2.12 热点话题表达微技能2(家庭温情+情感表达技巧)-2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能

2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能2.12热点话题表达微技能2(家庭温情+情感表达技巧)素材积累素材积累1情感表达基本词汇赞同positiveadj.肯定的,实际的,积极的,,确实的favorableadj.赞成的,有利的,赞许的,良好的approvaln.赞成,承认,正式批准enthusiasmn.狂热,热心,积极性supportiveadj.支持的，支援的defensive为……而辩护否定negativeadj.否定的,消极的,负的,阴性的disapproval不赞成objection异议opposition反对critical批评的criticism批评批判disgustvi.令人厌恶,令人反感vt.使作呕warningdetestationn.憎恶,厌恶的人,嫌恶indignation愤慨contemptn.轻视,轻蔑,耻辱,不尊敬compromisingn.妥协,折衷v.妥协,折衷worriedadj.闷闷不乐的,焦虑的怀疑suspicionn.猜疑,怀疑suspiciousadj.(～of)可疑的,怀疑的doubtdoubtfuladj.可疑的,不确的,疑心的questionpuzzlingadj.使迷惑的,使莫明其妙的客观(即好的坏的都说，选的可能性极大)objectiveadj.客观的neutraladj.中立的impartialadj.公平的,不偏不倚的disinterestedadj.无私的imprejudicedadj.没有偏见的unbiasedadj.没有偏见的unprejudicedadj.公平的,无偏见的,没有成见的detached不含个人偏见的主观subjectiveadj.主观的,个人的indifferencen.不关心tolerancen.宽容，容忍，忍受pessimismn.悲观,悲观主义gloomyadj.黑暗的,阴沉的,令人沮丧的,阴郁的optimisticadj.乐观的sensitive有感觉的,敏感[锐]的,易受伤害的scaredadj.恐惧的reservedadj.保留的,包租的consentvi.同意,赞成,答应n.同意,赞成,允诺radicaladj.激进的moderateadj.中等的,适度的,适中的v.缓和mildadj.温和的,温柔的,淡味的,轻微的,适度的ironicadj.说反话的,讽刺的confusedadj.困惑的,烦恼的amazedadj.吃惊的,惊奇的worriedconcernedadj.关心的,有关的apprehensiveadj.担忧，担心mixed喜忧参半biased有偏见的indignantadj.愤怒的,愤慨的积极objective客观的concerned关注的confidentadj.自信的,确信的interestedadj.感兴趣的,有成见的,有权益的optimisticadj.乐观的positive正面的impressiveadj.给人深刻印象的,感人的中立/折中impartialadj.公平的,不偏不倚的neutral中立的impersonaladj.非个人的factualadj.事实的,实际的,根据事实的detached不含个人偏见的八不是解的选项(消极)negative消极的indifferent漠不关心的depressed消沉的subjective主观的pessimistic悲观的unconcerned不关心的contemptuousadj.轻蔑的,侮辱的hostileadj.敌对的,敌方的biased片面的二、情感表达基本句式喜1.

ontopoftheworld

Shefelt

ontopoftheworld

whenshepassedtheexam.

她通过这个考试时，开心死了。

2.haveawhaleofatime

度过一段精彩的时光”的意思，也就是“玩得开心”啦！Allthechildren

hadawhaleofatime

atthethemepark.

孩子们在主题公园都玩得都很开心。3.Shelaughed,hereyes

shiningwithexcitement.她笑了，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。4.Hesetoff

withalightheart.他带着轻松的心情出发5．Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.6.Sheshedtearsofjoy.她留下了高兴的泪水。8.Joywelledupinsideher.9.Wildwithjoy,Icouldhardlyhidemyexcitement.10.Tearsofhappinessflowingdown,I…怒You’regettingonmynerves.你真让我心烦。Heexplodedwithanger他勃然大怒That’sdisgusting.那真讨厌。He

heldhisheadinhishands,greatlyannoyed.他双手抱头，十分生气。Hestoodthere

withcrossedarms,lookingangry.他双臂交叉站在那里，看起来很生气。7.Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用通红的眼睛怒视着我。哀1.Hercheeks

were

wetwithtears.她泪流满面。2.Atear

sliddownhercheek.一滴泪顺着她的脸颊滑落下来。3.Ifelttears

wellupinmyeyes.我感到泪水在眼里涌出来。4.Withaheavy/sinking/brokenheart,shewatchedhimgo.带着沉重的心情，她看着他离去。Shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.她突然感到一阵难过，忍不住哭了起来。7.IfeltlikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.8.Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.9.Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.10.Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.紧张1.

havebutterfliesinstomach

形容“做某事前极度紧张，心里七上八下的”。Ialways

havebutterfliesinstomach

whenIspeakinfrontofmanypeople.

在很多人面前发言，我总是感到特别紧张。2.

biteone'snails

字面理解是“咬某人的手指甲”，引申义即为“感到紧张不安”。I'll

bebitingmynails

tillmyparentscomebacksafely.

直到我爸妈平安回来之前，我一直都会特别紧张。3.Myheart

wasinmymouthwhenIwalkedintoheroffice.我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙口。4.Hewas

drumminghisfingersnervouslyonthearmofthechair.他用手指紧张的敲击着椅子的扶手5.Herheartis

beating

fast.她的心跳得越来越快。懵1.

atsea

茫茫然不知所措Iwas

atsea

whentheystarteddiscussingthatproblem.

当他们开始讨论那个问题的时候，我一脸懵。惧Thechildfeltfrightenedwhenhesawthebigfire.见到大火，那孩子感到恐惧。befrightenedofthedark害怕黑暗Shelookedterriblyscared.看样子她很害怕。Fearcameoverhim.他感到一阵恐惧。Thinkingaboutthesituation,Itrembledwithfear/fright害怕得发抖Thereisnothingtobeafraidof.没有什么可害怕的。Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakeswhenyouarelearningaforeignlanguage.学说外语时不要害怕出错。Herface

paled

withfright.她吓得脸都白了。Hiseyes

grewwidewithhorroratwhatshehaddone.看到她所做的事，他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。9.Afloodoffearwelledupinhim.10.Fearfloodedoverhim.愁1.He

hadaslightfrown

onhisface.他的脸上现出有点儿愁眉不展的样子。(n.皱眉；不悦)Therewasadeep

frown

ontheboy'sface.男孩紧皱着眉头。3.Hesat

withhisheadinhishands.他双手抱着坐着。羞愧1.Hefelthischeeks

burning

withshame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。尴尬1.She

putherhandstohercheeksinembarrassment.窘迫之中她用双手捂住了脸。害羞1.Colorfloodedtohercheekswhensherealizedshewasbeingwatched.意识到有人在看她，她顿时涨红了脸。2.Hereyes

dropped

toherlapassheanswered.她回答时垂下眼睛看着膝盖。吃惊1．Ourmouths

droppedopeninsurprise.我们惊奇地张大了嘴。2.Shefroze,

hermouthhangingopen.她呆住了，嘴张开着。3．Iwasamazedtofindherthere.发现她在那，我感到很吃惊

by

anditwas

the

for

5.

away

how

6.She

jumpedtoherfeet

whensheheardthenews.当他听到这个消息，一下子跳了起来。同情Myheart

aches

whenIthinkoftheirsorrow.Myheartachesforhim.激动1.Herheartwas

pounding

withexcitement.(n.磅；英镑vi.咚咚地走；怦怦地响)2.Herheartseemedto

miss/skipabeat.她的心似乎错过了一拍.\她的心似乎颤动了一下。3.She

jumpedtoherfeet

whensheheardthenews.当他听到这个消息，一下子跳了起来。4.Herosetohisfeet

onshakylegs.他颤抖着双腿站了起来。感动Thosewordscanmakeyourheart

skipabeatandbringtearstoyoureyes.这些语言能让的心为之一颤，甚至流泪。Shewasoverwhelminglymovedbywhathesaid.她对他说的话极为感动。(势不可挡的；压倒的；无法抗拒的)Withtearsstreamingdownherface,sheexpressedherheartfeltgratitude.内疚与失望1.Mymindwasfloodedwithguilt2.Hisfacewaspaintedwithdisappointment..话题拓展话题拓展2一、读后续写高分获取拓展词汇1.emotionn.情感，情绪，心情2.feelingn.感情，感觉(=sense)3.happyadj.幸福的，快乐的，高兴的4.unhappyadj.不高兴的，伤心的5.angern.生气，愤怒angryadj.生气的，愤怒的6.surprisevt.使惊奇，使诧异；n.惊奇，诧异7.astonishvt.使极为惊讶8.shockv.使震惊9.disappointvt.使失望disappointmentn.失望，沮丧10.embarrassedadj.窘迫的，尴尬的11.upsetvt.使感到沮丧adj.心烦的，苦恼的12.sorrown.悲伤，悲痛13.sorryadj.对不起的，抱歉的；难过的14.sadadj.悲伤的，伤心的sadnessn.悲哀，忧伤15.fearn./v.害怕，恐惧；担忧16.frightn.惊恐，恐吓frightenvt.使惊恐，吓唬，吓坏17.scare]v:/n.(使)害怕scaryadj.令人害怕的18.panicn.惊慌，恐慌panickedadj.感到恐慌的，惶恐不安的19.terrifyv.使人感到恐怖terribleadj.可怕的，糟糕的terrorn.恐惧，恐怖，惊恐20.horribleadj.令人恐惧的，恐怖的horrorn.恐惧，恐怖21.worriedadj.担心的，烦恼的(=concerned)worryn./w烦恼，担忧，困扰22.annoyvt.(使)烦恼23.crossadj.脾气不好的，易怒的，生气的24.madadj.发疯的，气疯的25.awkwardadj.令人尴尬的，使人难堪的26.concernn./w.涉及；关心，关切；担心concernedadj.担心的；关心的，关切的；有关的27.anxietyn.担忧，焦虑(=worry)anxiousadj.优虑的，焦急的(=concerned)28.eageradj.(+for)渴望的，热切的29.longvi.(+for)渴望(得到)30.nervousadj.紧张不安的(=tense)31.excitedadj.兴奋的，感到激动的32.pleasedadj.高兴的，愉快的；满意的pleasuren.高兴，愉快33.gladadj.高兴的，乐意的34.joyn.欢乐，乐趣35.cheerfuladj.兴高采烈的，快活的36.contentadj.满足的，满意的(=satisfied)contentmentn.满足，满意37.shamev./n.(使)羞愧，耻辱，羞耻ashamedadj.羞愧的，害臊的38.alarmn.惊慌，恐慌；警报(器)39.caren.忧虑，担忧40.freefrom/ofcare无忧无虑的41.disturbingadj.令人不安的，引起恐慌的42.mournvt.哀痛，哀悼43.regretn./vt.可惜，遗憾；后悔44.delightn.快乐；乐事delightedadj.兴高采烈的45.envyvt./n.忌妒，羡慕enviousadj.(+of)忌妒的，羡慕的46.tenseadj.紧张的(=nervous)47.easyadj.安逸的，舒坦的；容易的，不费力的uneasyadj.不安的48.confusedadj.感到迷惑I混淆的，糊涂的049.puzzlevt.使感到疑惑，使困惑；n.难题，(字、画)谜puzzledadj.感到困惑的，百思不得其解的50.disgustingadj.令人厌恶的，令人作呕的51.desperateadj.(+for)不顾一切的；拼命的，极想得到的52.amazev惊奇，惊叹amazingadj.惊奇的，神奇的53.hatevt./n.恨，讨厌54.passionn.激情，热情；热爱，热望二、读后续写高分获取核心词块ahorrifiedlookonhisface他脸上恐惧的神色alookofgreatdisappointment大失所望的神色rangefrommildtoserious从轻微到严重程度不等stayawayfromdanger远离危险getveryexcitedaboutthecomingholidays对即将到来的假期兴奋不已bepleasantlysurprisedaboutthetestresults对考试成绩感到惊喜bedeeplyshockedatherbehaviour对她的行为深为震惊appearterriblyembarrassed显得尴尬不堪bedeeplyupsetaboutmytestperformance对我的考试成绩深感难过filloutanapplicationform填写--份申请书carryoutascientificexperiment进行科学实验carryoutmyduties履行我的职责bringoutthebestinhim激发出他内心的美德handoutthesetestpapers把这些试卷发下去三、读后续写高分获取背景阅读1Doctorssayangercanbeanextremelydamagingemotion,unlessyoulearnhowtodealwithit.Theywarnthatangercanleadtoheartdisease,stomachproblems,headaches,emotionalproblemsandpossiblycancer(癌症).Angerisanormalemotionthatweallfeelfromtimetotime.Somepeopleexpressangeropenlyinacalmreasonableway.Othersburstwithangerandscreamandyell.Butotherpeoplekeeptheirangerinside.Theycannotorwillnotexpressit.Thisiscalledrepressinganger.Foryearsmanydoctorsthoughtthatrepressingangerwasmoredangeroustoaperson'shealththanexpressingit.Theysaidthatwhenapersonisangry,thebraingivesoutthesamehormones(荷尔蒙).Theyspeedtheheartrate,raisebloodpressure,orsugarintotheblood,etc.Ingeneral,thepersonfeelsexcitedandreadytoact.Somedoctorssaythatbothrepressingandexpressingangerviolentlycanbedangerous.Theybelievethatthosewhoexpressangerviolently(猛烈地)maybemorelikelytodevelopheartdisease,andtheybelievethatthosewhokeeptheirangerinsidemayfaceagreaterdangerofhighbloodpressure.Doctorssaythesolutionislearninghowtodealwithanger.Theysaythefirststepistoadmitthatyouareangryandtorecognizetherealcauseoftheanger,thendecideifthecauseisseriousenoughtogetangryabout.Ifitis,theysay,“Donotexpressyourangerwhileangry.Waituntilyourangerhascooleddownandyouareabletoexpressyourselfcalmlyandreasonably.”Doctorssaythatagoodwaytodealwithangeristofindhumorinthesituationthathasmadeyouangry.Theysaidthatlaughterismuchhealthierthananger.2Septemberisanexcitingmonthineverycollegefreshman’slife.Formany,it’sthefirsttimethatthey’velefthometoliveinanewenvironment.Butafterthehustleandbustle(喧嚣)ofafewweeks,excitementgiveswaytoalessenjoyableemotion—homesickness.Homesicknessmanifests(显露)itselfinmanyways.Youmaymissmum’scooking,yourpets,orevenyouroldbed.Allthisbecomesafondmemoryofthepast.Homesicknesscanbeabitterfeelingformanystudents,especiallywhenfacedwiththechallengesofsettlingintoanunfamiliarenvironment.Butremember,you’renotalone.AccordingtoarecentBBCarticle,70percentofBritishcollegestudentsexperiencehomesickness.Inthisincreasinglyglobalizedworldinwhichpeoplemigratetofarawayplacesforarelationship,educationorwork,homesicknessisafeelingsharedbymanyadults.Homesicknesscanhavesimilarsymptomstodepressionandinextremecasesitcandevelopintoapanicattack.Asfortheterm,homesicknessornostalgiawasn’tinventeduntilthe17thcentury.ItwasconsideredadisorderbyaSwissphysician,whoattributedsoldiers’mentalandphysicaldiscomforttotheirlongingtoreturnhome,“nostos”fromGreek,andtheaccompanyingpain,“algos”.Studiesinrecentyears,however,haveshownthatnostalgiamayhavesomebenefitstoourmentalhealth.Afteradecadeofsurveysandresearches,ConstantineSedikides,aUSsocialpsychologist,foundthatnostalgiaiswhatmakesushuman.Heexplainsthatnostalgiacanresistloneliness,boredomandanxiety.Therefore,it’snecessaryforcollegestudentstolearnsomewaystoovercometheuncomfortablefeeling.实践强化实践强化31．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段话，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Asayoungboy,Isometimestraveledthecountryroadswithmydad.HewasaruralmailcarrierandonSaturdayshewouldaskmetogowithhim.Drivingthroughthecountrysidewasalwaysanadventure:Therewereanimalstosee,peopletovisit,andchocolatecookiesifyouknewwheretostop,andDaddid.Inthespring,Daddeliveredboxesfullofbabychickens,andwhenIwasaboyitwassuchfuntostickyourfingersthroughoneoftheholesoftheboxesandletthebabybirdspeck(啄)onyourfingers.OnDad’sfinaldayofwork,ittookhimwellintotheeveningtocompletehisroundsbecauseatleastonememberfromeachfatuitywaswaitingattheirmailboxtoappreciatehimforhisfriendshipandhisyearsofservice.“Twohundredandnineteenmailboxesonmyroute,”heusedtosay,andastoryateveryone.Oneladyhadnomailbox,soDadtookthemailintohereverydaybecauseshewasnearlyblind.Heoncelecturedmethattobringeveryoneplainpleasureishisgreatestpleasure,whichhasclungtomesofar.Mailboxesweresometimesusedforthingsotherthanmail.OncolddaysDadmightfindoneofhiscustomerswaitingforhimwithacupofhotchocolate.Ayounggirlwrotelettersbuthadnostamps,sosheleftafewbuttonsontheenvelopeinthemailbox;Dadpaidforthestamps.Withaheavyheart,ItraveledbacktomyhometownonthesadoccasionofDad’sdeath,andthemailboxesalongthewayremindedmeofsomeofhisstories.IthoughtIknewthemall,butthatwasn’tthecase.AsIdrovehome,Inoticedtwolamppoles,oneoneachsideofthestreet.Whenmydadwasaround,thosepolessupportedwoodenboxesaboutfourfeetofftheground.Oneboxwaspaintedgreen,andtheotherwasred,andeachhadalongnarrowholeatthetopwithwhitelettering:SantaClaus,NORTHPOLE.ForyearschildrenhaddroppedletterstoSantathroughthoseholes.Iwasamongthekidswhoseletterswerealwaysansweredintime.Imadeaturnatthecorneranddrovepastthepostofficeandacrosstherailroadtrackstoourhouse.MomandIweresittingatthekitchentablewhenIheardfootsteps.There,atthedoor,stoodFrankTownsend,Dad’spostmasterandgreatfriendformanyyears.Threadsofsilverranthroughhisbeardandthehair.Obviously,timeandsorrowforthepastdaysplougheddeepwrinklesonhisbrow.Sittingdownatthetable,hebegantotelloldstories.注意：1.续写词数应为150词左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1:AtonepointFranklookedatmewithtearsinhiseyesasifrecallingsomething.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thinkingofmyfather’sphilosophyofpleasure,Iresolvedtobethisyear’sSantaClaus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】AtonepointFranklookedatmewithtearsinhiseyesasifrecallingsomething.HardlyhadthewordstellingmyfatherwasgenuinelytheSantaClausescapedfromhistremblinglipswhenmyemphasizinglookchangedintoanastonishedone.Recallingeveryletteransweredintime,Iwaschokedwithgratitude,myeyesmoistenedwithtears.Flakeswerestillwhirlingwhileasparkleoflightzigzaggedacrossthesky,castingwarmthontomyheart.Frank’sstorieswentonandnotablyconveyedinhistonewaspursuitforthegoneera.“Yourfatheralwaysconsideredothers’pleasureashisown,”Frank’sremarkoccurredtomelikeaclapofthunder,plantingaseedofdedicationrootedinmyheart.Thinkingofmyfather’sphilosophyofpleasure,Iresolvedtobethisyear’sSantaClaus.Enduringtheneedle-likewindhowlingruthlessly,Imademywaytothelamppoles,carefullyfumblingfortheoldletters.Matureasthepreviouskidswerenow,IstillputpentopapertorespondtheinnocencewiththesignatureofSantaClaus.WhenIbroughteverylettertoeveryoriginaladdress,theowners’eyebrowsliftedhighbutthensoothedasIexplainedtothem.Spottingthepleasedlooksontheirfaces,Ifeltasurgeofwarmthcirculatingthroughmybody.Afterwavingthemfarewell,Islackenedmystepsinthesnowandwanderedaroundthefamiliarroad,lostinthoughtofthepastgoldendaysthatwouldneverfadeaway.【写作指导】这是一篇夹叙夹议文。文章主要讲述了邮递员父亲的简单、丰富而又充实、有趣的邮递员生活，父亲是一个乡村邮递员，多年来他都无私地为219个信箱服务，一直到他退休，但让作者没料到的是，父亲还在每年圣诞节的时候扮演着圣诞老人的角色，默默地回复着孩子们写给圣诞老人的信，这种做法感人至深。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“弗兰克含着泪水看着我，好像在回忆什么。”可知，第一段可描写弗兰克回忆关于父亲的感人内容。②由第二段首句内容“想到父亲的快乐哲学，我决心成为今年的圣诞老人。”可知，第二段可描写作者沿着父亲的足迹给业主送信的场景和感悟。2.续写线索：回忆故事——充满感激——产生共鸣——快乐哲学——圣诞回信——内心感受3.词汇激活行为类①逃脱：escapefrom/getawayfrom②转变成：changeinto/transferinto③前往某处：makeone’swayto/turntowards情绪类①含泪：withtearsinone’seyes/befulloftears/befilledwithtears②决心做：resolvetodo/bedeterminedtodo【典型句式】【句式1】Matureasthepreviouskidswerenow,IstillputpentopapertorespondtheinnocencewiththesignatureofSantaClaus.(As引起的部分倒装句式)【句式2】Afterwavingthemfarewell,Islackenedmystepsinthesnowandwanderedaroundthefamiliarroad,lostinthoughtofthepastgoldendaysthatwouldneverfadeaway.(运用了that引导的定语从句)2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Schoolwasover,thedaywasfadinganditstartedtorain.Istoodattheschoolgate,withaloadedbackpackonmyshoulders.ItwasFridayagain—aweekendofjoywithunlimitedsleepinghoursanddinnercoursesspeciallymadetomytaste.Iwavedgoodbyetomyfriendsastheyjumpedintotheirfathers’warmandcomfortablecars.Curiously,thisgaverisetoadisturbingfeelinginme.Itwasnotexactlywhattheycalledjealousy(嫉妒),butsomethinglikedepression.IknewallIcouldexpectwasanoldbikeMomwouldridealongon,withthebadly-oiledchaincreakingagainstthewheeltoannounceherarrival.EveryFridaywhenMomcametopickmeup,itwasamomentfullofgreatexpectationandgreatunease.Ialwaysfeltmyfaceburningaswerodeourwayinandoutofthecarsandsawmyfriends’facesstickingoutofthecarwindows.ItwaslikesteppingintoaballroomwithbeautifullydressedladiesandfindingyourselfinasmellyT-shirt.Totellyouthetruth,Momisquiteaheadacheoccasionally.Shelookslikeahomelymiddle-agedhousewife.Sheknits(编织)mostofmysweaters,chieflyinoldstyles.Whenevercaughtbysomecuriousclassmatesaskingwhatbrandmysweatersare,I’dforceasmileandreplyinahalf-jokingmanner:homemade.Shesimplydoesn’tseemtounderstandwhat’sinfashion;ChanelorGuccimeansnothingtoher.Icouldn’trememberwhenIstartedtofindhersuchanembarrassment.Asalittleboy,Ireliedonhersomuch.Shehadbeenworkingathome,cookinginthekitchen,knittingbythelamp,orridingacrosstowntobuymeabookIbadlyneeded.Ithadalwaysbeenfunridingwithher.Ihadenjoyedwatchingourshadowsgrowinglongerandshorterinanalternatefashionbythelightofthestreetlampsalongtheroad.Justnowthereseemedtobesomethingstandingbetweenus,somethingthatmadehersostrangetomeandmetoher.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。TodayMomshowedupinaraincoat.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Momtriedtocovermewiththeraincoatagainasastormsetin.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】TodayMomshowedupinaraincoat.Onceshesawme,Momcalledmynameexcitedly.Almosteverybodypresentlookedinherdirection.Iswallowedhardandfixedmystareonthemiddleoftheroad,sweatformingintinydropletsonmyforehead.Whenshetriedtocovermewiththebackofherraincoat,Isimplythrewitaside.Insilence,Ishotherablamingglanceandthrewmybackpackheavilyintothefrontbasketofthebike.Withoutasingleword,Ijumpedontothebackseat.Momtriedtocovermewiththeraincoatagainasastormsetin.Reluctantly,Ipulleditover.Withthewindroaringangrilyandtheraincoatdancing,itfeltwarmandsecureinside.Mombentforwardandpedaledwithallherstrength,herwaisttwitchingwithtension.Istartedtofeelguiltyofmycoldness,tearswellingupinmyeyes.Quietly,IslippedmyhandsaroundMom’swaistandgentlypressedmyfaceagainstherback.Inthecryingwindandpouringrain,Ifoundmyselfhuggingmymother,tighterthanever.【写作指导】本文讲述了一个关于母爱的故事。作者的家庭并不富裕，周五放学时，其他学生的家长开着汽车来接他们，而作者的妈妈却骑着一辆破旧的自行车来接他，这让作者感觉很沮丧。妈妈的穿着也很朴素，不懂时尚，这也让作者感觉很难堪。事实上，作者小时候很依赖妈妈，也很喜欢妈妈骑自行车载自己，不知道从什么时候开始，作者和妈妈之间的关系变得陌生了。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“今天妈妈穿着雨衣出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到妈妈后尴尬的表现。②由第二段首句内容“暴风雨来袭时，妈妈又试图用雨衣给我盖上。”可知，第二段可描写我被妈妈的行动所感动，深刻地体会到了母爱。2.续写线索：妈妈叫我——我感到尴尬——妈妈给我盖雨衣——我不愿意接受——暴风雨来袭——妈妈再次给我盖雨衣——我感受到母爱的温暖3.词汇激活行为类①.看见：see/catchsightof②.开始做某事：starttodosth./begintodosth.③.拥抱：hug/embrace情绪类①.激动地，兴奋地：excitedly/withexcitement②.不情愿地：reluctantly/unwillingly【典型句式】[句式1].Onceshesawme,Momcalledmynameexcitedly.(由Once引导的时间状语从句)[句式2].Icouldn’trememberwhenIstartedtofindhersuchanembarrassment.(由when引导的宾语从句)3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Toddwaslyingonthefamilyroomfloordoingmathhomework,whenheheardhismother,backfromhershiftattheCraftsCottage.Shewaslaterthanusual,soshemusthavestoppedonthewayhometogetgroceriesafterherwork.Toddhopedso.Grocerieswereoneoflife’sgoodthings.Itwasgettinglate,andToddfeltabithungry.Asamatteroffact,hecouldhearhisstomachgrowling.Heonlyhadsomecerealforbreakfastthismorning.Ifonlyhecouldhaveabiteathisfavoritefood—theapplepiemadebyhismother!Butithadbeenawhilesinceshemadedessertsforthem,forshehadbeenmuchoccupiedrecently.HismothercameintothefamilyroomandclickedofftheTV.ToddlookedatAmy,whowassolostinherbookthatshedidn’tseemtonoticetheirmother’spresenceintheroom.Buttheirfather,dozing(打瞌睡)onthecouchwiththeremoteinhishand,cameawakewithaguiltystartle(惊吓).“David,Todd,Amy.”Quietvoicescouldsoundsomuchmorethreateningthanshoutingones.“Ineedyoutocomeintothekitchen.Now!”Amyputherbookdownthen,andthethreeofthemdraggedtheirfeetintothekitchen.Iftheyhadtails,theywouldhavebeentucked(藏住)betweentheirlegs.“Lookatthisplace.”Todd’smothersaid.Itwasbad:newspapersinanuntidyheaponthetable,dirtydisheseverywhere,anemptymilkcartonstandingonthecounternexttospilledcerealleftoverfrombreakfast,andtwobagsofgrocerieshismomhadjustcarriedinfromthecar.“Iwantthiscleanedup.Iwantthesegroceriesputaway.Iwantadecentmealrepresentedonthetableinsixtyminutes.Callmewhenit’sready.I’mgoingtobeupstairssoakinginahottub.”Thenshewasgone.Paragraph1Todd,Amyandtheirfatherquicklygotdowntowork.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Aftertheirdiscussion,theywerereadytomakedinner.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

Todd,Amyandtheirfatherquicklygotdowntowork.Hestartedloadingdirtydishesintothedishwasher,asAmyandtheirfathertookthegroceriesoutofthepaperbagsandputthemontheshelvesandinthefridge.“Howdoesthefoodpyramidwork?”theirfatherbrokethesilencetoask.“Youaresupposedtoeatalotofgrainsandcereals.”Toddexplained,whohadstudiedthefoodpyramidatschoollastyear.Todddrewatriangleshapeonapieceofpaper,dividedthepyramidintofourequalsectionsandlabelledeachone.Theytalkedanddecidedthatgrains,vegetables,dairyproductsandproteinwerewhattheyneed.Aftertheirdiscussion,theywerereadytomakedinner.Theychosetomakecurriedchickenbreastswithrice.Amyremindedthemofvegetables,andtheirfathersuggestedputtingsomebroccoliontheside.Fordairyproducts,theygotsomeyogurtfromthefridge.Itturnedoutthatittookplentyoftimetochoosetherecipe,locatetheingredients,andchopthevegetablesbeforeyouevenstartedtocook.Still,inlessthananhour,itwasdone.Whentheirmothercametothekitchen,shestaredinapparentdisbelief.“Youevenfixedbroccoli,”shewhispered.Thefamilyhaddinnertogetherandeveryonebelieveditwasthebestmealtheyhadeverhad!【写作指导】本文讲述了主人公托德的妈妈最近工作很忙碌，但仍要买菜、做饭和照顾家人。一天，妈妈很晚才下班回家，回到家中，看到儿子托德在做数学作业，女儿艾米在看书，丈夫大卫正躺在沙发上打瞌睡，托德的妈妈决定是时候让家人帮助她一起做家务了。她把家人叫到厨房，看着乱糟糟的厨房，嘱咐家人整理好并做好晚饭，她打算去泡个热水澡缓解疲劳。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“托德、艾米和他们的父亲很快开始工作。”可知，第一段可描写三个人整理厨房的过程和对晚餐的规划。②由第二段首句内容“经过讨论，他们准备做晚饭。”可知，第二段可描写三个人做晚饭的过程和妈妈看到晚饭后的反应。2.续写线索：整理厨房——规划晚饭——三人的讨论——开始做饭——晚饭完成——一家人的感受3.词汇激活行为类①.开始做某事：startdoingsth./begindoingsth.②.打破沉默：breakthesilence/breaktheice③.应该做某事：besupposedtodosth./beexpectedtodosth.情绪类①.难以置信地：indisbelief/unbelievably②.明显的：apparent/obvious【典型句式】[句式1].Whentheirmothercametothekitchen,shestaredinapparentdisbelief.(由when引导的时间状语从句)[句式2].Thefamilyhaddinnertogetherandeveryonebelieveditwasthebestmealtheyhadeverhad!(由that引导的宾语从句作believed的宾语，省略了that；由that引导的限制性定语从句，修饰先行词meal，省略了that)4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Larryhadbutterfliesinhisstomach.TodaywasthedayforhimtomeethisgirlfriendKate’sparents.Hewasplanningtoleavethemagoodimpression,sohewasinhisfinestsuit.Ontheway,hesecretlyrecitedafewjokeshepickeduponlinethepreviousnight.HisweirdbehaviorcaughtKate’sattention.“Whatareyoudoing,honey?”sheasked.Blushing,Larrytoldherwhathewasdoing.She,ontheotherhand,actuallyfoundhiseagernesstopleaseherfamilyquitecute.“Well,let’shearyourjokes.”shesaidteasingly.Theyw