚的谈话）explainhowyoufeel（解释你的感受）listentowhatsb.hastosay（倾听某人的话）solvetheproblemtogether（一起解决问题）beworthsaving（值得挽回）valuethefriendship（珍惜这份情谊）教材相关语料整合句型1：Asense/feeling/surgeof+表情感的名词+有灵动词+sb+when+从句描述心情的名词happiness/joy/delight开心anger/rage/fury狂怒sadness/sorrow悲伤gratitude/appreciation感激admiration钦佩/赞赏guilt/ɡɪlt//remorse/rɪˈmɔːrs/愧疚悔恨fear/terror/fright/panic害怕astonishment/shock/surprise震惊disbelief/doubt/puzzle/suspicion/səˈspɪʃ(ə)n/怀疑动词weep(wept过去式)overseize/overwhelmcatch(caught过去式)strike(struck过去式)surroundtakeholdofwashovercome(came)overcreep(crept/creeped)overv.爬行surround/envelop

+sb.情绪描写我感到有些后悔。 Ifeltabitregretful.升级:

Asenseofregretcreptintomyheart.

Asurgeofregretseizedme.

Awaveofregret

surroundedmymind.句型1：Asense/feeling/surgeof+表情感的名词+有灵动词+sb+when+从句

后悔是没有用的。 Regretisuseless. 升级:

Thereis

_______________________

regrettingwhatIhavedone.句型2：Therebesentencepattern.nopoint/sense/use/good

我是如此的后悔与愧疚，以至于我寝食难安。IwassoregretfulandguiltythatIcouldneithereatnorsleep.改成倒装句:

_________________________thatIcouldneithereatnorsleep. 改成无灵主语:_________________haverobbedmeofmyappetiteandmysleep.句型3：“so...that..."sentencepatternSoregretfulandguiltywasIRegretandguilt我的妻子在这件事情上和我意见一致，并且做了一些饼干让我带过去。Mywifeagreedwithme,andshebakedsomecookiesformetotakeover.词汇升级/句式升级: Mywifesaweyetoeyewithmeonthismatter,___________________formetakeover.听到我的道歉后，他温暖地把我拥入怀中。________________________,hewarmlygatheredmeinhisarms.句型4：Non-finiteverbsasadverbials

非谓语动词作状语bakingsomecookiesHavingheardmyapology心里带着一丝尴尬和内疚，我轻轻地敲了敲门。Withasenseofembarrassmentandguilt

inmyheart,

Iknockedsoftlyon

thedoor.双手微微颤抖着，他把我抱在怀里。_______________________________,hegatheredmeintoherarms.我如鲠在喉，泪水模糊了我的眼眶。Ifeltalumpinmythroat,______________________________句型5：

With复合结构：with+宾语+doing/todo/done/介词短语,S+V.独立主格：n/pron+doing/todo/done/介词短语,S+V.（With）hishandsshakingslightly(with)tearscloudingmyeyes.就是在这一刻我明白了家人的真正含义。

_______atthatverymoment______

Iunderstoodthetruemeaningoffamily.是原谅和同情能让世界变得更美好。Itis_____________________________thatcanmaketheworldabetterplace.句型6：

TheEmphaticPattern

强调句型(Itis/was+主语/宾语+that+其他Itwasnotuntil+强调部分thatsbdidsth)Itwasthatforgivenessandcompassion最让他感动的是，他的兄弟原谅他了并紧紧的拥抱了他。最让他惊讶的是他兄弟能如此迅速地原谅他._______________________________hisbrotherforgavehimsoquickly.____________________________hisbrotherforgavehimandhuggedtightlyeachother.句型7：

What+V+sbmostwas/isthat从句WhatmovedhimmostwasthatWhatsurprisedhimmostwasthat

直到那时，他才意识到原谅和爱的重要性。_______________________theimportanceofforgivenessandlove.直到那时我才意识到生命中最重要的事情就是和家人在一起。_______________________themostimportantthinginlifeistospendtimewithfamily.句型8：Onlythendidsb.realize...（结尾升华句）OnlythendidherealizeOnlythendidIrealize

参考常用高级句型

完成第一段第二段升华句式1:

Asense/feeling/surgeof+表情感的名词+有灵动词+sb+when+从句句式2:Therebesentencepattern.句式3:“so...that..."sentencepattern句式4:Non-finiteverbsasadverbials

非谓语动词作状语句式5:With复合结构：with+宾语+doing/todo/done/介词短语,S+V句式6:TheEmphaticPattern

强调句型(Itis/was+主语/宾语+that+其他Itwasnotuntil+强调部分thatsbdidsth)句式7:句型7：用what引导的主语从句:Whatmadehim+V原+wasthat+完整句子句式8:Onlythendidsb.realize...（结尾升华句）一、表示愧疚1.Awaveofguiltsweptoverme.一阵愧疚感席卷了我。2.AstrongsenseofguiltoverwhelmedmeasIrecalledhowIhadtreatedmybrother.当我回想起自己是如何对待兄弟，一种强烈的愧疚感淹没了我。二、表示道歉1.Isincerelyapologizefor.../Ioweyouanapologyfor...我为…….真诚道歉/我应该向你道歉。2.Pleaseforgivemeforbeing...请原谅我三、表示紧张1.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIraisedmyhandtoknock.当我举起手去敲门时，我的心砰砰直跳。2.Istoodthere,clutchingtheboxofbiscuits,mypalmssweaty.我站在那里，手里抓着那盒饼干，手心冒汗。3.Anawkwardsilencehungintheairforamoment.空气中弥漫着一阵令人尴尬的沉默。四、表示惊讶1.Whenmybrotheropenedthedoor,hiseyeswidenedinsurprise.当我哥哥打开门时，他惊讶地睁大了双眼。五、表示释然1.AwaveofreliefwashedovermewhenIsawhissmile.看到他的微笑，我如释重负。2.Ifeltahugeweightliftoffmyshoulders.我感到肩上的重担减轻了。3.Webothletoutalaugh,andallthetensionmeltedaway.我们俩都笑了，所有的紧张都消失了。4.Itookadeepbreathtosteadymynerves.我深吸了一口气，让自己的神经镇定下来。5.MyvoicetrembledasIspoke.我说话时声音颤抖。课外相关语料整合

六、表示温暖1.Tearswelledupinmyeyes,butthistimetheyweretearsofjoy.泪水涌上了我的眼眶，但这一次是喜悦的泪水。2.Awarmfeelingspreadthroughmychest.一种温暖的感觉传遍了我的胸膛。3.Iwasdeeplytouchedbyhisgenerosityandforgiveness.他的慷慨和宽容深深打动了我。4.Awarmfeelingwelledupinmyheartwhenwemadeup.当我们和解时，一股温暖的感觉在我心中涌起。七、表示和好1.Let’sputthisbehindusandmakeup.让我们把这事翻篇吧2.Ihopeyoucanfinditinyourhearttoforgiveme.希望你能从心底原谅我。八、表示高兴1.Hisfacebrokeintoawidesmile.他的脸上突然绽出灿烂的笑容。2.Wehuggedtightlyandlaughedheartily.我们紧紧拥抱，尽情欢笑。3.Awarmsmilespreadacrossmybrother'sface.一个温暖的微笑从我哥哥的脸上掠过。4.Gradually,theicebetweenusmelted,replacedbyawarmandfamiliarfeeling.渐渐地，我们之间的冰融化了，取而代之的是一种温暖而熟悉的感觉。5.Whenwehuggedeachother,Ifeltallthetensionandmisunderstandingdisappear,leavingonlythewarmthoffamily.当我们拥抱在一起的时候，我感觉所有的紧张和误解都消失了，留下的只有亲情的温暖。课外相关语料整合ContinuationWritingActivityFive:Makeadraft（打草稿）Activity5:Makeadraft.

WritingHelp:Group1-3:paragraph1Group4-6:paragraph2Startyourcontinuationwithanewplotbasedonwhathashappened;Includedifferenttypesofdetails;Writeinthesametoneandtenseastheoriginalstory;Usedescriptivelanguage.ContinuationWritingLet’sshareourstories!Angermakesyousmaller,whileforgivenessforcesyoutogrowbeyondwhatyouwere.愤怒会让你变得渺小，而宽恕会让你超越过去。ThePowerofHomework1.Polishyourwritingandhandinyourpaper

basedonwhatyouhavelearnedtoday.

2.Haveregularandhonestcommunicationswithyourfamilymembers.Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Thedogwasn'tjustapetforhim;itwashisfamily.MyinconsiderationforcedhimandTobytoleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.howlonely