高考英语应用文写作专题课件 专题3 高考英语应用文写作之建议信

应用文写作建议高考英语写作系列信目录必备表达（词汇）必备表达（句型）范文实战练习PART1必备表达（词汇）必备表达-词汇1.征求某人的建议 2.在…方面给某人建议 3.提出一些建议 4.接受我的建议 5.在我看来，就我而言 6.表达某人的观点asksbforadvice/suggestionsgivesb.advice/suggestionson….make/offersomesuggestions/adviceadopt/accept/follow/takeupmyadvice/suggestionsinmyopinion/asfarasI’mconcerned/personallyexpressone’sviews/opinions必备表达-词汇7.实用的建议 8.关于 9.建议某人做某事 10.对某人有益 11.考虑我的建议

12.觉得我的建议有益/实用practical/helpful/usefuladvice/suggestionsconcerning/asto/regarding/withregardtosuggestsb.doingsth/advise/recommendsb.todosthbebeneficial/beofbenefittosb.takemyadvice/suggestionsintoconsideration/accountfindmysuggestions/advicehelpful/practical必备表达-词汇13.如下 14.有了某人的共同努力 15.开阔我们的视野 16.掌握英语

17.意识到 18.一个有效的方式 19.保持乐观asfollowsbroadenourhorizonmasterEnglish/haveagoodcommand/knowledgeofEnglishbeawareofaneffectivewayremainoptimisticaboutwiththejointeffortsofsb.必备表达-词汇20.记住 21.振奋某人的精神 22.习惯于这个现象

23.对…有坏影响 24.制定具体的制度 25.培养好的习惯 26.涵括各种各样的…keep…inmindliftone’sspiritsgetused/accustomedtothephenomenonhaveabadeffect/influenceonsetupspecificrulesdevelopgoodhabitscoverawidevarietyofPART2必备表达（句型）必备表达-照应材料,表明写作意图很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.必备表达-照应材料,表明写作意图我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients（顾客）.I‘mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkon…必备表达-照应材料,表明写作意图关于…你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些建议性的建议。You’veaskedmeforadvicewithregardto/regarding/concerning…andI’lltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.You’veaskedmeforadvicewithregardto/regarding/concerning…必备表达-照应材料,表明写作意图在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。Inmyopinion/AsfarasI’mconcerned/Personally,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.必备表达-给出建议及陈述理由,井然有序我认为如果你…,将会受益Ithinkitwouldbebeneficial/ofbenefitifyou…itwouldbebeneficial/ofbenefitif…必备表达-希望接受建议如果你能认真考虑我的建议我将会非常高兴。Iwillbegladifyoutakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Iwillbegladif…必备表达-希望接受建议如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.Iwillbemorethanhappyto…必备表达-希望接受建议我希望我的建议对你有益。Idohopethatmysuggestions/advicewillbebeneficial/ofbenefittoyou.mysuggestions/advicewillbebeneficial/ofbenefittoyou.PART3范文实战练习范文实战练习一实战练习一你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.你建议的线路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。实战练习一我很高兴收到你的来信，知道你要来中国。I’mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’recomingtoChina.实战练习一在长江和泰山旅行线路中，两个都是极力推荐的。OfthetwotripstotheOfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.arehighlyrecommended实战练习一就我个人而言，我更喜欢沿江游览，长江是中国最长的河流，也是中华文明的母亲河之一。PersonallyPersonally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.preferthetouralong实战练习一你可以学到很多关于中国和中国人民的历史。YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.historyofChinaandChinesepeople.实战练习一此外，沿河的景色令人惊叹，有许多著名的观光景点。Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.thesceneryalongtheriverwell-knownsightseeingspots实战练习一这就是为什么我认为沿长江旅行将是一个更好的选择。That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.That’swhyIthink实战练习一希望你在中国玩得愉快。Hopeyou’llhaveagoodtimeinChina.范文赏析DearJim,I’mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’recomingtoChina.OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.Hopeyou’llhaveagoodtimeinChina.范文实战练习二实战练习二假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。

(1)参加中文学习班；

(2)看中文书刊、电视；

(3)学唱中文歌曲；

(4)交中国朋友。实战练习二很高兴收到你的来信，要求我就如何学好汉语提出建议。I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingforadviceonI’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.实战练习二以下是一些建议，希望对你有所帮助。HerearesomesuggestionswhichIhopewillbeofsomehelptoyou.Herearesomesuggestions实战练习二首先，上一门中文课是个好主意，你可以跟着老师，从同学那里得到帮助。Tobeginwith,itisagoodideatotakeaChinesecourse,whereyoucanfollowtheteacherandgethelpfromyourclassmates.itisagoodideato实战练习二接下来，阅读一些中文书籍和杂志将有助于提高你的阅读能力。Next,readingsomeChinesebooksandmagazineswillhelpyoutoimproveyourreadingability.willhelpyoutoimprove实战练习二看一些电视节目也能提高你的汉语听力。YoucanalsowatchsomeChineseprogramsonTV,whichwillimproveyourlisteningability.willimproveyourlisteningability.实战练习二为了确保学中文不太枯燥，学唱中文歌是个好主意。TomakesurethatlearningChineseisn’ttoodull,itwouldbeagoodideatolearntosingsomeChinesesongs.isn’ttoodullTomakesurethat实战练习二最后，如果可能的话，结交一些中国朋友，这样你们可以互相学习语言。Lastbutnotleast,ifpossible,makesomeChinesefriends,sothatyoucanlearnlanguagesfromeachother.ifpossible实战练习二我希望你会发现我的建议是有益的，并在中文方面取得很大的进步。IhopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsbeneficialandmakegreatprogressinChinese.youwillfindmysuggestionsbeneficialmakegreatprogressin实战练习二期待收到你的中文信。LookingforwardtoreceivingyourletterwritteninChinese.writteninChinese范文赏析DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.HerearesomesuggestionswhichIhopewillbeofsomehelptoyou.Tobeginwith,itisagoodideatotakeaChinesecourse,whereyoucanfollowtheteacherandgethelpfromyourclassmates.Next,readingsomeChinesebooksandmagazineswillhelpyoutoimproveyourreadingability.YoucanalsowatchsomeChineseprogramsonTV,whichwillimproveyourlisteningability.TomakesurethatlearningChineseisn’ttoodull,itwouldbeagoodideatolearntosingsomeChinesesongs.Lastbutnotleast,ifpossible,makesomeChinesefriends,sothatyoucanlearnlanguagesfromeachother.

范文赏析IhopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsbeneficialandmakegreatprogressinChinese.LookingforwardtoreceivingyourletterwritteninChinese.Bestwishes.LiHua其他典型例题和父母分享微信的建议（1）假如你是李华，收到澳大利亚表弟（Harry）的电子邮件，邮件中提到他父母想看他的微信朋友圈（WeChatMoments）,他对是否同意和父母分享微信感到犹豫。请你给他回信，要点如下：

1.说明赞成或反对的观点；

2.主要理由；

3.提出个人的建议。范文赏析DearHarry,Howsurprisedandpleasedtoreceiveyouremailtoday!YoutoldmethatyourparentsaskedtoseeyourWeChatMomentsandthatyou’rehesitatingaboutwhethertoshareitwiththem.AsIseeit,it’sunderstandableforyourparentstodoso.

Bloodisthickerthanwater.Parentsareourmostbelievablepersonsintheworld.Asparents,theyhaveresponsibilitytomakesurewemakerightfriendsandwon’tbeharmedormisledbybadinformation.Asteenagers,wedoneedparents’guidance,especiallyintermsofsocialexperience.Moreover,sharingyourMomentswillbringyourwholefamilyclosertoeachother.Therefore,you‘dbettergivethemaplaceinyourownworldsothatyoucancommunicateeasily.Pleaseremembermetoyourparents.作为父母，他们有责任确保我们交到正确的朋友，不会被不良信息伤害或误导。因此，你最好让他们在你自己的世界里占有一席之地，这样你就可以轻松地交流了。如何不发脾气（2）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：

1)．表示理解并给予安慰；

2)．提出建议并说明理由。范文赏析DearJamieI'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,Iquiteunderstandhowyouarefeelingnowandthereisnoneedtoworryaboutitsomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.

事实上，每个人都会有这样一个时期，当事情似乎出了问题，重要的是要学会控制你的脾气，这样你就不会做或说任何你会后悔的事。范文赏析Firstofall,talktosomeoneyoutrustaboutthetroubleyou’refacedwith,whichisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Havingapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.

Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofgreatbenefittoyouandyou'llsoonbecomecalmerandbetter.首先，和你信任的人谈谈你所面临的困难，这是一个很好的发泄愤怒的方法，而不会伤害别人或你自己。对生活有一个积极的态度可以帮助你振作起来。北京游玩的建议（3）假设你是某国际学校高二（1）班的学生李华，你的美国朋友Peter来信说要来北京游玩。请根据下面提供的信息，给Peter写一封回信，内容包括：

1.建议他游览故宫及周边景区；

2.建议的理由；

3.表达祝愿。范文赏析IampleasedtohearthatyouarecomingtoBeijingsoon.I’dliketoadviseyoutovisitthePalaceMuseum,whichislocatedinthecenterofBeijing.ThePalaceMuseum,thelargestmuseuminChinawasestablishedduringtheMingDynasty,housingalargevaluablecollectionofroyalfamilytreasures.AftervisitingthePalaceMuseum,youcantakeatriparoundit.Therearesomeotherwell-knownmuseums,parksandcommercialcentersnearby,suchasChineseHistoryMuseum,BeihaiParkandWangFujingStreetetc.Thepublictransportaroundisveryconvenient.Youcanchoosetotakesubways,busesortaxis.Youcanalsorentabicycleandhangoutonitaround.Youaresuretoenjoyyourride.WishyouagoodtripinBeijing.故宫博物院是中国最大的博物馆，建于明朝，收藏了大量珍贵的皇室珍品。周围的公共交通很方便。英语阅读沙龙的建议（4）假如你是红星中学学生李华，这学期你加入了学校的英语阅读沙龙并收获颇丰。最近你收到负责沙龙活动的外教Jim的群发邮件，请阅读该邮件，并给他回复。回信需包括你收到邮件的感受，以及你对外教所提问题的建议。范文赏析Takingthefactthatyouarethinkingaboutclosingourclubintoaccount,whichisnotagreatdecisionfrommyperspective,I’mwritingtoconveysomerelatedsuggestions.

Initially,inordertoattractstudents,wecaninvitethemtoourreadingactivitiesandputupsomeposters.Interestingastheclubis,itcansurelyattractagreatdealofpeopleoncebeingadvertised.Secondly,asforwhenwemeet,I’msurewhichevertimefromMondaytoFridaysuitsyouisrightforus,sincewearetotallyfreeafterschool.Intheend,hardlycanIdescribehowmuchIwanttokeepthisclub,soit’llbehighlyappreciatedifyoutakemysuggestionsintoaccount.Lookingforwardtoyourswiftreply.考虑到你正在考虑关闭我们的俱乐部，这在我看来不是一个好的决定，我写信来传达一些相关的建议。首先，为了吸引学生，我们可以邀请他们参加我们的阅读活动，并张贴一些海报。我很难描述我有多想保留这个俱乐部，所以如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。是否到中国工作的建议（5）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见。请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件：1.建议他可以来中国；2.阐述你的理由（就业机会多、专业受欢迎、不同的文化体验等）;3.承诺可提供帮助。范文赏析DearMikeI’mverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmelastweek.Ihavebeenthinkingaboutthequestionyouaskedme.Frommypointofview,youcanchoosetocometoChinaafterfinishingyourstudies.Foronereason,China’sdevelopmentoverthepast30yearsoffersquantitiesofjobopportunitiesfortheyoung.What’smore,whatyouarestudyingisbadlyneededinChinanowadays.Infact,manybigcompaniesinourcityarehopingtohirepeoplelikeyou.原因之一是，中国过去30年的发展为年轻人提供了大量的就业机会。你正在学习的东西是急需的范文赏析Foranotherreason,Chinaisacountrywithsodifferentculturesandtraditionsfromthewestthatmanyforeignersenjoylivingandworkinghere.Whynotcomeandjointhem?I’msureyouwilladapttotheenvironmentquickly.Ifyoucomehere,IwilldowhatIcantohelpyou.Sowhatareyouwaitingfor?I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.另一个原因是，中国是一个与西方文化和传统迥异的国家，许多外国人喜欢在这里生活和工作。和朋友相处建议（6）假设你是李华，最近收到了笔友Mike的来信，内容如下：DearLiHuaRecentlyTom,mybestfriendsincewhenwewereinjuniorhighschool,hasbeenavoidingmeonpurpose.Idon’tknowwhy.Ihavetriedtotalkwithhimseveraltimes,butinvain.Idon’twanttolosehim.WhatshouldIdo?yours,Mike请你给他写一封100词左右的回信，内容包括如下要点：表示同情；2给出建议；3表达希望范文赏析I'msorrytolearnthatyouarebeingtroubledbyyourfriend'sattemptstokeepawayfromyou.Thanksforyourtrustinme.AsuddenabsenceofclosenesswithfriendsdoesdiscouragepeopleandIwellunderstandit.Asforsolutionstoyourdilemma,hereI'dliketosharewithyoumyideas.我很遗憾地得知，你的朋友想要远离你，这让你很困扰。突然与朋友不亲近确实会让人气馁，我很理解这一点。范文赏析Alltoooften,onewouldnevertrytoavoidhisfriendfornoreason.Tomymind,misunderstandingsmightaccountforyourfriendsshunning.It'slikelythatyoudidsomethingunintentionallyandhurthimwithoutnoticingit.Thus,it'smyadvicethatyouturntohisparents,teachers,andhisotherfriends,towhomhemightrevealhisdiscontentmentwithyou.Yourfriendisboundtoforgiveyouwithmisunderstandings