2023年新CET写作讲义 (一)

新CET-4写作讲义

第一节

一、考试题型

1、应用文（7考）：口头作文（2考）、书信作文（5考）

2、论说文（25考）：提纲作文（23考）、图表作文（2考）

3、段首句作文：4考

4、课程安排：

1）考试题型、考试规定、评卷实例

2）口头作文、书信总论

3）书信详解

4）论说文、翻译

5、学习措施：实力（高分方略）+技巧（万能框架）

二、考试规定

《大学英语考试大纲》中明确规定：四级大学英语写作考试时间为30分钟。规定应试者写出•篇不

少于120个词的短文：写作命题源于平常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不波及知识面过

广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情圻、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短

文、或看图作文。规定内容切题，文理通顺，体现对的，语义连贯，无重大语宫错误。

6、时间规定：30分钟

1）审题（3分钟）：

2）写作（25分钟）：

3）检查（2分钟）：语法（时态、冠词、主谓一致）、拼写、标点

[.06]Forthispart,youarcallowed30minutestowriteashortessay[INhonour

ofteachersontheoccasionofTeacher'sDay.Youshouldwriteatleast120words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

I.向老师体现节日祝贺

2.从一件小事来回忆老师的教导和无私口勺奉献

3.我怎样回报老师FI勺关爱

7、字数规定：120—15（）词

8、写作主题：大学校园生活（学习、生活、工作）

9、命题方式：段首句、提纲、命题、关键词、情景、图表作文

1()、详细规定：

1)语言第一位：体现通顺、无重大语言错误

(1)基础一般：简朴原则、安全第一

(2)基础很好：句子构造词多变

2)构造第二位：

(1)逻辑性：

A.并列：and/or/but

B.因果：bccause/inthat,since/as,for

C.转折：but/however

(2)关联词：

3)内容第三位：

Lastnight,Iwaskickedbymygirlfriend.Sheranawaywithasmallwhiteface.Sheismygreen

plumandbamboohorse.NowIknowthatloveisblind.Beautyisbutskin-deep.Moneyisthe

rootofevil.However,IonlyregretthatIhavebutonelifetoloseformycountry.Couldyou

pleasetellmywhytheinjuredisalwaysme.Itishightimethatyouteachersdevotedyourloveto

me.Ifyoudonotgivemefullmark,Iwillcommitsuicideimmediately.

三、评卷实例

11、教材第5页第1篇：中英思维差异

1）中式思维：情感分段、读者领会、迂回模式、归纳式思维

2）英式思维：逻辑分段、作者交代、直线模式、演绎式思维

Mostpeoplethoughtthatreadbooksshouldhavebeenselectived.Butothersbelivedreading

extentivelywascorrection.

Selectivebooksorreadingextensively?

Sure,youcanchoiceonefrompreviousideas,

ononehand,Therearetoobooktoreadforus.Weshouldchoosethosewhichweintrested,andit

wouldbehelpfulforus.

onanotherhand.Someone'sintrestingwaswide.Eachbookcouldbringyouspecificcontainwe

couldn'treadingatonlyonelevel.

Iconfirmedalloftheseiceasweregoodbutweren'twise.

Asareader,themaintaskistodiscovermoreandmorebooksthesecondtaskistoheldsome

whichwonderfulandhelpfulforus.Don'ttreatthesebookswithecklessabandon.

Thebesttechnologyofreadingisconnect.

12、教材第4页第2篇：

Ithinkreadingnotonlyselectivelybutalsoextensively.Becausethetwosidesarenotcontradict.

Ourtimeislimited.Sowecannotreadeverybookintheworld.However,wewillnotbeinterestedin

everybook.Weshouldreadthosebooksmaybeusefultoours,readthosebookswhichwelike.But

thosebookswhichwechoosemustbeextensivelysoitcangiveoursallkindsofknowledge,newsand

soon,italsomakeoursbecomeawiseman.Ontheonehandreadingselectivelyletoursnotwas:eour

timewhichitislimitted.Moreoveritcanemphasisamongallbooksthatwecanread.Ontheotherhand

readingextensivelycandealwithallkindsofneedinourlife.Theyareallusefultoours.

13、教材第5页第3篇：

Somepeoplethinkreadingshallbechoosed.Becausesomebooksaregoodtohummenbeingsand

somebooksareharmfultopeople.

Somepeoplethinkthatmenshoudreadbookswidely.Becausewidereadingcanhelpmanget

muchknowledge.Andmancanuseittochangetheworld.

Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.Becausereadingisimportanttoman.Somebooks

canhelpmanbutsomebookscanleadsomepeopletocrime.Itcanbeseeninthenewspapersand

watchedonTV.Wecanmakefulluseofsomegoodbooksandgainmoreusefulknowledge.Itcanmake

ourlifemorebeautiful,wemustgiveupthoseunhelpfulbooks.Theyarenotgoodtous.Readingthemis

wastingtimeandmoney.Soreadingselectivelyisanimportantpartinreading.

14、教材第5页第2篇：

Howshouldweread?Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?Everyonehashisownview.

Somepeoplethinkweshoulcreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscience

andtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.V/hat's

more,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn'treadthem.Sincewe

can'treadallthebooksandweshouldn'treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.

Butothersmaynotagree.Theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhas

manykindsofknowledgehe'llhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbut

knowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,we

mustreadextensively.

Who'sright?Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.

Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.

15、教材第4页第1篇:

Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsome

otherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.

Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,oelievethatgoodbooksareasmanyas

badbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlylead

ustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnever

touchthebadbooks.

But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscan

onlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,they

caneasilycometotheconclusionthat"toknowmore,toreadmore".Sotheybelievethatreading

extensivelyisbetter.

Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossibe.By

thisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.

题S：BicyclesAnImportantMeansofTransportinChina.

提纲：（1）为何自行车在中国这样普及

(2)和汽车H勺比较

(3)自行车在中国H勺前途

Score:14

BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringthe

rushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople-manandwoman,oldandyoung-ridetheirbicyclestoworkand

study.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled"thekingdomofbicycles."

Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.

Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterand

morecomfortable,theyarelooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometime^itis

difficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.

Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalarge

population,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansof

transportationforquitealongtime.

Score:11

Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday'sChina.Bicyclesareveryiinportantmeansoftransportinpeople'sdaily

lives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycle

needsjustasmallroomandiorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider'sstrength,biyclesarepopularallover

theworld,especiallyinChina.

Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Anda

bicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecouniary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimes

thanacar.

IthinkthepopulationofChina'sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becuseitwillbereplacedbyacar.abusand

sooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,the

numberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit'squalitywillbeimproved.

Score:8

BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimporlantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.

TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenethighwage.Theycanonlyaffordab:cyclc,

and(heyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogolo

work,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicycle

becometheimportantmeansoftransport.

Thebicycle,comparedtothecar.isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethe

surfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn'tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisverjrimportanttoChina,becauseofthe

lackofland.Itisn'ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn'tneedanyoiLanditcan'tcausethepolusion.

Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.

Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmore

modernbicycles.

Score:5

PerhapstheamountofbicycleinChinaisthelargestintheworld.Whywasi(sowidelyusedinChina?I

thoughttheanswerwas:(hepopulationinChinaistoolargeandthepriceofbicycleismuchcheaper.Thethird

answeristhatthebicycleiseasierinusingthanother(ransportations.

Comparingwiththecar.thebicycleischeaperanditiseasierinusingthanthecar,butitsspeedislowerthan

thatofthecar.

ThebicyclewillberemainedforalongtimeinChinabutintheenditwillbedisappearedwiththeimproval

ofpeople'slivinglevel.

Score:2

Aseverybodyknow,Chinaabigdevelopingcountry.So,(helivingstandardofpeoplenolveryhigha(

presentpeople'sincomeisnotenoughfor(heytobuycarsmotorcycles.Andbikeiseasytoride.Bicycleischeaper

bemade.AndIthinkbicycleth?usefultooloftransportinChinanow.So.itisquiteporpularandwildlyusedin

China'scitiesandcountrysidesihanthepersonaltransportation—tool.

Bikeisakindofcleantoolsoftransport.Itnotusegasandotherenergers.Forthisreasonisnotcreatpdution.

ButinfactinanywayBicycleisnotadvancedthancar.Ifitisraining,theriderwillsufferfromwet.ontheother

hand,bikecannotcarrymuchgoods.

Accordingtotheourcountry'sdevelopingrate,IfirmlybekevethatBicyclewillreplacedbycaror

motorcycleinthatnearlyfuture.ButundoubtfullyitcontinuetheimportantmeansoftransportinChinaforalong

lime.

第二节

一、口头作文

1、真题回忆：

1)—6：

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitledABrief

IntroductiontoaTouristAttraction.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothe

followingguideline:

Yburrole:atourguide

Youraudience:agroupofforeigntourists

Yourintroductionshouldinclude:

(I)Somewelcomingwords

(2)Theschedulefortheday

(3)Adescriptionoftheplace(hetouristswillbevisiting

(c.g.ascenicspotorahistoricalsite,etc.)

Youshouldmaketheintroductioninterestingandthearrangementsforthedayclearto

everybody.

2)~1：

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteACampaignSpeechinsupportofyourelection

tothepostofchairmanofthestudentunion.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingthe

outlinegivenbelowinChinese:

（1）你认为自己具有了什么条件（能力、性格、爱好等）可以胜

任学生会主席的工作，

（2）假如当选你将会为木校同学做什么？

2、经典范文：

1）—6：

Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen,welcometoBeijing!Tobeginwith,Iwouldliketo

makeabriefintroductiontomyself.IamyourguidefromChinaTravelAgency.TodayI'm

verygladtobeyourguide.Ifsgreathonortostayherewithallofyouforawholeday.Just

astheoldsayinggoes,“Itisalwaysapleasuretogreetafriendfromafar”.Iwishallofyou

toenjoyyourselvesduringthistrip.

Thefollowingisthelimeschedule.First,theGreatWallisthemajorattractioninthis

morning.Second,havinglunchnearby,wewillgotovisittheSummerPalaceintheafternoon.

Thisisamust!Last,afterdiningatNightinBeijing,it'stimetowatchtraditionalChinese

performances.At10p.in.,wewillgobacktoBeijingHotel.

Next,IwouldliketointroducetheGreatWalltoyou.ItiscalledtheEighthWonderinthe

world.Builtyearsago,thspresentrelicsareconstructedintheMingDynasty.Hopeyouenjoy

yourselves.

2）-1：

TodayIamverygladtorunforthechairpersonoftheStudentUnion.Iamjuniorinthe

DepartmentofChineseLanguageandLiterature.

IamsurethatIamqualifiedforthisposition.First,Iamgoodatcommunicatingand

organizing.Bytheway,withmyoutstandingleadership,[havebeenelectedpresidentofour

departmentseveraltimes.Second,Iamwarm-heartedandeasygoing.Notonlydomy

qualificationsandworkexperiencemakemeaperfectcandidate,mycheerfulpersonalityiswell

suitedfortheposition.Last,myhobbiesincludesportsandmusic.

IfIamelected,Iwillexertallmyefforts.Firstly,Iwillorganizesuitableactivities.Secondly,

Iwilltrytoreachyourdemandsaswell.Therefore,Idonothesitatetorecommendmyselfasan

idealcandidate.Iamsureyouwillmakeawisedecisioninvotingforme.Ihopetheabove

informationwillhelpyoutoknowaboutmyself.Ifanyofyouhaveany

question/advice/recommendationforme/needanyfurtherinformation,pleasefeelfree/do

nothesitatetoaskatanytime.Thanksforyourlistcning/attcntion.

3）祝酒辞:

Mr.VicePresident,ourAmericanfriends,mycolleagues,laciesandgentlemen.

Onbehalfofallthemembersofourmission/delegation,Iwouldliketoexpressour

sincerethankstoyouforinvitingustosuchamarvelousChristmasparty.

Wereallyenjoyeddiedeliciousfoodandexcellentwine.Also,themusicwasperfect.I

enjoyedmeetingandtalkingtoyou,andsharingthetimetogether.Aswesay,wellbegunis

halfdone.Ihopewewillbeabletomaintainthisgoodrelationshipandmakenextyear

anothergreatonetogether.

Thankyouagainforthewonderfulparty.Wehadagreattime.Inclosing,Iwouldlike

toinviteyoutojoinmeinatoast.TothehealthofMr.VicePresident,toalltheladiesand

gentlemenpresenthere,cheers!

3、两大原则：

1)句子写作：

(1)句子原则：长短结合、以短句为主

(2)基本句型：

A.主谓：1succeed.

B.主谓宾：1likeCaicai.

C.主系表：ZYissmart.

D.主谓双宾：WeiXiaobaogaveAkeanEnglishdictionary.

E.主谓宾宾补：Tulongdaomakesmanypeopleselfish.

(3)长句写法：

A.并列句：and/or/but/while/whereas

B.从句：

a.定语从句：who/that/which/when/where

b.状语从句：when/where/if/because/though

c.名词性从句：主语、宾语、表语、同位语从句

Thefactthatagreatmanyteachersarcrespectedshows/indicatcs/suggcststhatwcshouldrepay

them.

What（heyfailtounderstandisthatweshouldreciprocateoutteachers.

C.非谓语动词：

a.动名词：

b.分词：过去分词、目前分词

c.不定式：

d.独立主格：Timepermitting,IwillgotoBeijingtomorrow.

2）段落写作：

（1）Introduction：引言/起始/淘金段，3句

A.Thesisstatement：中心思想，1句

B.Backgroundinformation：背景信息，2句

a.Background背景

b.Facts事实

c.Others?opinions反方观点

（2）Body：主体/拓展段，4句

A.Topicsentence：主题句，1句

B.Argument：论证，2句

a.Classification：分类

b.Exemplification：举例

Numerousexamplescanbegiven,butthis/thesewillsuffice.

Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthefollowingonc(s).

Thisstorytellsusthat....

c.Causeandeffect：因果

d.Comparisonandcontrast：比较和对比

e.Definitionandexplanation：定义和事实

f.Statisticsandfacts：记录和事实

Accordingtotherecentsurvey/data/figure/statistics/studybytheChineseAcademyofSocial

Science,...%(percent)....

C.Summary：小结，1句

(3)Conclusion：结论段，3句

A.Topicsentence：主题句，1句

B.Argument：论证，1句

C.Summary：小结，1句

二、高分方略

1、背诵：精彩词汇、精彩句型、精彩句子、万能框架、整篇范文。

1）口头作文：05K祝酒辞

2）书信作文：求学信、投诉信、求职信、感谢信、个人简历

3）论说文：口语考试、财富、毕业生找工作

2、默写：

3,互译；中译英

4、写作:

三、书信总论

1、真题回忆：5考

1)016：教材36贝题目

1月

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:ALetterto

theUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast100

words,andbaseyourcompositionon:

假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂U勺状况给校长写出一封信，内容应波及食堂U勺饭菜质量、

价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评提议，也可以兼而有之。

January12th,

DearMr.President,

LiMing

6月

Directions:

Forthispart,youarcallowedthirtyminutestowritealetter.SupposeyouarcZhangYing.

WritealettertoXiaoWang,aschoolmateofyourwhoisgoingtovisityouduringtheweeklong

holiday.Youshouldwritealleast100wordsaccordinglo(hesuggestionsgivenbelowinChinese.

1.表达欢迎

2.提出对度假安排的提议

3.提醒应注意的事项

DearXiaoWang,

WordsfailtoexpressmyexcitementwhenIlearnedthatyouwouldliketospendyour

holidaytogetherwithme.ImissyousomuchthatIevencan'twaittoseeyou.Iamsurethat

yourjourneywillbeexciting,rewardingandfullofalotoffun.

I'vemadearoughplanforthisholidayasfollows.Onthefirstdayyouarrivehere,Iwill

showyouaroundournewcampus.Duringthesecondfivedays,wecanvisitsomescenicspots

andhistoricalsitesaroundBeijing,suchasSummerPalace,theForbiddenCity,theGreatWall,

theBeijingZoo,etc.Onthelastday,wecandosomeshopping.

Bytheway,pleasetakecareofyourluggageonthetrain.Anddon'tforgettotellme

whenyouwillarrive.

Bestwishes!

Yourssincerely,

ZhangYing

2)021：教材36页题目

DearMr.President,

IamsophomorefromtheDepartmentofLaw.Iamwritingtheletterinpurposeof

complainingaboutthefoodandserviceinthecanteenoncampus.

Tobefrank,Iamratherdisappointedatthefoodquality,priceandserviceinthecanteen.

First,thedishesarescarcelywellcookedandmostofthemtastethesame.Secondly,mostofthe

dishestherearepricedsohighthatsomestudentscannotevenaffordthem.Thirdly,theservicein

thecanteenisfarfromsatisfyingandtheinsideofthecanteenalwaysseemuntidy.

Tosolvetheproblem,Isuggestthatanothercanteenbebuiltandamechanismof

competitionbeintroducedbetweentheoldandthenew.Besides,boththecanteensshouldbe

subjecttothestudents'supervision.Diningisaneverydayissueforstudents.Itmayaffect

theiracademicperformance.Therefore,Isincerelyhopethislettercandrawyourattention

tothematterandIhopetheproblemsmentionedabovebesolvedassoonaspossible.

LiMing

3)036：教材35页题目

6月

Directions:

Forthispart,youarcallowedthirtyminutestowriteaneye-witnessaccountofatraffic

accident.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括如下儿点:

1.车祸发生的时间及地点

2.你所见到日勺车祸状况

3.你对•车祸原因艮I分析

AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccident

3年1月

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:Itpaysto

beHonest.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenin

Chinesebelow.

1.近来社会上出现了某些不诚实的现象。

2.诚实利人利己；怎样做到诚实。

6月

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:StudentUse

ofComputers.Youshouldwriteatleasti20words,andbaseyourcompositiononthechartand

theoutlinegivenbelow:

1.下图所示为1990年、1995年、某校大学生使用计算机状况，靖描述其变化；

2.请阐明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以阐明）;

3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。

Averagenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweek

4)041：

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealetterinreplytoafriend'sinquiry

aboutapplyingforadmissiontoyourcollegeoruniversity.Youshouldwriteatleast120words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.提议报考的专业及理由；2.报考该专业的基本条件；3.应当怎样备考

DearXiaoqiang:

I'mgladtoknowthatyouaregoingtoapplyforadmissiontoouruniversity.Withregard

tomajor,IadviseyoutoapplyfortheEnglishmajor,becauseofitsmodernteachingequipments

andprestigiousprofessors.

Somerequirementsareessentialforapplyingforthemajor.Firstly,youshouldbegoodat

Englishgrammarandhaveconsiderablevocabulary.Secondly,youshouldbeadeptin

spokenEnglishfororaltestisfollowedafternormalexamination.

Therefore,whenmakingthepreparationyoushouldpayattentiontoenlargingyour

vocabularyandpracticinggrammar.Atthesametime,ofcourse,toreachthegoal,lotsof

exercisesarenecessary.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

5）056：

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayinhonorofteacherson

theoccasionofTeacher'sDay.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegiven

below:

1）向老师体现节日祝贺，

2）从一件小事来回忆老师的教导和无私的奉献，

3）我怎样回报老师的关爱。

September10Ihisthedaythateverystudentshouldbearinmind.Itisthetimetoexpressour

congratulationstoourteachers,whohavedevotedmostoftheirtimeandenergytous.

Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.Iamreferringtothatunfortunateaccident

theotherday,whenIwasknockedoffmybikebyataxi.Ifithadnotbeenformyteacher's

timelyassistanceingivingmefirstaid,Ifearthattheconsequencesmighthavebeenmuch

serious.Everyoneagreesthatitwashisquick-wittedresponseinthatemergencythathasled

tothissatisfactoryoutcome.

1willrepaymyteacher'skindnesswithmyunselfishhelptoothers.Althoughnowadays

peopleinmountingnumberstalkabouttheneedtobeunselfish,weseeveryfewpeople

practicewhattheypreach.Ifthereweremorepeoplelikemyteacher,thisworldwouldbea

muchnicerplace.

(I)Onceinfrontofme,stoodanoutstandingteacher.Yet,Ididnotvaluehim.Notuntilthe

momentIlosthim,didIrealizehowregretfulIwas.IfGodgavemeanotherchance,Iwould

repayhim.

(2)Isatoutsideinthehall.Everythinginsidemehasgoneaway.Ididn'tthink.Icouldnotthink.

Iknewshewasleavingme,butIprayedshenot.(ErnestHemingway:TheSunalsoRises)

2、写作格式:

缩进式:

DearSirorMadam:

AsIamplanningtotakeCollegeEnglishTestBand4(CET-4),Ihavedecidedtoplacean

orderofsomeCET-4bookswithdueconsiderationofthegoodreputationofyourbookstore

andthehighqualityofyourbooks.

Firstly,pleasegivemeparticularaccountsasregardsnames,authors,publishinghouses

andpricesofthesebooks.Secondly,Ialsoneedtoknowthetermsofpaymentandafter-sell

service.Thirdly,IwonderifitisconvenientforyoutodeliverthesebooksbyEMStothe

headquartersofBeijingNewOrientalSchoolbySeptember1,.Ihavearrangedtopayforthe

service.

1wouldliketoexpressmygratitudeforyourkindconsiderationofmyrequests.Ilook

forwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yourssincerely,

LiMine

齐头式:

DearSirorMadam:

As1amplanningtotakeCollegeEnglishTestBand4(CET-4),Ihavedecidedtoplacean

orderofsomeCET-4bookswithdueconsiderationofthegoodreputationofyourbookstore

andthehighqualityofyourbooks.

Firstly,pleasegivemeparticularaccountsasregardsnames,authors,publishinghousesand

pricesofthesebooks.Secondly,Ialsoneedtoknowthetermsofpaymentandafter-sell

service.Thirdly,IwonderifitisconvenientforyoutodeliverthesebooksbyEMStothe

headquartersofBeijingNewOrientalSchoolbySeptemberI,.1havearrangedtopayforthe

service.

Iwouldliketoexpressmygratitudeforyourkindconsiderationofmyrequests.Ilookforwardto

hearingfromyousoon.

Yourssincerely.

LiMing

1）称呼:

（1）写给机构:

A.认识负责人：DearSirorMadam,DearSir/Madam.Towhomitmayconcern.

B.不认识负责人:DearMr./Ms.Presidcnt/Profcssor/Managcr/Editor(Michael)Wang,

(2)写给个人:

A.关系不亲密：DearMr./Ms.President/Professor/Manage