【遇险救险+团队+动物读后续写】团队合作美洲狮也干废-911：您拨打的电话正在激战美洲狮（讲义）-2026届高三英语一轮复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，便之构成一篇完整的短文。

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交代克毕，.

Suddenly,Tietzsawtwolargeanimalsemergefromthewoodsoffto（herightjustafter

Bcrgcrcpassed.Shedidn'tseeclearly,socouldn'tidentifywhatthetwoanimalswere.

Nosoonerhadtheyidentified【heanimalsthantheterriblethinghappened＜N“、冈。”…沿川倒装.The

firstone）ranquicklyacrossthepathinfrontofBergere,andthenrushedtotheleftand

disappeared.Thesecondfollowed,butinthelastinstantitstopped.Itmi^hthavebeendistracted

byihemovemeniofBergere'sbicycle,jumpedatBergere'sback,andpulledhertotheground

withteethandclaws由孑＞＜昉伟粗Tietzletantascaryscream,“Ohmy,theyare

Wolfturnedaroundquickly.Herfirstreactionwastoputasmuchdistanceaspossible

betweenherselfandthescaryanimal斜.掩男人的）.Butquickly,shepusheddownherfearandrushed

tohelpBergere”灾同酎国人物心JS，.Williamsandotherfriendsallcametohelp.Theypulledthe

animalawayfromBergere'sneck.

“Call911,"yelledWolf,Tietzimmediatelycalledbuttherewasnoresponse.For15minutes,

thewomenwerehitting,kicking,punching,andscreaming功名包动作串，.Finally,thecougarreleased

Bcrgcrc,anditmightturnonanyorallofthem.Bcrgcrcstretchedout,andshewastiredand

injured-butbreathingandawake."HELLO?THISIS911.STATEYOUREMERGENCY,"Tlie

voiceofthe911callcentercamethroughTietz'sphone,whichwaslyingontheground.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Whenseeinganothercyclistridingtowardthem,thewomenrealizeditwas

theirteammateCaswell.

Paragraph2:Bergerespentfivedaysinthehospital.

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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Underaflatwinterlight,fourwomenrodetheirbicyclesinnorthernColorado'sRoosevelt

NationalForest,Theyarecompetitivecyclistswhoknow（heroutewell.Mostofthemridefora

teamcalledRecycledCyclesRacing,basedoutofSeattle.Astheymadetheirwayalongawide

sectionofthepath.Wolfledtheway,Williamsrodealoneinthemiddle.andBergereandTietz

broughtuptherear（殿后）.

Suddenly,Tietzsawtwolargeanimalsemergefromthewoodsofftotherightjustafter

Bergerepassed.Shedidn'tseeclearly,socouldn'tidentifywhatthetwoanimalswere.

Nosoonerhadtheyidentifiedtheanimalsthantheterriblethinghappened.Thefirstoneran

quicklyacrossthepathinfrontofBergere,andthenrushedto（heleftanddisappeared.Thesecond

followed,butinthelastinstantitstopped.Itmighthavebeendistractedbythemovementof

Bergere'sbicycle,jumpedalBergere'sback,andpulledherto（hegroundwithteethandclaw$（爪

子），Tietzletoutascaryscream,uOhmy,theyarecougars（美洲狮）

Wolfturnedaroundquickly.Herfirstreactionwastoputasmuchdistanceaspossible

betweenherselfandthescaryanimal,Butquickly,shepusheddownherfearandrushedtohelp

Bergere.Williamsandotherfriendsallcametohelp.TheypulledtheanimalawayfromBergere's

neck.

“Call911,"yelledWolf,Tietziminediatelycalledbuttherewasnoresponse.For15minuies,

thewomenwerehitting,kicking,punching,andscreaming.Finally,thecougarreleasedBergere,

anditmightturnonanyorallofthem.Bergerestretchedout,andshewastiredandinjured-but

breathingandawake.UUELLO?THISIS911.STATEYOUREMERGENCY,“Thevoiceofthe

911callcentercamethroughTietz'sphone,whichwaslyingontheground.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Whenseeinganothercyclistridingtowardthem,thewomenrealizeditwas

theirteammateCaswell.

Paragraph2:Bergerespentfivedaysinthehospital.

1.文章分类及续写思路分析

文章类型：遇险救险/生存类（野外遭遇野生动物袭击）

续写构思思路：

•主题延续：强调团队合作、勇气与生存意志。

•情感基调：紧张T救援T希望T反思。

框架布局：

•第一段：引入新救援力量（Caswell）,增强团队希望，衔接911通话。

•第二段：结局（Bergere康复），升华主题（团队精神/对自然的敬畏）。

实施要点:

•保持动作描写的连贯性（如救援、沟通）。

•通过心理描写体现人物从恐惧到冷静的转变。

•环境描写需简短，突出紧迫感（如天色、森林）。

承接原文事项：

•必须包含：911接通的状态、Cawwell的出现方或、Rergere的伤势处理。

•沿用原文关键词（如“cougars""scrcarrT“RecyclcdCyclesRacing''）。

巧妙设计技巧：

让Caswell携带急救设备，增强合理性。通过对话体现团队分工（如一人指挥，一人安抚

Bergere）。

2.故事山模式与原文分析

1.故事山模式：

开端：驹■行团队进入森林（平静）。

发展：美洲狮突袭Bergere（冲突爆发）。

高潮：团队合作驱赶美洲狮（紧张对抗）。

回落：911接通，Caswell到来（希望出现）。

结局：Bergere送医（问题解决）。

衔接点与关键分析：

分析角度内容原文反应句

“Herfirstreactionwastoput...Butquickly,

人物刻画Wolf从恐惧到勇敢的转变

shepusheddownherfear...^^

“Tietzletoutascaiyscream..."/“They

情感层次从惊慌（尖叫）到团结（合力救援）

pulledtheanimalaway...”

分析角度内容原文反应句

关键情节“Thesecondfollowed,but...jumpedat

美洲狮第二次攻击Bergere

点Bergere*sback...^^

短句、动词突出紧迫感（hit,kick,“For15minutes,thewomenwerehitting,

语言特色

punch）kicking,punching..

“Bergerestretchedout,tiredand

心理描写Bergere的虚弱但清醒

injured一butbreathingandawake.”

“pulledtheanimalawayfromBergere's

动作描写团队对抗美洲狮的细节

neck”

冬季森林的平坦光线（暗示潜在危

环境描写“Underaflatwinterlight../*

险）

德含主题人类在自然危机中的互助与脆弱全篇对抗美洲狮的团队协作

美洲狮可能转向攻击其他人（未完

伏笔/冲突*4itmightturnonanyorallofthem''

全解决）

电话无信号T最终接通（科技依赖

稳含线索“noresponse"->"HELLO?THISIS911..J5

的局限性）

解决方案：

团队协作：通过多人合力驱赶美洲狮。

外部救援：Caswell到来与911接通提供医疗支持。

3.推荐英文例句及翻译

动作描写（突出紧张感和团队协作）

1.“Wolfwhippedaround,herheartpoundingasshesprintedbacktowardBergcre.',

（沃尔夫猛地转身，心跳加速,朝伯格冲去。）

2.“Tietzlungedforward,swingingherbackpackwildlyatthecougar.0

（蒂茨向前猛冲，疯狂地用背包砸向美洲狮。）

3.nWilliamsgrabbedarockandhurleditatthesnarlingbeast.”

（威廉姆斯抓起一块石头，朝咆哮的野兽猛掷过去,）

4."Bewerewrithedontheground,gaspingforbreathasthecougar'sclawsdugintoher

shoulder.',

（伯格在地上痛告地扭动，美洲狮的爪子刺入她的肩膀，地大口喘气。）

5."Thewomencircledthecougar,shoutingandstompingtoscareitoff.”

（女人们围住美洲狮，大声喊叫并跺脚试图吓跑它。）

6."Caswellskiddedtoastop,hereyeswideningatthechaosbeforeher."

（卡斯威尔猛地刹住车，眼前的混乱让她瞪大了眼指。）

7.“Thecougarrecoiledmomentarily,itsearsflatteningagainstitshead.”

（美洲狮短暂退绵，耳朵紧贴头部c）

8.HBergere,sfingerstrembledassheclutchedherbleedingarm."

（伯格的手指鼓抖着，紧紧抓住流血的手臂。）

9.“Wolfyankedthefirst-aidkitopen,herhandsshakingbutdetermined.M

（沃尔夫猛地拉开急救包，双手颤抖但坚定。）

10.“Thecougarfinallyturnedtailandvanishedintotheundergrowth.**

（美洲狮最终掉头逃窜，消失在灌木丛中。）

心理描写（体现恐惧、决心、希望）

1."AwaveofterrorcrashedoverTietz,freezingherinplaceforasplitsecond.0

（一阵恐惧席卷蒂茨，让她瞬间僵在原地。）

2."Wolf'smindraced—shouldsherunorfight?Butshecouldn'tabandonBergere.1*

（沃尔夫的思绪飞速运转——是该逃跑还是战斗？但她不能丢下伯格。）

3."Bergere^visionblurred,butsheclungtoconsciousness,refusingtopassout.”

（伯格的视线模糊，但她紧紧抓住意识，拒绝昏过去。）

4."Williams'stomachtwistedwithdread,butsheforcedherselftostepcloser.0

（威廉姆斯的胃因恐惧而抽搐，但她强迫自己靠近.）

5.“Forafleetingmoment,Tietzwonderedifthiswashowitwouldend—here,inthe

woods.*'

（一瞬间，蒂茨想，这是否就是结局——在这片森林里。）

6."Caswell'sarrivalsentasurgeofhopethroughthegroup."

（卡斯威尔的到来让团队燃起希望。）

7.nBergere,sthoughtsdriftedtoherfamily—shehadtosurvive,nomatterwhat."

（伯格的思绪飘向家人——她必须活下去，无论如何。）

8."Wolf'sfearmorphedintofiercedetermination-shewouldn'tletthecougarwin.”

（沃尔夫的恐惧转变为坚定的决心——她不会让美洲狮得逞。）

9.**Thc911operator'svoicewasalifelineinthechaos.**

（911接线员的声音在混乱中如同一根救命稻草。）

10.“Astheambulancesirengrewlouder,reliefwashedoverthemlikeatide.”

（救护车的警笛声渐近，如潮水般的宽翱席卷了他汨c）

环境描写（渲染紧张氛围）

“Theforestloomedaroundthem,itsshadowsdeepeningasduskapproached.n

（森林在他们周围耸立，暮色渐浓，阴影加深。）

“Acoldwindrustledtheleaves,carryinganeeriesilencebetweentheirpanickedshouts.*'

（冷风吹动树叶，在他们惊慌的叫喊之间带来诡异的寂铮。）

"Thefadingwinterlightcastlong,jaggedshadowsacrossthetrail.1'

（渐暗的冬日光线在小径上投下参差不齐的长影。）

“Thecougar'sgrowlechoedthroughthetrees,sendingchillsdowntheirspines.**

（美洲狮的咆喏在树林间回荡，让他们羿背发凉。）

“Thegroundwasslickwithfrost,makingeverysteptreacherous.',

（地面因霜冻而湿滑，每一步都充满危险。）

“Thedistanthowlofacoyoteaddedtothesenseofisolation.1'

（远处郊狼的嚎叫加深了孤独感。）

“Thescentofpineanddampearthmingledwiththemetallictangofblood.n

（松树和潮湿泥土的气味与血液的铁锈味混合。）

“Theundergrowthcrackledominously,asifhidingmoreunseenthreats."

（灌木丛发出不祥的沙沙声，仿佛隐藏着更多未知的威胁。）

"Thefirststarsblinkedintoview,indifferenttotheirstrugglebelow."

（最初的星星闪烁出现，对下方的挣扎漠不关心。）

“Theambulance'sflashinglightsslicedthroughthedarknesslikeabeacon.H

（救护车的闪光灯如灯塔般划破黑暗。）

高级替换词（分类场景）

1.恐惧/紧张

•Basic:scared—>Advanced:petrified（石化般的恐惧）/terrified（极度惊恐）

•Basic:afraid—>Advanced:apprehensive（忧虑的）/dread-filled（充满恐惧的）

•Basic:ncnous—>Advanced:jittery（神经质的）/onedge（紧张不安的）

2.决心/勇气

•Basic:brave—>/Advanced:resolute（坚定的）/undaunted（无畏的）

•Basic:strong—Advanced:tenacious（顽强的）/steadfast（坚定不移的）

3.动作/战斗

•Basic:hit—>Advanced:pummel（连续猛击）/Ihrash（猛烈击打）

•Basic:run—♦Advanced:bolt（狂奔）/sprint（冲刺）

4.环境/氛围

•Basic:dark—>Advanced:murky（昏暗的）/foreboding（不祥的）

•Basic:quiet—>Advanced:hushed（寂静的）/eerie（诡异的）

5.受伤/疼痛

Basic:hurt—>Advanced:agonized（极度痛苦的）/Ihrobbing（抽痛的）

Basic:bleeding—►Advanced:gushing（涌出的）/seeping（渗出的）

4.固定搭配，词法解析及语料积累

"letoutascream"（发出尖叫）

■近义：utteredacry/shrieked

■反义：fellsilent

■例句：

■"Tietzleioutablood-curdlingscreamwhenthecougarauacked."

■"Thesuddennoisemadeherletoutastartledyelp."

“pusheddownfear”（压下恐惧）

■近义：suppressed（error/steeledherself

■反义：succumbedtopanic

■例句：

■"Wolfpusheddownherfearandchargedforward."

■"Despitehertremblinghands,shepusheddownfearandacted."

'•broughtuptherear”（殿后）

■近义：trailedbehind/tookthelastposition

■反义：ledtheway

■例句：

■"BcrgcrcandTietzbroughtuptherear,chattingcasuallybeforetheattack."

■"Inmilitaryformations,theslowestsoldiersoftenbringuptherear."

"skiddedtoastop”（急刹车）

近义:haltedabruptly/screechedtoastandstill

■反义：acceleratedaway

■例句：

■"Caswell'sbikeskiddedtoastop,kickingupgravel.'1

■"Thecarskiddedtoastopjustinchesfromthepedestrian."

Uclungtoconsciousness**（保持清醒）

■近义：foughttostayawake/resistedblackingout

■反义：succumbedtounconsciousness

・例句：

■"Bergcreclungtoconsciousnessdespitethescaringpain."

■"Afterthecrash,heclungtoconsciousnessuntilhelparrived."

可积累的生词短语

"emergefrom"（从...出现）

词性：phrasalverb近义：comeoutof/stepoutfrom反义：disappearinto

例句：

“Thecougarsemergedfromthewoodswithoutwarning.**

“Thesunemergedfrombehindtheclouds,bathingtheforestinlight.'1

“umon"（突然攻击）

词性：phrasalverb近义：lashoutat/attack反义：retreatfrom

例句：

"Thecougarmightturnontheothersifprovoked.M

“Evenafriendlydogcanturnonitsownerifscared.',

"stretchout”（伸展/躺下）

词性：phrasalverb近义：liedown/extend反义：curlup

例句：

*'Bergerestretchedoutontheground,exhausted.',

*'Hestretchedouthisinjuredlegwithagrimace."

"callthrough',（电话接通）

词性：phrasalverb近义：getaconnection/reach反义：dropthecall

例句：

“The911operator'svoicefinallycalledthroughthestatic.**

"Itriedcalling,butthesignalwouldn'tgothrough.*'

nturntail”（逃跑）

词性：idiom近义：flee/retreat反义：standground

例句：

“Thecougarturnedtailandvanishedintothetrees."

“Whenthepolicearrived,thethievesturnedtailandran.*'

5.PossibleVersions（4）

Version1（借鉴董老师）

Paragraph1:Whenseeinganothercyclistridinntowardthem,thewomenrealizedit

wastheirteammateCaswell.Instantly,hopeflickeredin〔heireyes.Wolfwavedfrantically

whileWilliamscalledouttoCaswell,hervoiceshakingzio>.Understandingtheurgency4在分

何做件随动作）,CaswellthrewherbikeasideanddashedtoBcrgcrc'sside.BloodcoveredBe/ere'$

sleeve,andhereyesfhuteredweak/y.Caswellkneltdown,unzippedherpack,andpulledouta

bandagerollandantisepticwipes动作♦描外."You'regoingtobeokay,“shesaidsteadily,asshe

Dressedgauzeagainst【heworstwound，米捶语珑”汇1.Tietzrelayedupdatedpositiontotheemergency

rescuer.Thewomenworkedlikeclockwork—onecomforted,onetreated,andanotherscannedthe

woodsfordanger.4Thoughthecougarhaddisapnearedinto[heforest,itsterrorstillclungto

theair.Momentslater,thefainthumofanapproachingvehiclegrewlouder,尢又主语句>.They

exchangedglancesfilledwithexhaustionandrelief过去分网出工定加.Rescuehadarrived-extjust

intheformofmedics,butinthecouragethey'dshowntogether.

Paragraph2:Ber-crespentfivedaysinthehospital.Duringthosefivedays,Bergere

remainedundercloseobservation,receivingstitchesandphysicaltherapy侬分》做就小.Her

bodyached,butherhear]feltfull.Herteammatesvisitedwithsmiles,snacks,andshared

storiesthatfilledthesterileroomwithlaughter."Irememberthewayyouheldmyhand,"she

（oldTietz,hereyeswellineup，肽立立格，."Thatmeanteverything;,Themedialabeledthemheroes,

butthewomenshrueeedoffpraise.Tothem,theyhadonlydonewhatfriendshipdemanded.

Afterherrelease,Bergerewroteareflectionfbralocalcyclingmagazine,emphasizinKthe

importanceofeinerqencYreadinessandqrouDsupporta^分叫做件陵动件）.Aweeklater,sheancher

teammatesreturnedtothetrail——nottoerasethememory,buttoreclaimit.蓬进疆耳）Astheirlires

spunovertheearth,shewhisperedtoherself,"Thisisnotfearanymore.Thisisstrengthon

wheels."

Version2

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wastheirteammateCaswell.Wolfsvoicecrackedassheyelled、”Caswell!Overhere!”Caswell

pedaledfaster,thenleaptoffherbike动作率描写，场景动作，whenshesawthebloodiedscene.Withoui

askingquestions,shedroppedbesideBergereandcheckedherpulse."It'sfaint,butthere,“she

said、herhandsalreadyunrollingapressurebandage独立主格，.Williamsremovedherjacketlo

supportBcrgcrc'shead,whilecalled911again,cleadincforurzencv<iiui分叫做HH0件□Though

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Bergere'spalefaceandwhispered,“Staywithus,okay?”Afewlenseminutespassedbeforeihe

distinctcrunchoftiresongravelsignaledthearrivalofhelp.Anofficerrushedover,andthegroup

steppedaside、thairfaceshuteyesfierce，0立士林14人**»,Inihnifr（、7门iforesttheyhadheld

on—forBergereandforeachother.

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group'sdedication，过去分词”闰状语）,calledthem“ararekindoffamily坏见於常i.“Whenshewas

finallydischarged,thefirst:hingBergeredidwastextherteammates:uReadyforaride?^^That

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coura叫connection,andsurvivalwaspermanent.Thevdidn'tiustrideasateam—the,

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Version3

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wastheirteammateCaswell.Realizing0左分3曾怦防劲什,itwasCaswellgavethemabriefsenseof

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keepingawatchfuleyeon[hecougarthatstilllurkednearby.Caswell,neticin〉thescene现在分词

做件st动作>,jumpedoffherbikeandrushedoverimmediately,动件*）.Wi【houlhesitation,shegrabbeda

stickandjoinedtheothersinfo门ningaprotectivecirclearoundBergere.Meanwhile,Tietzpicked

upherphoneandupdatedthe911operator,unsentl、exHaininpthesituationandihcirlocatini1现

我分通短Q弊st功柞，..ThewomentookturnscomfortingBergere,whosebreathswereshallowbut

steady.Bloodstainedherjacket,andhervoicetrembledasshewhispered,MIthurts,butTin

okay."Despitetheirfear,theHroupshowedremarkableunity,courage,andquickthinking名叫

并列，.Soon,thesoundofsirensechoedthroughthetrees,brinningasenseofreliefs注分叫做船果状通0

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